Wow that is a cool story too...You really need to get these published...I love this one too. I hope to keep reading more of your stories...Please let me know what you port is so that I can read more of you stories...Keep on writing and hopefully you will get some of this published...and if you have...I would love to know where...
Wow this is great...glad I get to keep reading you works as I go down the static item lists...I hope to keep reading them as I go down it...You really need to get this all published if it is anything like what I just read...I wish you the best of luck in the future...Keep writing on!!
This is a great story too...I would like to read more of these stories if you can let me know where to read them...I hope to that there are more of your works...I hope to see your work published so that everyone can enjoy your work...Please send me the link to read more...Keep Writing...
This is a pretty cool story...I am not one for aliens...but this is cool...I think that you should try to be published if you have not yet begun to look for a publisher...I hope to read some more of your works...hope that you keep writing!!!! I am also trying to get enough points so that I can get my basic membership!! This way I can more for my port...Good luck again with your works!!!
Wow this is powerful...make life choices are hard to do when you are not sure what to do...I really can understand this myself...Good luck with more poems...
I think that this story has potential...I think that if you add more to the story and let the Prince know about Mireth, then maybe it can be a better story line...Keep up the Writing...
This was a very interesting story...was this a personal experience or a fictional one? This is a great story...hope you have more to read...I would really like to read what you have...I have BPD... I am always interested in reading what other people have to write...
Wow...this is a great story...I could see how you felt through the whole story as I read it...I think that the emotions in the story are great...I know that it is hard to see someone die in the hospital while there is nothing that they or you can not do....But then, when it is time, he will not be hurting any more...
This is a great song...I could actually picture this being sung with the piano...it is great...I would love to see more of your songs and poems...I think that the person you are writing about is still a close friend...Hope you keep writing...Everything will work out...
I like that the lyrics are short and simple...I think that you need to add more description to this...I know that reading so far one of your other poems that you can make imagery in this with no problem at all...I really think that this would be a great poem or a song with more imagery...
I think that this poem is great...I can't wait to read more of your poems...I think that the imagery is great...You can see how you feel as you read this poem...That is my main thing I look for when I read poems or when I write my own poems...I hope that you keep writing so that you could possibly publish a collection of poems...
Wow this is great...love the description of the poem...You can picture this as you read it...I love when there is alot of description...Hope to read more...Keep Writing...
I just have one thing to say about this--You are so correct on this...I live in a transitional housing unit and will be getting back on my feet to move into permanent housing, which I have not been in since November, 2004...The place I live at only helps families with children since they are the future and want to get them to be self sufficient...if you look on mine you will see a poem on there about a safe haven and a story that I have not finished too...I wish you the best of luck with writing about helping the poor...I am an advocate on homelessness since I had became homeless myself....THank you again...
Have you thought about putting your poems in a collection to be published...These are all really great...Glad to see that you are using this to help take care of the past...Keep Writing!!
Wow this one is so deep too...I hope to finish reading all your poems as I see them through here..if not I will add you to my favorites...Love your poems with the sensitivity of them...even if they are dark...that was life then...happiness now...
Wow that is great...I know what it is like to miss someone when they pass a way...I lost both of my grandmothers in two years back to back...Hope to see you writing more!!!
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