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Review of Finestral Opening  
Review by Cliff
Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting muse. This took a lot of observation and
skill to turn these shoes into such an interesting read.

I like the ending, where you choose the last shoes for
yourself. Interesting selection. Dubbing them the hard
workers.

Keep writing.

Peace, Cliff
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Review of Rx: Laughter  
Review by Cliff
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Excellent, Sophie. I hope your mother is still doing
well and laughing every day.

I don't see anything in here that I would correct, so
I'll note the positives.

I'm sure the movie industry would hire you to plug
their movies. I've never seen "Weekend at Bernie's,"
but I think I will rent it.

Your curing and healing analogy, wonderful.

Peace, Cliff
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Review by Cliff
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Very good, interesting concept. I have found myself
with similar thoughts when hearing of cetain people's
death.

Deep, introspective for such a short piece. A nice
economy of words.

"I will never know whether she would have changed my
life?" Nice touch.

Peace, Cliff
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Review of Introspection  
Review by Cliff
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Could it be your own personal way of meditation? Well
written, well thought out, hee, piece.

Maxwell Maltz once noted, "What the mind of man can
concieve and believe, it can achieve."

So keep on thinking Auntie Amber, and writing.

Peace, Cliff
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Review of Fishing for peace  
Review by Cliff
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I give fives almost as rarely as I donate to the current Prez re-election fund. An exception here.

I really enjoy the written word, the tale, the verbal
experience. Darn, if you didn't just do it.

That was really good prose. Thanks.

Peace, Cliff
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Review by Cliff
Rated: E | (4.5)
Remarkable story, you certainly can take pride in your
positive outlook under very trying times.

I am so happy to hear of your remission. There is much
that you can do to help your self.

Great writing, no editing for me to do.

Peace, Cliff
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Review of Theory On Love  
Review by Cliff
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
A lot of good ideas here, I'm sure would be very
supportive of your mate.

My best advice, handed down to me. Check out her Mother
that'll let you know what you're getting yourself into.

types of "beauties" should be beauty.

Keep reflecting.

Peace, Cliff
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Review of First Time  
Review by Cliff
Rated: E | (4.0)
Here in Michigan, we're waiting for the first warm
summer day, and it won't be August 20th.

I would rework, "I was assaulted by a barrage of unseen
coyotes".....It reads like the coyotes themselves were
attacking

Good stuff, I do relate

Peace, Cliff
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Review by Cliff
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Darn, for the most portion of your being, you are
very optomistic.

This is vital stuff, between you and me, look me in the
eye now, we don't have to apologize, we don't have to do anything different. Just be who we are.

Peace, Cliff
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Review by Cliff
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Church does not make a good person, amen.

I quoted you without the thingys. I can be incorrect,
hee, I'm reviewing.

heald accountable is there somewhere, preist, spelled
backward; you did great.

Keep writing, you have a flair

Peace, Cliff
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Review of Epidemic  
Review by Cliff
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dave, I really gotta a feeling that man screwed this
up. The soil that the trees live on, their "life blood"
has been polluted by man. Who else, huh?

Thanks for bleeding with me. Mother Nature will prevail

Great angst, fight, the good fight.

Peace, Cliff
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Review by Cliff
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Very good. Your passion for your place is exceptional.
In your place in England, probably the narrowing of
space, you appreciate nature.

We love love to poison our land and feed it with
chemical fertilizers to have the plushest lawn. Then
we burn much petrol to mow this creation.

Keep writing, very good

Peace, Cliff
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Review of Nature vs. Nuture  
Review by Cliff
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This is some deep stuff, aand, your probably right.
The theme, as I see it, was that our lives are pre-set.
Yet, your close is vague.

Thus, if I understand the whole idea of intelligence,
I really don't understand it at all.

Difficult for me.

Peace, Cliff
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Review of Atrophy  
Review by Cliff
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
You have to stop reading so much and write some more,
this a moving, emotional story told with great skill.

