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Review of The Wolf  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
A nice description of a wolf going after his prey.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very well written. I really felt the emotions.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was great. I see how you made a comparison to evil and good.
The beauty in the butterfly as well and providing peace.
The caterpillar disgusting and evil.
Well done.
I loved the description.
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Review of Just Chill Out!  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (5.0)
lmao. cute!
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Review of My first love  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Beautiful!
congratulations, not many last too long in a marriage these days.
We are celebrating our 25th in April. Not sure where the time went.
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Review of Not Here Again  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love this piece! I have a friend with a mother in a home. She has Alzheimers disease.
I really felt this. So sad! Thanks for sharing !
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Review of Sensory Words  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have the book of Thesaurus and I hold on to like a bible.
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Review of Passing  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (3.0)
A nice piece.
Although I think you can find a better choice of words, in between these two times
somehow doesn't flow with what you are saying.
Only an opinion.
also I would suggest you use punctuation throughout the poem.
Great start.
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Review of Farewell England  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
One of my travelling dreams is to visit England.
The way you describe is everything I envisioned.
Lovely write
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this story!
The poetic words flowed.
the perfect story told.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very deep!
The words touched me.
People care.
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Review of Healing  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (3.5)
Very nice!
You are right, we always see the light through tough times.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
These are all beautiful!
Poem 2 Love the last two sentences. Grabbed me.
Poem 1 That is when the world breathes again. Very nice!
Great job!
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Review of The Golf Links  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice!
My husband is very eager for this season to begin.
It cant come soon enough !
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Review of Forever Twisted  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
wow! Those are some scary lyrics.
I don't read many lyrics but I noticed you had no title.
Just a thought: FOREVER TWISTED
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nice.
This is a form of poetry I really need to practice.
Great!
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
Gorgeous !
I feel the love !
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Review of Official January  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
wow!
This was a great read.
I felt like was in a stagnant office just reading that.
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Review of Talking To Myself  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (3.5)
It sounds like a free spirit, trapped and wanting to fly.
Nice imagery.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
aahhh
This is so sweet !
A great to send that perfect message.
There are not enough of romantic daters.
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Review of Titan  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nicely done
Great message.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this!
A nice flow of words.
A great inspirational advice.
You are so right that society has given us the misfortune of misleading guidelines to what beauty really is.
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Review of Sidewalk Cracks  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (3.0)
nice poem
my advise would be to use punctuation
I felt like I was reading without taking a breath.
Some periods, or ; to the reader know when to stop .
Other wise a good write!
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Review of Sphinx  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (3.5)
Simple.
Well written.
I felt the emotion.
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Review of Crystal Painting  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Lovely. I love the imagery that you provided.
Nice flow of words.
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