I have to say, I thought your little piece of writing here was brilliant and amazing. I just loved the overall effect the words had on me. This writing was strong and noble and powerful.
Your line, The world ain't a friend but neither a foe
Was the best crafted line I have read in such a long time. The line is very clever and true. The philosophy of this line is 2nd to none. The title was very special too. I adored this poem from you. I read it several times. If you keep writing like this here, you will go far with your writings. Great, great writing my friend.