I think American schools are much tougher than British schools, I didn't like school. I thought you expressed yourself so very well here in this little poem. Your rhymes were great. The beauty of pen to paper is to achieve exactly how we feel. You are no stranger to writing poetry. I hope life cheers up for you soon. Keep writing great items.
I liked this sweet little poem here. I liked the emotional feeling this gave me. There was a calling, a yearning to be found. I liked the tone and manner in how this was executed. No room for improvements. Good work and write on!
Lovely poetry here. I really liked the first stanza, it set the mood for the poem. A nice spiritual tone to the words and lines. I liked the simplicity of the meaning here. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Good work and write on!
I thought your poem here was beautiful. The rhymes were fantastic and the rhythm was perfect. A very smart piece of writing. The Holy manner in which this was written was great. There was nice imagery from the words and lines. Lovely presentation, good font used. I truly enjoyed the whole read through. You are a great writer. Good work and write on!
I enjoyed the read through. I enjoyed the rollercoaster ride of emotions and feelings. A highly expressive poem to me. The title was a great match for the writing, keeping it simple. You seemed to answer one question to only lead to another. This was finely written. Good work and write on!
A well crafted piece of writing. I liked the quirky flowing lines. I thought this was rather deep but highly interesting. You managed to say a lot in just a few words and lines. I also liked the last stanza most, it was very inviting to me. I enjoyed the read through.
I thought this writing was very enjoyable. Depicting the subject of storms very well. The way you wrote this out made the poem much fun to read. The last two lines summed the writing up very well. How many people are not wise the real power of mother nature? This poem hit home to me. Nice work and write on!
Wow, your character here is very evil just like "The Predator". I really wouldn't want to meet this person. There were some nice flowing rhymes in this writing and it made the poem fun to read through. I also liked the presentation of the work, it was easy to read and follow. Good work and write on!
I thought this was a very interesting poem here. I enjoyed the whole read through. I liked the "end of the world" feel to the writing. This held good imagery for me. The last stanza was very good and philosophical and was written by facts. Good work, write on!
A nice little poem here. Simple yet very effective. My, 60 years is an absolute achievement. The last line took my imagination. The title is very good too. You said so much in just a few lines and kept the poem interesting. You have been married longer than I've been alive. I salute you both. Nice work and good luck for the coming years. Write on!
A simple yet very effective poem here from you. I liked the presentation, looks good on the page. The title was fitting for the writing too. You managed to say a lot in just a few words and lines. No faults noted. I enjoyed the prayer very much. Good work and write on!
A very original theme and subject, one to start discussions. I liked the ending very much, describing the female conduct very well. The title was a good preview for the writing and was simple and effective. A short and sweet little piece of work, with a good overall feel. Write on!
Nice work here. I enjoyed the whole read through. No way to improve the poem, it is fine the way it is. Nice poetic tone and feeling from this. Good imagery too. I liked how you merged cats with nature here, nice touch. Great work and write on!
A sweet little poem here from you. I really liked how cute this was written. The imagery was great. You managed to say so much in just a few words and lines. The title was a good match for the poem. I also liked the length, keeping the readers attention up high. Nicely presented on the page. No way to improve the works. Great work as usual. Write on!
A very sweetly written poem here. Nice imagery. There was a refreshing tone and meaning to this writing. I enjoyed the whole read through. I really liked the title too, it was very romantic and poetic and suited the works very well. No faults noted and flowed along well. A decent length for a poem too, keeping the readers attention up high. Great work, write on!
I often think of what it must have been like for my mother, watching TV shows in the UK. She grew up around "The Beatles" era, the swinging 60's as we called them. My mother is 77 in September and going strong. She often talks about music from way back then. Roy Orbison, Dolly Parton, Johnny Cash especially. She has said that shows today are weak and have no heart and adventure. Looking back is very humbling to me.
I thought this item was good, thought provoking and inspiring. I guess there are millions of people who look back to younger years where TV was primitive.
I related well to the VHS tapes, I have plenty of them with family BBQ's and birthdays. The flowing grammar of this text from you was oh so easy to read and much fun too. You write so interestingly well. As for seeing the future, it is very saddening to see how young we all were in the tapes, I find it kind of upsetting how everyone moves on and skin wrinkles with age. Thank you for the insight. Write on!
Nice work here. Good flowing, interesting writing. You said so much in just a few lines. Shorter poems are always a hit with me, keeping your readers attention. Nice title, inviting. A good theme and very poetic. Nice work, thank you for sharing and write on!
Lovely writing. Great expressions of a grateful love. This rolled along perfectly to me. I love it when poems flow so easily, this makes the reading so much fun. Absolutely no faults found. A special, romantic poem. Great writing. Thank you for sharing. Write on!
I enjoyed your creativity here. I also enjoyed the wonderful visions this writing held. A lovely descriptive item. There was a good philosophy used here, I honor that very much. Expressive lines and words made the writing a success in my eyes. My heart enjoyed the little story and information of your life. Good work and write on!
Great usage of the worded prompts. I really enjoyed the whole read through. The rhythm made the poem so easy to read and follow. The title was good too. I am very surprised this has not got 5 stars before. Its creativity was indeed good. I liked the summing up of the writing, the last few lines were great. Nice work and write on!
I see I am the first to review this little gem. I really loved the flow and creativity here. The rhythm was enjoyable making the poem a success in my eyes. You kept the writing very short and this helped convey your message very well. The shorter poems are always a hit with me, as the writer plays with less words. I enjoyed the whole read through. Thank you and write on!
A delightful little poem, making the subject of the Sun very simple and the effects of summer easy. The title was great and a good match. I found this little poem to be very refreshing and soothing. I smiled as I read it through. A non complicated item. Great work and write on!
I cringed at the thought of devouring an after birth but I have heard it to happen. A short and sweet little poem and I liked the originality and theme. You managed to say a lot in just a few words and lines. I also think this subject is spark to lengthy discussions. One thing I know, a woman giving birth can be a near death experience if things aren't right. Overall, a good read and prompt. Write on!
The green text poem was special, rewarding and promising. Once again, a happy ending. I liked the descriptive manner of the poem. I always smile at your happy endings to your works. The imagery from the poem was great and you set the scene very well. I also liked the ending where you said the world may be at peace someday. If only world leaders would listen to the population of each country. All your works are very delightful in the end. You always tell good stories in your poems.
The red text poem was sweet and warming. You reminded me just how special Christmas makes people feel. The celebration of the Lords birth. I would love to know how you can stay so positive in your writings. However, the works give the reader and very nice lift and feeling. As always, good work and write on!
Anthony.
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