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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi,

I thought this was very well crafted. The meaning was very special and there were some fantastic lines in this poem. I am sorry for your loss, such a long time ago this was written. I am glad I chose this poem to read through, it didn't let me down. A very, very heartfelt poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of NEURALGIA 062123  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Naomi.

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I hope you are in less pain these days. This was a simple plea to the Lord for a break from pain. You manged to say so much in just a few words and lines. Normally you are very positive in your writings. Be blessed and write on!

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Review of The Glory of God  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Crissy Author Icon

I too have done things I shouldn't have done and now as I age and mature, I deeply regret them all. I enjoyed reading this item from you. Nicely presented on the page. God, even the title of God is higher than life as we know. I have only read a small amount of the bible. I know from experience that HIS written words are a great comfort to me and I marvel in HIS words. When I think of HIM, I recieve a sense of power, freedom, blessings and strength. Through praising HIM, it is the only way to feel free again and content in our own skin. A good read through.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was well expressed and well written out on the page. A poetic picture in my mind was vivid as I read this through. I enjoyed every word and line. The very first line set the scene very well indeed. A good, creative item to me. Be blessed and write on!

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Review of In my mind  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I liked the honesty of this writing. The mind is a complicated thing at the best of times. Once a mind starts to overthink, it never stops again. An interesting theme for an item. I enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Jealous?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought the subject was highly original and very new to me. I liked the presentation, centered on the page, looks good. You expressed yourself very clearly here and I liked the tone and manner in how this was written. There were no distractions that I noted. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of A Paramelamorphia  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sue,

A sweet little piece of writing here from you. I liked the form very much. The rhymes were cute and I liked the overall effect this work gave me. You managed to say a lot in just a few words and lines. Good imagery and good theme. No distractions that I noted. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

I noted your poem in the newsfeed and decided to give it a read and review.

I really liked the positive message here. Nice structure and flowing rhythm. I liked the tone and manner of the writing, it was soothing to me. Nicely presented, centered on the page. Looks good, no faults noted. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Stake Your Claim  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your poem was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was a great little poem from you. I loved the manner in how you wrote this out. There was a poetic power over me as I read this through. I liked the first few lines about the night, I am a night owl so I related well to this writing. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Haiku  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your poem was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I thought this was a nice little piece of writing and I enjoyed every word. The simplicity of the words was great, easy to follow and understand. I liked the poem centered on the page. Nice work, be blssed and write on!

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Review of Chocolate Bliss  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
HAPPY BIRHTDAY Review!

A simple yet very effective piece of writing. I recognised some of the types of chocolate you spoke of. Nicely presented on the page. I also like the small amount of seduction in this poem. An enjoyable read. Be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

Lovely flowing rhymes and structure to this poem. I liked the religous theme too. It was very powerful to me. I found no way to improve the writing, it is great as it is. The poem as a whole was very good and highly enjoyable to read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of The Night  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I enjoyed this poetic writing very much. Nicely written out. Nice flowing words and lines. This reminded me of Pompeii in Italy. An atomspheric poem here. There were no distractions that I noted. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Silent Poet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I liked the atmosphere this writing created. I liked the flowing patern too. A very poetic power over me as I read this through. Good word crafting and nice effect. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Who Am I?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ...

To answer a question, there are several dimensions within the human brain that scientists cannot reach or fathom. All I know, is that when we all pass away we will be in the deepest form of sleep imaginable. For example, I once fainted in hospital while being treated for sunstroke (In Spain). While I was out cold, I didnt dream or sense a thing. I woke up with a doctor slapping my face ever so softly. I asked my then partner how long was I out cold for? She told me about 30 seconds. The strange thing is when I look inside my thoughts, it felt like I had been out for 3 to 4 hours. I was in the deepest of sleep mode. So I know when we pass over, the depth of total unconcousness, (spell check),is far deeper than normal sleep. The depth that death leads to is in another dimension to what we know already.

And who knows what's in those depths. One day, we will all find out.

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Review of The Storm  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi again,

Your poem was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

A simple yet effective little poem here. We dont get tornados here in the UK (Thank God). I liked the length of the poem, keeping the readers attention up high. The poem as a whole was easy to follow and understand. I found no distractions at all. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was well written out on the page. For the theme of death, the poem was actually rather positively written. I liked the flowing words and lines. I found no way to improve the item. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Black Gargoyle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your short story was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I was shocked at just how evil the gargoyle could be, turning the woman into a stone angel. This was so unfair. I hope he's happy now. You selected fantasy as a genre for the description of this story. Yes, it was highly dosed with fantasy, dark fantasy. I enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of The Stick man  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Sue,

I noted your story in the newsfeed and thought I would read and review it for you. I thought it was a well told story and the imagery was good. A gripping little story and again the grammar was great. The deatiled story telling made the story a joy to read. The liked the intesity of how the story unfolded. An enjoyable read, thank you. Write on!

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Review of Inspiring Light  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was lovely to read through. So caring, so sweet and loving. A very positive poem from you here. I enjoyed every word and line. No distractions were noted at all. Nice work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I thought this was very well written and displayed, centered on the page, looks good to me. A great topic to write about, everyday life. I enjoyed every word and line. I couldnt fault this poem. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Rediscover  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this poem was very lovely indeed. The poetic power was lavish and wonderful to me. I couldn't fault the poem at all. Lovely sweeping word crafting. Combining romance with the season. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Sunrise/Sunset  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

A lovely poem with God in mind too. I love watching the first light in the morning and the stars arrive at night. This poem took my imagination to its summit. I enjoyed the poetic flow and rhythm. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of WEDNESDAY'S  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was a sweet little insert from you and about you. It seems like you have lots of fun Wednesdays. Small gatherings with friends and a beer and bingo sounds like fun to me. Ive never played bingo, cant keep up with the numbers called.. :) Good writing, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Nature's Way  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ...

Greatly presented, centered on the page, looks good to me. Nice writing and I enjoyed the read through. Summing up this season very well indeed. Nice rhyme scheme and good flowing lines made the poem easy to follow and understand. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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