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Review of A Love So Perfect  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you for writing this piece.
"A Love So Perfect" 

This piece is a beautiful and well written, in my opinion.
The way you wrote this piece brought me back to the day I first saw my husband and he saw me.
Thank you the way you brought back the memory to me.

My favorite part is, We would always be together.

Thank you for writing this piece. It makes me want to explore more of your work.
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Review of Zmitri  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Thank you for writing this piece.
"Zmitri" 

This piece is an interesting piece, I found the words bringing me both the feelings of loss and at first a thought of hope.
I can not find any thing wrong with this piece.

Thank you for writing this piece. It makes me want to explore more of your work.
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Review of I Can Say It...  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
speechwriter is Cody KeenanThank you for writing this piece.
"I Can Say It..." 

This piece brings through many thing i feel every day.
I am always one to be nice when the cards are down and i do not see the bright side.

Thank you for writing this piece. It makes me want to explore more of your work.
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Review of Fortune Teller  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you for writing this piece.
"Fortune Teller" 

This piece is an interesting point of view.
I see people every day go to work just as your narrator goes to the fortune teller.
I could feel where you r narrator was coming from and why they where doing what they did.

Thank you for writing this piece. It makes me want to explore more of your work.
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Silverwindrose Dragon Minstrel


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for writing this piece.
"The Daily Pen by Keaton Foster" 

This piece is a great place to visit.
I love how you let all know your GP program works.

Thank you for making this piece, it allows me to explore more of your work.
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Silverwindrose Dragon Minstrel


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Review of God's Telephone  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Thank you for writing this piece.
"God's Telephone" 

This piece brought a tear to my eye I have a six year old son and I could see him doing many of the things you tell about Max.
The thing he does are so wonderfully silly and kid like that it would scare any parent half to death.
Then to lose such a smart boy would take me to the point I too would want to go.
The way you used the line God's Telephone brought a smile to my heart.

Thank you for writing this piece. It makes me want to explore more of your work.
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Silverwindrose Dragon Minstrel


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In affiliation with The Sisterhood of Mom's  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you for writing this piece.
"Settling into that Groove" 

This piece really does talk to me about the sport it was written about.
I can see the players move as I read.
I did not find any thing I did not like about this poem.

Thank you for writing this piece. It makes me want to explore more of your work.
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Silverwindrose Dragon Minstrel


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Review of Purple  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Thank you for writing this piece.
"Purple" 

This piece brings a smile to my face.
I could not help but smile at your love fpr purple.
I could not find any thing wrong with your poem.
A line I really enjoyed is, " All the types of purple are mine."
It brings to mind my favorite color blue.

Thank you for writing this piece. It makes me want to explore more of your work.
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Silverwindrose Dragon Minstrel


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Review of Ash and Dust  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Thank you for writing this piece.
"Ash and Dust" 

This piece is deep and dark in the memory of one passing and yet there is a lighter side of letting go of the body so the spirit can fly. As I read I am reminded that in the end it is the narrator that feels the lost of one so close, while being understanding.
My favorite line is, "Upon the wind
She will be free".

Thank you for writing this piece. It makes me want to explore more of your work.
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Silverwindrose Dragon Minstrel


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Review of Poor Children  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Thank you for writing this piece.
"Poor Children" 

This piece brings to mind the feeling of lost, dismal, then slowly brings me back up to the loving reminder that no matter who we are we all care and love.
My favorite part was.
"I do the best I can
Loving you and holding you tight".
I need not say more for this is the part I feel as if it is alright to do the best I can.

Thank you for writing this piece. It makes me want to explore more of your work.
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Silverwindrose Dragon Minstrel


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Review of Faces Melting  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you for writing this piece.
"Faces Melting" 

This piece was interesting. It brought to me how one might see the faces of the world hiding the real beings inside.
I did not find any thing technically wrong with this piece.
I find this part interesting,
"Because such a vision meant something
More powerful than can be
At this time determined by me..."

Thank you for writing this piece. It makes me want to explore more of your work.
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Silverwindrose Dragon Minstrel


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Review of Angels Weep  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you for writing this piece.
"Angels Weep " 

This piece really spoke to me for the darkness I live in for over half of the year.
I personally do not see any problems with this piece.
My favorite part was,
"Beyond the stench of death
angels weep crystal tears each
containing the seed of tomorrow
in prayer it falls on fallow ground."
It reminded me of the hope I have every year spring is on its way.

Thank you for writing this piece. It makes me want to explore more of your work.
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Silverwindrose Dragon Minstrel


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Review of That Girl  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you for writing this piece.
"That Girl"  [E] by SteeSilver
    This work questions whether we know exactly why we love our significant other.

This poem is the way I feel about my husband.
I feel as if there have never been truer words spoken when it comes to this type of love.

Thank you for writing this piece. It makes me want to explore more of your work.
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Silverwindrose


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Review of I Was A Number  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you for writing this poem.
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This poem as written reminds me of The diary of Ann Frank.
And what she and her family went through after the diary.

I felt that this piece was dark in memory of the narrators life as a number.

Thank you for writing this piece. i feel like checking out other pieces of your writing.
Silverwindrose


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Review of Alone  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Thank you for writing this poem.
"Alone"  [E] by vishous_girl
    The title is explanation enough.

Thank you for writing your feelings here.
You managed to to give life to how you felt.

