|You have great rhyming scheme in your poem. =)(aa, rage, change) bb,show, go). But few spelling errors and capitalization (your i's).
You don't have stanzas. An example of a few stanzas:
This is a couplet stanza with 2 lines (with no line space after the first line, only after the first stanza):
Been indepentdant, held my own. (Stanza #1)
Made better decisions, when i was grown.
So now i know and it's to late.(Stanza #2)
To change my past and control my fate.
But it's not to late to change your future! :)