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Review of The Grind  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was a interesting story. I loved the twist at the end, with his job title being beer taster. Talk about taking your work home with you. A very short story, but it still was an entertaining read. You've used excellent descriptors, and I'm sure anyone who has awoken with a hangover can appreciate how you've captured the feeling.

Keep up the great job!

sincerely,
amy

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am reviewing this as part of the December Christmas Advent Challenge. I loved reading your little story. This is such a heartwarming memory. You've written with such love toward your "Pop" and I could just imagine the tears as he accepts the honor of walking you down the aisle. I could picture the scenes in my mind as you lovingly describe them. What a treat that you would share such a fond memory with us. I wish you a Merry Christmas and many more such memories to be made in the New Year that are just as heartwarming.

sincerely,
amyjo

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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing this poem. I like how you've used the five senses to bring the feeling of winter to life in your writing. My favorite line is the tantalizing taste of sugar and cinnamon...yummy! I am reviewing this as part of the Dec. Advent Challenge. Keep Writing, and have a Merry Christmas *Smile*

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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell
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for entry "I Am Prosperous Snow" 
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hiya Prosperous Snow The Wild Things Live!

I am reviewing this for the December Advent Challenge. Thank you for sharing your fun sense of humor, and for the background on your name. I find that it is fun, and I do not consider you a bum at all! I like the fact that you have fun, and it shows in your writing. Happy New Year and Keep Writing, my fun and wild friend *Smile*

sincerely,
amyjo

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Review of "Sea Moods"  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*



Welcome to Writing.Com! I hope you make yourself at home, and enjoy all that WdC has to offer. The people here are a friendly bunch of folks, and don't be afraid to jump right in or ask questions!

I'm reviewing your piece
 
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"Sea Moods"  (E)
The coral reef splatters as crashing waves break.
#2068540 by GerMac
today.

*PenP* My initial thoughts:I saw two different scenes clearly. The first showed an emptiness, a quietness that felt quite gloomy. The second was quiet, but then the dawning of life and sound made for a beautiful panorama of light and hope.

*PenB* My favorite parts: I like how you use your words to paint vivid images. You've done a very good job with both scenes. It is wonderful to be able to see these images in my mind as I read. I can almost picture myself there observing the beach with you.

*PenR* Some suggestions are:I saw no grammar or typo issues with your writing. I would suggest perhaps centering your poetry to bring attention down the center of the page. Just a suggestion, so take it as you will.

*PenG* Overall: You are off to a great start with your writing. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Thanks for sharing your heart as well as your work.

Thank you for sharing your poetry, and Keep on Writing!

sincerely,
amy

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Review of Ashes and Ashes  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*



Welcome to Writing.Com! I hope you make yourself at home, and enjoy all that WdC has to offer. The people here are a friendly bunch of folks, and don't be afraid to jump right in or ask questions!

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 Ashes and Ashes  (13+)
For the Newbie's Only 100 Word Story Contest
#2068536 by JustPeachy
today.

*PenP* My initial thoughts: What a heartbreaking story. In just a few words, you've managed to put so much punch into your writing.

*PenB* My favorite parts: You have a very descriptive writing, and I could picture the scenes in my head clearly. The last line packs the most punch...after everything that was gone through, "I'll never be normal again" really hits home.

*PenR* Some suggestions are: I saw no typo or grammar issues. You used the word limit well, and gave the most bang for the buck in your writing.

*PenG* Overall: An emotional punch in the gut. Vivid writing, and I believe you are off to a great start. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Thank you for sharing your work, and Keep on Writing!

sincerely,
amy

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Review of Get Up  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*



Welcome to Writing.Com! I hope you make yourself at home, and enjoy all that WdC has to offer. The people here are a friendly bunch of folks, and don't be afraid to jump right in or ask questions!

I'm reviewing your piece
 Get Up  (E)
A little rambling on trying to move on.
#2068588 by ache4hope
today.

*PenP* My initial thoughts: Writing can be a therapeutic way to get the "junk" out of our lives and to be able to move forward.

*PenB* My favorite parts: I am glad that you hold out hope that one day all of the things that you gave away will be "yours" once again. That is a healthy outlook, even when things still may feel like crap.

*PenR* Some suggestions are: It seems you are just writing and writing without stopping...trying to get everything out before you lose it. And that's not a bad thing. Perhaps once you've written it out...maybe go back and break up the writing into paragraphs so that your reader isn't overwhelmed at first glance of a monstrous paragraph. Just my opinion, remember *Smile*

*PenG* Overall: You ask yourself good questions. You've done some thinking and you are processing. These are all good steps forward. I wish you well in your writing career, and plan on reviewing more of your work in the future, with your permission, of course.