Thank you for writing this piece.
This piece makes me want to read other pieces of your writings.
Silverwindrose


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Review of Jester  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Thank you for writing this poem.
"Jester"  [E] by chrisbutcher
    Simply a free flowing poem. Usually I do not rhyme ... this was purely unintentional.

This poem is an interesting poem. i feel as if the poem is about me in many ways, and yet it is not at the same time.
I encourage you to explore more of these feelings and write them down.
Thank you for writing this poem. I feel like checking out more of your work.
Silverwindrose
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In affiliation with The Sisterhood of Mom's  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you for writing this preface.
"When Dragons Lived - Chap 0 - Long Ago"  [E] by Tadpole1
    This is an intro. to a story whose heroes travel to the realm of magicians and dragons.

You had me from the start, with the way you introduced your dragon. Her hunger and playfulness you brought me fully in to the story.
I understood why the villagers and their livestock are moving around in fear.
The sword bearer

Thank you for the great preface it makes me want to read the rest of your book and others in your portfolio.
Silverwindrose


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In affiliation with The Sisterhood of Mom's  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you fro writing this piece.
"A Valentine’s Day to Remember"  [E] by Tim Chiu
    A poem that preaches no flowers, gifts, or chocolates on Valentine's Day - enjoy!

This poem really does show all of the things we can cut while still showing love and respect for the one that is loved.
Thai poem brings a smile to my face for just reminding us to keep it simple.

Thank you for writing this piece it makes me want to check out other pieces you have written.
Silverwindrose


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Review of Untitled  
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Thank you for writing.
"Untitled "  [E] by Danielle Lindsay
    Free write poem.

Interesting poem, it made me feel as if I was in a storm but with out the danger of one.
Now to be honest I was not really sure of where you where wanting to go or show with it.

Though I do have to say if I take a look at this poem from the side of a flower it comes into view.
As if the flower was just sitting there during a rain fall.

Thank you for writing this poem. It gave me many things to think about and made me want to check out your portfolio
Silverwindrose


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Review of I Saw a Dragon  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
What a fun poem.
"I Saw a Dragon"  [E] by Magoo
    They strolled along the ocean sand . . .

I enjoyed how you opened the poem and fallowed the dragons around.
I felt as if I was the one fallowing the dragons as they became a family and them worked with the kingdom and knights.

Thank you for writing this great piece it makes me want to check out your portfolio.
Silverwindrose


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Review of The Seed  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Thank you for writing this story.
 The Seed  (E)
Authority conferred binds the Principle
#1913251 by Aelyah


I enjoyed reading this story about the kings 3 sons.
Midhe the oldest son.
Danh is the kings youngest son.
The kings middle son is not named but he does receive the crown.

I did find what I believe is a typo.
Then with a smile that didn't fully reach her eyes said.
I think the typo might be - her with him.
Though if it is not a typo it does mean that there is a daughter also.

I did find 3 bold words that caught my attention shade, post, and bubble.
The way the words are highlighted looks as if they might be prompt words.

Thank you for writing this piece I enjoyed reading it.
Silverwindrose


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Rated: E | (4.5)
What a great story this is. {b=item:1914053}

I at first was sad when the girls could not think of a game to play and went to ask the boys what game they had fun playing.
I was just s upset as the girls were when the boys said they were playing superheros and that girls could not be a superhero.
In the end I loved the way the teacher handled the students, with showing all of them it was ok for girls to be superheros just like the boys.

My favorite line in "Before you ask me, Teacher gave me my power. I will agree, to let the boys give me my superhero name, if they agree girls can be superheroes too.". This line to me shows that the girls just want to have fun just like the boys, but girls can be anything they want to be also.

Thank you for writing this great piece. I enjoyed reading this story it showed how to deal with a bad problem in a way that all learned a good lesson in the end with out any one getting hurt.

Thank you, I hope you write more pieces like this because I would love to read them..
Silverwindrose


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Review of Listen  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing this poem.
 Listen  (E)
This poem came out of now where to me. Its a favorite amongst my friends and myself.
#1912845 by Timothy Sweden


You have so well written what I enjoy doing every day for my friends.
It is rare that some one can put in words the skill it really does take to listen.

Thank you for writing this poem.
Silverwindrose


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Review of Megan's Charm  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you for writing this story.
 Megan's Charm  (E)
This book is in the final stages of publishing just want reviews on grammar punct. etc.
#1911922 by kat


This is a cute and informative story I really like the way you showed the girl and her father caring for the lambs.
The Glossary of Terms is a great addition to your story.

Thank you for writing this great story.
I have enjoyed reading your stories.

Thank you
Silverwindrose


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you for writing this piece
 Act Your Age or Leave!  (E)
I just don't understand, my family wants me to settle down, but I am almost only 120...
#1912096 by Mark Allen Mc Lemore


I felt as if I was the one that the story was about.
This was quite an emotional piece starting with the pride of building the home that was shared with the growing family.
I new the pride and loss of raising so many generations of family here.
I could feel the excitement of playing with my great grandson and racing all through the house, though not meaning to disturbed my grandson that was working in the house.
Then the disappointment of family not understanding that I was just playing not meaning any harm as we played, and now the sadness because I will have to lose all that I have if I do not slow down.

Thank you for writing this story I felt as if I was there.
I would love to read more of your writings.
Thank you
Silverwindrose


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