True stories like this rarely come up. I'm glad ou were one of the lucky ones to find someone on the
Internet. He sounds like a wonderful guy! Best Regards.
Excellent and succinct. I liked it. Saw it in the Poetry Newsletter this week and loved commenting. You have short phrases that really work here and it works out really well. Best Regards.
How adorable! I remember a thing called Nifty Notebooks. It was plastic and would pop up where there was paper underneath. Everybody in class signed autographs all over it for me. Then, everytime we got our public school paper line-paper for classes, we had everybody autograph those too. I'll continue on with your entries in a minute, only, I want to comment on Publish America.
Megan, I think Publish America is a great place to publish. Have you read the MessageBoard about public signings? There is a mall set to open in mid-July and I hope that I can get a book signing going there. Have you considered contacting librarians to put Passage to Romance in libraries? My girlfriend in Florida said it's where the most books are sold, to libraries. I can't imagine that. Anyway, have you considered the media like press releases? And, I thought I'd tell you, I just checked and your book is in BooksAMillion.com as well, not only BarnesandNoble.com and Amazon.com. Your next novel, if it is as sweet as the first one, will be a rousing success. You know, your book didn't give me a headache, and that is what I liked about it. I think my niece would love it, if I get a chance to let her borrow my copy.
Whereever you publish, you'll be a success. Best to.
Deeply saddened by a death in my family, I feel close to this piece. I thought of my sister-in-law
and how she must feel after my brother's passing and this kind of piece was very much a reality for me. I wanted to write about it in a spiritual way, but I'm thinking now a reality-type basis for learning to deal with a brother's death may be the way to go. Thanks for sharing this. Best Regards.
Very unusual-almost poem. It has nostalgic phrases that remind me of an "Edgar Allen Poe" piece. Yet, its meaning finds it contemporary with the first person narrative. I really liked it. Best Regards. Saw it in the Newsletter.
How ironic, how touching. I have a brother who is handicapped with paralysis and have been stressed by it at times. He is a wonderful man now, and has many talents. Your piece was very excellent. Thanks for sharing this. Best to you.
Very good poem. Great lines. One thing: Is there a word missing between "fatallly" and "toward"? I just picked it up, like as if : "fatally leaning toward dead". However, your fancy is what is best. Perhaps, the break in meaning was on purpose? Yes, Best Regards.
The depth of meaning can't surpass a friendship like this. Repetition in this poem goes well with the author's sense of kinship to knowing how long a friendship can last. Best Of Regards.
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