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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of The Futurist  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is a nice little comedy diologue interview script. You have a guy being interviewed because of the business he does, which is predicting future trends. His jod is to make predictions about what products will sell, and thus make companies money. Very interesting.

Characters
The two men are highly interesting, especially the Futurist. This interview was quite realistic.

Plot
A man is interviewed about his job, which is predicting future trends.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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477
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A nice, funny little story. You have a Witch in icy cold Alaska and a Warlock in warm sunny Florida having a bit of trouble with each other. So they decide to cast spells upon one another, but it seems that even more trouble is brewing in the future. Very funny.

Characters
The witch and warlock are interesting, and very funny. I wonder if they'll settle down.

Plot
A witch and a warlock are having problems with each other, so they cast spells on the other.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar, though you do have a paragraph near the end that didn't have a space skipped before you started it.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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478
Review of The Well  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Now this is a nice little story. You have two young boys messing around with an old well. One of them has the other lower him down the well, using the bucket and pully system, as they are looking for a cool place to play. However, problems arise when the one at the top has trouble lifting the one in the well. Very interesting.

Characters
The two boys are interesting and relatable, full of that adventurous spirit, and don't want to get into trouble with daddy. *Bigsmile* *Laugh*

Plot
A couple of boys decide to check out an old well, only to find trouble.

Spelling and Grammar
There are some spelling and grammar errors, but those add to the realism of the story, and gives it a setting.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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479
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A nice little children's sports story. You have three brothers on different baseball teams, and eventually, one of them is going to end up compeatring against the other. I wonder if the brothers will still be brothers, or if there will be trouble when it is all over. Very nice, especially with the pictures of the three brothers.

Characters
The three brothers are very interesting, though I wonder if there was a staredown scene, in whch two of the brothers were facing each other on oposite sides of the mound.

Plot
Three brothers go to a baseball game, and compeate on different teams.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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480
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Now this is a funny, and furry, detective story. When three animal detectives learn from one of their friends that goldfish are being stolen, the trio sets off to find the thief before he strikes again. Full of mystery, intregue, and chocolate-catnip cookies, this is one story that will have you laughing.

Characters
The main characters are very interesting, and very funny.

Plot
Three animal detectives are asked to investigate the disapearances of goldfish, and find more than they bargened for.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar problems, except a misplaced quotation mark towards the end where the warden laughs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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481
Review of The Scrolls  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a highly informative list. It shows the past winners and donators to the "Erotic Tales of Pleasure+Pain" contest. With this, people can see who has helped out this contest, and also who has entered it, and won a prize, or two. Very useful. I hope to see my name up here at some point in the future.

What I think about this piece
I think that this piece is very useful, as it shows the past winners, and the donaters.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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482
Review of Crypt of Shadows  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very nice list to check out. It lists the various Winners and Donators that the "A MidSummer's Scream" contest has had. This sort of list is very usefull, as it shows the sponsers it has, and those who have participated. Highly informative. I hope to see my name up there at some point in the future. *Bigsmile*

What I think of this piece
I think that this piece is very informative, as it shows who participates in this contest, and who helps it out.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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483
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Now here's a nice little, and interesting, contest. It seems that this writer is looking for a good book, or two, to read, and is willing to pag a nice sum of Gift Points for information leading to that perfect story. I think that we ought to help them out. *Bigsmile*

Originality
I haven't seen any places where people are asking for advice as to what book to read. Very nice.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

I wish you the best of luck on your search. May you find those books.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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484
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Now here's an interesting contest. Write a great Erotic short story, and one could win some very nice prizes, such as Awardicons and Merit Badges. And these prizes would look good on the trophy case. Now, while I'm not into full-blown erotica, I might be able to brush up my inner romantic and write a nice little piece for this contest.

Originality
There are many contests, but those that challenge one to write about a certain genre are always nice.

Spelling and Grammar
I seeno problems with spelling or grammar.

