I liked it alot...it made me giggle a little:) I would changed the spelling of the words...like instead of just adding an n to the end...like attackn,,you could spell it attackin, and get the same affect. But that was just me and my only gripe with this piece. Other than that I thought it was well done. Thank you so much for sharing. Please keep writing! Taryn
This is a beautiful poem. Nicely written. I have had several deaths lately in my family and I just came across this poem. Absolutely beautiful. One of my favorites. Nice job.
taryn
I like this poem very much. I like the rhyme and flow of it. I'm sure like many others, I can relate. There are times when love is not enough when a relationship isn't necessarily healthy. And it takes a logical person to put it all in perspective and deal with it accordingly. Unfortunately for most of us, logic is the last thing we consult when trying to decide what is best in a relationship. Usually are hearts instead of our minds rule our decisions. I also like the quote at the end of your poem ....very true.
Write On, and good luck.
Taryn
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