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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thankful Prosperous Snow

I thought your writing here was lovely and poetic. The imagery coming from the lines and words was great. To me, I found this piece to be uplifting and refreshing. The positivity of the theme was special and made me feel humbled. I loved it all. Thank you for sharing.

Spiritual Dawning
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Fictiøn Ðiva the Wørd Weava

I thought your poem here was great. The call for the rain and to dance in it was vivid and romantic. I related well to this writing from you. I felt special as I read this through, I felt freedom of expression and to cast the chance chains away and just kiss in the rain. Nice presentation, good font. Reading your poem through made me realise that I am not the only one who sees the rain as a positive entity. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning
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Review of The Basset Hound  
Rated: E | (5.0)
AmyJo - NaNo Rebel

I really loved the rhymes in the first stanza, you wrote of loving a doggie very well. Puppies are always so cute, if only they stayed so small. A nice, sweet little piece of writing from you. The theme was great. I found no way of improving the poem, it is special the way it is. Thank you.

Spiritual Dawning
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Review of BEST INVESTMENT  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Naomi

I think you are a firm believer on setting the mind to be positive at all times. I like your positivity in your writings here. Many people rely on God to for help and guidance, you seem to be aware that it is ourselves that control our destiny. Keep going my friend.

Spiritual Dawning
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Review of Aftermath  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
ridinghhood-p.boutilier

I thought this writing from you was good. I liked your honesty in this piece. We don't have guns here in the U.K. so I don't know what it must be like to suffer from the insane crulety of gunmen. I liked the poetic power in how you wrote this out. Thinking about shootings makes me feel uneasy and unsafe in the streets.

Spiritual Dawning
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Review of Little Big Horn  
Rated: E | (5.0)
AmyJo - NaNo Rebel

Nicely written and displayed. Your rhymes were great and the flow was awesome. You made me think of just how things would be if this person had have been re-born. I liked your writing style here in this poem. I think you are a decent writer. Keep going.

Spiritual Dawning
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Review of Ode to Mother  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Miller Fields

Awww. I thought this was a sweet little piece of writing. The message was clear and strong. A well written poem and held much love and gratitude. Written in 1992, it is a timeless poem. I enjoyed the rhyming in your poem. Nicely executed. Great work.

Spiritual Dawning
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Mrs. Insanity

I liked your honesty here in this writing. Poetry helps us release our worries. You say you need to write to someone, well, you have written to me with your poem here. The mind can play tricks on people. Sometimes, the harder you challenge your fears, the harder they become. Sometimes walking in the evening can help clear the mind. Even a glass of wine or a beer. I think you should pat yourself on the back for expressing yourself clearly here. Insanity is a game of twists and turns. Try to laugh at this.

Spiritual Dawning
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Review of LAURIE  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
SandraLynn

I am sorry for your loss here, God bless you.

As I read this through, I couldn't help feel the bright side of your relationship shine through. There seemed to be a happy and thankful feel to this piece. You wrote this in a sweet way. We will all keep our memories going.

Nice work.

Spiritual Dawning
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Princess Megan Rose

I think the celebrations would go on deep into the next day. I loved the sound of the bon fire in the mountains and all the food cooked on the fire. Kirsten Stewart is beautiful, she can definately be at my birthday bash. She is in the film called "Into the Wild"..... so pretty.

For my birthday I would just like everyone to be happy like me.

A nice read and a great insight into your world.

Spiritual Dawning
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thankful Prosperous Snow

This was a lovely piece of writing. I found it very special indeed. I am from the UK and I believe we don't know of "Chester Bennington". However, you seemed to describe the hurtful truth of passing very well. Again, you struck a chord inside. Great work.

Spiritual Dawning
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Review of MY DECISION  
Rated: E | (5.0)
J.L. O'Dell

Your title matched the writing very well. For a little poem, I sure got joy from it. I liked the mysterious feeling you gave me. Using just 24 syllables you did a monsterous job here. Great writing and well done. Thank you for sharing this here.

