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Well, you have to be open minded, and also keep an eye in every single line of your poem to understand it. For me, what I can absorb from your poem is, that there are a lot of thinkings, and a lot of ways to understand religion. There's not just one way to describe it, or to explain it, or maybe, even feel it. No one feels the same way about religion, or maybe we can say, it doesn't taste the same way, for you or for me or for someone else.
Time has gone by so fast, and it has changed the perspective everyone has over religion (that's what I can grab from your poem) at present we don't think like others did in the past, and so on. A LOT of believes, a lot of perseptions, and a LOT of different explanations. And for me, they all have the same old root. We have to believe in something. They are all believes! The one that fulfills us is the one that we have to choice. I hope I made myself clear. I'm not sure of that! (Spanish Speaker, and sometimes is hard for me to explain certain things in English).
Good poem.
Spelling
Did my best, and didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Good choices, this time you captured my attention.
Suggestions
Maybe you can create an essay, like explaining your feelings about religion. It may be interesting.
Overall
Lovely poem! Just lovely! I loved the ending, once again. I told you, you are great with endings, they kind of makes us realize the importance of your writings! GREAT message you are sending! We have to change our ways, or there will be nothing left on Earth. Every single part of it, is important in it's own way. Great job!
Spelling
Did my best, and there were no spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Good choices! This time, the description, even thou its like an authors note, it capture the eye of the reader, because we wonder what you mean with the honeybee. Good job!
Suggestions
No suggestions at all. Good job!
Keep on writing those poems, with such great messages.
Take care!
Winnie
Overall
Again I like what you did with the poem. I like the flow in this one. I loved the note at the end of the poem. It kinds of a shake, and is well written and informative. Very original! My favorite line is: better than common man's pen? It gaves sense to that part. Good line!
Spelling
Did my best again, and didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Good choice for title, and this time, your description, kinds of capture our attention, with that question you added, kind of funny. Good job!
Overall
Again a good poem. Again I like the rhyme! You are good with rhymes! I like the way you include your protest while you are kind of talking about something else, you kind of disguise it! Good jo! My favorite lines are:
but form and meter always disagree,
and thus the tree is not an amputee.
Spelling
Again, did my best, and no spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Again the same suggestion about the description, and the title is a good choice.
Suggestions
No more suggestions. Good job!
Keep on writing! You are a good writer!
Take care!
Winnie
Overall
A good poem. Again I loved the ending. You kind of give meaning to your poems at the end of them. You kind of add a line that makes us realize the whole meaning of the poem. Just at the ending. I like that! LOVE that last line. Good job! My favorite part is:
its freedom I'd won,
I noticed the spider
starving and stound...
Spelling
Again, did my best, and didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Good title, but again my suggestion. Add that like an authors note in the body of the item, and include a line in the description that would capture the eye of the reader easily. Just a suggestion.
Overall
I like this one better. I like the rhyme in it, and it was fun to read from beginning to an end. The way you described your protest this time, with all those description, it was really fun, and I could feel every single line of it. You did a great job! LOVE the ending! That ending is true. Sometimes we as writers feel that way.
Spelling
Did my best again, and didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Good title, and again, my suggestion about the description. I would use: sometimes a poet has to cut words to write a poem others think is wise... or something like that, that can capture the eye of the reader. Something that would makes us wonder, and have to read it.
Suggestions
No more suggestions! You did a great job!
Overall
Good morning! This is an original piece. I think is kind of funny, and also is a good critic, like you said: a protests against form and meter. Maybe it can also work better if you create a protest in free verse. Not just following form, meter and rhyme. The note at the end of the poem is great, because that way we can jump to the others. Good job!
Spelling
I did my best and didn't found spelling errors. Well done! (Spanish Speaker).
Title/Description
Good choice for a title, but about the description, maybe you can add something more, that can capture the eye of the reader easily. Maybe a line from the poem. You can always add that kind of lines (like the one you included on the description part) as an author note in the body of the item. Use the description part to grab the attention of the reader. Just a little suggestion.
Suggestions
No more suggestions, you did a good job.
I like the prologue, but in my opinion, it needs a little more tension, something more to capture the eye of the reader, so we can run and read the rest.
Spelling
I did my best and didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Good title, about the description, like I said at first, you can add a little more so it can capture the eye of the reader easily.
I really like the poem. I like the mood, and the words you used. It's easy to read and understand, and it kept me reading till the end. Love the ending, and my favorite part is:
"What little light there is stares back at me,
Unblinking
Like a teasing salvation I can never reach,
A reminder of a happiness I once had."
I felt EVERY single part of it. Great job!
Spelling
I did my best and didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Good titile, and the description is perfect. It fits perfectly with what you wrote about. It captures the eye of the reader easily. Good job!
Overall
I really like this poem. Easy to understand, it kept me reading from begining to an end, and it portrays a lot of emotions. I love that you included the oak, and how you describe, or talk about the feelings of both of them. Well written! Good job!
Spelling
I didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Perfect title, it fits with what you wrote about. The description is algo a good one, and it's very informative and organized. Well done!
