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Review of Kitchens I & II  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Good sense of living conditions, I liked both. You balanced things well, came up surfing on reality. Very nice.
502
502
Rated: E | (5.0)
A fabulous composite of words--your forte. It
shows your talent time and again. Best to you at Slamtime.
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503
Review of Undeniable  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Measuring love is profound and sometimes impossible. But your poem gives us a cautious and intriquing way of putting the profound and the impossible. Great job! Best Regards.
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504
Rated: E | (4.5)
I only notice a few rough spots in rhyme. Otherwise, a delightful tell of Hook. Job well-done! Best Regards.
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505
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sweet as cotton candy. I loved the lines:

to dance, arm in arm,
in the city of lights,
with my lover's
mother.

My daughter is twirling
but not in waltz time


Such gaiety, it was like I was there for a brief moment in time! Grand movement, wonderful optimum.

Another wonderful poem unfurls by Lady C.!

~victoria
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506
Review of As clear as wings  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This piece is as "clear as wings", as "pretty as a toy", as modest as a "prayerful Quaker". Loved your piece, Lady C. Best to you, at Slam time.
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507
Review of Bradbury Park  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Mind-shattering thoughts. Who would figure? Yes, it fits, the words aren't it, it's the earth-itself aplomb. I loved the piece. Best to you.
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508
Review of Sarah  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Such a marvelous urban moment. Great read. Best Regards.
509
509
Review of The Secret  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Located at the heart of communicating well. This is a poem that speaks with truth and gives us that "cool" last line:

I have turned my back on grief

I liked your Round 2 Slam poem alot.

Best Regards.
510
510
Review of Womb Magic  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Excellent. It shows a bit of magic with this whole piece. I loved it, the lines were tight and well- versed and the whole picture was a good effort. Best Regards and keep slammin'.
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511
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well-placed items in this Folder and good, good titles. No wonder it's a ribbon owner! Best Regards.

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512
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good cause, don't shoot cats! Let's all agree!!! I love my cat Princess, so. I keep her at tight range in a front and backyard close to other animals. She's a terror if she gets within two feet of another animal. If I can take care of her, nobody should hurt her. Or anyone else's Princess, either. Best to you.
Have continued fun at convention.


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513
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful, wonderful article about something so worthwhile it deserves more than applause. I will raid you with points for this! Hopefully, many more Thanksgivings and Christmases can come about, with Shelter helping them. It's a great challenge to feed the poor, and give them a nice Christmas. More power to you, Catwoman! Best Regards.

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514
Review of Convention 2004  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Another great rundown on Convention-Time. Excitement abounds, eh? Very nice for you to be honored with the SMs and SM anytime you want! How great!!! Best Regards.

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515
Review of Cat Pen  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Absolutely ingenious. I only have one cat, Princess, and I have a cat journal on her in my Port here at Writing.com. I liked all the names of all your cats, too! Best Regards.


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516
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very cute review of the Convention. I hope you have a good time there this year. I got off to a slow start with the Raid this year, but I hope to catch up with more reviews tomorrow. Have a great evening! I believe in Writing.com . . . Best Regards.

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517
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
How wonderful you write. I just love Sakhmet and Ptah and this bond you talk of. Your words are sometimes even violently beautiful and you have a knack for giving us a fantastic story because you are based on myths and you come up with something very worthwhile. I have always loved Manitou Island and find it one of my favorites and read it all! You are very talented have you published? Best Regards.

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518
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Nice ballad with a good story-line. Saw this in he new Poetry Newsletter. Best Regards.
519
519
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the way the repetition creates a sort of suspense. It folds out like a story and I also liked that. I think I understand the time-scheme of the Revolutionary War here, although it is subtle. Saw this in the Poetry Newsletter this week and liked this poem. Best Regards.
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520
Review of Can't Buy Me Love  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
If fleshed out this is a marvelous marvelous piece. Psychiatry is involved and its really fascinating to the reader here to find things out about your characters. You pose questions I wouldn't have thought of in a unique way and there is a bit of sentimentality to give the piece heart. Liked it. Liked it. Best Regards.
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521
Review of Alone  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Somehow this poem makes it through to the end with a good bit of suspense. I liked the storyline of a poem as such. Your words were a bit harsh and not as lyrical as I would have liked to see, but you get that sort of thing at Writing.com all the time, and this was unique and candid. Good enough. Best Regards.
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522
Review of Summer Thoughts  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Sensible lines. You could do more with, "Summers will never be the same" as to why. Saw it in the Poetry Newsletter. Best Regards.
523
523
Review of Beach Scene  
Rated: E | (4.5)
These lines are striking and contain very good candid abilities. I liked your sense of strong mood and you really used poetic license well. Best Regards.
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524
Review of SUNBURNED  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I always enjoy your poetry. This upbeat, fun poem is filled with good images and gives us a lovely picture of summer. I really liked it and saw it in
the Poetry Newsletter this week. Best Regards.
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525
Review of Walk Together  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice and direct. Good. Best Regards.
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