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Review of BLUE PORK CHOPS  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, DRSmith
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

General Thoughts:

I was roaming the halls of WDC looking for a humorous tidbit and became too curious to resist this after reading the title.

The story takes place at a Canadian fishing trip among buddies. The wives remained home, but this character did receive a call on his cellphone from his wife. She wanted to be sure he was eating properly and not just drinking a lot. *Fishing*

He did what some men try to keep their wives from worrying -- he lied.

Breakfast is indeed important as she insisted, and he told her he would have something substantial --pork chops! It was easy to see why that popped into his head when questioned about it because he was playing with poker chips. Yes, who could possibly mix those two things up? *Smirk2*

Observation:

I may not be the only reader to wonder:
Define "Nungth" for me, please. Nothing, nah ... I assume it is something similar in grunt form. *Ha*

Parting Thoughts:

"Labatt's Blue" Yeah, I can see how the "Blue" worked its way into the chops. So now I know what a blue pork chop is. YUM! *Think*

Indeed you wove the humor. In fact this item is being highlighted on the upcoming Comedy Newsletter. Go Blue! *Party*

Conclusion:

It's a quick read. It sure brings the images into the reader's mind.

Well done!

Until next time ... Play, and fish on! *FishB* *Cards*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of July Heat  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I came across your item while perusing the Public Review page.

First Impressions:

The title alone gives me the urge to turn down the AC. I see this was an entry into the Writer's Cramp. I needed to see what all the heat was about. *Bigsmile*

Further Thoughts:

You've written what I believe is a Free Verse poem. I detect no specific rhyme, which with...I am fine. I usually go free verse, myself. Yet there was a clear rhythm to it. *Fan*

"I am not a big fan
Of the July heat.
Makes me want to go shoeless.
hang out at the beach."

Observations:

I know this is a contest with a quick turn around as the next day's prompt will come out and the previous prompt is over and being judged. So, I understand the haste to get the entry in. However, There are a few areas that could use an edit. You had to place the prompt words in bold within the poem. You missed closing the "bold" properly, thus it went on beyond necessary and was a little distracting.

"Playing the latest musica" I believe the word is "musical"

Parting Thoughts:

Nice effort. You applied the prompt words within the poem effortlessly. It did not look forced, which is important when prompt words are involved. *Crab*

Conclusion:

Well done! *Wave1*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of Businesswoman  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I came across your Word Search and decided to give it a try. *Horseshoe*

Opening Thoughts:

The puzzle contains 20 words to uncover. The theme is "businesswoman." You have a brief description above the puzzle, invited anyone with a business woman in their life to offer more words that could be used in the puzzle. Good way to get player participation. *Bigsmile*

Further Thoughts:

It was a fairly easy puzzle to solve. Of course the longer word "Business woman" jumps right out at the player. The trick is to be sure to find the hidden word within that solve, being just "business." *DocumentBL*

Parting Thoughts/Suggestions:

This was a fun puzzle to solve. If I were to suggest something, I would say add an image above the puzzle of a busy woman at work. Also, make the brief description's font larger and perhaps more colorful to be an attractive Pull to readers, hooking them into trying the Word Search. *Puzzle2*

Those added things of course are just a suggestion. I was there for the fun of the solve. Thus, I didn't rate down. *Angelic*

Conclusion:

Good job! *AsteriskY*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of Re-modeling  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello fyn
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I saw your poem while scanning the Public Review page. The title caught my attention. *Ha*

My Initial Thoughts:

I had to delve right in to this spirited and lightly sprinkled humored poem describing life amidst remodeling. I so understand that in both North and South residences. Demolition is always so much fun to be around, is it not? *RollEyes*

"the screen room, the dining room
is scattered hither and yon, and
there is drywall dust everywhere."

*Up* I totally understand that!!!


