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I chose this poem to read and review because the title was so inviting. I enjoyed reading this poem through. I found this writing exciting to me. Good imagery came from the words and lines. I couldn't help but feel a slight pinch of humor here in this write. I thought this was a cute little piece to read. Good work and write on!!
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I liked the short story here. I am not sure what BSC is though. The two people were close to each other and well aquainted. There was a warm feeling about this story. I did smile as I read it through. Good work and write on!
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Great rhythm, good flowing rhymes. The whole structure was ace!
The funny story was good too. A holiday you would rather forget. The theme was a taste of the holidays reality. You made the holiday sound crazy, fun and sad at the same time. I enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing this here. I smiled. Good work and write on!
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I liked the real life theme, the reality of life as a parent. I felt the growing pains as I read this through. A nicely written poem, I enjoyed reading this through. Well expressed and crafted. A meaningful poem. Good work and write on!
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I thought the theme was a little complicated. I understood the concept though. The depth of this writing was vivid. A lot of thought was used here in this poem. Well expressed. I liked the ending, made me think. Interesting work, write on!
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Nicely expressed and well written. A lovely tribute to your younger years and family. No errors found and no way to improve the item. A nice read, I enjoyed the insight into your childhood and father. God bless him now. Good work and write on!
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Awww, such a sad poem, broke my heart. Good imagery from the last line though. Fact or fiction, this little poems sums up men all over. Not all men lie though. A simple yet effective read, thank you for sharing this here. Good expressons. Write on!
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I thought this was a special piece of writing. Lovely poetic sway and meaning. I like how you ended the poem, it was quite unique. There was also a lovely, sweet natured tone to this poem. It was very nice to read through. Good work and write on!
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I really liked this piece from you. A strong message in just a few lines. As a child, celebrating this time was beautiful and I will never forget those times. Good flowing rhythm, great presentation. A great little read. Thank you and write on!
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I liked the poetic power in this piece. I liked the word-crafting and grammar. I related so very well to what you had written out. The struggle, the hardship of another bleak day. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work and write on!
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I thought this was well written and the story was well told. Nice, special flowing lines. Good rhythm and nice expressions. The fantasy here was indeed dreamy. Who knows why we dream and what they mean. Good work and write on!
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I thought this was lovely to read through. I found this poem exciting to me. The romantic power was great. The imagery that came along with each word and line was great too. A simple but effective poem. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work and write on!
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A lovely, sweet little message in this writing. A very romantic and powerful statement. I enjoyed reading this through. I liked the philisophical stance in the last line. It was very sweet. A great little read. Good work and write on!
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I liked the light tone to this piece. The passing of someone you knew was made easy on the reader here. There was a simple, sweet message here. The bluest skies always help people shine. The was a natural beauty about this poem, it was very special. Good work and write on!
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Great rhyming scheme, nice rhythm and flowing lines. I thought there was good imagery coming from the poem. I felt the womans loneliness in the mirror. Nice presentation, looks good on the page. A good read, good work and write on!
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I enjoyed reading this through. I liked the philisophical power in this write. A great deal of thought went into this poem. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I feel you expressed yourself very well indeed. Good work and write on!
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Good story telling throughout. Your grammmar was good. I enjoyed reading this through. I think you described your home planet really well and created good imagery for the reader. I also think you nailed the promt very well indeed. Good work and write on!
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I thought there was a cute vibe coming from you here. Describing yourself so clearly. It was clear you weren't feeling beautiful after looking in the mirror. Women like to feel beautiful. I thought there was nice emotions in this poem from you. It was kind of heartfelt. Nice expressions and good work. Write on!
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The ending was powerful and strong, the emotions were running high here in the last stanza. You mentioned the gift of the gab!, You can never trust a person who has this and as you know, they will use it to their advantage. The writing was real and strong. You expressed yourself very well. An interesting piece. Write on!
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A simple yet effective poem to read through. The first 2 lines were great and gave good imagery. You reminded what it was like being a child in school holidays. A nice read and good work. Keep posting your delightful works. Write on!
I found this writing to be very sad and concerning. Nobody knows why happiness leaves the mind. You expressed yourself very clearly. I hope writing brings you some joy and relief in some way. All we can do is carry on living. Carry on pretending everything's ok.
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Nice font used, looked good on the page. Good presentation. A simple but effective piece of writing. There was a nobel feeling over me as I read this through. The spiritual gain was great and I enjoyed reading this through. Good work and write on!
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A great piece of writing. I related very well to what this poem was about. The empathatic manner was lovely. The meaning was great. I think as poets and writers, we often think a lot about emotions. I think you poured a lot of thought into this writing. A nice, emotional read. Write on!
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A very special item indeed. I loved the word crafting used here. There was a feeling of sadness and pain here. Cleverly written and executed. Again, there was emotions here. A heartfelt piece to read through. Thank you and write on!
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A deep, meaningful piece. The emotions were vivid and this poem made me feel. I liked the rawness of the topic. Fact or fiction, this poem was caring and to share it here was lovely. The title was very fitting. There was amazing imagery coming from the title. Good work and write on!
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