I liked this minute poem from you. I have had similar thoughts on the same subject and idea. Great philosophy, great thinking. I loved the unique feeling this gave me as I read it through. I also smiled at the cleverness of this item. Great work and write on!!
I related so well to all of this little piece from you. Nicely written and presented. I enjoyed the way you wrote this out. My favourite poet; "Novalis" would have been proud of this piece from you. There was a reality here in stating that the morning light will clear the soul of darkness. So true. Write on!!
I enjoyed reading this through. I liked the angle in which you wrote this out. The philosophy was good. Again, nice word crafting, nice flowing lines. I am glad you are writing again. I found no way to improve your item here, it was decent enough as it is. Good work and write on!!
I thought you expressed yourself very well here. You wrote of a love that has little reward or return. This must be very annoying. Good word crafting, good flowing lines. A sad theme but was still very effective. I enjoyed reading this through. Nice work and write on!
I liked the flowing lines here from you. I couldn't help but feel sad as I read this through. To me there was an air of emotions and feelings. I like how you said in the preview, that you're going home to heaven, I thought this set up the poem very well. A lovely poem to read through. Good work and write on!!
I thought your little poem here was cute and very emotional to me. A nicely expressed piece of writing. You bared your feelings for all to show. Nice length of a poem, keeping the readers attention high. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Nice work and write on !!
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I almost cried at the emotions in this poem from you. I think you spoke for all animal lovers here and those who have lost their pets. A simple yet effective item. A simple and inviting title, matching the items words. Nice emotional writing. Good work.
I liked this little piece from you. The theme gave me good imagery of a mother elephant. A sweet and effective poem. The title was simple and matched the writing well. I enjoyed reading this through. I am not familiar with the form you used but it worked anyway. Good work and write on!!
I liked this item from you here. It was well written and displayed. The romantic power here was inviting and strong. Nice imagery came from the words and lines. A nice poetic sway in this piece. I liked the length, it kept my attention levels up high. Good work and write on!!
I thought this writing from you was sweet and powerful. A nice loving poem filled with hope and positivity. Nice imagery came from the words and lines. I enjoyed reading this through. You have expressed yourself very well here in this item. Good work and write on!!
Nice expressive tone to this writing. A deep and powerful poem. A good length for a poem, keeping my attention levels up high. I liked the title, so simple and effective. It seems as though you are running from something here. Good work and write on!!
I liked this romantic acrostic from you. It was sweetly written and displayed. A true love that has lasted many decades. I enjoyed reading this through. The title was simple yet effective. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Great work and write on!!
Nicely written and displayed on the page. This was a very nice accolade for your friend indeed. I enjoyed the positivity that came along with the poem. Birthdays are special and writing a poem for her is the best way to celebrate and show respect. Good work and write on!!
I liked this item from you. It was a good read through out. A loving piece and a great feeling came over me as I read this through. Good presentation, it looks good on the page. A powerful piece to write. Nice work, good theme and well written. Write on!!
I really liked this form and the way you executed this writing. It was a lovely read. The theme was a little sad but I still enjoyed the read. Nice length for a poem, keeping my attention levels up high. You did a fine job here. Good work and write on!!
I thought this was a lovely little poem from you. Written very well with a lot of care. There was a sweetness about this poem here. There was plenty of rewarding, loving quotes here. I really enjoyed reading this acrostic through. Nice work and write on!!
I looked the word up in the dictionary and found that you used the word very well. Great flowing structure and good rhythm here. I thought this was very clever of you to write this out the way you did. As I read this through, there was a nice feeling over me. Good work and write on!!
I liked this little poem from you. I thought it was written very cutely. Nice thoughts and nice writing here. You expressed yourself very clearly. I liked the poetic power of each line you wrote. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your poem. There was a nice feeling over me as I read this through. Good work and write on!!
I thought your poem here was lovely. The romance was great and powerful. Nicely written, nice flow and good rhythm. A good length for a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. The title was very romantic. I liked the poem centered on the age, it looks good this way. Overall, good work and write on!!
I thought your writing here was great and rewarding to me. I liked the way you wrote this out. Your writing style here was good. I couldn't help but feel sad for the woman in your poem. Nice romantic sway to this writing too. Good presentation and nice font used. Good work and write on!!
A nice length for a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. I thought this poem was lovely and refreshing to read through. A simple theme. Nice imagery came off the words and lines here. I enjoyed reading this through. I found no errors and no way of improving the item. Good work and write on!!
I liked the darkness in this piece from you. Nice flow, good rhythm. I have never written a dark piece like this. There was good imagery coming from the words and lines. You crafted this item very well. I liked the line..."The worms enjoy me"....I thought this was very graphic and gory. lol. I enjoyed reading your poem through.
I decided to review your poem because I noticed it in the newsfeed.
Lovely piece of writing. So full of wisdom and direction. A sense of hope filled me as I read this through. This held a biblical power in the way you wrote this out. In parts I thought I was reading from the bible. Incredible work, well done and write on!!
I thought this poem from you was very well presented. Good font used and was enjoyable to read through. The poem was a little sad but that is life all over. A dark theme with wise words and lines here. I also thought this was very deep and thought provoking. Nice work and write on!!
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