Hi again, and I'm so happy that I took the time to read it! 
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WOW! I have no words! I think one of them should be stunning!!!
You did an AWESOME job! I'm in love with every quote you added to this writing, and with each and every line you wrote here.
It's perfectly written, because it not only keeps us reading, and reading till the end, but we also want to read more, and we are at the end, like, it's over, why? All this information, is so GOOD! It opens the eyes of the reader, their minds! Thanks for sharing it! And we, the ones that think just like you, say: I couldn't have say it better!
Simply amazing!!!
My favorite parts is the beginning of it! Because is ALL TRUE! That's the way that I feel when I'm going to write, and while I was reading, I was thinking the same thing!
In the quote, The worth tragedy for a poet...
Your explanation for it was so right. WOW! The way you explained how you come up with the term multivalence is perfect! You play with the words in a way, that no matter how difficult it sounds, you can understand the meaning of it all! Great job!!!!
A poem is never finished... Loved that part too, how you explained the importance of not letting form and metter ruin what the Muse communicates.
In another part I loved when you said, that's why a live concert is much better then the recording. It's TRUE!!! That's the idea! That's exactly how it feels!
WOW! I really don't know what more can I say, but to make it short, it's just an awesome work you have done here. I wish you the best as a writer, and I'm glad that I took the time to read your writings, and this item. Thanks for the link!!!
Thanks for sharing it with the community, and I'll include it on the reviewing page, so others can read it too. Is a piece that makes you grow, as a writer/poet, and in many other ways.
I almost forgot, I also loved the part about the journaling, and meditation, you are completely RIGHT! That's what it does! We can listen to ourselves, we can also listen to the silence, you know what I mean? And also, it makes us GROW in many ways, specially spiritually, and as a poet.
Beautifly done!
Wish you the best once more!
You are a great writer!
Spelling
Like always, didn't found spelling errors. Well done!
Title/Description
Perfect title, and after reading the whole piece, I have to say, DON'T change a thing about it, because it's perfect. Fits perfectly with the item. About the description, I think you can add something more, like I always say, you know it,  and this piece DESERVES exposure, so go on and spice it a bit.
Suggestions
Write more, and more and more ....  Another item like this one, it fills the heart of a writter, we feel understood, and we feel at home reading it, well, that's how I felt, because not a lot of readers out there can understand a writer (the ones that don't feel that kind of love for writing, and poetry, and true thinking, you know what I mean?).
Keep on writing, and again I wish you the best!
A writer from PR
Winnie
Namaste
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Thanks for sharing, and it was a good read! Good job!