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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, I just finished reading your story,"e-Love" (chapter 31). I am assuming the chapter must be out of a book you have written. Is it true? If not, you made it seem to be true. Your discripsion painted a real picture of Brazil. I would love to visit. I am also so pleased that Chrisina found love after being so loney. "A True Love Story Has No End." I like that.
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello,

I just finished your story, "Super Pink Anonymous Meat." It is cool, but also, sad to me as I read. I wonder if the coon hound, Blue was eaten or Jake? I'm pretty sure it was Blue because he was begining to get sick already. It is a shame their meat was so far away.
Lesley


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Review of To Raise a Child  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, I just finished reading both parts of "To Raise a Child." I liked several of your quotes, but I don't have room or the space to write. "The success of our youth costs so much, no dollaf amount comes near.... That is so true. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
Lesley


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Review of The date  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello, Invrovert,
I just finished you strory involving a young girl getting read for her seemingly her first date, not knowing, this man woud change their lives forever."
The author should have mentioned how this man changed their lives forever. I liked ending, when the young woman and her psychiarist later, as they talk about dating thiss young man.

Lesley


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Review of The Hospital Room  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
I somehow just stumbled into your story, "The Hospital Room." I worked on the neuroscience ward for a very short while. I could not deal with how the patients were treated, or not treated. The nurses routinely ignored calls for the bathroom and pain medication. They didn't clean the patients up, either, and the whole ward smelled like feces and urine. I know your story is not about all of this, it just made me remember how bad it can be.

Our hospital, MUSC, my husband works as a nurses assistant. He is in the new building's cardiac unit. Everything is clean and the equipment is state-of- the-artl The staff treats these people in the hospital like they are people and often get to know about them. So medical science is doing more and more. People are also getting much better trreatment.
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Maryann gave us the Power picture at the bottom. It will be gone shortly. I like my whales the best. I had a hard time, finding the best way to imbed the entry. I have just finished a fold in my port about Top Hat's and my adventures. I keep edited the story until I get the Top Hat's stories the way I want it to read.
Thanks,
Lesley
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Review of Things I've made.  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
I don't write in your journal very much, but do read them. I keep so busy, but not so busy as you are all the time. I know my messages, when I send them, but I am a rattler. Once I start, it's hard to stop. I will try to keep this brief. Keep writing!
LATER,
L.


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
hi, I am glad you were awarded by the Angel Army. I sort of messed with it a few times and did some reviews for some of the writer. The Angel Army really does have some talented writers. I just forgot about the AA completely. I will try to be more in touch. I've been hanging with the Power Reviewers and we divide the money up with the other groups. I am sure y'all are on the list. Congratualions!
Lesley
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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Here we are, keeping up the gifts. I am kind of nervous, I never know Who I will win. I am still not experinenced to put in a raffe. I am taking one of the classes at the University. The subject is: "How to Navigate WDC." It is very difficult and I made it to lesson three and it takes me a long time. Cliff is also a student. so lucky for me, I can under stand today. Missy is doing a great jobl. She is sweet and help full. I will probably be calling her since Cliff is ar work. He's an nurses assistant. I am just the maid around here. Let me get busy. Later,
L. I would like to buy a package for MIssy from Tessa 50K, and another for A C Wicox at 50k. I want to donate and send Cnotes to several other friends. I'll put my donation in the box.
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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
hello, Harry,
I just finished your storomen called, "The Orange Ballon." I have never read your unusual style before, but I don' write poetry. My husband writes only poems. What I just read sounds Sounds like cross between a story and poetry. Cool! Your story was really sweet. Almost all Granmas dote on the grandchildren. The way she told the little girl it was proof of her Grandmother's love. It was wonderfully sweet to put another balloon in the tree.
Keep up the good work!
Lesley


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Review of The Quills  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This story is one I've decided to try my luck on, just to see what will happen. I've written all my life, witing, but one would think not enough. I just write what comes to me and I have no choice but to write the story. Since I've been here, I have imporved. Oh, the person who fist nominating me was Missy
Thanks agian,
Lesley
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Review of Moving  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear, Ida,
I just now finished your sad tale. I've had that problem and then married a man from "Canada!" I live in SC and there is no way I would even muster enough courage to go where I can't wear flip flops and tennis shoes! I've even have one of my favorite creatures come sniff my feet. I live on a farm and all animals like to sniff my snickers.

