As always...Another beautiful poem that you have wrote...I love the imagery...I pictured it perfectly as I read the description...You can hear how the air cackled...I could hear the wind as it whispers and how sharp the rocks were...I will definitely be back to read more of your poems...Keep On Writing...
Now this is cool...I love what I read...I could see everything I read...I again am not sure what the prose form is but there is loads of imagery through out the whole poem...I I saw the whole thing as I read it...I hope to read more of you poetry as I come back to you port!!! Keep on Writing...
This is a cool column that you have wrote...Sorry about all the bad thing that have happened in you past...Some people are meant to be in sports and some are ment to write about it...that sounds like what you were meant to do...So I hope that you keep ON Writing!!!!
Wow this is an awesome poem too...I could feel the emotion in it as I was reading it...I love the imagery you could see through out the whole poem...The descriptions were great...I love the way the poem read too...Hope to read more of you work...Thanks for helping out with WDC...you are one of the greatist "Angels" around here...Keep On Writing...
This Writing is so true about taking people at face value...I could picture this as the descriptions were wrote...I think that this is an awesome piece and more people should read this...So many people do not act like they really are...For instance I know a few people who are like that...and not sure how to react to them like that...Keep on Writing....
This was interesting...I am not sure if I would go for it...Was this based on something you have wrote or on someone else's book...I was just wondering...I hope that you keep on Writing...I not sure that this is as convincing for reviewers...I would definitely do into more detail...and maybe hight light the 4 W's and all...
um that is differentm, but I think that was the point of the story...I think...ok maybe it is just me but I would not read this to any of my kids...unless this was for an older child...Cool imagery...loads of description of Jackie...definitely not a younger childs bed time story...Keep on writing...
I have to say this is so true and so funny at the same time...It is hilarious as I was reading this I could actually picture this...There was alot of imagery in this...Love the descriptions of all the different types of people who sue out there...Robin Hood I think was my favorite out everyone that was in this poem...Keep on Writing...
as usual another great piece...I love it...A ton of imagery...love to read everything that you have wrote so far...Love the description as I read it...Love the picture of Getrude...cutie...she looks better than my Connie the cow that is in my port that I adopted...hehe...Hope everyone else reads what is wrote in her port!!!
This could go on to another chapter...but you need to add more of it to keep the reader wanting to read it...There needs to more description in the story to keep it going for the reader to want to finish it...I had become confused a little bit on it when you could not tell which ship you were one...When you go to do the next draft...Let me know so I can finish reading it...This is a rally good start...I hope to keep on reading this...Will visit your port...You are added to my favorite authors list!!!!Keep on writing!!!
This seems like it will be an interesting book to read...are you adding more soon to it as you are only secret 3...also what is the November National Writing Challenge? Is that on Writing dot com or is it something else to watch for...I hope to stop by your port more often..you are added to my favorite authors!!! Keep On Writing...
This is a very interesting story...I have known Women who have left their families and all just to find what they wanted...It is hard to settle for normal if you are not sure what Normal is...The story really describes about women who do not want to be normal...They want to live the fast pace...
Like I said a really good story...Keep on Writing!!!!
Wow the Poem is great...I could see it all as I read it...lots of Imagery!!!! YOu are so right about judging...people judge more than they realize...this poem showed that...I think that if the ones that are judging would look and see that they have been judged too...Then everyone would not be judged anymore...(hope that made since) Keep On Writing...
Wow I would say that he has a lot of making up to do to her...I have some confusion though...I thought she said she was not going to marry him and then she does...Was it because they did not want to face everyone...or because she still deep down loved him...and wants him pay for what he did...I hope that you are going to be adding more to this...I kinda lost the whole character sense and how they met...if you would like to know more of what I think...you can email me back and I will let you know...Keep on Writing...
This is a simple but pretty poem...I love how you can picture as you read it...loads of imagery...The descriptions are short, sweet and simple...You could see them walking through the woods on their own little path...I hope to read more from your port and you are on my favorite authors list....Keep on writing...
This is cool...I am sitting next to a 3 yearold right now...that is exactly how he is...I am so glad to read this and see your 3 yearold playing with the rock and with the wood in on the ground...but I think you forgot the number thing that 3 yearolds are best at: "why"! This really cute...lots of Imagery!!
This is awesome...I could see the vines perfectly with all the imagery going through...I hope to read more in your port...I could see the colors of the petals off each vine...I am on to read another one of your poems off there reveiwers request page...You are in my favorite authors too...Keep On writing...
I just want to say that this made me think of every relationship I have been in...how love has affected in each time...I love the imagery in here...and I could see it every line i read...I hope to read more in your port...I have added you to my favorites...Keep On Writing...
Well I can see everything in the poem...I hope that you are not really feeling like this...To me if you are feeling like this then you should write more of the emotion into it...imagery and description wise it is flat...I really think that if you put more emotion into it and Put WDC as your achievement for your writing then maybe you will feel better since you have peers to read and review your work...again that is just my opinion...I have learned more on here with my writing then even in my creative writing class where it was necessary to have peers critiqu in taht class...I really helps...Good luck in the future...I will be back to check more on your port...you have been added to my favorites list...and all I can say is Keep on Writing!!!
Well it has alot of content in this...but you did not really get into it as you could with your feelings about how depressed and how low you are really are...I was really expecting alot more imagery and description when I was reading it...I hope to read more of your port and will be adding you to my favorites list...Definitely need to express more feelings and more description into this...just so you know...I have BPD..and I can relate...but when I write like that I use my poetry and writing as somewhere to escape and add all my feeling good or bad into my writing...great way to vent!!
I just wanted to say that I am glad that you are here to help others...Especially for everyone that needs upgrade...helping the community of Writing.com...I hope to see others come here to either receive help or to nominate others to help...Keep on Helping others her on WDC...
This is an excellant way to help others learn what to do with the memberships...I am one of those who needs to know because my membership is down graded at the end of next month to basic so I have to get my gp's back up again so that I can get my membership upgraded...I would use some of the other groups to help...but I think that I am going to do this on my own since I was given these memberships as gifts...I would have to see if others need it first...
Another perfect auction to help out one of the groups helping with the newbies and other Writing dot com members...Will definitely donate gps to this cause...Hope that you continue to help other WDC members in the future...and I hope to participate more in the next few months...
This is a great start to your new book...I have read the first segment of the original novel...and have been trying to make it through the segment...will have to sit down this weekend and try to make it through other segments so that I can give you some ideas for this character you are working on...Hope to read the next novel in print too...
This again was a really cool story...definitely a read between the lines kinda diner...Hope that this turns into more of a short story as some of your other stories have...I really enjoyed the mother out of the whole thing...until the end when she knew that she was going to have the sam problem too...live and learn...
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/lucasmom2000/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/12
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.26 seconds at 3:50am on May 03, 2024 via server web2.
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
Community Newsfeed
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
