I really liked this piece from you here. The flow was amazing and made the poem easy to read and follow. I liked the theme too, it made me smile as I read it through. The rhymes were cute and flowed along perfectly. I liked the philosophy used here, you made me think about myself. I nice deep insight into the way you are and the way you can be. The title matched the writings content too. Overall, I found no distractions and loved reading this through. Great work.
I thought your writing here was lovely. I felt the humble power of your words here. You gave me that feeling of a freer soul, a happier place. This was such a joy to read through. I enjoy all your works. There was an incredible bond between God and myself as I read this through. I felt his power to free me. Your words freed me too. Thank you !!!
If this piece of writing is a song then I have never heard it. The story in the writing was enjoyable to me. I wasn't sure where Helen would end up and certainly didn't think hubby would take her back. I felt at ease with the life Helen had achieved for herself. Sometimes it is true to "better the devil you know". This whole piece made me smile and I am glad someone has had good luck in life.
This piece of writing is an example of why I gave you the merit badge. Such a honourable writer, noble, powerful, great ballance and focus. I have read the words to TAPS and here in the UK they mean so much. A patriotic piece of writing. Thank you.
I thought your writing here was very special. Such a great flow to the melody of nature that you have recognised. I loved how you told of a child seeing nature for all its beauty. I also thought your writing here was philosophical and deep, yet so touching. A great piece of writing my friend....
I really enjoyed reading your little story through. The way you wrote from the tigers point of view was sweet and refreshing. This piece would be great for children to read. I have to say that I have never seen a white tiger in the flesh, only pictures. Yes, they are very beautiful creatures to look at. Their size is a wonder to me. As always your stories have a great ending. So happy. Great writing.
I really liked your little poem here. It seemed to fit my mood just right. I loved the authors notes at the bottom of the page. I found all of this piece to be very warming. Your recites of the Lord's words were very nice and comforting. I see that you have not been online for quite a while now. I really hope you are ok. I enjoyed reading your poem through and will remember it for quite a while. Thank you for sharing this here.
I thought your poem here was great. I loved the descriptive lines and words. Your writing here was very deep. The darkness you wrote of was familiar with me. The gloom decends on everyones life from time to time. Your rhythm, rhyme and flow were great in this piece. I appriecated the depth of this piece. It is nice to know that we are not alone in life when it comes to not sleeping right. Once again your decscriptive, human condition was well documented here. Great writing. Keep going.
I thought this writing from you was very sweet and quite uplifting. I think wishing is like praying, they are very similar. I liked the story of the boy and girl becoming good friends and how they helped each other through. I have been to God many times for guidance but I have never thought of the wish God. Your story telling was direct and carried momentum. I found no way of improving your story and writing. It is nice to see that you can dabble in short stories as well as poetry. Writing is addictive and I hope you write some more poetry.
I am glad you have written another poem and it is a good one. I loved the title very much. Your writing structure is good here. You seem to write about humans and their condition and their feelings. I wonder what your poems would be like if you wrote about nature, flowers, birds, bees and grass. You can already write well. I see no problems with your writings. To me there is always a light in sadness. Some people are so used to sadness that they forget what it is like to feel the light and happiness. I like the topics you choose to write about. I have told you before that you are good little writer and I enjoy visiting your portfolio to see your work. Your writings are fine. Thank you for sharing this poem here.
I thought your writing here was very positive and bright. Again you wrote this poem in a good way. Nice flowing lines. Good rhythm, good rhymes. I see you are enjoying your writing lately. Your writing is very good. It feels good when a poem is finished and posted. You have done a very good job on this work. You are right, hope, is a flashlight. Great writing. Keep smiling and keep going.
WOW, I thought this writing was great. Yes you made the writing very real. The rhymes were great and the rhythm was good too. You described the feeling of fear very well. The detailed account was very vivid. You also made me feel lonely with the correctness of your words and lines. I liked how you mentioned the world being a big place and feeling like a mouse. These lines really hit home. Overall this was a great piece of writing. No need to change anything with it. Good work.
I am glad you posted another poem for us all to read. Your rhymes were great and the flow was great too. I think you described anger very well here in this poem. To me, anger is a flash of hatred that lasts just seconds. I also think it can be uncontrolable, normally coming from someone with no patience. You are right, it is a spark. I liked the poetic sway of your writing. I enjoyed reading this work through. I think you are a good writer. Thank you for sharing this work here.