Thank you for sharing your work, and Keep on Writing!

sincerely,
amy

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to review your work.

*Cake* My first impression: Writing.com is such a community of caring individuals. It really is a family. This is such a fitting tribute for those who have come to put their mark on the family, and then to go on to further journeys.

*Cake2* Other thoughts: This is set up in an amazing manner. It is thoughtful, sincere, and not at all flamboyant. Very tastefully done *Smile*

*Cake* My favorite parts: That people can post their memories and well wishes to the families of those who have departed.

*Cake3* Some suggestions:No suggestions, and am grateful that there is a place to honor those who are no longer with us.

*Cake* Overall: Well done! Thank you for making this place of honor for the family.


sincerely,

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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell
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Review of The Learning Tree  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to review your work.

*Cake* My first impression: WOW! I couldn't help but be amazed at your portfolio. Everything is so pretty and colorful and I couldn't help but admire the awards that you have earned and won throughout your WdC career. It's a good thing that I am not easily intimidated, or I might just hang up my pen and call it a day. But really, congratulations on such an outstanding portfolio!

*Cake2* Other thoughts: I looked around to choose something to review, and I decided to start here. I like the title of your folder, The Learning Tree. Just glancing at the different titles, and subject matter, I plan on checking out what you have to offer a newbie in order to make my writing the best I can. I appreciate the time and effort that you have taken to make your portfolio welcoming and informative.

*Cake* My favorite parts: You literally have something for everyone. Punctuation, misspelled words, even English as a second language. It is truly a writer's treasure trove.

*Cake3* Some suggestions:I saw no broken links or typos with your work. The time and effort you've taken has been well executed. I honestly don't know if there IS anything to add...at least from my point of view. I am sure there may be, but I have no suggestions at this time...LOL

*Cake* Overall: I am glad that I have stopped by to review your portfolio. I plan on coming back and taking advantage of the knowledge that you've put together, with your permission, of course. Thank you so very much. I've given this work a 5-star rating, only because I can't give it a "10" *Smile*


sincerely,

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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell
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Review of Randoms by Rach  
for entry "To Try Something New" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Choconut ~ House Targaryen } Thank you for sharing this work "To Try Something New" 

*PenR* Why I chose to review this work: Working on the Dec 11 entry of the Advent challenge. I also was curious, and thought I'd do some snooping into your blog.

*PenR* My first impression: I enjoyed your little mini contest when you left the Newbie Nest. I am also excited to have you as a judge for the Inquiring Minds contest. It is fun to be a judge, as I've done it a couple of times already.

*Penr* How I feel about this: Your writing touched me. I, too have lots of plans for the coming year, and I felt a kinship with you and your goals.

*PenR* Some suggestions I have: Just realize that while your goals are lofty, and wonderful...do not allow it to stress you out. WdC is a place where we can stretch our writing muscles and learn new skills and HAVE FUN!

*PenR* Overall: I enjoyed peaking into your life, and with your permission, would love to keep up with your adventures. You are most appreciated!


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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to review your work.

*Cake* My first impression: You like dragons! LOL I had no idea on the number of dragons that could be found in film and literature. I shouldn't be surprised, but it was amazing none the less.

*Cake2* Other thoughts: I obviously don't know my dragons...I took your test, and scored 12/18, and to be honest, I guessed at most of them *FacePalm*

*Cake* My favorite parts: I like the way that the quiz is set up, and I enjoyed taking it (even with my woefully lacking knowledge).

*Cake3* Some suggestions: I saw no typos or grammar issues with your writing. A lot of thought was put into making this quiz, and it shows.

*Cake* Overall: I enjoyed reviewing your quiz, and I am glad to be snooping around you portfolio. Thank you for sharing! Happy WdC Anniversary *Smile*


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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell
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Review of When we align  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*Sun* "PDG Rockin' Reviewer's Group" *Sun*


Hi Jimminycritic

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 When we align  (E)
Love/Hate personification. How ever can we get things done?
#2067576 by Jimminycritic


*Sun* Why I chose this work to review: The title intrigued me. I was curious on how someone would personify the duality of love/hate. You have written an interesting piece. It almost reminded me of a patient mother with a rebellious teenager in the dialogue. It was like hate was trying to provoke a response out of love, and when love "didn't bite", it drove hate crazy. Those were the feelings that I got out of reading your story.

