I thought your little poem here was very sweet and inspiring. I am touched by your words and the meaning of this poem. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. I think you spoke for many people here with your words. Good work and write on!!!
I enjoyed reading this through. I really liked the picture at the bottom of the writing. I could imagine a banquet of food, dancing and embraces. This fantasy poem was uplifting and inspiring. What a lovely world you created here in these words and lines. Great work and write on!!
Nice expressions here. A dark subject turned into light by the poetic power of your words. I often feel this way too and writing helps the mind feel easy. I liked the length of this piece, it kept my attention levels up high. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Nice work.
A great story here. I related well to what you had written down. It is true, life does operate on many different levels, levels that some people are not aware of. It could be the spiritual world pushing you both together. Dreams and day dreams are powerful too. Anything can happen in the dream state of mind. Nice work.
I enjoyed reading this little piece through. I liked the poetic power coming of the words and lines. I couldn't help but feel sad at the end, knowing this all was a dream. You expressed yourself very well here. I thought the poem was very original. Good work.
I liked the vision here in this piece from you. Nice presentation. No errors found or room for improvement. I enjoyed reading this through. A special piece of writing. I liked how you mentioned a new age born, evolution as it were. An inspiring item. Thank you for sharing.
I thought your little poem here was sweet and it made me smile. It's good you found a picture that matches the writing. I liked the size of this piece, it kept my attention levels up high. A cute little poem and worth the 5 stars. Nice work.
Were you on the Titanic?. A story in 6 words, hmmm, difficult. Still, this item of yours still made me review it. A new romance turned into a murder? I must say cruises are becoming more and more popular here in the UK, more expensive too.
I liked the simplicity of your poem here. A heart felt piece of writing. Nice flowing lines. I liked the length of the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. A nice expressive piece of work from you and I hope you finally find the right words. Good work and write on!!
I thought you were very honest here in this piece. I related very well to what you had written down. I find comfort in solitude too. I shall not be defeated. I found this piece from you to be very spiritual and powerful. Our internal dialog matters to all of us. It defines if you sink or swim. Your positivity could be a lesson for all. Nice work and write on!!
Aww, I found this piece to be very uplifting and I related very well to this. You are so correct by writing the line; "Different-as you have not progressed into the world of acceptance" I thought this line was a life lesson for all empaths and spiritualists. Acceptance is key here, it will make the world go round in happy circles. Nice theme and it was a powerful read. Good work.
I could see the potential of your poem here. The comparing of visions of the world. I liked the theme of this poem. I liked the message you were sending. A simple little poem filled with hope. I feel there will always be people around to destroy our dreams of peace. I liked the title of this piece, it summed up the writing very well. My favourite line was; "I see the world as it could be".... I thought this line was great and you lightly inspired me by this line. Thank you for the positivity here.
I found this piece to be very emotional for me. You expressed yourself so very clearly for the reader. You certainly tugged on my heart strings with this poem. I know this was written a few years ago but I hope it is still relevant. I live in the United Kingdom and I am guessing the SPCA is the same as our service, the RSPCA; "Royal Society of Protection and Care of Animals". This service does an amazing job here in the UK. I enjoyed reading your poem through. Lovely work.
I have decided to visit your portfolio and read a few of your poems. I am doing this because you have given me review credits in the past.
I would have loved this piece to be longer so I could read more from you on this subject. Your message was simple, sweet and direct. My favourite line was "Oh God above, among the bright stars" . I thought this was very humbling. I also thought this writing was uplifting. Thank you for sharing.
This is written perfectly and flowed along so very well. You are a great writer here. Your expressive words and lines bring a poetic power to me. Love is love in any gender. I enjoyed the romantic ride of this piece, it was very sweet. Good work and write on!!!
Aww, I thought this was a beauitful piece of writing. The flowing rhymes made the writing so good and easy to read through. A lovely poetic sway and power here. The love, the spirit, the heart was all used to write this piece, great work. I loved it. Such a sweet poem. Well done!!
I thought your little poem here was nice, sweet and romantic. You made me wonder if women love any different to males. My guess is that love is love no matter what the gender be. This was a nice expressive piece and was rather humbling. I enjoyed reading this through. Keep writing.
Lovely writing here. The poetic sway was great. I loved how you ended the poem, it kind of made me emotional. The imagery was great. A sweet, humbling piece of writing. You expressed yourself so very well. Nice length for the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. I enjoyed this work from you. Write on!!
I thought this item from you held great positivity and reward. The imagery that came along with the words and lines was special. You painted a fantastic picture with your words here. A lovely, innocent poem, filled with joy and care and promise. Good work and write on !!!
I enjoyed reading your item through. It was very mystic and powerful. I enjoyed the dreamy words and lines you wrote out. A simple ending and was very humbling. I would have loved this item to be longer, I was gripped to the poetic sway here. Nice work and keep writing.
Well written and executed. Lovely romantic sway in here. I agree, A womans eyes paints a thousand words and emotions. Your little item here left me wanting to read more of this. I felt inspired reading this through. They say less is more. An enjoyable read, thank you. Write on !!!
After reading your little story through, I felt proud to be English and live in England. It is nice here but the weather is always cold. I understood the liking of the English accent, we brits feel the same about the Amercian accent, so warming. You mentioned Princess Diana, I have seen Diana in the flesh, she came to my historic town for a visit and she walked past me making eye contact. She was very tall and vibrant. Your story held the power of dreams and fantasy. It was very refreshing for me. Nice writing.
I thought you expressed yourself so very clearly. I wondered why you are in so much pain and what has happened to you. This writing held good rhymes, good flowing rhythm. The structure was great, the flow was great too. Keep expressing yourself through poetry and writing. You have a good skill here. Write on!!
I thought this poem from you was very gripping to me. The depth and meaning was great. You wrote this out very well. To me you placed a lot of emotion in this piece and it was written from the heart. Amen to your writing skills. I really enjoyed reading this through and you lifted my spirits with hope you brought. Good work and write on!!!
I thought your poem here was beautiful. Written very well and nicely presented center of the page. There was a lovely poetic power to your words here and it flowed along perfectly. Nice word crafting and good subject to write about. I enjoyed reading this poem through. Good work and write on!!!
Anthony.
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