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I look at the fun factor.
I'm good at...
Knowing what sells and Knowing what is good are my skills.
Favorite Genres
Murder mysteries.
Least Favorite Genres
Long sad stories.
Favorite Item Types
Murder She Wrote, Columbo and NCIS.
Least Favorite Item Types
Sad, tragic endings.
I will not review...
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Review of A Poem  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


I know my siblings will get along without me.
Nevertheless, I have no children.
My friends and coworkers can get along without me.
Nevertheless, I need them.
I'm a sentimental fool.

I like your poem.
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


It is what it is.
Congestive heart failure in the old west.
Not a good hand delt.
Poker is fun, but I suck at it.
My older brother confessed he learned how to cheat
in Vietnam.
I guess cowboys know how to cheat too.
That's my opinion.
Is this helpful?
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)


"Obey or I will kill you." Jesus said (Luke 19:27).
The meek will get what is given to them.
That is the way of life.

Why are there so many religions?
Why did religion exist?
Sumera existed before Judaism.

Just my opinion.


Bob County
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


I usually have ice coffee.
But coffee is good too.

You know coffee makes you poop.
When I read plunger, I thought you were on the toilet.

It was a fun fantasy.
I want a steamy cup of coffee!
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Review of Margins  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


Annitta, I might be confusing her name...
She liked showing the boys she could do anything better than them.
I was shooting basketball with Andy and Michael.
"You shoot like girls." Annitta said and took the basketball.
She scored from the outside and slammed dunk Andy.
We were scared of her, but she was cute.

It was grammar school, and we were scared of her.
We were all 8th graders.

Your thread reminded me of Annitta.
She attended a private high school on New York state.

I'm old, but she is still young to me.
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)



People need God.
And people pray.
But is that wishful thinking?
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)


Are we in a simulation?
What is Hell and Heavan?
Eternity is a long time.
How important are we?

Thought provoking poem.

Bob County
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)


Atlas got Hercules to take his place.
Your poem is spot on.
Where is Atlas holding the Earth?
The Earth is mostly oceans.
He would drown.

Just my whimsy.

Muzzy
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)



Writing for me is therapy.
Artificial intelligence is here and is writing.
There is nothing illegal about AI yet.
Morality is subjective.
So, let the writing continue.

Bob County
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Review of CLEARLY ESTRANGED  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Cancer is an overactive cell.
Carnivora is popular cure.
I hear it advertised on the Paranormal radio show.
They talk about ghost and UFOs.
Jeff Norey is the host.
9.67am on my 2002 Winstar radio.
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)



Woman in the Old Testament were property.
Moses' first wife Sarah did not have a child until late in life.
He used a slave girl to procreate a male heir.

I am of Irish and Jewish descent.
My father was a red headed Irish American.
They did not want me dating black girls.

I dated Racheal Wild, but her father thought I was a NAZI.
Gunther Wild escaped NAZI Germany hidden in a suitcase.
Gunther didn't like my family's pro-Vietnam older brother.

Gunther opposed the war with Vietnam.

I don't know if I am racist.
But you write a compelling story.

Just my opinion.


Bob County
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


Hero drowned.
He was swimming off the coast of Greece.
It was night...
He wanted to see his girlfriend.
And he got a stitch and drowned.

I think love of a women is sexual.
Nevertheless, Hero drowned...
Nice thought about church.
But love is a hot mess.

Bob County
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Review of The Jump  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


Doorways are fun.
I watched my sisters dress and undress through a key whole.
I did pull ups on a bar between a doorway.
I watched my sisters in the bathroom through the key whole.
Sometimes they would let me in.
I was just a boy...


Bob county
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


Conservatism is first and foremost a natural conservation.
We have only one planet and Mars is mostly dead and a long way.
Corporation run the world and think about greed.
The single biggest threat to all life on Earth is human.
Where do we put all the pollution?

That's me venting.

Bob Country
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Rated: E | (5.0)


Go Mike!
Pink stilettos Barbie heels is all it took?
And Mike had waited 6 years to ask her out?
Weird but romantic.


Bob Country
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)

Symbiotic relationship... Evidence for a designer?
Maybe, or maybe not. It might be an accident.
I was just watching Jimmy Kimbel and young adults addressing letters.
They couldn't do it. They didn't know where the address goes and the return address goes.
These were Havard school students... They had never addressed a letter.

We live in a wacky world.

Bob Country
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


Is Carl Lewis still alive?
Are the male and female athletes competing with each other?
Teenage boy athletes are stronger and faster than adult female athletes.
That has been proven.
That is why there is a male competition and a female competition in sports.
I suppose chess can be unisex.

Just my opinion.

Bob Country
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Review of Dear Pip  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


I got dumped because of boredom.
I had two strokes later and the girls aren't interested.
Were you looking for marriage?
He left you.
I guess that's all she wrote.

Bob Country
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Review of Pre-Adult Days.  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

I recall calling Karin across a football field.
Unfortunately, your name was Liz...
Which I realized after the game.
That was awkward.
But I was a high school kid.

Nice poem!
I never had a girlfriend...
But I did have sex in my youth.
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for entry "The Secret Passageway" Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)


I'm reminded of Young Frankenstein.
"Put the candle stick back!" Frankenstein said to his lovely assistant lady.
This is a lovely yarn about hidden secrets.
I hope there was a little violin playing.
Grampa has good friends... He should try some honey.
That should help his singing.

Bob Country
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Review of Dear Me.  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)


Looking over your script treatment, I am reminded of a pineapple.
The ula amba gatta, pine needle in our brains or pineapple.
The Pope has a pineapple on his staff.
There is a stone carving of a pineapple in the Vatican Museum.
The pineapple is considered the connection to God.
Maybe the universe is a pineapple away?

Bob Country
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Review of Normality  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)


A very dead poem.
Cats will eat their owners.
Maybe Pete wants more of a nibble?
Joan of Arc said she got her inspiration from a tree.
Was she psychotic?
She was burned alive at a wooden stake with fags at her feet.
Your poem is about death... and snowflakes.
I fire hurts more.

Bob Country
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Review of Bullfighter  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


I am reminded of walking this blind girl at U-Mass Boston.
We had both attended an English course about Gulveer's Travels.
And another girl stopped us an asked, "Kelly are you alright?"
I had let Kelly feel my face and she asked that I take her to the Bus stop.
Nevertheless, Kelly excused herself and went on her girlfriend's arm.
I felt abandoned...

A boyfriend wants to be hymn.

Bob Country
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Review of How to be special  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


"Bongo just pawn in game of life."
I'm quoting a Mel Brooks film.
I am not certain Pawn can choose to be other than Pawn.
If you are writing about a chess piece?
But do we have freewill?
How would can we be objective?

Just my opinion.

Bob Country
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


There were these Romanians exchange students.
They came to this country on green cards.
They wanted to earn as much as they could.
The Romanian government decided if they would go to college.
Then the government would pay for their college education.
All other Romanian' students were provided for basic education and shop classes.

In the USA college is political and elite schools take only elite students.
Accept if you're a relative or political.
Just my opinion.

Bob Country
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