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Review of Writers Block  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I think all writers struggle with writer's block at one time or another. I don't know how many times I have faced a looming deadline only to find that words escaped me. It's just something you learn to deal with. I have found that even with writer's block I can write. The quality may be questionable though.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I related to it.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing.

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Review of Vietnam Soldier  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I live at the West Virginia Veterans Home with many Vietnam Veterans. My hat is off to every one of those guys. They fought a war, which was not truly appreciated at the time. I couldn't wait to get out of high school so I could enlist, although I hoped to avoid Vietnam. I managed to avoid it because it ended when I was 13. I would have fought beside any of these guys and my hat is off to the brave men who fought on both sides. It takes guts to stand for what you believe in.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: The love and admiration you have for your grandpa.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I would imagine that the life of a librarian can be both quite fun and quite dull. I guess everything has its moments. Your poem seems like it was written from experience. I read in your profile that you are a student. Is the library a work-study by chance? I attend Marshall University in Huntington WV. I'm graduating next semester then probably going to graduate school.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: Thank you for the glimpse into the life of the librarian.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing thus the high score.

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Review of Little Brother  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: My son is sitting it out in juvenile detention right now. I never went to juvenile detention though Lord knows I could have. Instead I went to a self-made prison for 35 years. You see I am in recovery now. If I don't use any drugs between now and February I will be sober 11 years. The scary thing is that when I look at my son I see a snap shot of myself when I was his age. Like you with your brother it scares me because I don't want him to follow in my foot steps. My life was saved but his may not be.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like the warning you gave your brother. You obviously love him.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Spectrum  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: One thing is certain: We will all die eventually. I am a Christian because I have researched it and I believe the Bible is flawless. Only somebody who transcends time could write a library full of books that stand without contradiction and I feel that somebody is God. Believe me when I say I set out one time to do any and everything I could to prove that God did not exist. I figured that if I could prove even one inconsistency with the Bible I would have done so. All I did was convince myself that it is without error.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like that your questioning things.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

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Review of A Stranger's Gift  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Hi Ken! Happy account anniversary! I love doing anniversary reviews and I try to review poetry as much as I can. I don't pretend to be an expert so take what you want. I chose this poem because it was first in your port. There is really not much rhyme or reason to my choices. I won't pretend to judge this poem because it is free verse. All I know about free verse is that it isn't my favorite form because it doesn't rhyme.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the imagery and the metaphors. I assume the beach was a metaphor for life.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Ode to Joy  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: It sounds like you care for somebody very deeply. I love the rhyme pattern and passion sewn into this poem. My favorite type of poetry is anything that rhymes followed in a very close second by any type of metered poetry. So you have hit the bullseye with this one as far as I am concerned.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: Everything.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the five stars.

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Review of Eternity's sleep  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: This is so sad. It reminds me of my parents. They were married for 56 years. Then my dad died and mom followed him six months later. I have always said she died of a broken heart. Her soul mate was gone and she had nothing left to live for. Sure she had a houseful of grown children but she lived all by herself and had nothing to wake up to. So one morning she simply did not wake up. Your poem captures the loneliness well. I am a widower so I know that you never truly know lonely until you lose your spouse.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the story it told was heartbreaking.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the five stars.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I hope things work out as they are suppose to work out for you. You obviously care very deeply for this significant person in your life. Your poem was dripping with love and passion. Good luck!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the love you wrote into each line.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and matter as opposed to free verse and prose.

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Review of Random Rhyming  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I love rhyme and meter poetry, even when I am unfamiliar with the form. I assume there was no particular form intended here. If there was perhaps you could include the rules? At any rate you make a good point. We will be what we are intended to be. Fighting destiny only makes us miserable.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the rhyme scheme.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the five stars.

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Review of Old Story Told  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: The human condition never changes. It's funny to read ancient literature, for example the Holy Bible, the Qu'ran, or even Homer and see that people thousands of years ago were exactly the same as people living in the 21st Century. The names change and technology changes but the human heart remains the same, evil and rotten. I could see the situation playing out just as you said here because we tend to do exactly as those before us. As the insurance commercial says we become our parents!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the way you portrayed the judgments and stigmas that plague mankind.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Genie as a gift  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Since when has any group of kids ever obeyed the rules? Poor Genie. It wasn't the genie's fault that humans are typically very rebellious. You did a good job capturing the human spirit here. If there were genies I could see this situation playing out exactly as you've portrayed it. Fortunately for the kid there are no genies.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the way you captured the human spirit as I said.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter poetry more than free verse and prose.

