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Review of Madness of March  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,

Nice rhymes and nice rhythm here. Good form, acrostic. March has always been a unstable month for me with terrible weather and clock changes. I wonder what made you write about the month of March? Anyway, nice work and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,

I liked the structure to this writing, it added a good dimension to the words. I also liked the feel as I read this through. You managed to say a lot in just a few words and lines. I liked the ending line, "Trust the seasons", this held wisdom to me. Good work.

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Review of When I Write  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,

Lovely presentation here, looks great on the page. Written a few years ago but always relevant to today. I agree, writing does help the heart free itself from stress. I have never written about writing before, maybe I should :) Nice work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Sno-Cone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello...

I liked the innocent theme to this writing from you. Nice structure, good flowing rhythm. I smiled as I read this writing through. The simplicity of the theme was joyful and fun. I wonder what made you write this out, its very good. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello,

I thought this was a very sweet little poem, the imagery was nice. I really liked the simplicity of this work. Oh how sweet it is to look back on our younger years and see how simple it was to make us happy. Ice cream, hide and seek, playing in the streets. Great writing, I enjoyed it very much.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

This is something how the Lord would feel, very biblical and powerful indeed. A lovely tone and manner to the writing. I enjoyed the hope and positivity you shared here. Nice presentation, centered on the page. An enjoyable read for all. Good work and write on!

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Review of Voyage  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sue,

I really liked this poem from you, it had a very emotional ending and it was great, positive and caring. I see this is a new piece from you. I loved it. A well expressed item too. Nice clear font used. I would have loved to read more of this work. Thank you and write on!

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Review of Night-Peace  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

I related very well to your little item here. Good theme and yes, the night breathes life into me too. A nice length for a poem, keeping the readers attention levels up high. I liked the title too. I have a folder especially for poems about the night. It is a special time for me. Nice writing.

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Review of Desperate control  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

A very graphic yet stable account of a relationship. Well described and explained to the reader. I get the impression this is young love or so called love. You capped the relationship off perfectly with the way you ended the writing. The title summed the writing up very well and added a dimension to this highly uncomforatble relationship. Sometimes we have to be hurt to learn how to be in another relationship, albeit a learning curve. But no one should go through what you did. Good luck for the future.

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Review of Silently Forever  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

I really liked this line...."My heart a quiet, hollow room"..... it resonated well with me and described that empty feeling so very exact. A nice poem to read through and was enjoyable to me. I loved how you ended the poem using the title, nice touch. Good work and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

A simple yet very effective romance item. I enjoyed the sweetness of each word and line. A fitting title and worked well. I liked the length of the poem, keeping the readers attention levels up high. No errrors noted. Thank you and write on!

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Review of Midsummer night  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

A nice insight into your early days. A well written item to read through. I liked the title very much, it works well. Love didnt seem as painful and complex back then as it does today. Being 11 (so young) and experiencing this has and will stay with you. I enjoyed the read through. Thank you and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your writing was chosen by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

A very well expressed piece of writing, written clearly, easy to follow and understand. I love how music can speak to people in many different ways. I liked the flow of the writing, it flowed well. Good work, thank you and write on!

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Review of Cold-Hearted  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your writing was chosen by the random read and review page, here'swhat I thought ...

A well written and displayed acrostic. The theme was popular and the wrods and lines flowed very well. I thought the poem was very simple to understand and follow. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. The title summed the writing up quite well. I enjoyed the read through. Thank you and write on!

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Review of Plush  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was chosen by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

A very poetic layout and structure, nice presentation. My translation is that of a mother and son who have differences. I am also thinking of a soldier seeing as you mentioned a soldier too. A very deep but effective poem. Nice work, thank you and write on!

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Review of HOTDOGS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your writing was chosen by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I liked the tone of the words and lines, a formal style. You made me feel hungry as the imagery was great. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Keeping the readers attention up too. Nice work, thank you and write on!

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Review of Words  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was chosen by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I thought this was very original by theme and subject, and was enjoyable to read through. Maybe you should let the woman read this poem, it may help how you both feel. I related well to the romantic gestures you spoke of, like opening car doors and offering coats to keep her warm. Overall, a well expressed piece of writing. Thank you and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your writing was chosen by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I thought this was a very good piece of writing. It was very positive when you said she would rise as strength, I thought that part was great. A good accolade for this woman. I enjoyed the read through very much. Thank you and write on!

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Review of Mother's Grief  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your writing was chosen by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

Very well written and executed. A very sentimentle and thoughtful poem here. There were some words in this poem that resonated with me as I think of my own mother's life. Each line was very detailed and precise. I enjoyed the read through. Thank you and write on!

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Review of LOVING A GHOST  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your writing was chosen by the random read and review age, here's what I thought ...

I felt anguish and pain at love vacant as I read this through. I liked the title, it was inviting to me. There was a realistic vibe coming from these words and lines. The writing was a good match for the meaning of this work. I enjoyed the read through. Good work and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your writing was chosen by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I thought this was very good to read through. The feeling from the words and lines was romantic and lavish. I enjoyed the read through. Nice flowing notions, good word crafting and nice imagery. Good work, write on!

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Review of Trust  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your writing was chosen by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I enjoyed the read through. An original theme and was rather inviting. I liked the tone and manner of the writing. I also liked how you ended the poem. The title matched the writing very well. I liked the deepness of this poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of The Shoe  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Your writing was chosen by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was very original by theme and subject. There was good imagery from the words and lines. I liked the poems structure, it rolled along perfectly. there were no faults that I noted. i enjoyed the quirky read through. Good work and write on!

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Review of Losing You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your writing was chosen by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I thought this was very emotional throughout. There was good imagery from this work, I could see tears. Nicely written and displayed. I liked the last two lines, they summed up the writing well. Good work and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your writing was chosen by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was a good little item to read through. I liked the philosophical take on the subject of God's view. I also liked the rhythm and structure, the poem rolled along very well. You managed to say a lot in just a few words and lines. Good work and write on!

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