I feel so bad about your heartbreaking divorce. I will never get over mine and it's been16 years. Keep up your witing. I will read it when you get settled in. I hope you have the propern clothing!

Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello,Shaara,
You have quite a sense of humor! I'll be! you are the life of the party. As I read this funny poem to my husband, who writes silly poetry just for fun and we both had a good laugh. Not knowing much about poems, the only small thing I noticed, but Grammar changes day from day. I checked again, and it is fine. It was about a comma between two words, behind Mixed up...

I liked your unusual poem. I don't read as much poem as I should.
Keep on Writing! Keep on laughing!
Lesley


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Review of Please Choose Me  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
I just now finished reading your short story, "Please Choose Me." It is an endearing story of a young orphan who needs a home. Of course, they all need homes, but Jeremy had been there longer than the other kids, and had his share of mishaps, he would be a perfect son for Mariana. I think she'll chose him.
Keep up the good work!
Lesley
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Review of Country song  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, rcorbin,

I just now finished reading your piece, "Country Song." It is so full of emotion and loss, that it breaks my heart. The boy, who became a young man with a family, is still saving up his love for his father who will certainly come home someday, he believes that day will come. Will it?
Keep up the Good Work
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I just now found your contest on thirty day blogging. I think it is a fun idea for people to open up and meet new friends with similar interests. So many of us lead such unusual lives and almost everyone has daily experiences that may seem insignificant to them. I would participate, but I am more than over loaded now. My life is one huge blog!
Good Idea!
Lesley
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Review of The Thoroughbred  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Pony Tale,

I just finished reading your story on "The Thoroughbred." It remined me of some of the thoroughbreds I've bought and sold. They are the most magestic animals, always ready for action. Your poem painted a potrait of the horse and I could just picture you painted with your poetry. Yes, throughbreds are hot and ready to go!
Your Friend,
Lesley

Read some of my mule stories, "Top Hat 'n Tails Tears up the Trails," or something like that. I have a hard time remembering what I name my stories.
L.


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Review of The Just War  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
Hello, I just finished your story, "The Just War." I think it is far from a simple story. In fact, you could have steached it out and develped the characters. But it was funny about the mother being blind and signing the farm to the eldest. Sometimes I had to read some of the story. I was confused with, "Cartoon mouse and sports. I remined me about a funny DVD I saw last week.Keep On on writing!
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello,
I just now finished reading your poem called, "The Dark Prince of Halloween," It is one of those poems that I want to read the whole thing. Most poetry is basicly the same tired old subjects. I would like to have been one of the children listening to the story of, "The Dark Prince of Halloween."
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, I have been checking out your contest, "Psychologial story Contest." I entered the last one, but was defeated this time. I plan to have another one for you soon. It is written in my notebook. I think your contest is a great idea. So many of us enjoy knowing someone else is more screwed up than themselves.
Later,
Lesley
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Review of Reversion  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello, I just now finished your short story, "Reversion," the story of Caleb and Selene. At first I thought they were getting a divorce or separating. The story of their first time meeting each other was very romantic, if you call almost drowning that. I was taken by surprise at the ending. Does that mean that the two of them are back together?
Keep Writing,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, Ms. Penguin,
I just now finished your story, "A Talk With Mother Nature." I found it to be so pure and simple and reminded me that Mother Nature speaks to us all. We just don't take the time to notice. When I was a child, I believed that all living things have a soul. You reminded me of this.
Keep Writing,
Lesley


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Review of New Beginning  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Amay,
I just now finished reading your short item called, "New Begining." I liked it because it reminded me of myself when I lived on the farm. I always made sure, every day, that I saw the sun rise and saw the sun set. Wherever you are heading, you will be happy.
Keep on Writing,
Lesley


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Review of Never Speak  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Keaton,
I just finished readng your poem, "Never Speak." It is obvious the author is in quite some pain over an ended relationship. He still loves her and knows she is out of his life. He told her not to speak because it would only hurt him more to hear her voice. I've been in the same situaton a time of two. This poem made me remember myself.
Your Friend,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello, I just finished reading your short story, "Longfellow's Grieving Sky." As I read, I formed pictures in my head of the few snowflakes I've seen, the cleansing rain or mud. I don't write poetry, but I do know how it makes me feel. "For always and everywhere, wether whispered, or howled, the sky will find a way to reveal its grief to the world." I'd like to belive the sky is mostly happy with sunshine.
Keep on Writing,
Lesley


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