Overall
This is beautiful. As I was reading, I thought the same thing as you did. But it wasn't what I thought, he was just playing, that was beautiful! Thanks for sharing it with the community, and it's nice how you are learning all those things, while taking care of your family. Bless them all. Well written and a good read. Your family is beautiful!
Spelling
I've done my best, and didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Great choices for both of them. They relate perfectly with what you wrote about. Well done!
Suggestions
Not at all! Write on!
Take care and keep on writing!
Winnie
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This is a great folder! Great items in there, that are fun to read. Good job!
Spelling
No spelling errors.
Title/Description
Good choices. You really don't need much, because this is just a folder with your collection of poems, so you used the right description. Well done!
Suggestions
To keep adding stuff here. They are fun to read. Keep it up!
Take care and keep on writing!
Winnie
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LOL! Yeah, I think is fun! Good job. Again fun to read, and it made me laugh. You accomplish the challenge of creating that haiku. Cow is not a simple prompt for a haiku, I LOVE haikus. Great metric. Well done!
Spelling
I've done my best again, and didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Good choices, you don't need much on the description. The title fits well. Well done!
Suggestions
Not at all!
Take care and keep on writing!
Winnie
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I loved it. It's a great poem, fun to read, and it kept me reading till the end. With those simple words, you accomplished a great poem. LOVE the ending! It gave meaning to the title, and the whole piece. Great job!
Spelling
Again I didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
They both are great choices. Well done! And like I said before the title is great, and the meaning of it is in the end.
Suggestions
Not at all!
Take care and keep on writing!
Winnie
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This is really good for being your first poem like you stated on the item. Great job. Is sad too. I know how it feels, I still miss my loved cat Camilo Stephano. I loved him, and I still do.
I like how you repeated some sentences, and it gave meaning and created the sad mood. Well done!
Spelling
I've done my best, and didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Good choices for both of them. You don't need much on the description, it fits perfectly with what you wrote about. Well done!
Suggestions
Not at all! Keep on writing!
Take care and keep on writing!
Winnie
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This is good. Well written, and easy to understand. It kept me reading. The begining of it is my favorite part. Good job!
Spelling
I've done my best, and didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Good choices for both of them. The description is ok, you don't need too much there because what you wrote fits well with it. Well done!
Suggestions
One suggestion for improvement would be to take out some of the "hope" words, because they sound so repetitive. I know the main theme is that, but you don't have to repeat the word so much. It interrupt the reader, and it takes a little bit of the feeling you are trying to portray.
In some cases you just need to add "it" instead of "hope" that way it won't be too repetitive. This is just a suggestion for improvement. Your work is good!
Take care and keep on writing!
Winnie
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This is a beautiful piece. Written from the heart. Thanks for sharing it with the community. Is a beautiful thing what you are doing, and it's also a treasure to keep, because all those memories worth gold. God bless you and yours! Great job!
Spelling
I've done my best and didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
I love the description, because it makes us wonder. I love that. The title is perfect too, because it relates also with what you wrote, and the meaning of it. Great!
Suggestions
No suggestions! Just to write more beautiful items written from the heart. Keep it up!
Take care and write on!
Winnie
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I really like what you did with this little poem. In a few words, you created a great poem. You used the right words, and I love the ending. Great job my friend!
Spelling
I've done my best and didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Great choices for both of them, I love the descriptions, because it makes you wonder, waits for what??? Great!
Suggestions
Not at all!
Take care and keep on writing!
HUGS
Winnie
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This is a good work. Well written, good rhyme, and you kept me reading from begining to an end. I also love the photo! It was good, and also responsible of you to add the note at the begining of the item. Great job!
Spelling
I've done my best and didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Good choice for a title, and I like the way you used it through the poem at the ending. About the description, is good of you to add such a note, but for the description, you can add something more (you have that on the note in the body of the item), something that will capture the eye of the reader easily, and makes us wonder. The piece deserves it.
Suggestions
Nothing more, just the one I gave for the description.
Take care and write on!
Winnie
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This is beautiful and sad at the same time. I love the words you used, simple and the perfect ones. Good rhyme! The ending is very sad, and I love how you ended the poem, using the title. Great job!
Spelling
I did my best, and didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
I love the title, because how I said before, you gave it meaning at the end of the poem. Awesome! For the description, you can add a little more if you want to, like something that will capture the eye of the reader easily.
Good read!
Take care and write one!
Your friend always; Winnie
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You did a great job with the prompt. I like the format, it's easy to understand. You wrote with simple words, and in a way, that you just keep on reading till the end, because of that, we can capture the meaning, or what you are trying to portray, (the meaning you gave to the prompt) in an easiest way. Love the flow of it. Thanks for your entry!
Spelling
I did my best, and didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Good job, because the description, even thou is short, it relates, and it captures our attention. Like always thanks for the author's note at the end.
Thanks again for your entry, and have a great night!
Take care!
Winnie
Wow! These photos are beautiful! Your grandsons are beautiful! I love those eyes, and Congratulations on your new grandson. That photo of him, baby, is gorgeous. He looks so peaceful!
God bless your family!
Take care and have a great night!
Winnie
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Well done! 
I LOVE haikus. Great metric. Well done! 