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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Dragon is hiding Happy WDC Anniversary! *ConfettiB*

*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews*CakeP*


First Thoughts:

I found the title and brief description very interesting. I wanted to read this and learn the table behavior in the Chinese culture, and differences from there than US.


Further Thoughts:

Wow! The etiquette involved is very stringent. I can see how an American would fail dreadfully with the Lazy Susan turning and helping themselves to whichever food item they want. Oh,my! I love it though. I love that there is such respect for Hosts and guests and how to seat them at the table. The whole wrist up serving tea and what it means. Much detail indeed.

The chopsticks sticking into a rice bowl while attending to something else requiring use of one's hands, and what it means to do that, would for sure never come to mind in a non-Chinese culture. I believe I am guilty of doing that myself. I love your Mom's response to catching you doing that:

"My mom, seeing what I had done, was horrified and told me with great solemnity that I should never, under any circumstances, do such a thing again. She explained that it was synonymous to a curse upon whomever the chopsticks were pointed at."

Observation:

Very minor misplacement...

...and then reach over to rotate the Lazy Susan". *Left* There's an orphaned quotation mark there at the end. Not enough to rate down. *Wink*

Parting Thoughts:

I am really happy I found this in your port. Learning some of these cultural differences is quite interesting.

Conclusion:


Great job! *DragonflyR*

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Review of My Teddy Bear  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello there, A.C. Julie
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Initial Thoughts:

The brief description states that this is your first poem in your Creative Writing class. I was curious to read it. I'm glad I did! *Bigsmile*

Further Thoughts:


Your poem is what I would describe as a Prose-Poem. It doesn't follow stringent poetic form or style. I do like these types of poems since they tend to tell a full story that produces images in the reader's mind. This one definitely did.


You weave in so much emotion from the start of the abandoned Teddy Bear, a way to move on from a part of childhood. Yet, the cry of the Teddy Bear was imagined. It was a a persistent play upon the youth's heartstrings ... but then, growing up made the Teddy's call fade more each year.

The descriptions show the reader how life progressed over the years. A new Stepmother, a new friend many people in the house to grow up with.


Stand out lines:

"listened to the choir of engines sing" Beautifully put. The engine doesn't always mean noise, it can sound unique to the one who listens, like a choir of voices. I could hear it in my head.

"The black sheep of the family ran away from the flock
He wanted to become the shepherd" I like the way this took one considered a Black Sheep, and gave him opportunity to become his own person ... a shepherd, a leader in fact. Nicely penned. *Bigsmile*

Observation

"I made 6 years' worth of memories with a new friend"

You should spell out numbers zero through one hundred.

Parting Thoughts:

This poem touched my heart on many levels. The ending was certainly bittersweet. I did love the parting image left there to complete the lifecycle of the narrator and that abandoned Teddy Bear. *Teddy*


Conclusion:


Good work! *Fireworks4*


Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Angel&Witch



*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews*CakeP*


Hello, Princess Megan Rose 22 Years Happy 22nd WDC Anniversary! *Clap*

My Thoughts:

Oh, my ...I'm so excited I found this Word Search. I happened upon it when I peeked into your port. I have been on the lookout for puzzles and Word Searches lately. *Bigsmile*


I remember many WDC-ers joining this Alice In Wonderland challenge that Kiya brings out each year. I haven't done it, yet. I guess I was busy in March. *Laugh*

Further Thoughts:


The reason I'm so excited? YOU are my 10,000th Review!
*ConfettiB* *Party* What wonderful luck that it falls on your WDC Anniversary!

Your Word Search was so much fun! I loved falling into the Rabbit Hole and searching for all the words. The first one I found was "White Rabbit." The last word was "Alice." Go figure she'd be hiding down there!
*Laugh*

It was great to have many words to uncover. It gave me some time to work the puzzle out. I did want to savor it since it was such a special review! *Queen*


Parting Thoughts:


Thanks for creating this Word Search. I'm happy that I came across it and had some fun!

Happy Account Anniversary! And thank you for everything you do here in the community!*People*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*




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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
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I'm baaack! That's right, came back for more fun and games. *GameBall*

My Thoughts:


Well, I know "The Bard's Hall Contest loves to go Slam-Poetry in February, but it's nice to acknowledge the other things that go along with the month.

