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Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of Monstrossica  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Inspired by Jumanji. A group of friends find a mysterious board game. Whenever they make a roll, some sort of monster shows up, causing strange things to happen to the players. Can the friends make it to the end before monsters control everything? Read, and find out.

Characters
The characters are interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any real issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Haunted castle, filled with legendary treasures, and it shows up one night every hundred years. All in a night's work for a trio of adventurers, or so they think, when they enter the place. However, they soon discover that they, and others, are trapped inside the place. Will they find a way out?

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Mythic Park  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Do you dream of unicorns and werewolves? Do you wish that they were real? They are.

Come, to Mythic Park, where creatures thought to be myths are real. Make your dreams, a reality and..... Fight for your life when things go wrong.

A lawyer, a Big Game Hunter, a Cryptozoologist, a Professor, all go to an island filled with legendary creatures. Problems soon occur, and now, they, and their host, and the host's grandchildren, are in a desperate fight for their lives, once the creatures get loose.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There's a few spots that could be worked on, but no real issues otherwise.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In the pattern of "Ready, Player One", a group of players compete in a game for a prize. However, due to issues beyond their control, more is now at stake, forcing the players to work together, just to survive. Will they be able to make it out alive? Only time will tell.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hold the horses, and rustle up some grub, as you settle on down for this tale. A group of outlaws robbed a train, with a special treasure. A Federal Marshal heads off after them, aided by a well-known Bounty Hunter. There's gold, ripe for the taking, to be had, in this yarn. So, come, and listen to this tale.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There's a few spots where the spelling could be neater.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Would you like to see some cute little dragons? Well, right here is where a bunch of them are. See what ones are around, their current levels, and who owns them. Perhaps, if you too wish to be a dragon tamer, one of them could potentially be yours. Plenty of fun.

Thoughts
Looks interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Terror on Titan  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In Homage of the Sci-Fi film known as Alien, crewmembers of a space ship pick up a strange egg-like object, only for it to hatch. Now, it's a fight for survival, as the crewmembers try to track down and kill the creature. Will any of them survive? Come, and find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There's a few spots where the spelling could be fixed, but otherwise, alright.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this looks like a fun activity. Follow the trail on your way through the fairy kingdom, where there's sights to be had, and prizes to be won. The more one journeys, the more one gets to see. What could the ultimate prize be? Why don't you come, and find out?

Thoughts
Looks like a fun activity.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Inglorious Humans  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Evil has overtaken the world. A group of monsters sets to reduce humans to little more than cattle. However, there is a group, one that seeks to end this. They plan to make monsters fear them, and they will not be nice to those they catch. Join the Inglorious Humans, as watch as they seek to put an end to the evil forces in charge.

Characters
The characters are interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Death stinks. Even more so when you weren't supposed to die. However, it happens. Luckily, in this case, a young man gets a second - or, actually, a third - chance when he dies too early. However, this is not without it's drawbacks - for he ends up inhabiting the body of another young man, in a world filled with werewolves, with a werewolf lover. Will he survive this new chance on life, or will he be found out? Come on in, and read.

Characters
The characters are interesting, but the names make me laugh. If a certain one pops up as a character that I didn't make, I'll explain the joke.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh, this looks like a fun activity. Adopt a dragon. Pick your color. Pick your stats. After that, let's see just how crazy things can get, as you try to tame a dragon. What will happen, as your dragon grows up? Will it remain a friend, or will it become a foe? What will you do?

Thoughts
Looks like a fun activity.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A fun anthro-filled parody of Indiana Jones. It's WW2, and dangers are all over. Various folks search for magical artifacts, including one Alabama Smith! Joining forces with a time-traveler and a con artist, our Hero must race against the forces of evil, if he's to save England, and the world, by recovering the one and only Excalibur. Is he up to the challenge?

