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Review of Beauty  
Review by Winnie
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
CONGRATULATIONS! You are a NEW YELLOW!!!
Hi! Hope you are doing fine! *Smile*

*Note* Overall
I liked this poem, and all the emotions it portrays. Easy to understand and it kept me reading. Liked the way you repeated the last lines. Good job!

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*Note* Title/Description
Again the title works, but the description is a little weak, because like I suggested before, it can help you capture the attention of the reader. What you used can be added as an author's note, and you don't really need it. *Wink*

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*Note* Spelling
Great job with the spelling! *Thumbsup*

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*Note* Suggestions
The only suggestion that I have is to also repeat at the ending the line that you kept repeating. It will give more power to the ending. The reader is used to read those lines, and at the ending we don't see them. How come? They would fit perfectly as an ending! Just a little suggestion. You did a good job!!

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Keep on writing!
Take care!
Winnie *Smile*
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Review of Eighteen  
Review by Winnie
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
CONGRATULATIONS! You are a NEW YELLOW!!!
Hi! Hope you are doing fine! *Smile*

*Note* Overall
Good poem. I liked the flow from the last verses than the flow at the beginning of the piece. I think they work better. Good way of ending the poem, because it's then that we understand what its all about. Good job!

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*Note* Title/Description
Like the title but I suggest that you add something at the description that will capture the eye of the reader. Not just describe what's the poem about, but choose some verse that will atract their attention.

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*Note* Spelling
None seen. Great job with the spelling!

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*Note* Suggestions
A little suggestion would be to edit the middle part, and take out the word, forward, and all, and all those spaces and ~ symbols you used that take the concentration of the reader out of the poem. They don't give it strenght. Just a little suggestion to improve both ratings and the flow. Good job!

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Keep on writing!
Take care!
Winnie *Smile*
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Review of I feel... I want  
Review by Winnie
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
CONGRATULATIONS! You are a NEW YELLOW!!!
Hi! Hope you are doing fine! *Smile*

*Note* Overall
Another beautiful and full of emotions poem!! Liked it very much! Great use of words and the rhyme is great! On the first part, I think it doesn't flow so well, but the rest of it is great, the flow is there and the feelings too. GREAT ending!!

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*Note* Title/Description
Good choices for both of them!

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*Note* Spelling
No spelling errors found. Great job!!

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*Note* Suggestions
No more suggestions, othere than to work with the flow on the first part of the poem! Good job!

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Keep on writing!
Take care!
Winnie *Smile*
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Review of Slowly  
Review by Winnie
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
CONGRATULATIONS! You are a NEW YELLOW!!!
Hi! Hope you are doing fine! *Smile*

*Note* Overall
Loved the poem! Great entry for the contest, and congratulations for the mention! Love every single word that you used. Every line has power. You can feel it! GREAT job!

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*Note* Title/Description
Great choices for both of them! It captures the eyes of the readers!! Well done!

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*Note* Spelling
None found! Great job!

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*Note* Suggestions
I don't have any suggestions, other than always write from the heart! Beautiful work!!

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Keep on writing!
Take care!
Winnie *Smile*
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Review of The Reading  
Review by Winnie
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
CONGRATULATIONS! You are a NEW YELLOW!!!
Hi! Hope you are doing fine! *Smile*

*Note* Overall
LOL!! Love the ending! Cute little entry for the contest! I know about that contest, I used to write entries for it! Not an easy one because of the word count, but you managed to create a funny story with the words you used. Well done!! It was fun to read!

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*Note* Title/Description
Good title, simple, but it works. The description, again is simple, but the story is simple too, I don't think you need a lot on the description. Good job!

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*Note* Spelling
Great job, no spelling errors found!

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*Note* Suggestions
I know it's a contest entry, but I was thinking, maybe you can add a note at the end, saying something like: here is the complete story inspired on the entry I did for this contest, and you can write a longer version of it, to make it more interesting, and to increase the rating. Just a little suggestion, you did a great job!!