Your descriptive dialogue belies your years. You have
a way with words.

Not much editing left for such a long piece, Don't
start to come in a start.........leaves me confused

voluptuous breast--needs an s

I love words; where the heck did you come up with edifice? and scarlet that bruised his face.....

Wonderful, write more

Peace, Cliff
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Review of Coming Home  
Review by Cliff
Rated: E | (4.5)
"The train wheezes, sputters and heaves itself"

You grabbed me right there, with these wonderful, eye
pleasing words, I'm gonna read the rest of this sappy,
romantic encounter. Ha

I have to be a little macho here, lest you think I
normally devour this type of lit.

Great, graphic sights and sounds.

Peace, Cliff (image:877632}
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Review of Dreaming  
Review by Cliff
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
You took an interesting approach to dreams by tying in
your love for the printed word.

I guess I never thought of it but dreams without the
dialogue are probably the disjointed, scary ones. The
pleasant dreams have conversation.

I only struggled with one paragraph; "the words that
were spoken and read setting, etc....

Good work

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Review of Candles  
Review by Cliff
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Geeeez, I was just getting into the story, you know, what did they say? It's better to light one candle, than to curse the darkness. Well curses. He blew the darn thing out. Cute little piece of erotica. Nice sentence and paragraph structure. Very good. Peace,
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Review by Cliff
Rated: E | (3.0)
Thank you for the kind, loving words. There is much a person could get disappointed in during these trying times and His message gets clouded as we hear only of
the killings in the name of someone's God. Your peaceful message may soothe the savage beast. Peace-
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Review of Power  
Review by Cliff
Rated: E | (4.5)
Excellent, I too, have enjoyed water, especially the free flowing of the rivers and streams. It's odd, but just yesterday I idly thought about this river that flows by my cabin starts as such a tiny stream from this lake. Why hasn't it drained the lake? Very good, like the tie with the chemical components of body, lots of interesting thoughts here. Peace, Cliff
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Review by Cliff
Rated: E | (4.0)
There certainly seems to be an abundance of stray and mistreated animals. I like the way you tie in our disposable mentality, our attention span is very short these days, what we had to have yesterday, is quickly traded in for today's "got to have." Good job, Cliff
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Review by Cliff
Rated: E | (4.0)
Say, did I connect with the scraps of paper and the little notes all over the place. Your advice of writing every day is essential, at least if I take a few days off, procrastination sets in.You have good points and a solid way of delivering them. I could learn from you. peace, Cliff
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Review by Cliff
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
It certainly seems that if we are to point a finger or fingers at who is ultimately responsible for the woes of mankind, it points to the woeful mankind. You tied in the rabbits, the disease outbreak, and man's destructive attitude to his own planet with an easily readable style. Great job. Cliff
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Review by Cliff
Rated: E | (4.5)
Golly, I liked that. Mr. Rogers was after my time and I was really not in tune with him. But, I do remember simpler times with a much higher regard to moral values. Thanks, for reminding me of those times. I would love to be your neighbor, cyber wise, we are. Thanks---Cliff
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Review of Skunk's Revenge  
Review by Cliff
Rated: E | (4.5)
I loved the hemorraging of the money, mighty graphic, no doubt what was happening here. Also, the way you tied the boyhood circus ideal was subtle and realistic.
Favorite account should have been favorite accountant, picky, hey?
Wonderful story with the moral is:
Just practicing Pard, Denny
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Review by Cliff
Rated: E | (3.5)
Yes, burdock is a wonderful herb. It is an alterative, blood cleanser, as well. It is more effective as a tisane (tea). My favorite natural antibiotic is garlic.
A couple of cloves daily can protect the body from most infectious attacks. I steam the cloves, it makes them sweet and tasty. And also allows people to come within breathing distance. The side effect, it lowere blood pressure naturally. Peace--Cliff
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