This puzzle pretty much covers that ... except nowhere in there does it say WebWitch's Birthday! *Rolling* Maybe you'll revise it one day. *Whistle*

Further Thoughts:

This was fast paced starting up for me, but slowed down when I didn't find "candy" until it was the last word left. Yeah, I don't have a sweet tooth. *Shock2*

Observation:


"February is a busy month for a bee! There's a lot to pack into a 28 day month."


Since February '24 was a Leap Year, it could be written 28/29 as happens during Leap Year.


Yeah, I know, useless information since here-in-after ... you have four more years to update it! *Laugh*


Conclusion:


Another cool puzzle that I enjoyed! Thank you for that! *Puzzle3*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*





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Review of Remembering You  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your item because I saw it posted on the Newsfeed the other day and saved it until I could read and review it. *Smile*

My First Thought:

The photo, the Title and brief description already had my eyes tearing up because I knew this would be a poem about finding the spirit of love and laughter through loss. *Hug1**Cry**Hug2*

Further Thoughts:

The poem was beautiful. A lovely tribute to the memory of your grandson, Brandon. I found it uplifting even through the sadness of loss. *Sun*

The form Petrarchan sonnet is an interesting form. I have not been a poetry writer who sticks to forms. I guess free verse is my go to. One day, I may have the patience to learn different forms. However, you did a beautiful job following along with the Note on the bottom. Thanks for letting the reader know all about the form. *HeartV*

Loved This:

"I feel your essence in the wind's embrace.
I hear your laughter at night when I dream."

"I see your soul in the sun's shining beam,
And sense your halo in the moonlight's glow."


Truth be told, I loved it all. The words chosen painted a beautiful portrait of Brandon through the love felt for him.

Parting Thoughts/Conclusion:


It is such a tragedy losing a grandchild -- your child's child! I'm sure he is watching over you from above. And, he is there with another whom you love. His memory is cherished and that is clearly felt. *Bird*

This poem shows through the senses you've used, sights, sounds, touch ... moon, sun, water's flow ... You lit up our very souls like a song.

You have a fascinating way with poetic words, Tracey. *KeyC*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*




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Review of Lost love  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello there, InPraiseofFolly Welcome to WDC! *Bigsmile*

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Review! *Angelic*

Initial Thoughts:

The title and brief description let the reader know this will be a melancholy poem since it involves "loss." Loss does not only apply to a death of one, but, it could apply to the death of love being returned.

Further Thoughts:

Loved these lines...
"The fleeting aroma of bitter sweet
Like the last drops at the punt of a bottle."


Great word usage here. *Smile*

Observations:

Mimicking the believes (beliefs) of Aristotle

Also, in your brief description above: "A Poem describing someone who is grieving the lost (loss) of who they believe is their soulmate"

Parting Thoughts:


The lines of your poem flowed smoothly. The last three lines starting with "W" Waiting, Wondering and Wishing -- packs a punch to this poem showing the loss of the idea that this was a soul mate in the eyes of this person. The loss, almost a request of Saturn's daughters to reunite the love of this couple again on earth.

Conclusion:

Well done! *Saturn*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*






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Review of Popular Foods  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Maryann
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My Thoughts:

I've been coming across some of you GoT-ers puzzles and word searches made during the competition, and have been enjoying them immensely.

Sometimes the brain needs a break from stories and poetry and needs to sink its teeth into some fun games. (Hmmm, does a brain have teeth? *Thought*) Oh, well, you get what I mean. Anyway, I did enjoy your puzzle.

Firstly:, it was about food. Some favorites in there. *Bigsmile* *ScallopBr*

Secondly: The puzzle was relaxing and did not make the player want to pull her hair out. *Butterfly2g**Butterfly2t**Butterfly2w*

Don't get me wrong, there are times when the mind needs some exercise and enjoys the challenge. However, when it's just for fun, and it relaxes a tired mind that has filled itself with a day's long collection of clutter, this was perfect!

I'm happy I found this little puzzle and decided to play. *Delight*

Great job!

Until next time--play on, write on, and ... enjoy life after GoT! *Scroll*

WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:


I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read & Review! I am so happy this story popped up. It's just the message I needed at the moment. It sent chills down my spine as I read on. *Phone*

Further Thoughts:


I loved reading this because I never thought of even attempting to call Jesus. You did, those many years ago and found a voice that brought you great peace and joy. Your call was answered, and I suppose it gave you hope. It may have turned your life around in way never thought possible.

