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Review of Due South  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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My overall impression of your work: Death comes for us all. As I grow older I see my lifeline growing shorter and have to wonder if I've made any real difference in the world or if I will simply pass off the scene basically unnoticed as so many others do. Your character had the old woman left to toast him into the next world. Good write!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the look at the inevitable.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Your rhymes felt a little forced in places.

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Review of A Day in My Life  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My overall impression of your work: This one had me smiling! I could just imagine the meltdown you must have had when that happened. Kids will say the awfullest things and they have a knack at saying them at the worst times. My son once asked a police officer if he could play with the officer's pistol! I wanted to borrow the pistol just long enough to shoot him!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the humor you put into it.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing thus the high score.

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Review of Frozen  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: This poem is sad. I felt your heart breaking as you watched the one you love moving away and into the arms of another. Maybe someday man will conquer the tendency to cheat. I understand from my science class that geneticists are now excusing cheating as the result of a genetic abnormality. God has a better word for it: sin.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the passion that you put into this one.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. It was more prose than poetry. I prefer rhyme and meter.

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Review of Two Empty Windows  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: This poem sounds very depressing. I hope you have found meaning by now. I went through a period where I felt like that. I was an atheist at the time and felt that life was meaningless. It was a pretty dark time for me. I hope you overcome it.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like that you are searching.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of My Haikus!  
for entry "A Beautiful House" 
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Although I run an Oriental Poetry contest I figured out long ago that I am no judge of oriental poetry. However I am a judge of what I like and I love this poem! Your syllable count seems to be spot on for haiku and you even put the twist at the end. Although this poem is not about nature as haiku usually is, it is symbolic of a kissing cousin to haiku, the senryu poem.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: everything

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing thus the high score.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: We all change. Part of being in a relationship is accepting the change that occurs in your partner and loving them anyway. I think that aspect of relationships is what is missing anymore. We all have these fairy tale expectations and when our partners turn out to be human we want to run.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I'm glad you once had feelings for somebody.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme or meter over free verse and prose.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I gave up on meeting the expectations of others a long time ago. Today I only try to meet my own expectations and even those are usually too high. I thank God that I meet all of God's expectations as He has declared me innocent through the blood of His Son.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you expressed this.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme or meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Your Smile  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: She sounds lovely. You have immortalized the memories you share with her. Treasure them. Believe me, they grow up quickly! It seems like it was just yesterday I was changing my son's diapers and now he's talking of making me into a grandfather. Time passes so quickly so treasure each moment. Today she walks on your toes. Tomorrow she walks on your heart!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I adored the scene your words painted.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme or meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Revelations?  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: In answer to your question, yes I believe there will be an apocalypse. My Bible tells me that nobody, not even the Son of God knows when that will be. Only the Father knows. Personally I believe it will be when the last person God knows will become a Christian becomes a Christian. Only God knows who that person is. However I have found that all other scripture has proven reliable so I believe the scriptures that predict the end of the world are also reliable.

Your spelling and grammar: You misspelled "answer" in one of your responses. It looked like a typo.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like anything that makes people consider their mortality and their final destination.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Just the typo.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: War is a terrible thing regardless of which side of the fence you are on. I live at the West Virginia Veterans Home in West Virginia USA. Every day I am exposed to heroes and like me they all say that they salute anybody who is willing to fight for their country, regardless of what uniform they are wearing. I know the day will eventually come when man will no longer make war because it is prophesied. I hope I live to see that day.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the patriotism.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

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Review of Winter Banquet  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Winter is not my favorite season. I live in West Virginia USA where we experience all four seasons and for me winter is at the bottom of my list. However it does have some highlights and in a way has its own arcane beauty. Many of my friends prefer it over all other seasons and I admit that I prefer the cold over the heat. Good job!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I enjoyed your imagery.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme or meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of If only  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I understand your pain. I'm sorry you had to go through this. I know it hurts. I know it sounds odd but the greatest gift you can give yourself is to forgive the one who harmed you. I know that sounds bad but you are the one being harmed by carrying all that anger around. I carried a ton of anger from abuse in my childhood and finally realized that my anger did not bother the one who abused me but it certainly bothered me. Why let them continue to victimize you?

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you were able to express your anger. Acceptance is the first step to healing.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme or meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Mirage  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I agree that most of life is a mirage. My faith on the other hand I do not count as a mirage. I have examined thoroughly all faiths. I especially examined Christianity,doing all I could to find even one shred of evidence with which to dismiss it. All I succeeded in doing was convincing myself of its authenticity. I used every discipline known to man and they all seemed to confirm it. So I am a Christian and make no apologies for being one. If I am wrong I will have lived a blessed life and have lost nothing. If I am right I will be with my Savior forever. It's a win-win for me.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you seem to be searching. May you find your answers.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme or meter poetry over free verse and prose.

