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Review by Chris Breva Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My overall impression of your work: War is a terrible thing regardless of which side of the fence you are on. I live at the West Virginia Veterans Home in West Virginia USA. Every day I am exposed to heroes and like me they all say that they salute anybody who is willing to fight for their country, regardless of what uniform they are wearing. I know the day will eventually come when man will no longer make war because it is prophesied. I hope I live to see that day.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the patriotism.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

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Review of Winter Banquet  Open in new Window.
Review by Chris Breva Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Winter is not my favorite season. I live in West Virginia USA where we experience all four seasons and for me winter is at the bottom of my list. However it does have some highlights and in a way has its own arcane beauty. Many of my friends prefer it over all other seasons and I admit that I prefer the cold over the heat. Good job!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I enjoyed your imagery.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme or meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of If only  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I understand your pain. I'm sorry you had to go through this. I know it hurts. I know it sounds odd but the greatest gift you can give yourself is to forgive the one who harmed you. I know that sounds bad but you are the one being harmed by carrying all that anger around. I carried a ton of anger from abuse in my childhood and finally realized that my anger did not bother the one who abused me but it certainly bothered me. Why let them continue to victimize you?

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you were able to express your anger. Acceptance is the first step to healing.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme or meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Mirage  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I agree that most of life is a mirage. My faith on the other hand I do not count as a mirage. I have examined thoroughly all faiths. I especially examined Christianity,doing all I could to find even one shred of evidence with which to dismiss it. All I succeeded in doing was convincing myself of its authenticity. I used every discipline known to man and they all seemed to confirm it. So I am a Christian and make no apologies for being one. If I am wrong I will have lived a blessed life and have lost nothing. If I am right I will be with my Savior forever. It's a win-win for me.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you seem to be searching. May you find your answers.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme or meter poetry over free verse and prose.

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Review of doppelganger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I think we all have a doppleganger somewhere. I know for a fact that I have two of them. I have met them both. One was my evil twin for though we were not related he looked like me and his name was nearly the same as mine. I call him my evil twin because I was arrested several time in a case of mistaken identity. Of course they quickly released me but not before pointing a shotgun into my face and telling me that if I moved they would shoot! My other doppleganger and I were friends at one point but the preacher kept calling him by my name etc. We finally parted ways.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the way you described your mirror image.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme or meter poetry over free verse and prose.

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Review by Chris Breva Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Okay so the moral of the story is not to be sexually promiscuous or you'll end up getting screwed. I guess that's one way of putting it! Your objective came through though it was a bit harsh for my tastes.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the lesson you were teaching.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: As I said I thought it was a bit harsh. I am against homosexuality as well but I don't use the term "faggot". Homosexuality is a sin if you read God's word. On the other hand gossip is also a sin or doing anything contrary to God's word. The long and short of it is that we are all sinners!

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Review by Chris Breva Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: My father passed away about five years ago and I miss him. We weren't as close as I wish we had been but I still cherish the times we had together. Like you I look back on the old times quite often. I can easily see the struggles my dad had as he struggled to keep food on the table and clothing on our backs. All too often people forget the sacrifices their fathers make. I know it had to be a sacrifice for him to leave the house in the wee hours of the morning to either sweat or freeze on the back side of a saw mill handling green lumber all day long or tramping through the woods felling trees.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the stroll down Memory Lane for both of us.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme or meter poetry more than free verse and prose.

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Review of Take My Hand  Open in new Window.
Review by Chris Breva Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: It sounds like somebody is pretty lucky to be loved so much. Hang tight to that love. Don't let anything separate the two of you. Love is rare and true love even more rare.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the rhyme. It sang.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the five stars.

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Review of Cookie  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I had a Siamese cat once. His name was Schizo because I swore he had a psychiatric disorder! That cat was nuts! They say cats have a personality all of their own and he most certainly lived up to it. I was the only person he would have anything to do with. He would lay beside me or on my lap for hours but wouldn't let anybody else touch him. Then he escaped through an open window one night and somebody poisoned him. I found him the next morning. He was something!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the memories your poem evoked.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter.

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Review by Chris Breva Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Some of my most vivid memories of the WTC were the images of people jumping to their deaths to avoid being burned up in the inferno that had to be engulfing their building. I have asked myself thousands of times since that day what I would have done if I had been in their positions? Would I have burned up or jumped as they did? I think we know what your decision would be. Let's hope we never have to make such a decision!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like the guts it would take to make such a decision.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Only words  Open in new Window.
Review by Chris Breva Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Humans are indeed meant for intimacy. All too often people miss that. Intimacy is confused for the physical actions of sex and that is not intimacy at all. I remember the first time I ever experienced true intimacy. I was just a young man, perhaps 12 or 13. A young lady, probably my sister and I had a deep, meaningful conversation in which she emptied her heart to me. I know the conversation could not have been very serious as we were both children but I felt as if I could feel her soul. It was a very intimate experience for me and led me to want to pursue a helping career. I am currently a minister and I'm working toward a degree in psychology. So though I was young I still found my calling in the childish conversation we had.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the experience of intimacy.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Flambe  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: There is an old saying that what goes around usually comes around. Your character was an arsonist so life brought the arson home to him. I once had a gang of people steal a car, park it in a garage under the apartment I lived in, and then try to burn the car up so it would not be identified. Of course they didn't realize that the serial numbers located in three or four different places on the vehicle would not burn up. The car had been pushed into the alley just behind my house in an attempt to keep from burning my house down but the smoke from the car made me quite ill. I woke up in time to get my son and myself to safety. They only charged one person of the four with any crimes.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that justice was served though a life was wasted.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: I thought it sad that it took death to end his tirades.

