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I look at the fun factor.
I'm good at...
Knowing what sells and Knowing what is good are my skills.
Favorite Genres
Murder mysteries.
Least Favorite Genres
Long sad stories.
Favorite Item Types
Murder She Wrote, Columbo and NCIS.
Least Favorite Item Types
Sad, tragic endings.
I will not review...
My obituary.
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
So the point is no point?
I guess that is the point...
What is three plus three?
Why do we care?
We need structure... No?

I think maybe that's true...
If we don't want structure.
Then, we are screwed... Yes?
I hope so...
Let all remember the butterfly.

It is a bug.


Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, happy ending for Aaron.
Survivor guilt is very good.
Imagine if Aaron didn't feel guilt.
My tomcat Rusty felt loss for his life mate Patches.
He wailed at me, when I put Patches in a shoe box.
I hope Aaron can forgive himself.
I know I forgave Rusty for emotional outburst.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)


A beautiful poem.
So much of our time is lost.
And we forget what was lost.
I know I will not recover it.
But hope springs eternal.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
You should use more pronouns...
Mars might have been another Earth.
But, it has become a last hope for some people.
I know we have a population problem.
Nevertheless, I am an Earthling.

Good outline on a sci-fi.
Keep writing your dreams!

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hearsay testimony is very tricky.
Are you familiar with Fatima?
There was a lot of rain there...
And then the sun appeared to come down and dry everyone off.
It was considered to be a manifestation of the Virgin Mary by many witnesses.
But, could it have been a close encounter with alien aircraft?
Will never know.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Can something come from nothing?
Some say yes and others say no.
I don't know... But, I hope there is love.
Joseph Ben Joseph, son of Joseph; Jesus.
We do not have the original Gospels.
All of the Gospels are translations.
We do not have Jesus' original Gospel.
The Sermon on the Mount was a compilation of Sumerian Gospels.
But, it's a good sermon...
Do you want to do good?
Have you helped someone?
That is what life is for, I hope.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A cute cuddly topic.
We are all animals.
We all die.
Nevertheless, humans have pets.
I had cats and dogs and presently tropical fish.
All animals must kill to eat.
Humans kill for sport.
I have nothing concrete about an afterlife.
Humans like to believe they are special.
But, as far as I can tell death is the end.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
There is no lack of miracles.
Taking a click through the telly shows miracles galore.
The problem arises when you try to prove them.
How do you prove them?
I like oranges, but should I make everyone eat one?
Christianity is a small religion compared to Islam.
Should the popularity of faith decide its validity?
You are an excellent writer...
I enjoy your style.

Bob County


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Review by bob county
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Thanks!

Women are our mothers and daughters and lovers.

Bob County
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Review of The New Year  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! I like this poem.
Covid is never gone...
Unfortunately, covid is the flu.
You are a person of immense life!
Let us remember our loved ones.
We are alive and this poem is great!
Covid is only the flu that is endured.
I have been vaccinated for the flu and polio.
That gives you an idea of how old I am.
Good poem!

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
The answer to life, the universe and everything?
Which God or Gods do you pray to?
Or don't you pray?
Why do we exist?
We exist.
There are many stars and milky ways.
Ours will collide with another.
Are we dust in the wind?
A philosopher will tell many theories...
How can we know the truth?

Fun Read!

Bob County
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Review of LIVING OUT LOUD  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very well written!
I am cautious, but I enjoy sipping.
I had a stroke on August 22, 2021.
I had to learn to walk again.
But, I did not forget my humor and laughter.
I was raised in a conservative Irish American Roman Catholic house.
"Obey or I will kill you," Jesus said in Luke 19:27.
I always thought that was extremely rude.
Good luck to you!

Bob County
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Review of The Shed  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
I remember Kim Cabral in grammar school and Karen ... I forgot Karen's last name.
Karen was a plump Chines American and Kim Cabral was a muscular girl.
Kim liked to pin me down and kiss me, while Karen was more of a talker.
Karen talked about the other kids making fun of her weight.
I told her that was stupid and she should ignore them...
Kim had sex with me by the dumpster, during recess.
It was oral sex on her part.
Karen would go onto high school and become a nurse.
Kim went on to become a bus driver.
I went to community college which was merged with U-Mass College...
Does that help you with your novel?

