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Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh this is very relating. Love requires hot water, lots and lots of hot water, especially for taking a shower. So, if one sees that their wife has had a long hard day at work, they should let them take that much needed shower, so that all of their worries will go away.

Characters
Relating.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Beast  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story/poem. A young woman encounters a beast, who seems to be in a great deal of pain. The young woman asks what's wrong, and the beast tells her how his heart hurts, but it is not hurting because or normal means. Very interesting.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar. However, first words of dialogue should be capitalized. Also, space between paragraphs would help.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Over the Edge  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting little story. Two men are busy climbing out of the vent of a volcano, while a third man pursues them, as it seems the two took some diamonds from him. Less than four hundred feet separates them from the surface, but the one is getting some ideas of their own.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this looks like the start of an interesting story. A number of young men and women face a large number of challenges, so that they can be accepted by their respective tribes. However, it looks like not all of them will be able to survive their challenges.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There are some issues that could use fixing.

Suggestions
You might want to list which chapter is Chapter 1 and so on. I think I reviewed them in the wrong order.

Please tell me when the rest of the story is done. I look forward to reading and rating/reviewing it.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interested chapter in your story. While out looking for some items, a young woman discovers something of interest; a body. She then goes to get some help, so that the body can be taken care of in a manner that was proper. However, she discovers something while searching the body.

Charaters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
In paragraph three, there is a name that needs to be capitalized.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "Weakling Cub (chap 3)" 
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting chapter. A Father, who has a weak and sickly child, is worried about what will happen to his daughter when the pups of some wolves, whom his tribe have an alliance with, decide to chose their partners, one of them being a very large, and different colored, pup.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting little chapter. A young girl, who is fairly weak on her own, becomes quite active whenever her wolf-mate, who is quite large and powerful, even among monster wolves, enters the fray. Makes one wonder what they will be like when they reach their full growth.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is yet another interesting chapter of your story. In a dessert community, another young man faces a great challenge in order to become a respected member of his tribe. He must face a Master warrior in a duel, and beat him, or he will forfeit his life.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This looks like the start of an interesting story. A young man decides to go through a series of Trials so that he can be bonded with a special creature, so that he can help out his tribe better than he could on his own. However, the Trials are far from easy, and there is a good chance he could die.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of It Had to Happen  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Oh I have to laugh as I read this. In the over-the-top style of James Bond, a spy must escape from the compound of a group of terrorists. However, Mister Bond is not without a powerful arsenal of Bad-Guy-Neutralizing gadgets, which do the job, and then some. Very funny.

Characters
I think the "actual" Bond would be quite pleased.

Spelling and Grammar
With ze obvious exception of ze bad guy, no problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You need a scene where one of the minions says, "Where does he keep all those weapons?"

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Dominick  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is something of a hard item to rate and review. A child losing their life is extremely hard to write about as one wants them to live for a nice long time, as it should be the son who buries the father, not the other way around. Of course, I get the feeling your nephew's murderer won't last long in prison- convicts don't look too kindly on those who kill children.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Normally, I'd say that this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and a few other things, but, out of respect for your nephew, I'm just going to say, May He Rest in Peace.
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Review of Wings  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a very fitting tribute for Anne McCaffrey, Queen Dragon Rider of Pern. It adequately describes the dragons of that planet, from Gold, to Bronze, to Brown, to Blue, to Green. I enjoy reading her books, and own more than a few. She will be missed.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Dragon  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting poem. It seems to be about two people, who keep different hours, and rarely talk to each other. One person takes care of children, while the other seems to tend to other things that are dealt with in life. Very interesting.

Spelling and grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your entry to my blogging prompt: If the Zombie Apocalypse occurred right this second, what would you use to defend yourself? I just have to laugh *Laugh* - Squirrels against zombies, that is just silly. Zombies would just go, "Appetizers!" and eat them. As for combat, get a crowbar, it would save your life. Your odds of Survival- The Magic Ball says, "It don't look too good, but at least you made me laugh."

