First Impression: I saw this and flash fiction is short and to the point. I wanted to read more. The prompts were different. I thought I would share my thoughts and observations. I do like fiction. I looked it over and read this and read the notes posted.
What needs your attention: I wasn't sure about the prompts. I thought the prompts should be something easy to relate to and be easier. You could give ten prompts and advertise the forum in Newsfeed. Maybe the story could have up to 500 Words. I know it is flash fiction but 300 seems a little short. I thought there should have been more rules.
The part I liked best: I read some of the stories submitted and they were good so I guess others were able to write for it. I like the concept of fiction. Reality isn't always nice. Contests are always nice and this seems like one others would enjoy.
Overall Impression: A good style. Creative and good idea for a contest. I enjoyed reading this. I am not good at flash fiction but I can admire those who are. I like the E rated concept. A good presentation.
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First Impression: I have never written Haiku or Senryu. I was curious and I saw this forum and I would read and see how this works. I started to read this and I wasn't disappointed. I have never looked up the meaning in the dictionary of Haiku and Senryu. I was happy to learn what they are. I find it hard to write a poem in a few sentences. Others make it seem so easy.
What needs your attention: Maybe you will want to do this contest in the future and advertise on Newsfeed. The rules seem to be consistent. Post examples of Haikus and Senryu. Just a thought.
The part I liked best: Telling what a Haiku or Senryu is. The ground rules are reasonable as well as the prizes. This gets the reader's attention. I like the poems that were submitted. They made me smile. I wish I could write these,. Looks like you can use any subject. I enjoyed reading the submissions.
Overall Impression: A good style and easy to follow. Creative and colorful. The rules are clear and give good details. Looks like you enjoy Japanese Poetry. A good overall presentation.
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First Impression: This is a good forum for Poets. I saw this and had to read more. A lot of good poetry prompts and looks like you spent time with this. I am giving my observation. Anyone who likes to write poetry will enjoy looking at these and try to do the prompts. A good variety to choose from.
What needs your attention: Open forum back up and post on the Newsfeed. I am sure it will go over well.
What part I liked best: Write a garden poem. Write a poem about a doll. I love dolls and this would work for me. Write a poem using a Disney Character. There are so many. Poems can be short or as long as you want. This is helpful. The member can decide the length. I was wondering about the type of poetry form to use for these poetry prompts.
Overall Impression: A good style. Easy to follow. Good instructions and step by step details. I admire that. Looks like you spent time with this. You put some thought into this. I am happy I saw this and read this. I take it you are a big fan of poetry writing. Well written. A good presentation.
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Nicely written details and this is uplifting and inspiring as well as enlightening. Food for thought. Your devotion to God and Jesus shows. A good style with heartfelt words. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and ghost stories told in the woods is always fun. Your father not finishing the story. You will always think about it. Suitable dialogue and a good story. A neat style and good scenario. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We do love our pets no matter how they misbehave. They give us love and comfort. Easy to follow. Pluto is a good name for a dog. Heartwarming. A good style. I smiled as I read this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Dying eggs. I remember those days. I at my parents house and my son and I were dying eggs for Easter. I threw out the dye outside and it landed on the house. It was the same color as the house but my father noticed. Your poem is creative and cute. A little girl dying an egg and going to the park for Easter. Heartwarming. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and having a moment with a mama bear is special. Making eye contact and she not bothering you and she had her babies with her. Easy to follow and a good scenario and nice style. Sometimes we can communicate with animals just by looking at them. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and seeing someone walk through a wall. I have never seen that. I once saw a man outside who disappeared. We think he was a ghost. I was intrigued by this. A good style and easy to follow. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It is so sad to lose a pet. I don't know why we have to lose our pets. Good reflections and heart warming. She was your best friend it seems. Creative and colorful with good imagery. Lovely reflections and easy to follow. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
First Impression: I like sand castles and beaches. This got my attention so I thought I would read this and give you my views as I got lost in the ocean and my imagination. Poseidon. I like that part as well. Ocean roars. So, I am ready and here are my thoughts.
What needs your attention: I was hoping you would see a dolphin swimming pass. Maybe a boat sailing past. The focus was on sand castle and the beach so I get this. I smiled.
The part I liked best: The open ocean roars in dragon's garb of green. I like the dragon reference. Turrets and oysters. Were thee any pearls? The call of retreat. The castle falls. Too bad sand castles don't last. A warrior guise. Good call. I feel like I was there. Some lovely reflections.
Overall Impression: I like all the imagery and description. A god style an easy to follow. Creative and colorful. Looks like you enjoyed writing this. Salt and spray through the air. A good part of the beach. I can see the ocean green like a dragon. This poem made me smile. Anyone who loves the beach needs to read this.
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First Impression: 2023. We hope each year will be better. After 2020, the years haven't been good. I wanted to read this and see what you had to say. The calendar has turned it's page. A new year released from it's cage. These lines invited me to read this poem. Tempests and storms. That's what the years. My interest is peaked so I am reading this and giving you my thoughts.