Parting Thoughts:


This story has great impact. It's well written. I have nothing to suggest for improvement. Thus, I am returning the auto-GPs award.

Conclusion:


I think I need to make a phone call. *Pray*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch








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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, StephBee
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

Well, I'm back to play and review your Word Search.

First impression:

Party time for WDC's 22nd. There are so many things going on during party week and month, it's difficult to keep up with all the fun. Everyone is celebrating the festivities, contests and activities.

I didn't get to do many puzzles at the time, but now, I'm finding a new fondness of these Word Searches. *Magnify*

Further Thoughts:

I have done another one of your puzzles recently. I found it relaxing and a bit on the easier side with fewer words to solve. This one, I got to tell you kept me busier a bit longer. I like that I had to work harder to solve the puzzle. I did successfully complete it and felt exhausted..no I mean excited that I didn't walk away. I was a bit tired when I delved into it ... I know, excuses! *Laugh*

Parting Thoughts:


Something as easy as a party should have been completed in 7 minutes. I mean who doesn't love a party? Would you believe the last word I found was --party? *Rolling*

All kidding aside, it was a great puzzle, lots of fun and but for that last word, a good pace for a puzzle.

Conclusion:


Great job! *ConfettiB*

Until next time--write on, Puzzle on and party on! *Party*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*




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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, StephBee
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Review! *Angelic*

I have been in a puzzle/word search kind of mood lately. Perhaps because so many of them passed before my eyes while crediting reviews in April. Got to thank GoT for that! *Laugh*

My Thoughts:


This was a fun puzzle. It was not a difficult level, thus giving someone who didn't want to burden her mind for a bit a little fun and games and just enough brain exercise. Thank you for that. *Delight*

Great word choices related to an Alpha Male. The words fit the type and I'm okay with that. *StarStruck* Several words were longer ones, thus were the ones I headed for right away. There's only so much space to share with longer words.

Parting Thoughts:

Nicely constructed puzzle. Interesting theme. *Puzzle2*

Conclusion:


Great job! *IceCreamB*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*



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Review of HOTDOGS  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Lou-Here By His Grace
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I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read 7 Review. *Bigsmile*

First Thoughts:

Hotdogs ---summer, grilling, picnics, kids and fun. Those things are what I think of when buying hotdogs. It is thoughts of the past, growing up with family get togethers and all the cousins gathering around waiting for a hotdog off the grill.

Further Thoughts:

Thinking about the inner parts of a hotdog is never a pleasant thought. I think we've sort of moved on to gourmet hotdogs if such a thing is really sans critter parts. But then, who wants to think too hard on that. I do not. *Ha*

Oscar Meyer's always leaves a catchy song in my head. I may be older now, but memories do bring me back to those days.

Parting Thoughts:

Well done and quite descriptive poem where the word hotdog is not used. It appears to be a free verse that packs "eight to a plastic package," with ease.

Conclusion:

Thank you for the memories this poem brought of childhood fun and laughter and bellies full of an old favorite.

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*

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Review of Jerky Jaunts  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello there, iKïyå§ama
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Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your entry as a judge at "The Bard's Hall Contest Thank you for entering April's flash fiction contest. *Bigsmile*

First Impression:

The title and brief description pretty much tell the reader this is going to be quite an adventure in survival. *Laugh*

Actually, you followed the prompt purrrrfectly! *Lion*


Further Thoughts:

Well how and why you ended up in a tree is answered. Unlucky for him he didn't have time to get dressed. Boxer shorts won't keep the tree bark from scratching, I think. *Ha*
Explained of course because the wild run to safety happened after taking a skinny dip in the lake. *Tempcold*

As per the prompt, the cellphone was on the ground where the lion sleeps, paces, awaits patiently. *Scared* Also within the prompt, a backpack is up the tree with the character to use anything thought to pack into it. *Cellphone*

How does he manage to get down from the tree without being clawed, chewed or otherwise mauled? The backpack contained Beef Jerky. Now, I ask ya, what feline would turn down that treat? Evidently the scent threw the lion off for awhile, allowing enough time for the daring escape down the other side of the tree. (Too close for comfort if you ask me. *Laugh*)

