I like this story, it's very humerous/tragic. There are a few technical errors (see below), but for the most part it is very convincing. The only thing I want to know is - why? Why did she go out with him, if he was part of the "loser", "other" crowd? Did she think he was cute? Did they become friends? Did she have nothing else to do/no other date? As it stands, it doesn't completely click in my mind.
Otherwise, great job.
SG
Grammer:
high school, did I really - don't need the comma had never seen one previously - this sounds a little stilted, I know it's overused but I think "before" would work fine here wearing, yet another, tight-knit - don't need either comma Your disgusting - should be "you're" an end, so much - I think this would work as 2 sentences
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