First of all...I think that this was an interesting way to get back at people on the shift that made you anygry...and then for you to elplorer in your own sexualy feeling for big women...I think that you made the whole gaining experince some waight greadually instead of it all in one day...You could picture this as you read this with the descriptions of the crew...would like to know if Steve has his pills to not gain as much weight as he said and is keeping them from Mike...will definitely have to read the next part...definitely different kind of reading for me...Keep on writing...
I think that this article is a great peice...yes there is going to be outdated info...taht is what the internet is all about...nothing that you can control...I went through each topic as you described it and you did a great job with teaching how to do this...I am glad that you were able to do this and make it easy enough for the reader to follow along...
I think that this is a really good poll...I think that it makes you think about the importance of religion is...especially when you have had a chance to experience many religions...I have had that chance...and so I have decided that for myself, I am going to sometime find a religion for myself...
Wow...really imformative on how to look at your BiPolar...I never looked at that way...I have BPD...but the wall is what you described perfectly...I hope to read more of your port...There is alot of imagery in this too...This piece also shows the progess on how you grew with this and were able to have a relationship and let someone into your life with out getting hurt...Keep ON writing...
Wow this was a great one...I actually had a tough time getting this one done...I love challenging ones...I hope to go visit your port...will definitely be back to look for more of these from you...Have a great day and Keep on writing!! Write ON!!!!!
This is a great way to introduce your story...I know that I have two children that would love the story it has a unicorn and my son would love because of the dragon...Lots of description and keeps you ready to go to the first chapter of the story...which is worth the wait to read it...Keep on Writing....
Wow this is a great start to a novel...this will definitely keep the reader interested...I am ready to read the next chapter...Hope that you are already writing that...Hope to go and read your port soon...Keep on Writing...and hope fuully you will get some helpful criticism from other readers too...Good luck!
That is a wonderful poem to write for Cookie...I hope that my girls will someday be able to get on here and write...It is beautiful and lots of imagery...Good Luck!
This is really nice...I love the descriptions in it and the imagery...I hope to see more in your port...Good luck with writing more...I think that you have as niche for writing...Really would like to read more of your work...Just want you to Keep on Writing...
Well I think that this is good...not something I personally would read...You have alot of description used as you read the story...I think I was lost when it went from now and then back to the greek gods...which has to do with the title...I really think that this will be come a great novel....I hope to read more of your stories on your port! Keep Writing ON!
I think that reviewing is an excellant way for readers and authors to meet...also for authors to get more edits that they need for the type of writing...I think that the reader can express how they feel about what they just read and relect from the review...I also think that if you are giving the review that you need to be honest...and rate them honestly...and not give 5 stars and a bad review...I have heard many people that has happened to and I think that is terrible and it gives no help with the author to know what needs to be looked at...That only shows that the person did it for the points and not for helping out with critiscm...
This is really great poem...I really like the imagery in it...You could picture it as you read it...Hope to read some more from your port...I like that it was short and simple, and to the point...Also were you doing a certain rhyme scheme with this...or a poetry form with...Keep on Writing....
Vivian this was a great read...I love the story...as uaual morals take over no matter what...hope to see more of this story and find out about Abby and where she is...I could picture the whole story as I read it through out the whole thing...can't wait to see chapter 2, hopefully....
This is a great poem...I know where you are coming from on here...I have bpd so I am like that everyday too...but it does get better I promise...great imagery...
This is a great beginning of this story...I hope that you are writing more to this....This was really touching...I like the imagery in the story too...I know for elderly it is hard to loose a youg friend when they die..because they miss the companionship...
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