Further Thoughts:

Oh, the trauma of chasing the coffee pot around the house for a cuppa. I feel your pain. *CoffeeB*

The poetic writing appears to be free verse. I love well constructed free verse where it paints a huge picture in the reader's mind without a struggle for rhyme for it depends on tone and substance without being trapped within a certain form structure. *Music1*

Parting Thoughts:

Yours poem pulls out all stops in its appeal at least for this reader. I had to chuckle because I had vivid images of projects going on in my old money pit. *House*


Conclusion:

I find nothing in the way of its smooth flow, or anything that really needs a bit of tweaking.

Great job! *Tools2*

Until next time--Write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of Mystery TV  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello Fictiøn Ðiva the Wørd Weava
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

My Thoughts:

I was excited when I hit the Word Search page to see another one of your fun puzzles right there on top. I always enjoy your subject matter. Mystery and Suspense TV shows is right up my alley. *Bowling*

Further Thoughts:

I've watched almost all the titles shown on the puzzle. So many hours of crime solving. Criminal Minds is always a good watch since we still get it on the ION channel. I love those psychological thrillers.

The first solve was The Rockford Files, That one just jumped out at me. There are many oldies there that I watched years ago. Hitchcock Hour, of course. Murder She Wrote, I still hear the opening tune in my head. *Laugh*

Parting Thoughts:

You brought me back to many hours of mystery shows that I thoroughly enjoyed from years ago. However, even in the more recent years, Monk is always a favorite of mine. Thankfully, he's still around on reruns. *Bigsmile*

Conclusion:

A puzzle so much fun it's enjoyment is almost criminal! *Knife*

Great job!

Until next time--puzzle on! *Puzzle3*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*



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Rated: E | (4.5)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, HollisFrances
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*


My Opening Thoughts:

I found your item from a Newsfeed post a few days ago, although this was a different item chosen. I started perusing your port and saw this fun item. I love humor and family stories with kids learning that they don't know everything, and their stubbornness ain't gonna do it as far as getting their way. *Smirk*

I've raised five children, four of them girls. So this set of humorous vignettes of course called out to me. *Ha*

Further Thoughts:

Love how the mind of your daughter works. I could see the wheels turning in her head --in my head! *Laugh*

Impressed that your first grader, son, played "Fur Elise" but was challenged by the spelling of Uh-uh. *Music1*

Observations:

I think a better format would make it more attractive to the eye. It will be easier for future readers to read if you change font size, larger for viewing on electronic devices. Also, using bold font for each part/title and make it slightly larger than the body of the vignette would be a good idea. *Idea*

Parting Thoughts:

I believe when there is laughter in the home, when parents have humor to make a point it is infectious, and passes on from generation to generation. These stories show the fine balance between loving parents and their children, whether Dad or his dad, the next generation, kids often plot and scheme in the same ways. But, we parents have been there, done that and can't be fooled easily. *Web1**Web2*

Conclusion:

Good job, fun read! *RockingChair*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*




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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello again, Fictiøn Ðiva the Wørd Weava
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

My Thoughts:

I saw this highlighted on the Newsfeed. I do spend a lot of time there. *Bigsmile* Of course it didn't take much to pull me into this Word Search.

The puzzle consists of 23 words to uncover. It's a good size search.
The theme of it involved elements of fiction.

What I liked:

The Trickiness! I am getting used to doing these puzzles lately and have discovered the words within a solved word. Yeah, I like that stuff. If you don't go over it twice the second word will not be uncovered. *PenY*

The level was a moderately difficult one if one didn't catch those hidden within another word, words. *Ha*

Parting Thoughts:

You know I love these puzzles. Thanks for advertising them with your little Newsfeed teasers. I had fun! *Broom*

Conclusion:

These do bring out the kid in me. *Girl*

Good job!

Until next time--Puzzle on! *Puzzle3*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am reviewing your item because I saw it highlighted on the Newsfeed.

Initial Thoughts:

I was very happy to see a deeply thought out opinion writing about the events that took place yesterday. Of course, those events didn't take place in a vacuum. *Pin*

Further Thoughts:

You say three families were affected, the attendees, one killed the other two severely injured. I say four. The other family who are also affected of course is Trump's. Imagine the former president's wife and children -- especially Barron, their youngest and most vulnerable? What if he were at the event and he was hit in the shooting? He appeared on one of the other rallies trying to take an active part in supporting his father.