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Review of Pod People  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I hope your life isn't really that bad. At any rate you should do what I did. I researched every religion I could think of and finally settled on Christianity. Since Jesus came into my life my whole world has changed. I'm no longer addicted to drugs and my outlook on life has drastically changed. Where once I was hopeless I now have hope. Where once I hated everybody now my heart is filled with love. Jesus changed my world. Try Him out. He will always refund your misery if you don't like Him!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the idea that you seem to be searching for answers. I was searching when Jesus came into my life.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of The Spyglass  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Bravo! She's a lucky woman! I'm glad I found this. It was a very enjoyable read. I'm not sure if you were following a particular meter but I love any meter or rhyme poetry and yours was no exception. Good job! It was a nice touch to leave a bit of a cliffhanger! Mystery is always enticing.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the rhyme of course.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

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Review of Into the End  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Death is a strange master but it will not have the final victory. As a Christian my hope lies in the resurrection and I know the way has already been paved for me to participate in that resurrection. I will admit though that the thought of dying scares me as I don't want a long drawn out process. I guess the best I can hope for is to die peacefully in my sleep.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the hope you wrote into your poem. It reminded me that there is something beyond that veil.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review by Chris Breva Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Friendships mean so little to most people anymore. We have cheapened the value of human contact and human interaction. Kids these days seldom discuss anything. They would rather send a text as if God did not give them the ability to speak and reason. Divorce rates show that we have even relegated the institution of marriage to a disposable commodity. Of course we have cheapened marriage even further by permitting homosexual unions, which can produce no offspring and are an abomination to God. We have gone to hell morally. God knows though and is going to exact revenge!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you shed light on the weakening of friendships and the awkwardness it causes.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter poetry over free verse and prose.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: It's winter time and not my favorite season. My favorite colors are blue and green. Winter is usually all drab gray with some hues of purple. Snow is also not my favorite. I dream of someday living where I never have to see the harshness of winter again but doubt that I will ever move. I have lived in West Virginia most of my life and it is likely I will die here if Jesus does not return first.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like the use of imagery. I could picture the scene of a new fallen snow.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Writers Block  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I think all writers struggle with writer's block at one time or another. I don't know how many times I have faced a looming deadline only to find that words escaped me. It's just something you learn to deal with. I have found that even with writer's block I can write. The quality may be questionable though.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I related to it.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing.

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Review of Vietnam Soldier  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I live at the West Virginia Veterans Home with many Vietnam Veterans. My hat is off to every one of those guys. They fought a war, which was not truly appreciated at the time. I couldn't wait to get out of high school so I could enlist, although I hoped to avoid Vietnam. I managed to avoid it because it ended when I was 13. I would have fought beside any of these guys and my hat is off to the brave men who fought on both sides. It takes guts to stand for what you believe in.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: The love and admiration you have for your grandpa.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I would imagine that the life of a librarian can be both quite fun and quite dull. I guess everything has its moments. Your poem seems like it was written from experience. I read in your profile that you are a student. Is the library a work-study by chance? I attend Marshall University in Huntington WV. I'm graduating next semester then probably going to graduate school.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: Thank you for the glimpse into the life of the librarian.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing thus the high score.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum.

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Review of Little Brother  Open in new Window.
Review by Chris Breva Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: My son is sitting it out in juvenile detention right now. I never went to juvenile detention though Lord knows I could have. Instead I went to a self-made prison for 35 years. You see I am in recovery now. If I don't use any drugs between now and February I will be sober 11 years. The scary thing is that when I look at my son I see a snap shot of myself when I was his age. Like you with your brother it scares me because I don't want him to follow in my foot steps. My life was saved but his may not be.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like the warning you gave your brother. You obviously love him.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Spectrum  Open in new Window.
Review by Chris Breva Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: One thing is certain: We will all die eventually. I am a Christian because I have researched it and I believe the Bible is flawless. Only somebody who transcends time could write a library full of books that stand without contradiction and I feel that somebody is God. Believe me when I say I set out one time to do any and everything I could to prove that God did not exist. I figured that if I could prove even one inconsistency with the Bible I would have done so. All I did was convince myself that it is without error.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like that your questioning things.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of A Stranger's Gift  Open in new Window.
Review by Chris Breva Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Hi Ken! Happy account anniversary! I love doing anniversary reviews and I try to review poetry as much as I can. I don't pretend to be an expert so take what you want. I chose this poem because it was first in your port. There is really not much rhyme or reason to my choices. I won't pretend to judge this poem because it is free verse. All I know about free verse is that it isn't my favorite form because it doesn't rhyme.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the imagery and the metaphors. I assume the beach was a metaphor for life.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Ode to Joy  Open in new Window.
Review by Chris Breva Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: It sounds like you care for somebody very deeply. I love the rhyme pattern and passion sewn into this poem. My favorite type of poetry is anything that rhymes followed in a very close second by any type of metered poetry. So you have hit the bullseye with this one as far as I am concerned.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: Everything.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the five stars.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Eternity's sleep  Open in new Window.
Review by Chris Breva Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: This is so sad. It reminds me of my parents. They were married for 56 years. Then my dad died and mom followed him six months later. I have always said she died of a broken heart. Her soul mate was gone and she had nothing left to live for. Sure she had a houseful of grown children but she lived all by herself and had nothing to wake up to. So one morning she simply did not wake up. Your poem captures the loneliness well. I am a widower so I know that you never truly know lonely until you lose your spouse.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the story it told was heartbreaking.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the five stars.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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