I wish you the best of luck with your contest. May you have lots of entries.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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485
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Now here is a nice scary little, or is it big, contest. Write a great scary short srory and you could win some very nice prizes, which include Awardicons, Gift Points, and Merit Badges. And I must say, these prizes would look nice on the perverbial trophy wall. In fact, I might have to wake up my inner werewolf and write something for this contest.

Originality
There are many contests, but anything that specializes in certain catagories is nice.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

I wish you the best of luck with your contest. May you have lots of entries.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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486
Review of The Review Game  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Now this is a funny story. A writer finally convinces her husband to join the site and write a story or two. However, when she comes across his piece, she is in for a challenge, because as it turns out, her husband isn't any good when it comes to writing. Now she has to figure out how to review it while being honest, but not hurting his feelings. Very funny.

Characters
The writer and her husband are highly relatable, especially for other writers who have managed to get their friends and family to join and have to review their work.

Plot
A writer manages to get her husband to join the site, and has to review his writing, which is far from perfect. Very nice.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no spelling or grammar problems.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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487
Review of Extremes  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting little poem. A guy has to mow the lawn, but at first it's too wet, so he waits. Then it is quite hot, and by the time he comes back inside, he's redder than a cooked lobster. So he takes a shower and ends up freezing. Very funny.

Characters
The main character is interesting, especially as he deals with his day.

Plot
A young man has to deal with all of the various extreams, that comes from working outside.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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488
Review of Done  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
An interesting little poem. It seems that the heat can do much more than just raise the temperature, as it seems to shorten one's temper. Interesting things seem to want to happen, especially when people don't have any air-conditioning in their homes.

What I think of this piece
This piece makes me think about how raising temperatures can shorten one's temper. Very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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489
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Now this looks to be a funny fanfic of Penguins of Madagascar. The penguins are having to deal with the effects of a heat wave, so they decide to head to the one place that is deffinatly cool, the ice cream store. However, when they get there, they have a problem: What flavor will they get? Very funny.

Characters
I haven't seen the actual movies or tv shows, but the characters are quite funny.

Plot
Four penguines decide to break into an ice cream shop to escape the heat. very funny.

Spelling and Grammar
I see one main spelling error, At the begining Newyork should be New York. Also I'd put this in the genres of Fanfic and Animal.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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490
Review of Ambushed  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
An interesting little Western story. You have a half-breed Texas Ranger trying to run from a group of Apache warriors who want him dead for some reason. Then you have him meeting up with an Apache woman, who seems eirrily familiar to him. A very nice story, with a supernateral twist.

Characters
The Ranger is quite interesting in what he does. Also, his emotions are quite realistic. Very nice.

Plot
A Ranger has to deal with a group of Apache warriors, and meets up with a woman who seems familiar to him.

Spelling and Grammar
There are some spelling and grammar errors, but those give the piece a good Western twang as it were. Very nice.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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491
Review of Tap the Muse  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Now this is a nice little In-and-Out. Post an item that you want reviewed, and write a few quick sentances that involve a certain word, no matter what it is. This sounds like a lot of fun, especially to get an item, or two, reviewed. In fact, I might have to take part in it, especially for a few reviews. *Bigsmile*

Originality
I've seen several activity In-and-Outs and several Review Plugs, but this is the first that combindes both of them. Very nice.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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492
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.0)
A nice cute little fanfic of Code Lyoko. It seems that it is Aelita's birthday and something nice should happen on this day. However, X.A.N.A. launches an attack, controling several of the characters. A nice little read. Not bad for a first story.

Characters
The characters seem to be true to their show's specs and whatnot. Not too shabby.

Plot
It's Aelita's birthday, but X.A.N.A. has decided to launch an attack.