You laid out several reasons, and I agree with the validity of them. Our nation is wound so tight and so sensitive and emotional, and, so split apart. It's gotten so people have chosen a side whether through intellectual reasoning or emotional agreement one way or another. I dislike a herd attitude. It stifles individual critical thinking and one's own research. *Sheep*

Parting Thoughts:

I was drawn to this entry because it really irks me that one point of view on our previous president seems to scream the loudest. It is assumed that most people must agree with that point of view, when in reality, half the population does not agree. That goes even for us creative people, (poets, writers, artist) -- not all of us have the same point of view.

Conclusion:

Excellent breakdown of what is wrong with our media reporting many hateful soundbites of the day. Hopefully that hatred will be tuned down, at least a little, since this horrendous attack.

Good job! *Clap*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of Louisiana Lingo  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Fictiøn Ðiva the Wørd Weava
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing this Word Search because I saw you highlight it on the Newsfeed. It was like you knew I was around and searching for this puzzle. *Shock*

First Thoughts:

It's not just any Word Search, this one is about spoken words used across Louisiana. I find Louisiana to be fascinating. I couldn't wait to delve in and start solving the puzzle. *SuitClub*

Further Thoughts:

I loved finding these words. Many I'm familiar with as my mother was French and she rocked us children when we were babies and sang a lullaby with the words "Fais Do Do." I know that since she did the same with my children when they were babies. Thus, I did it with my children as well... all five of them.

I recognize the French words, too. *BigSmile*

Parting Thoughts:

It was a very enjoyable puzzle to sink my brain into. There are 25 words to uncover. It was as if I was visiting New Orleans, again. I had been there many years ago. I had lived close to Galveston, Texas. And, are you really serious about not calling New Orleans "N'Awlins?" That's what Texans called it. At least in the area I lived in. *Laugh*

Conclusion:

I'm so happy I saw this highlighted on the Newsfeed. I had so much fun strolling down memory lane.

Conclusion:

Awesome Word Search! *Puzzle2*

Until next time-- Puzzle on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Review of The London Bridge  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

My Thoughts:

In my search for more playful Word Search puzzles, I spotted this one. I couldn't resist giving it a try since I've actually been to Lake Havasu in Arizona and had a lovely time there. I walked over the historic London Bridge. Interesting that it's been rebuilt in a desert. Thankfully, the man made lake gave it something for us to cross over. It was so strange thinking about the footsteps that walked across this bridge back in Old London days. Jack The Ripper? My imagination does work overtime. *Laugh*

Further Thoughts:

Your puzzle had only 10 words to solve, so it's a simple level, but fun nevertheless. I loved it because I felt like I was revisiting the place in my thoughts.

Conclusion:

Good job. Relaxing activity for a busy brain grabbing a few moments of fun and games. *Bigsmile*

Until next time--Puzzle on! *Puzzle1*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Review of reading feelings  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there nabi Welcome to WDC! *Writing*
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I came across your poem by hitting the random Read and Review click over on the left side of the page. *Reading*

My Thoughts:

Oh, such a sad poem about loving someone who doesn't return that love. *Frown*

Your poem, like a prose-poem telling the story that highlights the pain of loss. It also shows the rejection by her of a poem written for her that had deep feelings, meant for her, yet, it meant nothing to her. She instead liked the poem that was without true and meaningful feelings written from the heart and spirit. *HeartBroken*


Loved this part:

"Your empty promises
Lame excuses
Painful lies
Hollow words"

These are strong lines that give the reader an understanding of her character, and her coldness. *Tempcold*


Parting Thoughts:

This was a lovely free verse poem that really shows depth of feelings and love for another who doesn't return those feelings.

