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do, she - do; she

book, I – book; I

rest.” He – rest,” he

it but - it, but

Jane!” The - Jane!” the

theirs they – theirs, they

here but - here, but

here, we – here; we

what is - what I

died and – died, and

place and - place, and

lead in - led in

house, the – house; the

ladies.” Jake – ladies,” Jake

go.” Jake - go,” Jake

serious.” Jane – serious,” Jane

mansion the - mansion, the

way.” Roxy – way,” Roxy

off.” She - off,” she

bookshelves, and - no comma

guys!” She - guys!” she

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Others with - Others, with

down,—at - delete comma

ever see - ever, see

skirts,devoid - skirts, devoid

assertion and - assertion, and

brazen, that many - delete “that”

longing and - longing, and

“Olivia?” His - “Olivia?” his

upstart and - upstart, and

closed and - closed, and

them self’s. - themselves.

power one - power. One

world, another - world; another

The other - The third

tree, with - tree; with

control they - control they

tree the - tree; the

outlasted - out lasted

shamans using - shamans, using

tree so - tree, so

there life - their life

ending they - ending, they

that puts - that put

hurt and - hurt, and

died the - died, the

gift, when - gift; when

would raise, - would rise,

only. The - only: the

charge and - charge, and

here.” I - here,” I

injured which - injured, which

sign but - sign, but

extravagance and - extravagance, and

looked like - looked, like

miss.” He - miss,” he

advantage.” I - advantage,” I

sir.” I - sir,” I

away it - away, it

afraid, I’m - afraid; I’m

fighting but - fighting, but

knowledge and - knowledge, and

expecting but - expecting, but

dragon.” I - dragon,” I

me and - me, and

up and - up, and

you I - you, I

enthusiastically and - enthusiastically, and

me.” Wayland - me,” Wayland

attention and - attention, and

trust me.” I - trust me,” I

softly and - softly, and

air flew - air and flew

worked.” Captain - worked,” Captain

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robots first - robots, first

equator that - equator, that

panels and - panels, and

cities and - cities, and

anniversary and – anniversary, and

here; you - here, you

plaque, read - plaque and read

Mars, this - Mars; this

this vast this vast - this vast

centre, its artefacts - centre; its artifacts

possible but - possible, but

whom have - who had

training did - training, did

human and - human, and

‘that they - ‘they

tears now ran slowly - tears slowly

normally exudes - normally exuded

him and - him, and

him, he - him; he

Aspiration was – Aspiration, was

surface, in fact, - surface; in fact,

explorers and - explorers, and

survivors but - survivors, but

world and – world, and

Sir’ Clarence – Sir,’ Clarence

Clarence.’ He - Clarence,’ he

things done’ - things done.’

things’, you - things; you

that’ General - that,’ General

smiling. ‘You - smiling. - last sentence is a repeat – not needed.

know exist’ - know exist.’

Clarence’, General – Clarence,’ General

Sir’ Clarence - Sir?’ Clarence

Yes’ General - yes,’ General

said but - said, but

sir’ Clarence – sir,’ Clarence

conscience’ General – conscience,’ General

politicians’ Clarence – politicians,’ Clarence

again’ General – again,’ General

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TIME closed – TIME she closed

did her - did, her

to bedroom - to the bedroom

them something - them, something

of; Arcagoffs. - of, Arcagoffs.

night hoping - night, hoping

“ASHLYNN!” She - “ASHLYNN!” she

might here - might hear

could here - could hear

that then - that, then

hurt and - hurt, and

awake.” He - awake,” he

story.” He - story,” he

though had - though it had

was fulled - was filled

anything.” The - anything,” the

possibility.”The - possibility,” the

me.” He - me,” he

now; A - now; a

me, the - me; the

sorry.” I - sorry,” I

again.” I - again,” I

you first - your first

earlier, that - no comma

having, they're - having; they're

form the to – words missing here

“Falcon” - “Falcon.”

that i'd - that I'd

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one. The - one: the

talk, and - no comma

agriculture and - agriculture, and

likes and – like, and

Whenever – leave a space between the three *** and the paragraph.

Goldenharp. - Goldenharp

plaits and - plaits, and

midday and – midday, and

banquets and – banquets, and

'Well,' Said - 'Well,' said

brotherâs – brother's

today?' She - today?' she

cheeks, she - cheeks; she

skin?' Said - skin?' said

humans.' He – humans,' he

'Theo,' Said - 'Theo,' said

sorcerer...' Said - sorcerer...' said

you-' She - you--' She

calming, I – calming; I

and of - and, of

odd...' He - odd...' he

tale but – tale, but

nomads, erring – not sure what erring means.

