I love your writing style! It's simple, yet keeps the reader hooked and its not long and tedious to read. Also, it's cool how you abruptly end the story, but leave no lose ends. That's probably my favorite element because it makes me wish for more though I have received what I require. This was a great story.
And I checked out your portfolio and honestly feel honored to receive a review from you. I doubt anyone has more community recognitions on WdC. Thanks!
I don't know why, I find this really hilarious! And I think I get you point. Only thing is I got no clue how to turn my thoughts into a story. Give me a prompt, I can work with that, I guess. But my head wanders too much to channelize my thoughts and come up with a story on its own. I loved this piece and I think I'll be reading it pretty often cause it make me trippy. It's simple and and a bit cliché but I love how it's written. And thanks for giving me tips on how to get more exposure.
By the way, you didn't need to request a review, you know? Are you not aware of the principle of mine wherein I review something that my reviewer wrote? I would have specifically read this one in your case. Anyhow, I'll check your stuff out whenever I can.
This is a wonderful poem, and it made me realize the spirit and incentive every soldier feels during wartime.
War is truly devastating for everyone.
I love the lines: I am a proud soldier...soldier. It reminded me that it's not as if soldiers are are not human and cannot feel pain of loss and fear, simply because they don't show it. Keep going!
I really love how you have personified the sun. And thanks for keeping it short! Keep going! And great choices in anime! Please tell all your friends how thug L is!
Truly, we need to have more poems in here touching upon these topics of humanity. This poem really speaks to me, and beckons me to realize that this should stop. I really liked how you bought out emotions in a form of art like poetry.
Yes, no woman will ever lose her beauty for the sake of petty revenge. Thank you for touching upon this. Well written! Please keep writing on subjects of this sort because most peaple tend to avoid topics of this sort. Go for it!
Beautiful!! Its absolutely amazing! The premise, the idea, it is very interesting... I couldn't stop reading till the end... The build up was incredible! If you could perhaps elaborate the climax a little more, that would really make it all the more captivating. The subtle character development of our protagonist was enjoyable. Your writing style reminded me of Paulo Cohelo's in 'The Alchemist'. Go, Vastowen456!
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