Spelling and Grammar
There are several spelling and grammar problems, namely in the form of not capitalizing proper nouns and not having spaces for punctuation. I'd get to work on those.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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493
Review of Aces and Eights  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting little story. You have a group of men, including a stranger, sitting around a table playing poker. Then a young one starts talking about this one shootout he heard, about a group of men who had been playing poker in another city, who had shot a man for cheating, but the man survived and killed them. However, the stranger seems to know more than the young man, and gives a few surprising revelations. Very nice.

Characters
The group of men are nicely discribed, especially the stranger. In fact, I'd like to know more about the man.

Plot
A group of men playing poker talk about a story that they heard, involving some other men playing poker, and shooting another player.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar problems, though I'd recomend some space between paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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494
Review of Eli Frayne  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Now this is a highly exciting start to what looks to be a good Supernateral-Western style story. You have some sort of demon-bounty-hunter searching for an evil man, so that he can take the guy's soul to Big Red Himself. A highly exciting start, including a nice conversation with a Subcubuss prostitute, and a little bit of satire with the priest, and his congregation, at the start of the story.

Characters
The characters, especially the Bounty-Hunter are very interesting. Of course, I want to know more about "Mr. Smith".

Plot
A Demon-Bounty-Hunter is searching for an evil man, so that he can collect his soul. Highly exciting start.

Spelling and Grammar
There are several grammar errors, but they are done in such a way that it gives the story that Western flavor. Nicely done.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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495
Review of The Cursed Gun  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting little supernaral Western. You have a stranger ride into town searching for someone for some reason. He doesn't know who the person is, but due to the effects of some curse, he is forced to go ofter him/her/them. Very interesting.

Characters
The man is interesting, though I'd like to know more about him. For instance, why did he take the curse? Was it for fame? Revenge? What was the reason? Perhaps a sequal might be needed.

Plot
A stranger rides into town, looking for the person he has to kill.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar problems.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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496
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A highly exciting Western story. You have two Native American men from two very different tribes escaping from a United States calvary fort, and trying to work together. You also have a young boy, and a group of soldiers coming after them. Highly exciting.

Characters
The three main characters are interesting, though I'd like to know more about them. For instance, how did the Souix learn the Comanche language, and where was the young boy from?

Plot
Two Native Americans escape from a fort and are pursued by the calvary and a young boy.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar problems.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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497
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very funny little story. After hearing a story about toiletsflushing in E-Flat, a tone-deaf writer decides to test it out, using everytrick she knows, from trying to remember music lessons to seeing about playing songs that are done in E-Flat to see if the tone is right. Very funny.

Characters
The woman is very interesting, especially as she deals with the connundrum.

Plot
A woman tries to see if toilets flush in E-Flat. Very funny.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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498
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting little story that you entered in the Non-Humans R Us contest.

You have a young orphan woman who is turning into a dragon of some sort, just before her birthday. She ends up seeing a friend who suggests that she sees the great dragon at the end of a Celebration. Very nice. Also, you have a nice picture as well. No bonus points though. *Bigsmile**Laugh*

Characters
The young woman is highly interesting as she deals with her transformation.

Plot
A young woman starts changing and decides to see a great dragon for advice.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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499
Review of Dragon Shower  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Thank you for entering the Non-Humans R Us Contest.

A nice little story about how a bully ends up recieving a taste of his own medicine when he ends up changing for no apparent reason. I think that a sequal of some sort could be in order. After all, I want to know what's going to happen to him.

Characters
The main character is a yong man who pick on others who have started changing for some reason.

Plot
A young man who bullies others for being different ends up recieving a taste of his own medicine when he starts changing.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar problems.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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500
Review of THe Harvesters  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Now here is an exciting story. A man finds himself being attacked by some sort of insect, that keeps on taking tiny pieces of his body from him. Now he has to find a way to deal with it, and find a way to destroy it before it destroys him. Very thrilling.

Characters
The main character is very interesting, as he goes through the days, trying to find a way to deal with his bug problem.

Plot
A man comes under attack by bugs and must find a way to deal with them.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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