Characters
The characters are interesting and fun.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any real issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Here's a fun campfire. When an unspeakable evil attacks his kingdom, a Prince is away to be trained. When he went to face the foe, he was sent into the future, where the foe's rule is law. Now he seeks to return to the past, and undo the future that is Aku - I mean - Echidna!

Heavily inspired by Samurai Jack, this story involves a world overrun by monsters, with humans being second-class citizens at best. While plenty are enemies, others are friends. Can our hero figure out which is which?

Let's find out if he can survive, to make it home.

Characters
While a number of characters bare similarities to counterparts in Samurai Jack, each is their own person.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any real issue with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well, this is a fun little activity. Depending on the season, and if you decorate your handle, either nominate yourself, or a friend, for a chance to win a cool prize or two. Always worth participating, as it's a way to show yourself off. Plenty of fun times.

Thoughts
A very fun activity.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In a world where humans and fantasy creatures co-exist in a Modern world, watch the relationship develop between a male human and a female werewolf, as they try to overcome various barriers between them. What will happen next to these two?

Characters
Characters are interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
Spelling and Grammar look okay so far.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Had to vote "Fire" but personally, I'd go "All of them."

A cure little piece where one has to figure out what element that they'd control if they could control an element. Something that many might find fun to look into.

Thoughts
Kind of cute.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this looks interesting. After a snowstorm has finally lifted, a pair of friends - a male human and a female werewolf - go to a nightclub to have some fun. However, by the looks of things, the fun is just starting, and I'm waiting for more.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
For the section about first time, you got "fist" instead of "first".

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is cute. After a long day at their respective jobs, a pair of friends come home to unwind. Soon after talking about their respective days, the one suggests sharing a bubble bath, where things take a turn for the funny. Sure makes one laugh.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Cold  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is the Sixth of Seven Lucky Reviews for Seven Lucky People. Enjoy.

You have someone looking for something important. However, no matter how hard they search, they come up empty. Finally, they come to only one conclusion - the item must have been taken. Makes one wonder.

Characters
No real description of the characters are given.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of How to be special  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is the Fifth of Seven Lucky Reviews for Seven Lucky People. Enjoy.

You have someone named Pawn. They would like to be Special. So, they ask someone to help them to be special. Very cute, and I like the chess motif as well. Plenty will enjoy this.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is the Third of Seven Lucky Reviews for some lucky people. Enjoy.

This is actually a very fitting item, as I am reviewing this while on my cellphone due to the power being out.

You have two friends, a human and a werewolf, enjoying a video game when the power goes out. Then, the temperature starts to drop, and the human gets cold. Good news is, the werewolf know how to keep them warm. The question is: can the human trust them?

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
Spelling and Grammar looks good to me.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF and I howl at the moon every night. HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!


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for entry "The Naughty Elf" Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is the Second of Seven Lucky Reviews folks will get from me. Enjoy yours.

Let's see. You have a Christmas elf in a bit of a bother. Seems that there's an issue with the sleigh, and they need to come up with something quick. Problem is, things go from bad to crazy.

Characters
Worthy of a good chuckle.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "~ He Made Me Whole ~" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I asked for something to review, and you sent me. Congrats on being the First of Seven lucky folks.

You have someone talking about the moment that they decided to allow Jesus into their life. How they felt unworthy of their love. However, Jesus was more than willing to accept them.

Thoughts
An interesting piece of spiritual exploration.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with Spelling or Grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Man of Dreams  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a Review you Requested! Enjoy.

This is a short little poem. Context seems to be centered around Martin Luther King Jr.'s "I have a Dream" speech. Kind of cute, yet sad.

Thoughts
Looks interesting to me.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Spoils of War  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a Review you Requested. Enjoy!

Well, this an interesting poem, of an older boy, who was raised up the Cowboy Way, who became a man through the Army, even becoming a sniper, and the changes that he went through as a result.

Characters
Joe could of been any young one that joined the military during a time of war. Gone goes the carefree boy, when he sees combat. They never come back the same.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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