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Review of doppelganger  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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My overall impression of your work: I think we all have a doppleganger somewhere. I know for a fact that I have two of them. I have met them both. One was my evil twin for though we were not related he looked like me and his name was nearly the same as mine. I call him my evil twin because I was arrested several time in a case of mistaken identity. Of course they quickly released me but not before pointing a shotgun into my face and telling me that if I moved they would shoot! My other doppleganger and I were friends at one point but the preacher kept calling him by my name etc. We finally parted ways.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the way you described your mirror image.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme or meter poetry over free verse and prose.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Okay so the moral of the story is not to be sexually promiscuous or you'll end up getting screwed. I guess that's one way of putting it! Your objective came through though it was a bit harsh for my tastes.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the lesson you were teaching.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: As I said I thought it was a bit harsh. I am against homosexuality as well but I don't use the term "faggot". Homosexuality is a sin if you read God's word. On the other hand gossip is also a sin or doing anything contrary to God's word. The long and short of it is that we are all sinners!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: My father passed away about five years ago and I miss him. We weren't as close as I wish we had been but I still cherish the times we had together. Like you I look back on the old times quite often. I can easily see the struggles my dad had as he struggled to keep food on the table and clothing on our backs. All too often people forget the sacrifices their fathers make. I know it had to be a sacrifice for him to leave the house in the wee hours of the morning to either sweat or freeze on the back side of a saw mill handling green lumber all day long or tramping through the woods felling trees.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the stroll down Memory Lane for both of us.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme or meter poetry more than free verse and prose.

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Review of Take My Hand  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: It sounds like somebody is pretty lucky to be loved so much. Hang tight to that love. Don't let anything separate the two of you. Love is rare and true love even more rare.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the rhyme. It sang.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the five stars.

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Review of Cookie  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I had a Siamese cat once. His name was Schizo because I swore he had a psychiatric disorder! That cat was nuts! They say cats have a personality all of their own and he most certainly lived up to it. I was the only person he would have anything to do with. He would lay beside me or on my lap for hours but wouldn't let anybody else touch him. Then he escaped through an open window one night and somebody poisoned him. I found him the next morning. He was something!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the memories your poem evoked.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Some of my most vivid memories of the WTC were the images of people jumping to their deaths to avoid being burned up in the inferno that had to be engulfing their building. I have asked myself thousands of times since that day what I would have done if I had been in their positions? Would I have burned up or jumped as they did? I think we know what your decision would be. Let's hope we never have to make such a decision!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like the guts it would take to make such a decision.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Only words  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Humans are indeed meant for intimacy. All too often people miss that. Intimacy is confused for the physical actions of sex and that is not intimacy at all. I remember the first time I ever experienced true intimacy. I was just a young man, perhaps 12 or 13. A young lady, probably my sister and I had a deep, meaningful conversation in which she emptied her heart to me. I know the conversation could not have been very serious as we were both children but I felt as if I could feel her soul. It was a very intimate experience for me and led me to want to pursue a helping career. I am currently a minister and I'm working toward a degree in psychology. So though I was young I still found my calling in the childish conversation we had.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the experience of intimacy.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Flambe  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: There is an old saying that what goes around usually comes around. Your character was an arsonist so life brought the arson home to him. I once had a gang of people steal a car, park it in a garage under the apartment I lived in, and then try to burn the car up so it would not be identified. Of course they didn't realize that the serial numbers located in three or four different places on the vehicle would not burn up. The car had been pushed into the alley just behind my house in an attempt to keep from burning my house down but the smoke from the car made me quite ill. I woke up in time to get my son and myself to safety. They only charged one person of the four with any crimes.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that justice was served though a life was wasted.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: I thought it sad that it took death to end his tirades.

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Review of Pod People  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I hope your life isn't really that bad. At any rate you should do what I did. I researched every religion I could think of and finally settled on Christianity. Since Jesus came into my life my whole world has changed. I'm no longer addicted to drugs and my outlook on life has drastically changed. Where once I was hopeless I now have hope. Where once I hated everybody now my heart is filled with love. Jesus changed my world. Try Him out. He will always refund your misery if you don't like Him!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the idea that you seem to be searching for answers. I was searching when Jesus came into my life.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of The Spyglass  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Bravo! She's a lucky woman! I'm glad I found this. It was a very enjoyable read. I'm not sure if you were following a particular meter but I love any meter or rhyme poetry and yours was no exception. Good job! It was a nice touch to leave a bit of a cliffhanger! Mystery is always enticing.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the rhyme of course.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

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Review of Into the End  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Death is a strange master but it will not have the final victory. As a Christian my hope lies in the resurrection and I know the way has already been paved for me to participate in that resurrection. I will admit though that the thought of dying scares me as I don't want a long drawn out process. I guess the best I can hope for is to die peacefully in my sleep.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the hope you wrote into your poem. It reminded me that there is something beyond that veil.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Friendships mean so little to most people anymore. We have cheapened the value of human contact and human interaction. Kids these days seldom discuss anything. They would rather send a text as if God did not give them the ability to speak and reason. Divorce rates show that we have even relegated the institution of marriage to a disposable commodity. Of course we have cheapened marriage even further by permitting homosexual unions, which can produce no offspring and are an abomination to God. We have gone to hell morally. God knows though and is going to exact revenge!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you shed light on the weakening of friendships and the awkwardness it causes.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter poetry over free verse and prose.

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