Parting Thoughts:

All's well that ends well. His friends were spotted hiding behind a cluster of rocks. They beckoned to him to join them and made their escape in the truck they came in, to celebrate the final days as seniors in high school. To think, it almost was their final days! *Rolling*

Conclusion/moral of the story:

Getting wasted while camping with friends could turn you into a mountain lion's squeeze toy. *Toy*


Well done! *TreeCypress*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*












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Rated: E | (4.5)
Angel&Witch




Hello there, J.R. PETE
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Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your entry as a judge at "The Bard's Hall Contest Thank you for entering our flash fiction contest in April. *Bigsmile*

Overall Thoughts:

You got the prompt rules down, Flash fiction less than 500 words. Stuck up a tree, mountain lion below, as well as cell phone. How did you get there and how did you get down?

Further Thoughts:

I like the blend of humor and wise thinking for this character. I also like the items he chose to place in his back pack. Items in the pack would be used to help the stranded guy out of the tree and away from the mountain lion still in one piece.

Observation:

"I[t] didn't explain where everyone went."

Parting Thoughts:

""Here's where I got the idea for fire. If I lit my spare boxers on fire, stuck them in the backpack and dropped it by the lion, the fire would scare him away..." *Rolling*

Brilliant plan to scare the lion away and get off that tree and into safety.

I really liked seeing that scenario in my mind!

Conclusion:

Just when you thought the day couldn't get any worse ...

"There was no way for me to know, Forest Ranger, ma'am, that dry fir needles were that combustible and would spread so quickly."

PRICELESS! *Laugh*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*




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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello there, Joseph
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Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your entry as a judge at "The Bard's Hall Contest Thank you for entering our April Flash Fiction contest. *Bigsmile*

Initial Thoughts:


Of course this was no ordinary flash fiction, No! This one has the character stuck up a tree in the morning with a Mountain lion right below. *Lion*

There are many ways on how to do it. However, the interesting part is how cleverly it can be done while entertaining the reader. *Ha*

Further Thoughts:


I wondered a couple things ... I know there was plenty of celebration going on with fireworks and partying. I guess that could explain not knowing how he got up the tree? Or, perhaps he climbed the tree for a better look at the fireworks. That seems to fit. Nevertheless, he was up a tree and a mountain lion below. I wonder why his friends never came back to help him? But then, --a lion! *Scared* The phone rang it may have been a wellness check by one of them! *Laugh*

Don't mind me. I sometimes let my imagination run wild. *Angelic*

I enjoyed the bit of a humor with the peculiarly dressed red-haired guy offering a trade of Moonshine in exchange for some smokes as a deal. (Do Leprechauns still hang around after March?) *Rolling* Why not!

Parting Thoughts:

Loved the way the character got the lion to back away and was able to make his escape.

*NoteR* I had to change the content rating because there was Moonshine/alcoholic beverage consumption, as well as smoking to 13+.


Conclusion:


Good job with the prompt. This was a fun read.

Well done! *Tree2*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*









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Review of Stuck  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello there, Genipher
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Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your entry as a judge at "The Bard's Hall Contest Thank you for entering our April Contest!

My Thoughts:


I loved the magic bag or tricks and what-have-yous. It certainly came in handy for this character up a tree with a mountain lion right below her.

Additional Thoughts:

Very creative solution to a tough problem. *Laugh*

I loved who the character was when the story unfolded.

Parting Thoughts:


You wrote a unique story based on the prompt. I found it quite to be a delightful way to give your character all the help she needs in her magic bag. I did however wonder how she got stuck in the tree in the first place. *Thought* I don't think it was made clear.Perhaps the strong beverage she had threw all caution to the wind. w*Laugh*

Conclusion:

Of course Mary Poppins inspires and perfects any situation *Umbrella*

Good job!


Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*



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Review of Old T.V Shows  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, intuey
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Review! *Angelic*

I am reviewing your quiz because you advertised it on the Newsfeed, and I decided to take the quiz. I love oldtime TV shows, when life was a little more innocent. Some of it actually a Pleasantville type of show where everything is in black and white. I remember those days ... with the help of my crystal ball. *Laugh*

Your Quiz was a fun trip down memory lane. I pictured those shows in my mind that I grew up with. *Delight*


Inspiring memories from the past, these TV shows were meant to last. Thank goodness we have ME TV, to replay many of them. *Ha*

I loved playing this quiz. Plus, it gave my busy brain a creative break with nostalgia woven in.

