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I used a template for all of my reviews. I will comment on plot, characters, scene/setting, grammar, and anything else that comes to mind.
I'm good at...
short stories, novels, and blog
Favorite Genres
dark fantasy and horror However, I will read anything that is similar to a VC Andrews story. I also like any books about cooking.
Least Favorite Genres
romance, comedy, mystery, science fiction
Favorite Item Types
short stories, novels, blogs, anything about cooking
Least Favorite Item Types
poetry, campfires
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Romance, action-adventure, mysteries/thiller, science fiction
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Review of Witless Wendy  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Showering Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

This tongue twister is so cute. I tired reading it out aloud to see if I could, but I got tongue tied. That happens to us Mississippians. That's what made it such a fun read. Thanks for sharing and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review of Leaping  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Helping Hearts, and WDC Frontliners.

I love Japanese poetry. The imagery and allteration is perfect in this piece. I can just see the boy and girl growing up and running around. Thanks for sharing this and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review by very thankful
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Helping Hearts, Showering Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

I think it's wonderful that you are writing about how thankful you are about the friendships in your life. It's great that you are so thankful for them, and this is the best season to show your thanks.

Sister of Mercy

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Review of Depression  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Showering Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

This poem really hit home with me. I know how it is to be depressed like this at times. You wrote this very well. The imagery and allteration is great. Thanks for sharing and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review of SPOOK'S DELIGHT  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Showering Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

This is a delightful Halloween poem. I love the eerieness of this piece. The rhyme scheme is perfect. This also reminds me of a song I was taught when I was a child. Thanks for sharing this and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review of Follicular Folly  
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Showering Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

This essay was a delight. I went to Wal-Mart many times either around midnight or around seven in the morning depending on what shift I worked at the hotel. You built up the suspense rather well in this piece. Thanks for sharing it with WDC and keep on writing!

Sister of Mercy

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Review of Silent Witness  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm reviewing you courtesy of The Angel Army, Showering of Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

This is a very interesting piece you have written. I believe every teenage girl has been at this place. I know I was at this very place in my life when I was around 14. It gets better I promise just stick it out. Thanks for sharing this and keep on writing.

Sister of Mercy

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Review of Cat Journal  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Helping Hearts, and WDC Frontliners.

I really enjoyed reading your journal about your cat, Princess. I liked the banner you used for it too. Thanks for sharing this and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review of Compromised  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Helping Hearts, Showering Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

I loved the imagery in this poem and the use of allteration. The last stanza was my favorite because it was very thought-provoking. Thanks for sharing and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review by very thankful
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Showering Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

I really enjoy reading haikus, and yours was no exception. I loved the imagery in this piece, and the use of alliteration in the second haiku. Thanks for sharing this and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review of STARS AND GHOSTS  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Showering Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

This poem sent chills down my spine as it reminded me of things that happened in my own past. You did a good job with using alliteration and rhyme. Thanks for sharing this and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review of Nurse Days  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Showering Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

I really enjoy reading online journals, and yours was no exception. I believe nursing is a noble profession that takes a special person to be able to do. Thanks for sharing this and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review of As Yet  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Helping Hearts, Showering Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

I love reading Japanese forms of poetry, and yours is no exception. This senryu gave me chills as it reminded me of how being alone feels. Thanks for sharing and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review by very thankful
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Helping Hearts, and WDC Frontliners.

I loved you WDC testimonial. It was so witty. It also made me hungry as I read it. It also appealed to me because I do like to cook. Thanks for sharing this and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review of Essay Assignment  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Helping Hearts, and WDC Frontliners.

I enjoyed reading your assignment about blogging and journaling for writers. I keep a writing journal too. I'm about to start a blog too. Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your writing.

Sister of Mercy

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Review by very thankful
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Helping Hearts, and WDC Frontliners.

I really enjoyed reading your seasonal pieces. I'm glad you didn't delete them. Reading this gave me warm fuzzys inside for the holidays coming up. Thanks for sharing and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review of Such a tease  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Helping Hearts, Showering Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

I love reading senryus, and yours is certainly no exception. I love the tongue and cheek way this poem is presented. I love the imagery in this poem because it brings across that teasing perfectly.

Thanks for sharing and write on!

Sister of Mercy
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Review of Night Terrors!  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Showering Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

I really enjoyed reading your mini-story about child terrors. Your story seemed almost like a poem with the rhythm and use of allteration. I thought the ending was cute. Thanks for sharing and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review of When you need me  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army and WDC Frontliners, and because of gave me a review.

I believe this is more than just thrown together. I can tell a lot of thought was put into this. There's so much truth in this poem, and that's why I liked it. Thanks for sharing this and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review by very thankful
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Helping Hearts, Showering Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

I really enjoyed reading your blog. Good luck with your classes and the GMAT test. I know what you mean about Ecomonics classes. I had to take both of the Econ principals classes over again, so you're not alone.

Thanks for sharing and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review by very thankful
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Helping Hearts, Showering Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

This is a fascinating journal you have here. It's quite orignial. I think it's great that you are helping those in need with this.

Thanks for sharing and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review of To fix a fence  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, WDC Frontliners, and because of gave me a review.

Good Points
1. I like your laid back writing style.
2. This reminds me of when I used to live on the farm when I was a child.

Suggestions
1. They wont emerge until late evening. wont should be won't
2.The quail and roadrunners don’t mind. The sunflowers don’t mind. Combine these two sentences to eliminate repetition.
3. The new wire stretches across the old fence posts and I pound in the “steeples.” A comma is needed after posts.

Thanks for sharing and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review by very thankful
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, WDC Frontliners, and because you gave me a review.

Good Points
1. The action is great.
2. Kyle is a neat character to follow.

Suggestions
1. You change verb tenses in some of the paragraphs. It is best to stick with past tense in narration.
2. Kyle stood up a little straighter as a tingle traveled through his spine and he found himself peering at the occupants of the cabin in search of a threat. A comma is needed after spine.
3. Go through and drop the adverbs.
4. The narration is a little stilted. Go through and add contractions to correct this problem.

Sister of Mercy

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Review of HALLOWEEN NIGHT  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Showering Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

This Halloween poem is so awesome and fun to read. It's just spooky enough to attract readers of all ages. I really liked the second stanza because it ran small chills through my spine.

Thanks for sharing and write on!

Sister of Mercy

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Review of Sirius black.  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm reviewing you today courtesy of The Angel Army, Showering Acts of Joy, and WDC Frontliners.

I enjoyed reading your tribute to your beloved pet. Your use of repetition and the rhyme scheme is very good. The last stanza was my favorite.

Sister of Mercy

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