*Sun* What I liked about your piece: You did give love/hate tangible feelings. I could picture the dialogue between the two of them clearly in my mind as I was reading your story. I also liked how you switched the sizing on the words, so that you could follow along between the two voices.

*Sun* How I felt about it: This was an interesting work. It touched me on an emotional level, as I have had a similar conversation with my children when they were teenagers, and I was almost at my limit with them. Only by hanging onto the love I had for them did I not lose it completely with them. So as I read your story, these memories were brought to the forefront.

*Sun* Suggestions: I saw no typos or grammar issues with your writing. It looks to be well thought out and executed. I really didn't see anything to add to your work, or anything that I thought would make it better.

*Sun* Overall: It is not the easiest thing to personify attitudes or characteristics. You've done a remarkable job with this short story. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, and hope that you get a lot of positive reviews for it. I've enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

sincerely,

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Review of When we align  
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Sun* "PDG Rockin' Reviewer's Group" *Sun*


Hi Jimminycritic

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*Sun* Why I chose this work to review: The title intrigued me. I was curious on how someone would personify the duality of love/hate. You have written an interesting piece. It almost reminded me of a patient mother with a rebellious teenager in the dialogue. It was like hate was trying to provoke a response out of love, and when love "didn't bite", it drove hate crazy. Those were the feelings that I got out of reading your story.

*Sun* What I liked about your piece: You did give love/hate tangible feelings. I could picture the dialogue between the two of them clearly in my mind as I was reading your story. I also liked how you switched the sizing on the words, so that you could follow along between the two voices.

*Sun* How I felt about it: This was an interesting work. It touched me on an emotional level, as I have had a similar conversation with my children when they were teenagers, and I was almost at my limit with them. Only by hanging onto the love I had for them did I not lose it completely with them. So as I read your story, these memories were brought to the forefront.

*Sun* Suggestions:I saw no typos or grammar issues with your writing. It looks to be well thought out and executed. I really didn't see anything to add to your work, or anything that I thought would make it better.

*Sun* Overall: It is not the easiest thing to personify attitudes or characteristics. You've done a remarkable job with this short story. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, and hope that you get a lot of positive reviews for it. I've enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

sincerely,

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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a cute poem. I like the imagery that you show in your writing. It shows a more simplistic time, where Halloween could be fun and one didn't have to worry so much about people being mean to children (at least you didn't hear about it like today).
I enjoyed reading your poem, and liked the way it flowed. Keep up the great work, and look forward to reading more of your work now that I've found it. Thanks again for sharing! Hang in there!

sincerely,
amy

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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell
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Rated: E | (4.5)
What a fun way to enter the New Year! Wine and dancing the night away until you drop. Makes me wish I could join you. Here is to the New Year to come, and thank you again for sharing. The rhyme scheme is simple and the words flow smoothly. I look forward to reading more of your work. Don't give up!

sincerely,
amy

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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Cypress seems to be a beautiful spot to spend Christmas. I like the different textures that you write about. The wind and waves, the citrus trees, the sand of the beach. It brings your poem to life. Thank you for sharing this. I am sorry that I have not reviewed your work before. What a lovely way to be reminded about the birth of the Savior.

sincerely,
amy

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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell
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Review of The Body  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing.

*PenR* My first impression: At first, I thought that you had missed the POV idea. I enjoyed the story, and to be honest, I didn't feel all that sorry for Ken. He was a pompous ass, and I felt that karma was giving him his "just desserts". As I kept reading, it finally dawned on me that "Ken" was the name of a doll. The entire story was from the imaginations of a little girl playing with dolls in her room. I wanted to slap my head with a "you could have had a V8" moment.

*Penr* How I feel about this: Your story is engaging, and the twist at the end of the tale made it even better. The room description of the chairs covered with blankets and sheets to make a mountain region was brought to life. The plastic bird and the teddy bear just put the "icing on the cake". It brought recollections of my own doll playing into mind, and I have to shake my head in wonder at the inventiveness of your writing.

*PenR* Some suggestions I have: I saw no typos or grammar issues with your writing. I was a bit curious though as to why you added the ending paragraph to the story. It almost makes me think that there is more to the story to come, and that you could almost make this a "parallel universe" kind of story. That is my take on it anyway.

*PenR* Overall: You have a knack for throwing twists into your writing that the reader doesn't see coming. I was completely captivated by your writing, and although I didn't see the complete picture until the end, I couldn't stop reading. An excellent POV story with a wild twist at the end. The way you've tied the twist to the point of view is brilliant in my opinion. It is also inspired and definitely something to keep in mind in any future story writing. Not that I would copy, of course *Facepalm*, but the style of your writing. Clear as mud?


