First I would like to welcome you to the writing.com family. I hope that you will find the members as helpful to your life as well and your writing skills. That being said I enjoyed the poem. The rhyme is good, and the message is one that we can relate to. I think that we all have a secret love of writing.
This is a wonderful poem. The flow was wonderful and the rhyme helped create a great read. The message was well given, and we are led into your words. The story is well written to bring the reader into the words. I can see the emotion.
This seems like an interesting story idea. I can not wait to have the time to read the entries and try to create a passage. This sounds and reminds me of the walking dead, and how they have different producers. Each producer comes up with a different episode.
This is an interesting prompt. I love that a person has more than one prompt to choose from. I think that all the situations are wonderful and could be a lot of fun. I really like the magic element, and I hope that I get a chance to enter.
First I would like to welcome you to the writing.com family. I found this poem in the Comedy: Laughing At Yourself newsletter. The flow was smooth, and the lines were much like Dr. Zeus. I found myself smiling. The humor would crack my son's up. They have a party with toots of any kind.
First I want to welcome you to the writing.com family. I would like to congratulate you for being highlighted in the Comedy: Laughing At Yourself newsletter. The story was wonderful. The spacing was great on my eyes. I would have like the font to be a little bigger to make it easier on my vision.
That being said the dialog is so good, and this is a trait that I have a problem with.
This is a well written poem. I think that I felt emotion that you meant for us to feel . The flow was good, and the message was relatable. The emotion was raw, the flow was smooth. I felt that the love and fun between the two characters of the poem.
I would really like to learn the skill of writing screen plays. I can never connect the events and environments well. That being said, I think that this is a well told story. I like the characters, and find that you have a skill to introduce them in the item well.
I love the message, and this is a wonderful way to make a statement. The flow was smooth and the beat was easy. I enjoyed the way you made sure that the reader knows that this is how you feel, and that you still pray for and appreciate those who do serve.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida Matilda Wright
I love this and I certainly agree. I am a disabled mother of three teenagers of my own and a step mother of three teenaged girls. I don't work for a pay check, but I do need a rest. Each child has a different personality, and each has his/her own set of conflicts. There isn't anything else I would rather do than be a mother, but please a candle lit bath would be nice.
Thank you for reminding me that even God Rested..
Ida Matilda Wright
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I love this poem. It is filled with words that we all can relate to. The flow was smoothe, and the message spoke to me. I find that it give reality a new hope. Sometimes reality is a word that makes us trimble and worry keeping us from good sleep.
The shape of the poem caught my attention. I moved from Kentucky to Sarasota Florida, and I knwo that I may never see snow again. My sons are going to see an ice meching that creates a pile of cold snow for them to play in. I know that they miss the simple things. I do too.
This is another well written story that I enjoyed. I am amazed by your descriptive writing. This is one that I could imagine the grandfhater's crooked finger. This may seem like a small part of the story, but I feel that it is one of the most important because it gives the entire story character.
First I am thankful to you for the link to check out your other work. I want to check out your publisher.
This is a very good story. I loved the conversation skills ( this is a skill that I have to struggle with) I love the story line. The flow made the story easy to read. This is a story well told.
This is a great poem. The flow was smooth and the description brought tears to my eyes. I haven't seen Christmas stories that show what the ultimate reason of the season is. I was so happy to see the emotion when telling of the sacrafice that was being made so that we can have a life forever more enjoyable than any Christmas.
I love this story. It is wonderful for this time of year. I have also missed a lot of the Christmases past. I loved that this story reminded of the many stories that we have built up in our lives, and that we need to help our children notice that they are making memories too.
This is well written, the story had a smoothe flow, and you painted the holiday picture to make me feel the emotion.
I am a fan of the Walking dead. I loved this story, and the little pictures are cute too. The format and flow kept my attention. This was a cute and amusing story. I think that it could be written into a chapter book. Like how she likes becoming one of the family if she can be given emotions after....
I lover peotry, and I love learning new things. Though I may not remember exactly what this form of poetry is, I will be happy to check it out. The lines flowed smooth, and the rhyme made it an easy and enjoyable read. I love the image that you were able to pain with your words.
First I noticed your number by your case and guess that you are new to our home. Welcome. I hope that you find it as helpful and friendly as I have since nov 07.
That being said, I love this poem. The strength in which it is written is encouraging. It flowed well and me last line sumes it up perfectly. There is so much beauty in the seas and sky that is more beautiful than anything man can make.
This item deserves to be highlighted in the newletter that I found it. I like the can do attitude of the author. I love that the story was about a writer. Not many people write a story about someone who writes their own stories. The twists kept me guessing, and the way you described both the events and the character work well to tell a visable story.
This story could be taken deeply, and that its message is one that should get through along with the smiles. I know that there are times that I would rather be alone than to make choices that a parent has to make, or pay a bill, or just not know what tomorrow holds. This is a great message told with a smile.\
This made me smile. the changing of the color was cute. I loved the theme of singing it to the Rudolph song. I looked over and cought the person next to me at the library giving me a look. I thought I was being silent as I sang the words in that tune. I smile and shrugged my sholders. With that I will say great job.
I loved this story. I found it in a newsletter, and it is one that would go great in a book with the last story that I read about a vampire with a broken tooth. This captures a different side of the creature that we do not see on the screen. It was funny and well described.
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