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Review of Poetry  
for entry "Cold" 
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Wow! They say the opposite of love is not hatred but is instead indifference. I guess you felt indifferent in this poem! I was blown away by how callous your protagonist was. Good job!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the honesty that came through.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: As a Christian I am taught to love so your poem expressed everything I strive to avoid.

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Review of Daddy's Steps  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: My little boy, now a man followed me around that way. He tried his best at times to match me step for step, which was impossible for his little legs. However it was cute and it made memories that I will always cherish.

Your spelling and grammar: I think "fallow" in the last line was meant to be "follow".

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the stroll down Memory Lane.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: just the spelling errors.

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Review of Monotetra  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I am unfamiliar with this form but I like it. I'm a fan of any metered form or rhyme poetry. This one discusses man's inhumanity toward man, a topic that needs discussion. Of course I know that Jesus is the answer. I'm not saying everybody should be religious but if we all lived by Christian values as we once did the world would be a much better place.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the form though I am unfamiliar with it. Perhaps you should include the rules at the bottom of it?

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing thus the high score.

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Review of Butterfly  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Good for you! I know there is a lot of prejudice and discrimination in this world. I absolutely hate that. I never was prejudice and I have no room in my life for negative people either.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: Your poem was a victory cheer.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Morbid Angel  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: It sounds like you character may have some past regrets that they are dealing with. Life can definitely be stressful and this guy has found this out. Heaven though will be stress free.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the angels most of all. It shows you believe in something outside yourself.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of The City  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Another story of man's inhumanity to man! It seems the upper one percent do have all the power. They allow us to vote as a way of soothing our senses but ultimately the one who controls the money controls it all. It's the same in every country. The US is not alone in this. Flint should never have happened but we're doomed to repeat it in a million other ways.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the truth it told. The person responsible should be charged though murder may be a bit harsh. Actually it was murder though so you're right.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse or prose.

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Review of 3 am  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: If nobody has told you I thank you for what you do. I was an EMT at one time and I know what those long nights and bad dreams are all about. I didn't work long enough to see a whole lot but I saw enough to know I was in over my head. I appreciate first responders. You guys are the people we hope to never need but it's good to know you're there if we do. Thank you again.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you described a scene I have known very well.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: maybe the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Graduation Day  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I'm no judge of lyrics so my opinion doesn't really count for much. I read this because in about five months I will have my own graduation day. I'm a senior at Marshall University in Huntington WV. Your poem reminded me of what I am striving for. Thank you for the heads up!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked looking forward to my own graduation day!

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing thus the five stars.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: While I chose to say my reviews were motivated by a desire to get gift points for use in obtaining and maintaining my premium, that is not really true any longer. I now have my membership paid a year and three months ahead so I'm doing reviews out of a sense of loyalty to the Anniversary Reviews Forum. The owner of the forum has always shown his appreciation and I like to feel I'm a valuable member of that forum.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the fact that you did it.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: I usually only review poetry but made an exception. So my usual comments don't work here.

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Review of The Joy of Autumn  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I liked the imagery of this poem right up to the last stanza, which was a little morbid. However like the leaves we all get old and fall to the ground I guess. I'm getting there. I will pass sixty in just a few years. So maybe your poem reminded me of my own mortality.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the imagery. The rhyme was good too.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Just the morbid part.

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Review of Hope  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: You must write about one poem a year. It looks like I have reviewed two of your poems already. This one names depression, a pain I know very well. I also know it can be overcome if we're willing to work for it and take medication as prescribed. Nothing is ever hopeless and all things can be overcome.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you are admitting you need help and then apparently finding it.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter poetry.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I liked the imagery in this one. I could just picture two creatures peaking from under the cabinet while giving each other high fives for escaping the old hag! I don't blame them. I wouldn't want to become part of her brew either! On the other hand part of me sympathizes with her. After all her dinner just got away!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the imagery as I said already.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter poetry over free verse and prose.

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Review of Once Was An Angel  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My overall impression of your work: Heart felt and touching, especially for a nine year old to have written it. I am so sorry you lost your grandmother at such a young age. I am sure you would have had a splendid relationship. I lost my grandmother at a more advanced age and I know she was one of a kind. I know you miss your grandmother and I pray you can always cherish the memories.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the love that you put into it. Only a child can write so purely and innocently.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the five stars.

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