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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: My biology teacher at Marshall would applaud you for questioning about the octopus. Where did it come from? How did it evolve?

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you are questioning.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter poetry over free verse and prose.

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Review of Cat Nap  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I always try to get up and do something when I have insomnia. I don't want my bed to become a punishment. Perhaps you aren't tired when you can't sleep? Cats have no corner on the sleep market. Their sleep would be ineffective for us.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the imagery.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of DIVINE SOULMATES  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I just love metered poetry and rhyme poetry. This is the best of both worlds! The subject matter was also near and dear to my heart as I am a widower. My wife passed five years ago. So I related to this poem very well though I still have not found love.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: Everything. I love rhyme and meter and poems I can relate to.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the five stars.

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Review of Roundabout  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I've been on a forced vacation due to illness and being over extended at school. I hope to remedy that soon. I hope to do a number of anniversary reviews tonight but don't know if that will happen. Anyway I enjoyed your poem. I have had many such conversations. I always hated them.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I could visualize myself in a conversation that felt contrived and forced. I want to leave it as soon as possible.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the high score.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I can understand why you were the winner of the contest you wrote for. Your poetry has heart. Congratulations! I look forward to seeing you win more contests.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the feelings you put into this one. Your use of imagery was imaginative as well. Good job!

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

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Review of Dublin Sunset  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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My overall impression of your work: Sounds to me as if your character has a case of major depression or possibly bi-polar disorder. I'm very familiar with the latter because I've had it for years. I'm going through a depression swing now, brought on in part by my psychiatrist putting me on a medication that research now shows is counterproductive in people with bi-polar disorder. At any rate, I know that like all mood swings this too will pass. I hope your character held on to that hope as well.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that this poem brought attention to depression. Many people simply give up and there is always hope.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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My overall impression of your work: I love a good Limerick and this is certainly a good one. I'm not going to pretend that I counted your syllables but I'll take your word for it. I just love Limerick and I needed a chuckle. I got it!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the form. The rhyme scheme was excellent and it made me laugh.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

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Review of Baby Blues  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: This is a sad story and I could feel your loss. I'm sorry you had to endure that. I have found that life is full of losses and they never get easier to handle. I pray you will find healing and completeness.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: It was actually a prose and a sad one. Good letter filled with emotion.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: I prefer rhyme and meter poetry over free verse and prose.

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Review of Ignorance  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: People can be idiots as you know. There is absolutely no point in anybody getting upset because you inject insulin. That just shows their ignorance. Perhaps the roles would be reversed and they would have to inject themselves. They would do it or die. Never let fools like that get to you. They don't pay you enough to rent space in your mind!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like that you expressed this.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: maybe the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Silent Night  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I am glad you had a good evening. It sounds like some of the evenings I've had. I live in an assisted living facility for veterans in a room by myself. A lot of nights I sit alone and can almost here the voices of loved ones whispering to me. Great job!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the rhyming parts.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: You didn't keep it rhyming.

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Review of The Red Scarf  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: The Grief Institute would say your character needs to complete with the loss in his life. I hope this is based on a fantasy and not a real life situation. If it's real condolences are in order. I hope you won the contest.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the good memories your character had and the love expressed.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing thus the high score.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Fae justice  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I don't typically review stories but this one was short. I can see where you could go a thousand different directions with this. I won't pretend to advise you what to do. I will say that your fairy has exacted revenge though there may not even be a reason. He lost his brother and lashed out.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the plot.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Freedom  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Freedom usually comes at a very high price. I live at the West Virginia Veteran's Home and I see the price of freedom every day. A lot of these guys have wounds that will never heal from their sacrifices. I dearly love them all.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: The message that freedom comes at a price.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Forever friend.  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I'm just slightly familiar with this metered form. I have heard of a form called "small" but know little about it so I won't pretend to critique this. I can see from the content that you miss a friend. I hope all worked out for you.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the form. I like metered poetry in all forms.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing. Thus the high score.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Zen Turtle  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I think more people ought to consider and meditate on religion. There is nothing to give one some get up and go like faith. I have depression and a bad thyroid and I go to school full time. I have been tired due to my thyroid and it was my faith that saw me through it. I recommend faith to everybody.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you were considering faith.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Take me away  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: This read almost like a rap lyric. In fact I found myself rapping it and I don't do rap! I'm too old for rap. However this had a good flow and good rhyme scheme. You did a great job!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the flow the best. I also liked the rhyme scheme. I love rhyme and meter poetry.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Wait for me  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: This sounds like a prayer. I am a firm believer in Jesus Christ and I am all the time asking Him not to leave me behind. I could so easily fall behind. I pray you are okay and that your prayer was answered. If this was a love poem, which is also a strong possibility, then I hope they did not leave you.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the child like qualities of this one. It reminded me of a child talking to a parent.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Just the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over freed verse and prose.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I'll have to come by and purchase some C-notes from you. I like the "Hugs" c-note so maybe I'll order it and the kangaroo one. I like giving gifts anonymously but no I was not the one who sent your premium. I have sent premiums anonymously before though. If you need one let me know and I'll see what I can do. During the mean time good luck with your c-note shop!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the "Hugs" and "kangaroo" c-notes the best. They are all nice though. Good job.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of The un House  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I think you have a nice illustration here. My compliments to the author. It reminds me of some of the fun houses I've seen over the years. I think that's what it's a reference to, correct? Happy account anniversary!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: The image was perfect.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the five stars.

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Review of In Dreams  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Erotic dreams can be quite stimulating. I don't dream much of anything anymore because medication screws up my sleep patterns but I remember those pleasurable dreams. I promise I won't wake you.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the look into your dreams.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Living nightmare  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I have to agree with you that there is always hope. However if we believe the prophecies of old the world is only going to get worse and worse. The best I can do is make my part of the world the best it can be.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked your optimism.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: The format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Tired  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I'm glad you were able to express this and hope you are feeling much better now. I too struggled with those feelings of hopelessness and despair. I promise you that there is hope out there. Maybe talking to a professional would help? If you ever feel that way again call 1-800-273-8255 and talk to somebody about it. It's free and confidential.
Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you were able to express this.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: This is a nice tribute to the significant other in your life. I am glad you have a great relationship and hope it lasts for years to come. I have officially buried both my wife and my ex-wife so I know life is short. Treasure the time you have.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the heartfelt sentiment.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Chasing ghosts  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: This sounds almost dreadfully forlorn. You're longing for somebody you know you can never have but then you seem to be happy not having them. Sometimes the greatest gifts life gives us is to tell us no about something.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the way your poem flowed.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

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Review of Peaches  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Farmers are an integral part of our lifestyle. All too often the government does not give subsidies to farmers and the farmer is forced to find another line of work. We need our farmers and orchards. Otherwise we would starve. Your poem is a good tribute to a farmer.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the tribute it paid to the farmer.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: The style. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose. I also prefer shorter poems.

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