What needs your attention: I was hoping to see something written about 2020 and how things worked out up to now. Writing about 2023 is the subject so I guess we forget the past years and go forward.
What part I liked best: I'd still have journeyed to the end enjoying every twist and bend. To one promise, I am true to always embrace what is new. Tomorrow, it will all be gone yet I will still be moving on. I like these lines. Some god reflections and we do move forward.
Overall Impression: These lines make you think. We have hopes, dreams and promises for the new year and you wrapped these up on these verses. A Neat rhyme pattern balances this out. You can tell you spent time with this and put some thought into this. A neat rhyme pattern balances this out and gives this a good flair.
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First Impression: I am a Diet Pepsi Addict. I know people love coffee. I like to read why people love coffee and what makes them tick. I saw this and smiled. I thought alright. I will read do. I can get in tune with this. I awake to the fragrant air that welcomes me everyday. I thought I will read this. I will give my views.
What needs your attention: Do you like chocolate in your coffee, sugar and cream or just like it straight? I was curious about this part.
What part I liked best: It's a promise of what will be there. Coffee does that for you. Drinking coffee to stay sane. Good call. My mood is sponsored by coffee. We need something to help suppress our mood. A day without coffee is.. I have no idea. I had to laugh at this. I like you said my morning diose of caffeine. I get why you like coffee.
Overall Impression: A good style and I appreciate the humor in there. This holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern pulls this off with a good bounce, nice flair and a good concept. Creative, colorful and well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Entertaining.
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First Impression: Journey. It can be a trip or about life and issues we encounter. This is about autumn and a forest and walking along the path. This is cheery and friendly as well as warm and invites the reader in. I wanted to read this. I feel like I am entering a forest and I had to see what awaits me. The path meanders through the changing wood. I like this line. I am on a journey with this poem and want to give you my observations.
What needs your attention: I was hoping to see a stanza with squirrels, deer, birds or some other forest animals visiting. I love animals. Everything else falls into place.
What part I liked best: I would not forsake this long walk if I could for in my heart I know that I belong. The leaves have turned and autumn has arrived. I like the reference to God. Walking in the woods with a lover and friend is the best kind of bond.
Overall Impression: This is serene and peaceful. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern suits this and gives this a good flair as it makes the words stand out. I felt like I was there. Creative and well defined.
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First Impression: This is a poem about love and I am a hopeless romantic. I decided to give this a shot. I read the opening lines. First kiss, fulfillment, heart's promise. I wanted to read more so I gave it a looksie and read it. I will share my observations with you. Hang on.
What needs your attention: I think this poem could us two more stanzas. How long did the man know her before this moment of the kiss? Had she been true to him all along or were they just dating as friends?? Tell about his intentions of how the romance will play out. A rhyme pattern could balance this out. Structured, free verse is always nice as well.
What part I liked best: The first kiss. The kiss didn't disappoint him or her it seems. In passion, love is usually found. He thinks love is impossible but looks like at the end of the poem, he has changed his mind. I like anything about love.
Overall Impression: A good style. Creative and colorful. Easy to follow. This draws the reader in. Lovely reflections. Creative and enlightening. I smiled as I read this. Promises. At least we have them.
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. Death is always so sad. Some sad reflections. You can feel the emotions and sadness. Well chosen words and a good scenario along with a nice style. A good flair. Creative and colorful. Uplifting and enlightening. A great presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style. Good imagery and you can see the Princess in her pretty dress in her pretty house with all her pretty things. Easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a man runs an alien bar but never met one. His girlfriend brings in three aliens who turn into Trump, Putin and Ivanka Trup. They got their free drinks. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A handvprint on the sand. They do wash away. Sad they don't stay. Good descriptions and neat imagery. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and good reflections. Loves dancing like the flowers. Good call. A good style and neat scenario . Easy to follow. Thoughts. Sunset. Cups of tea. Love. They go together. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes we need tears to comfort us. Sometimes, laughter is not an option. Some sad reflections. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and weddings too place and so did the eclipse. This short passage has a good message. Easy to follow and good reflections. Creative and colorful. Wedding band in the sky. The world briefly closes it's eyes. God is proposing, the ring, your size. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we have our own friends and cliques in school. Forming your own club, cute. Six girls. It does make you feel special. Having your own bracelet with a shamrock. I get it. Creative and colorful. Our high school friends are just friends in high school and then we go our separate ways. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. This is uplifting and inspiring as well as enlightening. Strength. We do need that. Good words of wisdom. Some well chosen words. Your devotion to God and Jesus shows. A good presentation with well chosen words. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
We like seagulls and stars but we don't want to he them. Nicely written details and good reflections with food for thought. I guess seagulls mate for life. This is uplifting and inspiring. Creative and colorful and easy to follow. It is fun to watch The sky. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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