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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365
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This is certainly a useful item for beginning reviewers to check out. It has many things that reviewers ought to be, and do, when doing a review. Personally, I think that being respectful might be the most important, and I think that setting aside personal bias/prejudices might be beneficial.

For instance, I've noticed that items that have Nazi-type people as the protagonist have low ratings. Okay, obviously Nazis a touchy subject, but there are other things to consider, such as spelling, grammar, and how it all goes together.

Also, on a personal note, I have an item about a knight who was a dragon slayer, who was forced into the body of a dragon. The first review I got goes "You look like a great writer. However, there's no way that a mere human could ever slay a dragon." The review then when about how there was no way that anyone could slay a dragon, saying things like how Beowolf most likely didn't kill the dragon he fought, as the body was never found. Uhg, Annoying. Of course, the worse thing about it was the *Star**Star*'s he gave me. I've yet to get above an average of 3 stars because of it. Okay, enough ranting about my poor Dragon's Eyes.

Of course, if a person really doesn't like the item, what's the sense in doing the review? The only legitimate reason I see for rating and reviewing an item you don't like is because you have to, for a reviewing challenge or it was an item entered in a contest you run.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Dragon Pairs  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting short story. In a world where man and dragons live together, a group of dragon riders look for some likely candidates to pair up some hatchlings with. Talking about forging the bonds of friendship at a very young age. *Bigsmile*.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your entry for my blogging prompt: If the Zombie Apocalypse occurred right this second, what would you use to protect yourself? Okay, it's very clear that you didn't like this prompt, and you more or less mock the whole thing, and even really try to do anything. *Frown*. I'm not even going to bother to give your odds of survival, though I will say it's in the negatives.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar, but the language worries me.

Best of luck with the rest of the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Dragon Keeper  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. A young woman, who has been raised to be a sacrifice, to protect her home from a vicious dragon, finds out that the story was just a way for some priests to stay in power. She is rescued by a stranger, who shows her that dragons are real, but not vicious.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of More Snow Melt  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is your entry for my Blogging prompt that deals with: If the Zombie Apocalypse occurred right this second, what would you use to protect yourself? Let me see here- some of the items you have do have merit, such as the screwdrivers. The mop and brooms would need some alterations to be effective. As for the rest, don't count on them. Chances of survival, Less than 50%.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with the rest of the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Dragons Never Lie  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. A dragon shows up at a town on its Market day, seeking a special girl for a special reason, and locates her. Also, since the dragon has the reputation of being a good dragon, the situation calls for a feast. However, it seems that the dragon's intentions are far from noble.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Well, this is an interesting interactive. A young teenage boy, or girl, is sent to a land that is full of dragons. Also, it seems that there are a wide variety of dragons, from those who want them as a meal, to those who want them as a lover, to those who want them as a friend. Interesting.

Characters
Very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I've located some spelling and grammar errors. To fix them, use Word for the basic spelling and grammar. Also, leave some space between the paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a nice story to read. A woman finds out that a young man wishes to marry her daughter, and agrees to keep it a secret from the young bride-to-be. However, sometimes, keeping a secret from your daughter can be tricky, especially when you want to go tell the whole world.

Characters
Very relating- It can be hard to keep some secrets secret.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well, this is an interesting group. Open primarily to those who have the ability to create book items, specifically blogs/journals, this group has an interesting contest; using a prompt of the day, create a blog entry every day until the contest is over, and a nice prize awaits some lucky bloggers. Sounds like a mess of fun.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with your group. May you get plenty of bloggers.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting little poem. The various prey animals try to chose which predator is the most savage of them all. Each animal says a candidate, and explains why they believe the predator is the most savage. However, the winner is a bit of a surprise.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting little story. After dealing with her controlling parents for the last time, a young woman decides to go someplace where no one knows who she is. However, along the way, someplace near a small town, she ends up with a flat tire.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling and grammar, but the young woman's personal thoughts ought to be in italics.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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