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Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of How To Get Viewed  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is a usefull item to check out. It gives out tips on how to get views, from editing ones' items, entering and hosting contests, rating and reviewing items, and many more things. Personally, I hope plenty of people come check this out, especially if they are also having trouble getting the views they want.

Originality
I have yet to see another item that gives these sorts of tips on how to get views.

Spelling and Grammar
I can only see one spelling/grammar error, in which "Be Careful" under "Story Posting" is joined as one word.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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452
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is a nice and informative article. As a writer, adder, and reader of interactive stories myself, I just hate it when people just make a whole lot of bad grammer, misspellings, and other things in their additions, and leave the poor owner, who may not even come on anymore, to fix their stuff. Thank you for speaking out.

Originality
I have yet to see another rant about interactives, especially one about the annoying stuff. Very nice.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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Review of History Contest  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well this is an interesting little contest. Create something related to history and you could win some very nice prizes, such as a nice sum of Gift Points, or perhaps something else even. Highly interesting, especially if one is into history. Looks like fun.

Originality
There are many contests, but it is nice to have a challenge.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of wishes with your contest. May you have plenty of entries.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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454
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well here is a nice looking Auction that helps suport a good cause. Make the high bid, and you could win some wonderful items, such as Merit Badges, Awardicons, Reviews, C-Notes, Raffle Tickets, and a whole lot more, all while helping out some great and deserving groups. I hope that there are lots of bids. *Bigsmile*

Originality
There are plenty of auctions, but it is always nice to help out.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with your auction. May you get lots of bids.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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455
Review of Revenge Reveiled  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well here is an interesting story from your Manimal Saga. You have one alien having to deal with his past, and everything that his family has done. Now he must find a way to redeam himself, and a whole lot more as well, especially given what his one relative plans to do.

Characters
The characters are quite interesting especially the various enimies.

Plot
An alien must figure out his destiny, and the fate of the universe.

Spelling and Grammar
There are some spelling and grammar errors, which Word 2007 can help deal with.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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456
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well this is a nice and fun activity. Write three words that corospond with the previous words, and you will help create a very funny story that just goes and goes for a nice long time. It is quite fun, and I have posted in it myself.

Originality
There are a few activities that are similar to this, but still, this is very fun.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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457
Review of Birthday Raffle  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well this looks like a fun raffle. Enter an item in any of the Official contests, and one could get a chance to win a fantastic prize, a One Year Premium Membership. Now that is a Prize worth trying to get. Perhaps I'll see about entering into a few. to get myself a chance or two at this prize.

Origionality
Well, this is a fantastic raffle, as it might help out a deserving person.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar problems.

I wish your raffle the best of wishes. May the luckiest person win.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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458
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well here is an exciting and heart-thumping horror story. A doctor sees a patient for the first time, and finds out that she is having some troubling vision, as if a knife is right next to her. It seems that her ex-husband did something to her when they parted ways. Very spooky.

Characters
The doctor and Lisa seem to be very interesting characters.

Plot
A doctor finds out some interesting things about his new patient.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar problems. However, the first "Doctor Slice" could us a quotation mark on the front of it.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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459
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well this looks like a nice little story to read. A writer is searching for a place to buy, but he wants something that speaks to him. Then, he sees an old worn handmade sign that ends up telling him to check out an old dirt trail, and he locates the place of his dreams. Very nice.

Characters
The two main characters, the writer and the home owner, are quite interesting, especially the conversation they have about the land.

Plot
A writer searching for a place to call home finds it unexpectedly.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar problems.

Suggestions
You might want to put this in the genres of Home and Nature at the very least, as I think that this piece would fit in those two places.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

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460
Review of I Blame Merriam!  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well here is a funny poem to read. Twenty-six lines, all starting with a letter of the alphabet, going from "A" to "Z", with a whole lot of hillarious phrases. This looks to be one of the funniest poems that I've read in quite some time. Very nice to read.

What I think of this piece
I think that this piece is quite hillarious. First off, the ABC thing is very funny. Also, there is a bit of a rhyming sceme as well. Very nice.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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461
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a very useful article to read. It talks about cilantro, and how it is grown, where it is grown, what it is used for, and more. In fact, I wouldn't be too surprised if someone decided to use this as a resouce for a report of some sort. Highly informative.

What I think of this Piece
I think that this piece is highly informative, and I might re-read it if I want to grow cilantro at some point in the future.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar problems.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Review of Chokecherries  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a nice little article to read. It talks about chokecherries, and their many uses, what they look like, where they are found, and a whole lot more. Maybe someone could use this information as a source for some report of theirs, if need be. Very informative.

What I think of this piece
I think that this piece is highly informative for anyone looking for information about chokecherries.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar. However, I'd advise italizising the Latin name. To do that you put {i} to start the italizising, and {/i} to end it. (That would look like this, except for another ML trick to make the bracket and such visible.)

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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463
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting and exciting story to read. You have some mysterious woman who seems to be bent on saving a young girl from a gang of highly dangerous men, who wish to harm her in various ways. Highly exciting read, especially the fight scenes.

Characters
The woman is very mysterious, the three men are dangerous, and the girl seems to represent innocence lost.