Spiritual Dawning
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Rated: E | (5.0)
G. B. Williams

I see this was written a few years ago. I felt your emotions very clearly in this letter. I hope all is well with you and your first daughter since you posted this letter. It is always a pleasure to express the love of our children. I really liked the title of your letter, "You made me a mother" has a deep chant to it. Nice work. Keep going.

Spiritual Dawning
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Review of Anticipation  
Rated: E | (5.0)
green is grateful

Hello...

I thought you wrote this very well. It had lovely rhythm and lovely rhymes. I enjoyed reading this through. I love all your writings. The glory of God in your life was and is very evident here. I often wonder if the love of God is different to a man than it is a female. I know from personal experiences, God offers me light and a pathway. Thank you for writing this powerful piece.

Spiritual Dawning
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Cappucine

I really liked the poetic sway and poetic power this writing gave me. The last two lines warmed me very much. The title was very catchy and held much imagery for me. The scene you set was vivid and real. I enjoyed reading this through. Great work.

Spiritual Dawning
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Review of The Great Divide  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
ridinghhood-p.boutilier

I thought this was written very well. To me and in my eyes, you managed to describe the complexity of internet friendships, be it lovers or just friends very well. The detail in which you wrote this was great. To me you defined the difference between being able to touch a person and also just using words we type. Nice, clever work.

Spiritual Dawning
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Review of Progress  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Thankful Sonali WDC Power!

I found this item to be very thought-provoking. I liked the italic font used here. I would have loved the poem to be a little longer. There was to me, deep meaning to this poem. I liked the philosophy. The second from last line held much imagery for me. I enjoyed reading this through.

Spiritual Dawning
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Odessa Molinari

Nicely executed story here. You did make me laugh. The scene was set perfectly and I enjoyed the imagery this story gave me. The length of the story was good, it kept my attention levels up. You managed to give the reader a good vision of life in the pandemic. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Pony Tale

WOW!!!!

What an amazing little poem this is. The structure, rhymes, rhythm and flow were fantastic. The whole poem to me made me feel like I was there in the rain. The mood of the poem was great. The poetic power you gave here was brilliant. I loved it all.

Great writing...

Spiritual Dawning
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ned's Normal Nordic Handle

This was well written and well executed. A nice, deep piece of writing. Your philosophy in this piece was great. I drew from this work and felt humbled, comforted. I am not alone in worrying about the end. You painted a lovely picture with your words here. Great work.

Spiritual Dawning
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Rated: E | (5.0)
ridinghhood-p.boutilier

I thought there was splendid imagery coming from all the lines you wrote. You described the scene very well. I also liked the originality of this writing. Somehow, I found this piece to be thought-provoking. I would have loved to have read more about the situation of life that world now sees. The animals roaming free, cars abandoned. I enjoyed reading this through.

Spiritual Dawning
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Rated: E | (5.0)
GERVIC

There was a good flow to your poem here. The rhythm was great. I really enjoyed the romantic lines and words. Nice presentation. I couldn't help but feel a calling, a calling to love itself. The emotions in this poem were fantastic. Great work....

Spiritual Dawning
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Review of About poetry  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Vittoria Russo

I liked the angle in which you wrote this poem. It was powerful and direct. I think you expressed yourself very clearly here. I also liked the size of the poem, you managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I feel you were aiming this writing at someone you know? However, it was a nice read. Keep going...

Spiritual Dawning
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Review of Vampire Love  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Princess Megan Rose

I loved the imagery coming from your writing here. There was nice romantic power in this piece. The story you told flowed very well and was easy to follow. The title drew me into the poem. I enjoyed reading this through. Nice romance poem. Keep going....

Spiritual Dawning
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Review of A Sad Christmas  
Rated: E | (5.0)
TheBusmanPoet

I related to all that you wrote down here. I couldn't help but feel your sorrow. The emotion you placed in this writing was great and I loved every line. Nice flowing rhythm, well executed writing. This is why poetry is a such a good thing, it helps us release our worries and fears. Keep expressing yourself and keep going....

Spiritual Dawning
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