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Is Hannah alive?
She seems more interested in dreams.
My oldest sister told me that she saw her dead friends.
But, it was in the subway and they were walking away.
I think it was the Redline train to downtown Boston.
She committed suicide...
I don't think life is easy, but it is fun.
I hope you are having fun.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I recall a film by Steven King.
Some kids reanimate a cat and it goes crazy.
Of course, Frankenstein is another reanimate story.
You do know that death is a necessary part of living?
If no one died, then we would have overpopulation.
Nevertheless, reanimation is not perverse.
Many hospitals keep people alive who would have died.
But, there is a beginning and an end to life.

Fun Read!

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Are you sure?
Luke 19:27 "Obey or I will kill you!"
That's not nice.
Jesus lived and died thousands of years ago.
There was no electricity or toilet paper.
He wrote nothing.
All of the Gospels are copies.
How can you be certain?
Most religious people are nonChristen.
Are they going to Hell?
Maybe, Jesus was just a man.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
Virtual reality is not good.
It's better to live in the real world.
That's assuming we are living in the real world.
When I was a child I thought the world revolved around me.
But, it doesn't.
I had a stroke on August 22, 2021.
And discovered that I am type 2 diabetes.
Then, I had five broken teeth abstracted in January.
And I discovered I could not afford implants.
Is this a Meta-verse?

I don't know for certain.
But, it hurts...

Just my two cents for the ferryman.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is curious, can psychiatry be Normal?
If you believe you have this phantom disease,
then are you afflicted with Fibro?
People have caused strange events with their imagination.
If enough people believe in evil as a self-aware entity,
does that make it real?
Can it all be in our minds?
How can I be objective?
I don't know...

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
I can't make sense of this.
Is this Yo Semi Sam quotes?
Or is there a method behind this madness?
I hope I can make a poem as perplexing as this.
There is alliteration, "Pompous portly Portia" and "Cunning Cassandra's camera".
Maybe it's like the Caterpillar in Alice and Wonderland?
Or was that the smiling Cheshire Cat?

I need a nap.

Bob Country
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Review by bob county
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Sometimes I ask myself why I didn't have children.
Then, I read this.
The purpose of life is to live.
Donald knows this, maybe.
Samatha just doesn't care.
I liked Bambi...
It had a beginning and an end.
Rudolf is silly.
I know animals are violent, but Bambi is cute.

Does that help?


Bob County
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Review of The Ghost Of Me  
Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The ghost of me.
Could this be your alter ego?
Or is it death?
The poem works.
What is, but why?

Most of us don't want to die.
We don't want to go to Hell.
We don't want to be a regretful ghost.
But, that doesn't mean we won't be all those things.
It is what it is...

I liked this tome.

Bob County

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Review by bob county
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The problem with E.T.s is they always want something.
The E.T.s of ancient Sumeria wanted gold.
Your Hearrols want control over your people.
But, they can be killed.
So, the Hearrols try to appear God-like.
Ancient Sumerian E.T.s wanted gold and to be worshiped.
They got both...

Bob County
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Review of To the Rescue  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
You are a perfect storyteller.
I was transfixed.
Faeries are really cute and precious.
I am so glad that you told this story.
I hope you can find many more...
I like to write about faeries too.
But, your elegance is hard to match.
Faeries are very much like Angels.
But, who would question the existence of Angels?

Bob County
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Review of The Algorithm  
Review by bob county
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very cool...
The problem is the meaning.
There is none.
I try to find meaning...
It gives me purpose, but it's contrived.
I like the Algorithm in commercials.
What is the point?
This Algorithm has a split personality.
That's because it has no purpose.
Humanity is extinct.

Oh, well.


Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Renslow is gone.
As we approach the Christmas season I ponder Scrooge.
Scrooge was a loan agent.
He made loans.
And back in the day loans were never forgiven.
Renslow should be remembered?
What is the sum of a man or woman?
When a person dies their usually forgotten by most.

Keep writing!

Bob County
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