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Keep on writing!
Take care!
Winnie *Smile*
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Review by Winnie
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
CONGRATULATIONS! You are a NEW YELLOW!!!
Hi! Hope you are doing fine! *Smile*

*Note* Overall
Loved this poem! I cuold feel every line. Great use of words, and each line captures you. My favorite line is: I become a keeper of the flame! WOW!! LOVE it!! This is what I mean, put energy and feelings into it. You wrote it from the heart, the reader can feel it. GREAT job!!! Great ending!

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*Note* Title/Description
Great title, fits perfectly. The description works, but if you want to capture the eyes of the reader, you can use a phrase from the poem, for example, my favorite line, or any other line that you think can make that reader, say, WAIT!! I have to read this, what does this means? Just a suggestions, you did a good job!

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*Note* Spelling
No spelling errors that I could notice! Great job!

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*Note* Suggestions
No more suggestions!! Love it as it is!

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Keep on writing!
Take care!
Winnie *Smile*
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Review by Winnie
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
CONGRATULATIONS! You are a NEW YELLOW!!!
Hi! Hope you are doing fine! *Smile*

*Note* Overall
Good poem! You included all the words, that I imagine were the given prompts, in bold. Good job including them with the flow of the poem. It was fun to read.

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*Note* Title/Description
Good title! About the description, my suggestion is to add what you have as an author's note at the end of the poem, and use that space given to capture the attention of the reader. It can work better. Just a little suggestion.

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*Note* Spelling
No spelling errors, great job!

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*Note* Suggestions
The only suggestion I can think of, is to make it longer, give more energy to what the game represent, because the ending was kind of forced. Maybe you can add more limericks, each one with a message you want to portray about what the game means to you, or something like that, and one at the ending, letting us know about the winter starting in Australia, that's why the game ended!! Just a suggestion. You did a good job!

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Keep on writing!
Take care!
Winnie *Smile*
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Review by Winnie
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi! *Smile* Hope you are doing fine!
(Spanish Speaker)
Thanks for your entry for:
 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1842689 by Not Available.

Still judging!

*Notev* Overall: *Reading*
GREAT story! I loved the way you narrated it all. Words easy to understand, and it kept me reading from beginning to an end. Well done! Love the ending!!

*Notev* Tittle/Description
GREAT choices for both of them, they capture the eye of the reader easily.

*Notev* Suggestions: *Pencil*
None! I like it as it is! I didn't found typos! *Thumbsup*

*Notev* Notes:
Keep on writing such stories, full of tension, and that everyone can understand. LOVE animals, and also LOVE snakes! I had one when I was 24, she was called "Candido" She died! *Cry*
Keep it up!!!

Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie

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Review of My Favorite Bison  
Review by Winnie
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi! *Smile* Hope you are doing fine!
(Spanish Speaker)
Thanks for your entry for:
 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1842689 by Not Available.

Still judging!

*Notev* Overall: *Reading*
BEAUTIFUL! JUST LOVELY!!! Thanks for sharing such an amazing story of LOVE! *Heart* Loved the way you described your story, and all the emotions. LOVE the ending. So sad, but at the same time we can understand and feel the love between the two of you and also the pain. I know how it feels!!! WOW! Thanks again for sharing!!!

*Notev* Tittle/Description
Good description and title. It captures the eye of the reader. Well done!

*Notev* Suggestions: *Pencil*
I didn't found typos! *Thumbsup*
A thing that you must edit, is that at the beginning of the story, you leaved a huge space, and we can't find the writing. You have to go to the edit page, and scroll down till you find your item at the end, and then you have to hold the shift button from your keyboard, and press on the up arrows till you reach the top of it. Then you click on delete or backspace, to delete all that space. Be careful you don't delete the writings, just the space between the first line you wrote and the beginning of the page. PLEASE do that! Also at the end of the item, such a beautiful ending, you have to edit the { you have with the i, to make it work. That's all!!! Let me know if you edit it!!


*Notev* Notes:
Keep on writing such items from the heart, and sharing your love with animals! That's what makes the difference! Blessings to you and to the bison in heaven. Lots of love! *Heart*

Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie

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Review of My Favorite Bison  
Review by Winnie
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! *Smile* Hope you are doing fine!
(Spanish Speaker)
Thanks for your entry for:
 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1842689 by Not Available.