Plot
A mysterious woman decides to rescue a young girl from a gang of men.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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464
Review of Sneezes  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A short little story. A man with a bad sneezing fit heads to a shop to find some help. However, the shop is dark and mysterious, and the owner of the place seems to be quite strange as well, especially when he uses a potion of some sort. Very interesting.

Characters
The two characters seem to be interesting, especially the Shop owner.

Plot
A man visits a strange shop to get help for his sneezes.

Spelling and Grammar
There seem to be some spelling and grammar errors, namely in the form of missing capitals at the start of sentances. Also, you might want some space between paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Review of Dew of Dreams  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a nice little poem. It seems to bring to mind an image of one person telling another that they love them, and they are using a wide range of discriptive nature scenes, such as eagles flying, and trees swaying in the wind, and a whole lot more as well.

What I think of this Piece
I think that this piece would be something that one person would share with the person that they are in love with, as it uses "We" a lot. Very nice.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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466
Review of The Crop  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A nice little story. A man is keeping an eye on an important crop on a remote colony. Thus far however, nothing has grown, and he is getting worried, as the colony could starve if the crop fails. He then goes to talk to a friend of his, who has a similar job. His friend tells him some very important things. Very nice. I'd like to know what happens.

Characters
The two farmers are interesting, and are very relatable for anyone who farms for a living.

Plot
A farmer watches an important crop and is worried about it.

Spelling and Grammar
The spelling and grammar is fine for the most part. However, in the section where Hiram is talking about the places where his family has grown rice, there is a "He" that needs to be changed to a "We". Also, since this was for a Cramp contest, I'd bold the words that were for the prompt of the day.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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467
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Here's a nice little contest. Create a short stort, with all of the elements of a thriller, and you could win a nice prize of Gift Points for your efforts. Also, since there is a new prompt every day, its like entering a new contest each time one checks it out. Very nice.

Originality
There are many contests, but those that deal in certain genres are very nice.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar problems.

I wish you the best of luck with your contest. May you have plenty of entries.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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468
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting and somewhat humorous little essay. You talk about the signs of aging that middle-aged women have, and how those tend to start after they get those pesky bifocals. You talk about the carious symptems, and all that happens with them. Very interesting.

What I think of this Piece
I think that this piece is very discriptive in all that happens. It also makes one want to think twice about getting bifocals. *Bigsmile*

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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469
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Now this is a funny little story. A young boy remarks about how his mother's hair is turning gray and aks how she is getting them. The mother then tells himwho it was that gave them to her, with him being ONE of the people responsible for them. Very funny.

Characters
The boy and his mother are highly relatable for any parent, or other person, who has to take care of a child.

Plot
A boy asks his mother why she has gray hairs, and she tells him why.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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470
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting short story. You have a young hotshot novice pilot, who wishes to prove himself to those in the military, steal a ship and out-manuver those entered in a contest. However, he is arrested, and placed in soletary. However, when an emergancy comes up, he is given the chance, to show what he's made of. Very exciting.

Characters
The young man is highly interesting. He has a whole lot of spunk, and seems to get on every vetrans' nerves. I also enjoy how others act around him.

Plot
A young hotshot is given the chance to prove himself when the military needs one more pilot.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar problems, however, I'd suggest making an item that tells about the battle. I want to know what happened.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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471
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Now this looks to be the start of a good story. A Gentleman-toad gets toad-napped and taken away from his home. His friends try to search fot him, only to find just a strange orange feather. Meanwhile, the poor toad has to deal with two things, extream cold, and the fact that penguins can fly. Very interesting.

Characters
The main characters are highly interesting and well discribed.

Plot
When a toad gets toad-napped, he must come out of his comfort area to deal with the situation.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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Review of Beastly Banquet  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting recipe poem. This is quite funny, with all of the puns of the food that is listed, turning what would be extreamly tasty, or just ordanary dishes, in to things that churn one's stomache, and make them think twice about eating again. Very funny.

What I think of this piece
I think that this piece is quite funny, especially the dishes.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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473
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A nice cute little poem. You have two men, who seem to be lost in a large patch of woods, and they are constantly walking around in it. Then the two of them have an arguement, which threatens their friendship. A very funny read.

Characters
The two men are quite interesting in their actions, but I think that they could of been discribed better.

Plot
Two men are lost in the woods, and are starting to have problemms with each other.

Spelling and Grammar
There are some spelling and grammar errors, but those give the story character. Nice.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Review of the Misadventures  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A nice cute little funny story. The Royal family is getting ready for some occasion, but there appears to be some problems. The Queen is busy trying to make the Princess's hair just right, but the Princess says that her hair is just fine. Also the Prince is looking for his favorite tunic, but it is missing. Will they make it to the event in time?

Characters
The three main characters are quite interesting, and very relatable.

Plot
The Royal family tries to get ready for a function, but there seems to be some problems.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.However, I'd advise putting some space between your paragraphs, to make reading easier.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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475
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well this is an interesting little, or should I say, long story, that is quite funny. A youn boy god goes with his family to visit a relative of his, who takes a shine to him. The boy goes exploring and finds a pool that has a special fish in it, and ends up in trouble because of it. very funny.

Characters
The various gods and godesses are quite interesting, especially those who are trying to find a way to deal with the fish that the boy god was playing with.

Plot
A boy is invited over to his relative's place and gets into trouble because of a fish.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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