Conclusion:

Good job! *BowV*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of A Christmas Typo  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello twyls
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review. *Angelic*

I cam across your item on the Public Review page. *Smile*

Initial Thoughts:

By the title and brief description, I figured there would be a comedy of typo error in the annual Christmas letter sent to relatives. I just had to find out what the misspelled word would be. *Ha*

Further Thoughts:

I liked the dialogue between husband and wife over the email that was sent to Aunt Rosemary. Poor Aunt Rosemary would indeed have a difficult time accepting the word that would be quite offensive to her deeply held beliefs. *Laugh*

Parting Thoughts:

It's no wonder this story has been a winning entry at "The Writer's Cramp" 

Conclusion:

Amusing ...Good job! *ThumbsUpGreen*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of Linda Lael Miller  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, Purple Princess
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I felt like a little fun and games time tonight so I chose your Word Search puzzle.

My Thoughts:

The puzzle is about your favorite author, Linda Lael Miller. It's no surprise she writes Romance Novels, since I know you are the romance queen around these parts. *InLove2*

The puzzle had fifteen words to solve, They were very out West types of titles to uncover. Montana is prevalent within this. The words hid well within the large tile. Big sky was the last word I found. I must say I was having much more of a struggle with the last couple words. But I really do love a challenge. *Angelic*

Parting Thoughts:

I enjoyed your subject matter. I haven't read any of her books. However, by the titles used, I have a bit of an interest in exploring some of her books. I'm a big fan of all things Yellowstone, and Montana stories seem to grab my attention. *Laugh*

Conclusion:

Good job!
Thanks for the fun puzzle. *Puzzle1*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Tim Chiu
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read & Review.

Initial Thoughts:

The title is quite a hook. After that, I just wanted to take a further look.

Further Thoughts:

Yes, I could actual see flashes of some TV shows pass through my mind as I each stanza. The body bag, the forensics, indeed many crime shows delight the audience with a mystery to solve and an actor who may not survive the end of the show. *TV*

Of course what's TV without all the reality thrown at us. *Laugh* Yes, dancing and singing, surviving and dating their way onto our screen. *Mic*

Parting Thoughts:

Your poem's rhyme was very at ease. No struggle noticed making each rhyming word fit smoothly into the line. I didn't see any forced words that sacrifice quality in the name of rhyming. *Gear*

Conclusion:

Good rhythm and rhyme. Great subject matter we can identify with such entertainment on our TVs. Lots of imagery gleaned through the lines, too! Entering our living rooms, the art of entertainment.

Well done! *Film2*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hell there, Prosperous Snow celebrating
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

Initial Thoughts:

I came across this fun Word Search of yours while perusing the "Browse By Type" over on the left side of the page. Word Searches have been a bit of a leisure play time to relax the busy brain. *Brain2*

Further Thoughts:

I have to say that I really enjoyed an all words Brazil puzzle. Amazon jumped right out at me. It was fairly quick finding words for the most part. A couple gave me pause and I had to search over already discovered words hiding another word within. I like having a bit of a search to do. Twenty words is a good size, too. *Puzzle4*

Parting Thoughts:

Okay, I thought I was going to have to throw the towel in on the last word to uncover. "Ges." Yes, it's true. In most of these puzzles the shortest word is the most difficult to find. *Crazy*

Conclusion:

This was fun Word Search and had me going for quite awhile! *Puzzle1*

Good job! *BurstB*

Until next time--puzzle on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

My Thoughts & Impressions:

I decided to take a little brain teasing break today and hit the Crossowrd puzzle page. I saw this Thanksgiving one you have and figured I wouldn't have to hurt my brain too much deciphering that holiday. *Laugh*

Further Thoughts:

It was a good size puzzle of medium brain fuel power if one didn't know about the hard shelled fruit. *Laugh* The puzzle was fun and filled my mind with all things Thanksgiving.

