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I look at the fun factor.
I'm good at...
Knowing what sells and Knowing what is good are my skills.
Favorite Genres
Murder mysteries.
Least Favorite Genres
Long sad stories.
Favorite Item Types
Murder She Wrote, Columbo and NCIS.
Least Favorite Item Types
Sad, tragic endings.
I will not review...
My obituary.
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (3.0)
I have viewed Lucinda's Spell...
It was fun.
I don't understand your trinket.

Is it a contest?
Is it art?
It isn't my thing.

You left a note for me, "No."
Is that everything I've written?
Are you saying, "No" to predestination?
It is all about choice.
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)


Ah, so...
To begin with, I am not AI!
I am just a poor sinner, who doesn't have a clue
what you're talking about.
Thanks for reading my thread.
Thailand is a long way away.
Sorry about my poem.
It's just a poem...

Just my two cents.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Well. I am a dullard.
The target is the uncle?
Not to sound insensitive, but the abduction is fuzzy.
Why not take all three victims?
The ninjas have no resistance from their victims.

The story seems clumsy.
But I had fun reading it.
My mom always warned about men taking us away.
I think it was because her mother escaped the NAZIS
before they took France.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
It was a dark and stormy poem.
Why is it important to muse in 9 lines?
Are you trying to win a contest?
I saw a bear with a cub...
Another day, I saw two snow owls on a highway railing.
When it is stormy the woodland creatures hide.
Usually, they hide in or under trees.
Nice poem.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Well, an English translation would be helpful.
I think, therefore, I am.
I'm reminded of Dante's vision of hell.
There was a muddy spot where atheist and lost souls would sink.
I feel a little muddy...
Maybe, you should translate your poem.
Just my two cents for the ferryman.

Bob County
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Review of Let Us Wander  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)


What is lost is lost...
I think folks forget almost all the bad stuff.
That is life...
You think, therefore, you exist.
Poets love to dwell on what they have lost.
That is what it is...
As you grow older you remember what you have lost.
And maybe you put that feeling to prose.
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Review of Tingle Town  
Review by bob county
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Dove's secret?
There was a kiss in grammar school.
Laura sat me down with Andy and asked me for a kiss.
We were in our teens, and I kissed her.
Then, she kissed Andy.
It was in her house.
I thought it was weird.
She said, "That was fun!"
And she gut up from her knees and we all stood.
Then we went out to her kitchen and had some Coca-Cola.

That was strange.


Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)


I just watched a snippet of Mel Brooks at 97 years old.
He was on a talk show, and he was commenting that the show was crazy.
It went from his interview to another without any point.
I love Mel Brooks.


Bob County
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Review of Conscapsis Theory  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
"The Theory of Conscapsis is still in its early stages,
and there is no scientific evidence to support it."
Where do all the dead homeless people go?
Where do all the dead junkies go?
Once the brain is dead, what is left?
I hate to be a downer on death...

There is a beginning and an end.

That's my two cents for the ferryman.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm sorry...
Maybe, it was meant not to be?
At least you had a place to write it down.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
"Demon" means knowledge giver.
When I was a boy, I spoke into the summer night window.
I would sit by the window and breath in time to the wind.
After a while, I believed I was causing the wind to blow.
I convinced myself that the wind would bend the sycamore limbs to my breath.
I was a spooky child.

Nice poem.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Let me get this straight the new puppy is a Husky male: Max...
Bellah is an eight-week-old Australian Sheperd female.
And Bellah wants to play with the Husky male: Max.
But you want to train Max...
This is all happening in the middle of a blizzard.

My dad would adopt dogs and I would end up walking them.
Do these pups know potty training?
In a blizzard it would be difficult to take them for a walk.
I would paper train them.

You've a well written slice of time.

Bob County
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Review of Cobweb Dust  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)

I remember reading Eger Alan Poe in grammar school.
Then there was the dreaded Spanish and French classes.
That dates me.