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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell
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Review of peace  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*



Welcome to Writing.Com! I hope you make yourself at home, and enjoy all that WdC has to offer. The people here are a friendly bunch of folks, and don't be afraid to jump right in or ask questions!

I'm reviewing your piece today.

*PenP* My initial thoughts: Your title belies the violence that has been done in this place you are describing. Unless you mean for the peace that has come now that the violence has been done and now gone.

*PenB* My favorite part: The last line: Playing in that same mud that covers him here. Vivid imagery in these words. Your writing is thought-provoking. Violence done to children seems to be surreal...something out of nightmare.

*PenR* Some suggestions are: vanishes and disappear - I think you meant to write disappears? Also, No don't cry, and save your tear {comma placement, and save your tear(s)? add an "s" to it?

*PenG* Overall: You have a good message. The rhyming flow is a little bumpy, but you have some excellent phrasing within your poem. I also like the message: all we need is peace. Thank you for staying hopeful.

Thank you for sharing your work, and Keep on Writing!

sincerely,
amy

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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Thank you for sharing. This is review #2 of a package that was gifted to you.

*PenR* My first impression: I love how you weave the Irish countryside and brogue into your tale. What started out beautiful became a horror. I like how you ended your heartbreaking tale with the winds of Ireland again.

*Penr* How I feel about this: You have a knack for touching the emotions in this reader. I remember where I was when I heard the news of this disaster. I like how you made this a first person story, and I can imagine the story in my head as I read.

*PenR* Some suggestions I have: I saw no typos or grammar issues in your writing. I see nothing to add to the tale, and it flows smoothly from one scene to the next, as if the spirit is recalling its memories.

*PenR* Overall: A unique spin on such a horrific day. I was immediately hooked, not only by the title, but also the picture. You weave an exceptional story. It was obviously well thought out and executed. I have enjoyed reading your work.


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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing.

*PenR* My first impression: Wow! What an insight to the fickleness, if not outright abuse that we take from our Muses.

*Penr* How I feel about this: It makes me feel as though I should perhaps be a little grateful that my Muse looks out for me. Hmmm. The phrase "No Pain, No Gain" comes to mind *FacePalm*.

*PenR* Some suggestions I have: It looks to be well thought out and executed. I saw no grammar or typo issues in your writing. I don't have anything to suggest to make it better, however; maybe you should be a little less hard on your Muse...LOL, but that is just my opinion.

*PenR* Overall:I was hooked from the beginning, and had to chuckle as I continued to read. I don't know of any writer who could NOT relate to this. The fickle creatures we use to inspire us - they are definitely not going to be "house-broken".


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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a very helpful page. I like the way it flows, and after reading it, I found some helpful info for my own contest. A great resource. Well thought out and executed.
I didn't see any typos or grammar issues in the writing. You have written in in a logical order which makes sense, and you have given links to other great resources as well. I don't have anything else to suggest at this time, and I wish I had read this before doing things the "hard" way. Perhaps a little more advertising?

Thank you for sharing this page, and I appreciate all of the help you've given me. Next time (??) Won't be as hard LOL.

sincerely,
amy

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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell
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Review of Cryptogram  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your poem reminds me of a character I am watching on Netflix. "House" is one of those people. You have to get through a lot of stuff to be a friend, and then only if it's "worth it". Your poem is thought-provoking to say the least. I spotted no typos or grammar issues in your writing.

I enjoyed reading it from beginning to end, and now I am going to have to snoop in your portfolio *Smile*, if that is okay.
Thank you for sharing this creative work. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

sincerely,
amy

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Review of A-mused  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice play on the word Muse. I enjoyed your little venture into the 100 word contest. I hope it does/did well. I saw no typos or grammar issues. Your description of the fairy-like beings was vivid and I could see them in my mind clearly. A well done story for such a limited amount of words. Keep up the good work!

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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
A cute take on Jane Austen's story. I like that you used her history to have Santa write a letter to her. Very creative. I also noticed you've entered it into the Parallel Contest. Good luck with your entry. I spotted no typos and the letter was brilliantly written.
Thank you for sharing Jane's story in a unique way.

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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
LOL...sometimes family situations can create more stress than that of an office party. You point out some things though, and I have to give you credit on how you wrote them out. I sometimes enter a room "mouth first" and have had some faux pas as well. LOL Oh well, live and learn. Thanks for trying to make a family get together not so uncomfortable.

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