Thank you for that! *TV*

~WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of forgive me  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read& Review. *Smile*

First Impression:

Your title and brief description carry a profound message. I decided to look further into this message through the lines of your poem.


Further Thoughts:


You touch upon the way the tongue can bite right through another with its harsh words, those of condemnation and filled with anger. It causes grief, deep hurt and results in guilt. Yes, guilt. Because the one who does the hurting knows at the time that these words will cut deep. They are chosen through familiarity with that person or loved one. When you know another's weakness, you can make the most of setting up the hurt.


Guilt is realized and forgiveness is asked. I think we are all guilty of using those certain buttons that we can push to hurt another because our feelings are hurt, or perhaps we are in just a bad mood and want to lash out.

Parting Thoughts:

Your poem is well-written. It is smooth and flows effortlessly with fine rhythm. It has a potent lesson woven within.


Conclusion:


Great job! *Vine2*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*







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Review of Dog Breeds  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi there, Maryann
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Review! *Angelic*

I am so thrilled I caught this little quiz on the newsfeed. I wondered if I'd be able to guess which dog goes where, but decided to give it a try. I'm happy I did since I got all 10 answers correct.

Seriously, this quiz lets me know I can still take a pop quiz and pass! *Laugh*

There were many breeds of dogs chosen, and the questions were very clear. Based on them and perhaps a hint or two in the question itself, I was able to guess which breed. *Dog2*

I mean there are those with the fussy hair -- I was able to guess that one even before reading the list! *Laugh*

I just wanted you to know I enjoyed this quiz and it gave me a little break from other work needing to be done. Hey, anything that distracts me from working is a plus! *Rolling*

Thanks for the fun questionnaire. You did good! *Dog1*

Good luck in "Game of Thrones

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*




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Review!

I came across this item somehow ... but just had to come read this! Why? You may ask. I have Greek relatives and really love Greek food. Therefore, when I saw Greek recipe for Tzaziki, I had to indulge myself to drool over it while wishing I had bought cucumbers last time I went to the market. *Sob*

Your recipe is well laid out. It gives precise measurements or at least a simple way to substitute an item or two. I would be using the Greek yogurt if I made it -- more authentic than sour cream substitute, but it's mentioned for those who prefer sour cream to yogurt. A matter of taste. *Bigsmile*

The recipe is a simple one but a delicious one for guests to enjoy with pita chips or other crackers.

I see you brought this recipe homw from Greece. That made it much more appealing to me. *Delight*

I have one observation.
Usually lemon juice is added for many Greek recipes such as this one. Have you ever tried it with lemon juice? It might be another option to share with your readers.

However, recipes are quite personal and a matter of what works for a person's taste.

I see nothing to fix. It has all the ingredients, the measurements and the suggestions that make it a reader's choice when trying to make a batch for themselves and family.

Now, I must go buy some cucumbers!
*Ha*

Thank you for sharing this wonderful recipe with us! *Delight*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*







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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Tim Chiu
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read & Review click.

First Impression:


Your title and brief description offers the reader a glimpse into what to expect the poem to be about. It is the pursuit of dreams. *Hourglass*

Further Thoughts:


Your description also tells the reader that these dreams should be sought without over-analyzing them. That's good advice. We do tend to spend so much time wondering if we're choosing the right path to attain our goals that we often miss the huge turn in the middle of the road. *Web1*

Your poem was a delight to read. I loved the rhythmic flow and the natural rhyme pattern. It did not seem forced. It blended well with the original intent of the poem. It's true, there are expectations to be met, and required planning to fulfill them. But, if we are dedicated to attaining our dreams, we will be successful. Over-thinking as well as wishful thinking won't always meet those goals. *Thinker*

Parting Thoughts/Conclusion:


Well written and smooth, this poem explains a personal plan that works for this author.

Good job! *TeaV*

UNtil next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*








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Review of Damsel  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello there, Purple Princess
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

No, I'm not stalking you during this super busy time you're "GOT-ing. *Rolling* This fabulous poem just happened to pop up on the Random Read & Review.