Your poem reminded me of simpler problems.
Where does the universe come from?
Is there something after the Big Bang?
I don't know.

Nevertheless, you have a lovely style.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A panty girdle, here is the cuts of the story.
Apparently, he was forced to wear this girdle.
It was a punishment.
This is another reason why I don't like schools with uniforms.
There is always a person who is forced to wear a girdle.
That is the rub!

Good writing!

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ha-ha!
Wizards and mirrors are always evil...
"Mirror upon with wall.
Tell me which is the fairest of them all."
The use of language is fun...
Is it medieval?
And there are three heroes.
Reminds me of the three little pigs.
You know wicca isn't evil.
It is how it is used.

Bob County
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Review of Becoming.  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)


The bass?
I am not musical, but it sounds like she wanted more from the bass.
I don't understand ambition...
What is the bass?
Is this an erotic instrument for her?
If you live with a musician do they play a lot at home?
A lot of the bass is rubbing...

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Apocrypha is the word for this thread.
Who will be our Saviour?
And what will save us?
Jesus talked about world peace for those who followed him.
Those who did not follow Jesus were dead to him(Luke 19:27).
Either you are with him or against him...
Funny that Androntrimax spells know as "no."
Yes or no is always the question.

Just my two cents for the ferryman.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)


It looks like Jake gut his come uppings.
The hero always gets screwed...
I sorry about Jake, but that's is the hero's story.
Wouldn't it be lovely if the Pale ones weren't bad?
What if Jake saw the Pale ones and learned they were good?
Just my thoughts...

Nice yarn!

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
Coma? Jesus is a nice idea.
Luke 19:27 Jesus states, "But for these enemies of mine,
who did not want to reign over them, bring them here and
slaughter them before me."
I like the Sermon on the Mount, but to not like Luke 19:27.
Wasn't Eve punished with menstruation and child birth for choosing Original Sin?
Why did perfect Adam listen to Eve?

We had a girl, who cut herself on the Mcdonald's window.
We told her she would be fired if she did that at work again.
She wore long sleeves...

If you have found true happiness, then more power to you.


Bob Country
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Review of The Supremes  
Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hmf? Are you sure?
I don't want to force a woman to give birth.
However, I love babies.
I think the Supreme Court is silly.
However, someone has to decide what is law.
I like Jesus.
But, Luke 19:27 "slaughter my enemies" is too much for me.
Politics is about money...
I guess I a freethinker.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (3.5)
Jesus is a very nice idea.
Did he actually live over two thousand years ago?
Jesus wanted world peace under his church.
Luke provides an execution for those who do not believe Jesus is God.
Luke 19:27, "But as for these enemies of mine, who did not wont me to
reign over them, bring them here and slaughter them before me."
I like the sermon on the mount.
But, that is not the whole Testimony of Jesus.
Remember this took place over two thousand years ago.

Bob Country
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm not a poet.
I know what I like.
The "Pit and swallowing" are solid messages.
A woman is a pit and swallowing wrongs.
Think about all the sins that have passed a woman's lips.
Are they sins to her?
I often wondered if a lady can be so kind.
Your poem touched my heathen heart.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
What was that statue that foretold the end of humanity?
There were allot of them.
The problem is over population.
Poor people make more babies.
China rewards male children, so they have a shortage of females.
This is what your poem is getting at...
We need more constructive people.

Nice poem.

Bob County
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Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Sounds good like egg fu Yung.
The problem with religion is which one?
Eternity is a long time.
What will you do?
Will you forget yourself?

Just my coin for the ferryman.

Bob County

PS. Maybe, we will never die?
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Review by bob county
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Oh, my.

Why do you think all our large arrays have been offline?
Is something the astronomers don't want the public to know?
Anunnaki are coming.
There is a nineth planet, and it is coming very close to Earth.
Put a paper bag over your head and lye on the floor.
That might be a blessing.

Nice yarn, but you are helpless.

Bob County
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