*Notev* Overall: *Reading*
It's a BEAUTIFUL photo! And it's also sad to know that he died! I'm so sorry! LOVE can be found, like you said in unusual things, or places. You found it! Blessings!!! *Heart*

*Notev* Tittle/Description
Good description and title. It captures the eye of the reader, because we want to see who the bison is, and what the photo is all about. Well done!

*Notev* Suggestions: *Pencil*
None! I like it as it is! The photo SPEAKS! The look on both of you is beautiful!! *Thumbsup*

*Notev* Notes:
Keep up loving unusual things, people, places. LOVE is amazing, and the love for animals, is a beautiful thing that I also share! Blessings always!!!

Sorry for the delay in judging! Like I posted on the forum, my grandmother died, and it was very difficult for us. Love sometimes hurts!
Still judging!

Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie

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Review of God's Heavy Hand  
Review by Winnie
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi! *Smile* Hope you are doing fine!
(Spanish Speaker)

*Notev* Overall: *Reading*
I LOVED your poem!! STRONG message, and I LOVE the ending! My favorite part is:
God's heavy hand
lifting me up.
Not yet, not this time!
AMEN!!!
Like the way you played with each verse, making it STRONGER as you went on writing. PERFECT ending! *Smile*

*Notev* Tittle/Description
Love the title!! The description is good, but as a recommendation, you can add it at the end of the item like an author's note. You can use that space to capture the eye of the reader. The item deserves it, something like a part of the poem, for example: Not yet, not this time!! Or something like that, that can work with the title, and make the reader notice the item, and say: hey, I HAVE to read it!!! *Wink*

*Notev* Suggestions: *Pencil*
None! Just the one I gave you on the description part!! I like it as it is! *Thumbsup*
I'm Spanish speaker, but I think that in here *Right* Where's my friends?
it should say: where are my friends, because friends is plural. *Smile* That's all! Good job!

*Notev* Notes:
Keep on writing, such inspirational items, because for me it was an inspiration to read.


Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie

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Review by Winnie
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
Hi! *Smile* Hope you are doing fine!
(Spanish Speaker)
This Review is for the Valentine Raid Party
 
STATIC
Over the Rainbow POWER Raid!  (E)
March over the Rainbow with Power!
#1781789 by eyestar~*


*Notev* Overall: *Reading*
LOL! I had lots of fun reading this poem! I don't know why you ask for 1 stars reviews, because its fun. Good job!!!

*Notev* Tittle/Description
Good title! About the description, you should add that at the end of the poem as an author's note, and use that space to capture the eye of the reader. Just a little suggestion!

*Notev* Suggestions: *Pencil*
None! I like it as it is! I didn't found typos! *Thumbsup*

*Notev* Notes:
keep on writing, and creating such original and out of the ordinary poems. *Smile*

Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie

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Review of Am I Awake?  
Review by Winnie
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi! *Smile* Hope you are doing fine!
This Review is for your entry for the contest *Down*

 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1842689 by Not Available.


Thanks for participating! Still JUDGING!
The Winner will be announced soon! Good luck!!! *Bigsmile*


*Notev* Overall: *Reading*
LOVED your entry even though its not a flash fiction. For me it's more like an entry for a blog. The flow is great! It kept me reading from beggining to an end. LOVED the last part. And the ending is PERFECT!! But again, it's more a blog, you are narrating instead of creating a flash fiction. Needs that spice!


*Notev* Tittle/Description
The title is perfect, and the ending makes it powerful. Great choice! the description can be added as an author's note at the end of your writing. Use that space to capture the eye of the reader. *Wink*

*Notev* Suggestions: *Pencil*
I didn't found typos! *Thumbsup* To try to write more flash fictions, to portray the scene with more action and feeling. I'll be adding more exercises and examples of flash fictions, so you and others can see what I mean. You are the second entry with this type of narration/blog like entry!

*Notev* Notes:
Keep on writing and participating of writing.com contest! Keep an eye on the forum. Still Judging!

Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie
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Review of Stormy's Spirit  
Review by Winnie
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW! It's SO HARD to write this review! I MISS YOU SO MUCH my friend! She was my angel at that time! We conforted each other through tought times!
I WILL ALWAYS REMEMBER THE: ((((((((((((((WINNIE)))))))))))))
message I recieved EVERY TIME I stopped by the Chat (we were part of the Scrollers, at that time). I MISS THAT SO MUCH!

Some would think that a TRUE friendship can't be built over the internet. MILES MILES AWAY! Each of us being SO DIFFERENT! Different cultures, different languages, diferent skin. But that's NOT TRUE! It only takes another heart to pay attention and listen, and be there for you EVERY SINGLE day through good and bad times. Accepting you as YOU ARE. Not even knowing the tone of your voice, but the TRUE colors of our hearts! The most important thing that keeps a friendship alive. She was one of those TRUE friends!
Forever Rest In Peace! *Angel*

I know from heaven you are reading every single word. As I write this tears are falling down my face! You'll always be remembered, and your words and teachings will always be in our hearts. *Heart*

Continuing with the review:
I LOVE this story! BEAUTIFUL and the way you tell it, so vivid. I read it before, but never had the strenght to review it. It's hard enough!
You could feel what the puppy is feeling in every single line! AWESOME writing!!! Like all your writings were! I can't say no more!

Writing.com will always miss you!

Here's an item that mean SO MUCH to me in which I included you and thank you for all your advises and words. You were my BEST friend here ever. Worth the mention!

If readers out there want to read it, here is the link:
"Invalid Entry" 

If you want to honor this awesome writer, woman, friend, and fighter for animal rights, PLEASE visit her port and give her a review. She DESERVES it, and I know she'll be sending blessing from above!

Blessings to all!
*Heart* LOVE U BLUE!!!

I'll create an item on my port, with these words I've included in here. I think it's worth it!
Thanks for reading!!!
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Review by Winnie
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi! *Smile* Hope you are doing fine!
(Spanish Speaker)
This Review is for:
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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell


*Notev* Overall:
Great item and a wonderful idea! I'm having SO MUCH fun writing every single day with all those brainstorming prompts!! Thanks for the challenge!!


*Notev* Suggestions:
To NEVER close the challenge!! *Wink* Nothing more! Love it as it is!!

*Notev* Notes:
Great job! Keep on creating such fun items for the community to enjoy!! *Thumbsup*

Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie
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Review of Absence of Time  
Review by Winnie
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E
Hi! *Smile* Hope you are doing fine!
(Spanish Speaker)
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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell


*Notev* Overall:
It did! I loved the poem. The rhyme here is not needed. I usually write free style poetry too! It helps me create the mood easily! You did a great job, and used the right words to create the scene. The flow was perfect. Liked the ending!

*Notev* Suggestions:
None, I like it as it is!

*Notev* Notes:
Keep on writing with such emotions. Great job!!!

Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie
*Confettiv* HAPPY 2012 to YOU! *Confettiv*



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Review of Finally Free  
Review by Winnie
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi! *Smile* Hope you are doing fine!
(Spanish Speaker)
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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell


*Notev* Overall:
I got a little lost in this one! Maybe was because of my main language being Spanish, but I did! *Sad* I didn't understood the middle of it. I understood the beginning, and the ending, I liked it so much, but got lost in the middle, not sure why. Maybe the sentences used like that, made me wonder, and I tried reading it twice, but it happened again. Good job with the flow!

*Notev* Suggestions:
To try to make it simple! Other than that, good job!

*Notev* Notes:
Keep on writing! Good job!

Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie
*Confettiv* HAPPY 2012 to YOU! *Confettiv*



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Review by Winnie
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
Hi! *Smile* Hope you are doing fine!
(Spanish Speaker)
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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell


*Notev* Overall:
Thanks for sharing this prayers from your childhood with the community. Simple, easy to understand, and like the colors you used throught the poem. Goes well with the writing! It's like spirituality expressed through color! Good touch!

*Notev* Suggestions:
None!

*Notev* Notes:
Keep on writing and sharing with other light and spirituality. Blessings!

Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie
*Confettiv* HAPPY 2012 to YOU! *Confettiv*



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Review of Heaven's Tears  
Review by Winnie
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi! *Smile* Hope you are doing fine!
(Spanish Speaker)
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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell


*Notev* Overall:
It's a sad poem. Make us feel a little hopeless! *Sad* Easy to understand and kept me reading from beginning to an end. Great title!

*Notev* Suggestions:
Maybe you can add another verse where you can tell us, how to make a difference and don't let us feeling that pain, and feeling ashamed because God is looking at us helpless. You used strong emotions, and we end up feeling that same way. A little inspirational words! only a suggestion!

*Notev* Notes:
Keep on writing those spiritual items! *Smile*


Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie
*Confettiv* HAPPY 2012 to YOU! *Confettiv*



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Review by Winnie
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi! *Smile* Hope you are doing fine!
(Spanish Speaker)
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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell



Hi, I'm back! *Bigsmile*

*Notev* Overall:
Very original! Great way of honoring the writings you like, by sharing their links for others to visit and R/R/R their works.

*Notev* Suggestions:
Maybe make a list with the writers, instead of putting them in a whole paragraph. It will look very organized, and it will be easier for us readers to search for an author, and click on it. just a suggestions, your idea is GREAT!!

*Notev* Notes:
Keep on honoring those you like and sharing them witht he community of writing.com. Keep on writing too!!


Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie
*Confettiv* HAPPY 2012 to YOU! *Confettiv*



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Review of I Believe  
Review by Winnie
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi! *Smile* Hope you are doing fine!
(Spanish Speaker)
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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell


*Notev* Overall:
Beautiful! Very spiritual. Easy to understand and I like the way you used simple words, but the perfect ones to explain what you believe in. Great job!!! Love that ending!!!

*Notev* Suggestions:
None! Like it as it is!!


*Notev* Notes:
Keep on writing from the heart and expressing your beliefs. That make the writing more vivid. Keep up the good work!

Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie
*Confettiv* HAPPY 2012 to YOU! *Confettiv*



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Review of Hot and Spicy  
Review by Winnie
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi! *Smile* Hope you are doing fine!
(Spanish Speaker)
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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell


*Notev* Overall:
Again loved the rhyme!!! Easy to understand, and the ending is beautiful! Although I'm a vegetarian, I understood every single line and feelings you were trying to portray. Well written! My favorite part is: My heart swells with gratitude/to Nature for her magnitude
ALWAYS! Thanks for sharing!!

*Notev* Suggestions:
None, like it as it is!!!

*Notev* Notes:
Great job! Like the way you use the rhyme like I've said before. Keep on writing from the heart!!!

Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie
*Confettiv* HAPPY 2012 to YOU! *Confettiv*



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Review by Winnie
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell


*Notev* Overall:
Liked the item a lot! Loved the way you play with words, and start the next verse with one of the last words you used. GREAT title, to describe how lies work. Well done!!

*Notev* Suggestions:

Some typos:
You repeated the word from:
Lies form from the lips of the teller

everyone wants a piece of that cake.

If you take out the word cake, and add it, works better, helps with the flow and you don't repeat the word cake so much! *Wink*


*Notev* Notes:
Keep on writing and filling your poems with your own style. Good job!!


Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie
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Review of Just me  
Review by Winnie
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell


*Notev* Overall:
Hey!!! Nice to meet you!!! Thanks for sharing a photo with the community. I want to upload photos too, so I'll be upgrading soon! *Wink* Can't wait to share mine too!!


*Notev* Notes:
keep on being part of writing.com and share more photos!!! *Smile* Blessings!


Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie
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Review by Winnie
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi! *Smile* Hope you are doing fine!
(Spanish Speaker)
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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell


*Notev* Overall:
Good entry for the contest!!! Liked it very much, it was funny and fun to read. Like the ending! Good job!!!

*Notev* Suggestions:
Spice it a little with more colors, and fonts. That's all!

*Notev* Notes:
Keep on writing and participating in contests! Wish you luck!

Feel free to visit my port and read/rate/review/comment! I'll do the same for you! *Wink*
Take care and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*
Winnie
*Confettiv* HAPPY 2012 to YOU! *Confettiv*
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