I thought this poem was perfectly written. The story was well directed and executed. The flow was sublime, the rhythm was great and the rhymes were fantastic. Although the theme was sad, the whole poem was alive. You have written an excellent piece here. There was emotions in this piece, heartfelt love and pain too. This is a deep poem and I loved it all. Thank you for sharing it here.
If this is your first attempt at poetry, you have a good writing future ahead of you. I thought this writing was very positive and rewarding to read through. There was wisdom and hope in your writing. The flow was good, the structure was good too. This was a nice piece of philosophy here. Welcome to writing.com. I really hope you stay here, it would be a sad waste to see your writing skills disappear. You have skill, use it wisely.
I stumbled across your poem here in the random review page.
Not only is this a clever piece of writing, everything you wrote down was true. You exact the meaning of real friendship perfectly here. I was taken back at the pure quality of this piece from you. You nailed the form so well I was so shocked at the finess of your writing. I am lucky enough to have a friend like you have described here. So I related very well to everything you said. Overall, this is very, very good writing. Thank you for sharing this here.
I found this poem from you in the random read page.
WOW. I loved this beautiful poem from you. Your word-crafting was very special. The use of the words were great and rewarding. The little story was warming as you mentioned the changing season. There are too many favourite lines to choose from, I loved them all. It is poems and writing like this that keeps me reviewing and returning to WDC. This was such a joy to read through. The pureness of this poem made me smile and sigh. The poetic sway was sublime. Thank you for sharing this here.
I had to laugh at your very short story here. The title made the story even more funny. I am laughing as I type this review out. Such a silly little piece but has a great impact on the reader. The simplicity was great, there was even good imagery coming from the words and lines. I had to feel sorry for the aliens in their craft. I guess it serves them right for landing here. Overall, I loved the quirkiness of your story. Good work and write on. Thank you for making me smile.
I found this writing from you to be very interesting. You seemed to care for the careers in this world. You obviously know some lovely people in your life. Just as I do mine. Some people care too much and others have no care at all. The theme of your writing here was great and can spark a decent, deep conversation. Sadly we have no control over people we meet in life but we can control ourselves. I care, I always have. Yes it has been thrown back at me sometimes, but, like you said here, it is who I am. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your piece here today. Thank you for sharing this here.
I found this piece from you in the random read page.
I thought it was lovely to read through. There was a real amount of sweetness to the overall feel of this prayer. I loved the sentiment and realness. My heart came alive when reading this through. I would love to know who Danu is, a biblical person? Writing prayers down really gets the jucies flowing with high amounts of inspiration. I felt the freedom of life in this prayer from you. I loved it all. Your creativity was fantastic. Great writing and thank you for sharing this here.
You painted a lovely picture with your writing here. All three lines carried great imagery for me. I also thought this writing was inspirational and beautiful. I could just see the sun rising slowy across the sky in the morning. The sun colouring the clouds that fill the sky. Then life beginning its daily routine. Birds seeking food and man seeking happiness. I obtained a lot from your little poem here. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
I thought your writing here was fantastic. I really enjoyed reading this through. The philosophy in each line was great. You are quite right about the emptiness, it holds all and everything. Reading this through really inspired me, I had to think of the vastness of space and the cosmos, time travel across the void. The universe and all its secrets. This writing from you is for sure a thinkers poem. I loved the cleverness of how you wrote this out. Great writing and keep going. Thank you for sharing this here.
Aww. I thought your poem here was lovely, sweet, rewarding and fresh. You told this story very well. The flowing words and lines made the writing a joy to read through. You also described the life of a deer perfectly. I loved the natural power of your poem and you have made me feel sad for the hunted animal. I live in the UK and we Brits don't hunt deer, we protect them in deer parks. I felt peace as I read this through. Overall, a lovely, sweet and special piece of writing. Well done and keep going.
I really felt the loving sway of this piece from you. I play the guitar and can relate how you sang to the stars with a blue heart and soul. The spiritual gain in this writing was beautiful and I really liked the scene you set up here. The quest for love is a painful one and can cause much stress, you portrayed the longing for love very well here. The simplicity of the words and lines made this poem a joy to read and review. The flow was good. The rhymes were great. A decent piece of writing. Thank you for sharing this here.
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