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Review of Contest round 1  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi A.J. Barretts!

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Overall Impression: And a writer is born! That is sooo cute! Sad, but still cute!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining little read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Winchester Jones!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what I like. This is a very interesting format, quite enjoyable!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of The Bridge  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sum1!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what I like. This is a very interesting poem that rings so true with every verse!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and enjoyable read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim Chiu!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what I enjoy. This is a very interesting poem, well thought out, and points well honed.

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Huntersmoon!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what speaks to me. I liked your little poem, it gave beauty to pain.

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and sad little tale!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

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Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim Chiu!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Interesting analogy, I have heard of life being compared to a lot of things but never ping pong.

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi Thankful Sonali!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: A surprising little read!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - and Dad and I was stuffed as we waddled back home - you may want to change "was" to "were".

2. In this section - into the air, and carried to our front door - you may want to eliminate the comma.

Readability: A well written and entertaining read!

Suggestions: You may want to decide if it is a key or keys, you switch back and forth throughout the story.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Shaara Shamrock!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what I enjoy reading. Your little poem made me sad, but, I liked it anyway.

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and lovely little read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider. (I did find it entertaining that you felt you had to add the P.S.)

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Wind Spirit  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Sorji!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what I like. I enjoyed your little nature poem, it was very thought provoking.

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and enjoyable read.

Suggestions: I am not sure why but the "wonder" of the 7th line kept throwing me off, I kept wanting to say "wander".

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Kat!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: I am not the best at reviewing poetry, I only know what I like or what speaks to me. Yours is a sad and hurtful little poem with an interesting format.

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to ponder:

1. In this section - You’re not hear with me to finish - you may want to change "hear" to "here".

Readability: A well written little read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tennessee Man!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: I have never been compared to an addict before, interesting view!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and informative read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of A Warning  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Charity!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what I enjoy reading. I enjoyed your little poem, it was short and to the point! LOL (Sorry, I couldn't resist) *BigSmile*

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and thoroughly thought out bit of prose.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Would it Matter?  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Audra_Branson!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what I like. I enjoyed the meaning this little poem conveyed!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and introspective read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi dmack!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Interesting take on the who, what, where, and why question!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and thoughtful read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jonblair!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: What a great way to unwind!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining read! Awesome video, did you create it?

Suggestions: No suggestions or extra thoughts to burden you with today!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Pretty Ugly Words  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi IceSkating SugarCube!

*Starp* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *Starp*

Overall Impression: I wondered what those things were for! *Rolling*

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A fun and entertaining pile of poetry!

Suggestions: None whatsoever!

Write on!

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Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Overall Impression: I need to know more about this machinery they are running...

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to consider:

1. In this section - Hello, is that Scarecrow Exterminators? - you may want to change "that" to "this".

Readability: A well written and entertaining read.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Dave!

*Starp* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *Starp*

Overall Impression: I am not very good at reviewing poetry but this one intrigued me because I did not know what a senryu was. I do now! *BigSmile*

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: Easy to read, easy to understand, quite lovely and accurate!

Suggestions: I have absolutely no suggestions. I really like this little thing, I think there is a story in there somewhere.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of The Thunder Rolls  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Chris W!

*Starp* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *Starp*

Overall Impression: What?! I'm still upset about Brando! *Sad*

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and very entertaining read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions. You had asked a question at the beginning of this story regarding whether or not to expand it. Since this was written several years ago I am hoping you have already done just that. If so, send me the link, I would love to read more!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Maryann!

*Starp* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *Starp*

Overall Impression: Saturnites pretending to be human....very interesting. *Laugh*

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions of any kind, but, I do hope there is a sequel. It would be quite entertaining to read a description on how to use a toilet or a shower or on why humans have pets. Can't wait!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of The Fairy Tale  
Review by Lovina
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Tommy Mooney!

Overall Impression: The children of this union should be very interesting!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only two spelling/grammar errors for you to ponder:

1. In this sentence - the knight broke free with a mighty road - you may want to change "road" to "roar".
2. In this sentence - and drew her into loving embrace. - you may want to insert "a" after "into".

Readability: A very entertaining read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of A Dog's Tale  
Review by Lovina
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Mikey_Greybeard!

Overall Impression: That sounds about right! *Dog1*

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Snow Princess Megan Rose!

Overall Impression: I totally agree one hundred percent!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one error to ponder:

1. In this sentence - He doesn't even a burn mark on him. - you may want to put that "have" in there where it belongs.

Readability: A well written and entertaining read!

Write on!

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Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Martins!

Overall Impression: Love the twist!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of errors to ponder:

1. When you use mommy and daddy in place of a given name they should be capitalized.

2. You forgot the quotation marks in the last sentence.

Readability: A well written and entertaining read.

Write on!

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Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Habit  
Review by Lovina
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Joshua!

Overall Impression: A humorous, and a bit gross, lunch!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one error to ponder:

1. In this sentence - A cook with unclean hands serving crap-burgers isn’t good reason to tip. - you may want to insert "a" after "isn't".

Readability: A well dialogued and entertaining read.

Write on!

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Lovina *Paw*

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