Parting Thoughts:

I'm happy I took this little break and decided to exercise my brain a little more than with just Word Searches. But I think that was enough sweating for one day. Now, back to this present holiday. Happy Independence Day! *Fireworks4*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*



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Review of Firestarter  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello there, Sumojo
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I'm reviewing your item because I saw over on the right of the page under "Online Authors." I found the title and brief description to be a fine hook to make me look! *EyesLeft*

My Thoughts:

This was well-written story in the very restrictive 100 word limit. I loved the imagery that popped into my mind as I read about the suspected arsonist. I know, always blame the witch. *Rolling*

Observation:

"People in the town’s people had suspicions" The repetition of "people" just seems to throw a double-take view for my eyes. I had to be sure I saw it twice. So, I suggest replacing the second "people" with community.


Parting Thoughts:

I haven't seen 100 word contest entries in a long time. Is there still one up and going on the site? Perhaps this wasn't for a specific contest. If so, you have written a concise, no frills story that a reader can picture. It's a great talent to have. *Bigsmile*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*


I decided to try my hand at a quiz on spring flowers. *FlowerY*

My Thoughts:

This was quite interesting as there were a couple unexpected flowers that matched up with their scent description or relation to love, stress relief, and spirituality.

For the most part it was easy going. I recognized the flower and its meaning. However, this one was the sticky one: "Celebrated by the ancient Celts, this flower was a symbol of love." I hate to admit it, but I got this one wrong. I chose "primrose" rather than "apple blossom." *Sob* So, I got one wrong on the quiz. Of course it was the whole "Celtic" thing that threw me off. Apple blossoms have been considered a symbol of love in America. At least it was in my mother's day Her wedding band had carved apple blossoms on it. But then I thought maybe Celtic is "primrose." WRONG! *Cry*

Parting Thoughts:

This was a good quiz to exercise the brain. I usually stay away from pop quizzes because it reminds me of school and the nuns. *Laugh* You got me on that one incorrect flower. I will have to return again to some crosswords when I'm in the mood to drive myself to distraction! *Rolling*

Conclusion:

Well done! *Rose*

Until next time--quiz on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Review of Dirty Dishes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Review! *Angelic*

I came across this amusing poem while searching through the Comedy Genre.

First Thoughts:

Your title pulled me in to reading your poem. Why, You may ask? Because in an odd way the whole dish washing bit aligns with my upcoming Comedy Newsletter. *Ha*

Further Thoughts:

The poem itself has good rhythm and rhyme. It does a fine expose on dirty dishes too! How about those lazy dishes not washing themselves? Yeah, I know all about the sink full of dishes after company leaves and I've been cooking all day using up multiple pots and pans.

Observation:

A little typo, I believe? "I wish they would bath (e)and put themselves away"

Parting Thoughts:

Since there's a correlation with this poem to my Comedy Newsletter, I will be adding it to this week's Editors Picks. *Bigsmile*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, GERVIC 🐉
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I was on another Word Search search and found yours *Bigsmile*

My Thoughts:

This was a good size puzzle with medium difficulty. Many long words to find. Also, what I really love is the cross-over words within words already solved. One could miss those if not paying attention. *Magnify*

Further Thoughts:

I enjoyed the Wonderland clues. I could picture the characters in my mind. Your Introduction was picture perfect and tea party festive. Great image! It really drew my attention to the theme of the puzzle.

Parting Thoughts:

I really enjoyed your Word Search. It was fun to solve the Puzzle. It was also fun falling down that rabbit hole! *Rabbit2*

Conclusion:

Great job! *TeapotBr*


Until next time--Puzzle on! *Puzzle4*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Beck Firing back up!
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

First Thoughts:

I came across this humorous little item while searching the Comedy Genre page. Your brief description caught my attention.

Further Thoughts:

I was amused at the way you wove songs and movies and soap operas together to tell a story of betrayal and forgiveness.

Not just that, I really enjoyed visiting some of those soaps from the past. As it happens, I am binge watching Dark Shadows now that it's available on my TV apps. *Vamp*

Observation:

"I knew something was wrong when he [the] calls became less and less frequent."