Initial Thoughts:

Oh, my, I felt my heart race reading this. I always catch the little nuances of WDC'c well known Romance and erotica writer.


Some of my FAVORITE lines:


Bolting like a Knight on a mighty steed, (How could one not awaken their senses with this vision in their mind's eye!)

Lightning flashed, the sound crackling in my ears (Beautiful sight and sound senses to picture the scene.)

cascading in black waves, blending
into the inkiness surrounding us. (Beautiful description! Love the cascading black waves referring to her hair. Follow that up with it blending into the inkiness of her surroundings.)


Amazing descriptive passages, line after line. The poem is cohesive, smooth, great rhythm throughout ... not to mention sensual! *InLove2*

Parting Thoughts/Conclusion:


Everything mentioned above and then some. This poem is Aces! *SuitHeart*

I'm so happy it popped-up on that random click. I enjoyed it thoroughly!

Until next time--write on!

And good luck with "Game of Thrones *Crown2*

WebWitch *Witch*






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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, Fyn!
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read & Review. *Smile*

Initial Thoughts:

Loved the title. I was curious to see what those delights were. I was not disappointed. The moment you mentioned daffodils, you took me right back to those days before Florida snow-birding to New England as the daffodils poke their beautiful blossoms through the previously frozen earth following winter's departure. I miss seeing them. *Cry*

Further Thoughts:

Everything you mention brings joyful thoughts. Morning coffee brought by the one you love is a blessing of his love to you. *CoffeeT*

Making Angel Food cake as a return of one of those little things you share to show your thankfulness of him being the wonderful man he is.

Quick Observation:


"yet those sunny heads bud , and finally," [Extra space following the comma was placed by mistake after "bud."] It's so minor--I did not take away the well-deserved 5-star rating.

Conclusion:

Amazing poem that captured so many good things life has to offer if you are with the right person. *Fireworks6*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*









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Review of Corona  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello there, Anni Pon
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Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read & Review! *Smile*

Oh, I so agree with what this poem states about what we've all been put through with that darn Corona virus pandemic.

Your poem describes handily how life was placed at a virtual stand still.People died alone in nursing homes --cruel and unforgiving hurt came from that. Virtual school, might as well be no school at all. Children missing socializing with friends -- depression simmering from the lack of human contact less than six feet apart. It was surreal and damaging to so many.

Yes, this poem is smoothly written and very telling about a time of grief, loneliness and panic.

Well done! *Vignette5*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*






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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, Kenzie
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read & Review. *Smile*

My Impressions:

I love the positive attitude surrounding what is mostly viewed as a "stop light." Stop is such a command to cease what you're doing. But that's not always what it is interpreted as. Sure, you must stop your vehicle from moving until the light turns green, but that doesn't mean you can't occupy your mind in more positive activities.

What I loved:


I loved that you took the opportunity to make a stop light into a singing light for you and son to share that special moment. *CarBl*

Parting Thoughts:

Indeed taking away a stop light's negative and irritating affect and turning it into an opportunity that brings joy to you and your son is a beautiful way to share special moments that may have slipped by during the course of a day.

Conclusion:

Beautiful way to turn a negative into a positive and keep stress down at the same time. *Vine1*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*






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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Tim Chiu
This is a
GROUP
The WDC Angel Army  (ASR)
Dedicated to promoting positivity, encouragement, and support to the WDC community.
#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review!

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read & Review click. *Smile*

First Impression:

I know this will be a poem that is deeply religious and lets the reader know that faith is a strong step toward hope for humanity.

Further Thoughts:

Your poem is smoothly written and shows great respect for God's love and mercy, and His giving to us his only son Jesus Christ who died for our sins so that we may be saved. *Bird*


These lines state that well:


"On the Cross;
The revoking of our sins
Through Him is the context
Of our blissful salvation
From this smoke-filled, foolish pride
Of our doomed existence
With the Devil -"


Indeed, foolish pride is the fall of many until they let go of the sinful living and open our hearts so that the love and His grace may flow through us and those who are our brothers and sisters in Christ. *Cross1*

Parting Thoughts:

It's a beautiful poem of strength through faith and sharing of joy with humanity. *Peace*

Conclusion:

Lovely!

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*







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