Very personal. I like the way you are trying to work through all of the feelings. Love, abandonment, kicked out, true death and so on. The story of the people in the group are tragic and yet pure. What a wonderful show of their feelings in your writing. And, although you did not speak much of your trouble but let us have a glimpse into it ,you wrote a beautiful peace. Thanks for sharing,
Lynda with Y
So true. Autistic children or children born different from others are wonderful gifts from God. Loved a lot but sometimes not. So many guilty feelings you have to endure, but not really anyones fault. Love them. Work with them. Get the help they need. And you, whomever you are, take care of your self. If your are not well and able to cope then what do they do. Your are their army. God bless you and be with you through your endurance's.
Lynda with a Y
I thought your piece was good but (in my personal opinion) you could have said more.. Why didn't the teacher point out the ones that did not think he was a terrorist? I just felt that something was left out of a really great theme. Keep striving upward. You have all that it takes. Just think "If I were that child, or if I were that man) then write on.
Lynda with y
good work.
I love this story in a poem. I can remember as a child hardly being able to contain myself because family near and far were coming to our house and we were going to visit and then eat until we dropped. The best part is where Sara saw the homeless people and decided to help. Then she received the best gift of all, sharing with those that were unable to have a feast like we do. Giving really does something to your soul.
Great Job! Keep up the good work. Happy Holidays
Lynda with a y
#1580061 - Illusions
I loved the description of the flashy lights and blocks (hopscotch) this character is thinking. Merlin continued to intrigue me as he pulled me into the story. When I realized he was a cockroach (ugh) I had to hands down give it to you. This was really funny. I have often thought cockroaches are extremely intelligent and now it makes me wonder how many more people do to. Great characterization.
Lynda with a Y
This is a wonderful piece. So true of all us Irishmen and ladies. We love to celebrate life's passing, especially when it is one of our own. A beautiful creative understanding of the Irish. Well done Mari McKee
Lynda Miller
Keep this story going.My sister had the same thing plus other health problems. It took a long time for them to diagnose her as they did not know what it was. Many people do not know about it or understand what it does to a person. You have started this article on the very right track. Great description. Keep up the book.
Lynda MIller
I loved the story. This has happen to so many people with different appliances. Your description of the toast made my mouth water and I almost got up to make me some toast! However, I instead, stayed here to finish your story. I was hoping for a show down at the Boxo Mart Store, but you played it different.That was a bit of a downer for me. But all in all your story is very funny and good.. Lynda Miller
When I read your Letter to my Muse I was hooked. What a great letter. It is so expressive and gives good reason why you are thanking the Muse. I would love to see more of your work. Lynda Mahan Miller
What a sweet and beautiful poem. I would take out the *Sleep in Heavenly Peace" and go with all the rest. Your poem does give one comfort. Keep up the great work!
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