Parting Thoughts:

There is another reason I'm reviewing this story. I will be highlighting it in the upcoming WDC Comedy Newsletter, due out on 7/5. For some reason it seems to fit the theme of my newsletter in a strange but soapy way! *Laugh*

Conclusion:

Well done -- and a lot of fun to read! *Web4*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Fictiøn Ðiva the Wørd Weava
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

Initial Thoughts:

I happened across your Word Search while on a search for this type of puzzle. *Puzzle2*

Your title drew me in since it's almost time for "Christmas in July." *Angelic* Loving anything Christmas I was pleased to find this Word Search.

Further Thoughts:

The puzzle was a good size. There are 25 words to uncover, giving the season of giving more bang for the buck. *GiftR* I had a jolly old time searching and remembering the Christmas festivities with family and friends.

The level is not too difficult, thus having more holiday spirited folks enjoying the relaxation of celebrating the holiday any day of the year. *BulbG*

Parting Thoughts:

I loved working this puzzle. It is festive and attractive to the player. The red and green introduction to the Word Search is well-placed. Good use of emoticons! Everything about it promises some delightful holiday fun *CandyCaneR*

Conclusion:

Awesome Word Search! *XMasTree*

Until next time-- Puzzle on! *Puzzle4*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Review of Thanksgiving  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hi AmyJo- back to basics again!
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
review.
You invited me back to your port to try my hand at more of your Word Searches.😁

I am delighted to have come across this one.

Thanksgiving is one of my favorite holidays. In my home at least, it's not a forgotten holiday.

Your Word search had 20 words to uncover. They all related to that holiday. It was a fine assortment.

I try to find smaller words ASAP because they can get lost easier. 😂
I actually started this review on my laptop , and right in the middle my power went out, so this review isn't too pretty. I hate typing longer stuff on a phone's keyboard.

What I loved?

I loved the images in my mind of Thanksgiving. 🦃 There are so many memories it invoked just uncovering the words.

Conclusion:

Well-themed puzzle that brings on nostalgic feelings.

Good job!

Regards,
WebWitch 🧙🧹
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, Ravenwand, Rising Star!
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I ran across this Word Search on "Browse By Type" option. I also hit "Completely Random" so I could find a different mix of searches that may not be recent ones, which I've been playing a lot of lately. *Puzzle1*

First Impression:

Your title captured my attention. No way would I turn down Candies of Yesteryear! I knew I'd be going back to my childhood. *Candy2*

Further Thoughts:

I love that there were 25 words to solve. It's a good size puzzle. But mostly, when your talking about old time candies it becomes personal. Players who have experienced these candies in their youth will be reminiscing those times of long ago. There were still penny candy variety stores when I was a youngster. The bag of candy you could get with a nickel would be amazing to see these days. *Candy7*

The last word I solved was "lemon drops" and I used to love those! The tile is only so big, so the many other penny candy we had back then couldn't fit on it. Besides, I guess you could do "Candies, the Sequel" if you so wished. I remember there was also the root beer flavored hard candy, some taffy and so many more. My mind was reaching back to my childhood picturing them. *Gears*

Parting Thoughts:

This had to be one of the best Word Searches I've played. It got me back to my childhood for a brief time. So much imagery woven within the words. *Candy1*

Conclusion:

Excellent Word Search! *Candy8*

Until next time, Puzzle on! *Puzzle4*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello there, Monty
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Review! *Angelic*

I saw this poem posted in your notebook while stopping by to with you a very Happy Birthday. *Cake*

First Impression:

It's a beautiful title letting the reader know that past love can and does hold a place in one's heart many years later.

Further Thoughts:

The poetry form is a Redondilla, which is described as :ABAB / 8 syllable scheme. You've done this beautifully. I enjoyed reading each lyrical-like line, as the memories unfolded. She was a sweet love in one's life many years ago. Gone away now, but definitely not forgotten. *Cupidheart*

Parting Thoughts:

It's no surprise this poem won First Place in the Heartthrob contest. It's a beautifully penned poem about sweet memories of a past love that flashed back into one's mind on the ride on an old road home.*Quill*

Conclusion:

Excellent poem, Monty! *HeartP*

Have a very Happy Birthday.

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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