Fayris – two different spellings in this paragraph.

fayris?' Asked - fayris?' asked

queen Faynir was - queen, Faynir, was

the air-' - the air--' use em dash for an abrupt end.

be,' Interrupted - be,' interrupted

Wraiths,' She - Wraiths,' she

worthy, 'It - worthy. 'It

Centur!' My - Centur!' my

existing and - existing, and

'Thus the – move up to the previous line. pride: 'Thus the

'Yes, but – move up to the previous line.

remember and - remember, and

way he - way as he

now but – now, but

honest, some – honest; some

manuscripts but - manuscripts, but

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afraid that anyone – delete “that”

Thanksgiving time – delete “time”

swampland and - swampland, and

of 2 acres – numbers less than ten, spell it out.

on and - on, and

morning and - morning, and

exiting) and - exiting), and

equipment and - equipment, and

approached we - approached, we

mess, and - no comma

around which - around, which

quickly (managing - quickly, (managing

on) and - on), and

dogs?!" He - dogs?!" he

household and - household, and

recently but - recently, but

before and - before, and

violations or - violations, or

fencing" (the - fencing." (The

from) – from.)

household (many - household. (Many

book (the - book. (The

garages (according - garages. (According

leash and - leash, and

spoken and - spoken, and

sell -- as - sell--as / or - sell - as

down and - down, and

$160,000 the - $160,000, the

us (a - us, (a

process). - process.)

head). I - head.) I

details and - details, and

vacant and - vacant, and

pregnant and - pregnant, and

eyes and - eyes, and

frame and - frame, and

buy and - buy, and

coat but - coat, but

looked I - looked, I

hospital I - hospital, I

child and - child, and

active (she - active. (She

obesity). - obesity.)

idea, I - idea. I

sure and - sure, and

financing and - financing, and

week). - week.)

Yes we - Yes, we

stated that they - delete “that”

acres however had - acres, however, had

fields, and – no comma

level and - level, and

trailer and - trailer, and

walking -- his - walking--his / or - walking - his

out and - out, and

fall and - fall, and

it, this - it; this

apparent that he – delete “that”

arrived but - arrived, but

years and - years, and

home) and - home), and

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stunning, brown - no comma

"Parelli" and – "Parelli", and

hay, (our

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hot) and - hot), and

horse). And - horse.) And

rusty and - rusty, and

heat and - heat, and

horses we - horses, we

field (it - field. (It

oil). By - oil.) By

finished, and - no comma

system and - system, and

size and - size, and

bales (average - bales, (average

lbs). 65 - lbs.) 65

together and - together, and

pokey and - pokey, and

sweat and - sweat, and

adjusted and - adjusted, and

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in the master. - the context of the story does not indicate what this is.

ready, she - ready; she

was right, - was right;

try; if - try, if

thought that Brett – delete “that”

insisted that she - delete “that”

afternoon, all – afternoon; all

know but, I - know, but I

page; each – page, each

flint and - flint, and

Creation, She - Creation, she

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unfamiliar and - unfamiliar, and

allot like – a lot like

One of – suggest a new paragraph here.

afternoon, the – afternoon; the

cat, in - cat; in

kingâs mind, - there is a format problem here – appears more than once.

day, after - day; after

lost of its most precious - lost most of its precious

glimmers, like – no comma

alone the - alone in the

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looked something – looked like something

engines and – engines, and

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camp a - camp, a

wondered over - wandered over

head, "What - head. "What

mess cogs - mess of cogs

firestarter." The – firestarter," the

gates has - gates have

crackle?" The - crackle?" the

names Charles, - name's Charles,

says." The – says," the

my names - my name's

The little – this can be deleted; the speaker is already identified.

that, "You're – that. "You're

name." The – name," the

Charles," The - Charles," the

grinned, "Now - grinned, "now

tarp and – tarp, and

grimace, "The – grimace. "The

tight define - tight defined

question. The – question, the

approached he - approached, he

the impoverish - poor quality of the luggage – impoverish is a verb.

see?" The - see?" the

man." Rolen - man," Rolen

you?" He - you?" he

Apologize." She – Apologize," she

her, "I - her. "I

captain, "Regis?" She - captain. "Regis?" she

right," She - right," she

"Yes Mam." - "Yes, Madam." / or – "Yes, Ma'am."

noticed on - noticed one

San, "I – San. "I

worried, "always friend." - worried, "Always, friend."

approached the - approached, the

men but - men, but

them the – them, the

San continues - San continued

quickly and - quickly, and

wondering into - wandering into

night someone barges - night, someone barged

individual but – individual, but

grasp, "was - grasp. "Was

boy." - boy?"

fool." Namfimble - fool," Namfimble

and then out - something is missing here.

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snow, the - snow; the

gone, I - gone; I

door I - door, I

huh?" She - huh?" she

years and - years, and

turned, she - turned; she

fashion." She – fashion," she

say?" She - say?" she

Grandma." I - Grandma," I

it, anyone - it; anyone

anyone from me - anyone other than me

dangerous." I - dangerous," I

parent, she - parent; she

Rosewater." I - Rosewater," I

back." I - back," I

you." She - you," she

decade, the - decade; the

fit, it - fit; it

moment, my – moment; my

remember my - remember, my

be, sounds - be; sounds

see, the – see; the