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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of The Last Plague  
Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have the start of an interesting Horror Story. You have folks going about their lives, just as the start of a new sickness occurs. Said sickness makes folks highly aggressive, and violent.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is a fun interactive. Set in the world of Zootopia, things start to change when humans start showing up. One has to wonder what will happen to this world.

Characters
The characters seem interesting, and are in-line with their movie versions.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see many issues, but keep an eye out, as sometimes adders miss things before posting the addition.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have the start of a story where, it looks like, at a certain age, children go through a ritual to see if they can receive the ability to use magic. Among these children is the son of a noble family, who can't wait until they can use magic.

Characters
The characters seem interesting. Hope to know more about them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, but you might want some space between paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
So, you're some farmboy, or farmgirl, who wants to be a Hero? Well, whoop-de-do. Been around the block a time or two, with others before. Let's just hope you're not the One Last Hope! After all, there's plenty of Heroes out there - can you live up to the stories, or will you be forgotten?

Characters
Plenty of crazy characters.

Spelling and Grammar
There's some spelling and grammar issues here and there, but those can be fixed.

Thoughts
Plenty of crazy adventures, and plenty more to come. I have enjoyed adding to them.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting Poll asking what point of view they like to use when it comes to writing. In my opinion, that all depends on what kind of story one is writing. Is the story something along the lines of one telling about their day "I did..."? Is is about what "You" are doing? Or is this about what "Bob" is doing? In any case, all can be fun.

Thoughts
A nice poll to do.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestion
Instead of using the "Other" Genre, try the "Opinion" genre.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: E | (4.5)
To be honest, some of these had me stumped, either because I didn't know what it was, or because I couldn't spell it right. Thank goodness for D&D and Google. Still, entertaining. Lets see how well folks know their myths.

Thoughts
Fun and entertaining.

Spelling and Grammar
The intersection of Basilisk and Werewolf seems to have a necessary misspelling in order to fit.

Suggestions
Might want to put this under Fantasy and Folklore.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Well, this is an interesting story. You have a story about a Marshall, who isn't exactly human, trying to do her job in a place that isn't exactly friendly. Part of me kind of wonders like - just what sort of setting is this, and just what is the Marshall.

Characters
The Marshall looks interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Might want to tack this under the Action/Adventure genre. Also, the Intro Rating seems okay to be rated "E".

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Yeah, to be honest, I don't think that I can give this a full in-depth point-by-point review, as I'm not normally sitting down an playing card games. I prefer something like War or Uno. Still, it might have some potential for the right crowd.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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You have a world full of animal-like people with various levels of technology. You seem to be focused on an owl soldier who serves a rat king as a guard of some sort. Kind of makes one wonder about the history of this world.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The longest Walk  
Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have a couple of people walking around, only it seems that someone isn't getting a certain message, and clearly doesn't understand certain signs.

An interesting read.

Characters
The characters seem to be ordinary people.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with the contest.

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HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Second Coming  
Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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You have an idea about what it would be like to have the Second Coming of Jesus Christ occur and what they'd look like. An interesting take on the idea.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You have a bit of a block here. Sometimes a few four-to-five-sentence paragraphs can make things easier to read.

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Review of I can't Breathe  
Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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You have a poem, which talks abut the whole race issue, seemingly from the point of view of an African American, or another person with dark-colored skin tones. Talks about not being able to breath. Interesting.

Thoughts
Interesting to read.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want some space between Mr. and Floyd.

Suggestions
You might want to hit "Enter" between each line of the poem. As it is, this all looks like one big block of words, which can strain the eyes a bit while reading.

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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. You've got a couple of siblings trying to figure out a way to make money so that their home doesn't get foreclosed on. When they respond to a strange newspaper add, things get strange when they get sucked into some sort of game, and have to compete against other teams of siblings.

Characters
The characters seemed interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I didn't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of The Last Goodbye  
Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have someone who fins out some difficult news about their mother, in that she has cancer. However, they prefer to act as if they don't know about it, in order to try to enjoy what time was left.

Characters
They seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Testing  
Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a review for your first item, and I hope that you enjoy! *BigSmile*

This is an item that you made to see how things can be posted here. I hope that this little blurb will inspire you to write more things, such as poetry and short stories, and other crazy things. *Laugh*

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues.

Best of luck with your future items.

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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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A Yu-Gi-Oh! fanfiction wherein Kiaba hires an American escort, and gets more than he bargains for. That's true for sure, as they get into all sorts of trouble, especially when they run into old acquaintances.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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This is an interesting piece of fanfiction, set in the Yo-Gi-Oh universe dealing with a situation that occurs when Seto Kaiba goes to America for a business trip, and encounters a woman who is very open about her relationships.

Characters
While I'm not sure if the Kaibas themselves are in-character (as it's been a while since I've seen the show), they do seem plausible. The Original Characters also seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of The Lucky Ones  
Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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You have a group of campers who go out into the woods, but only one of them makes it out. It seems that something very strange happened in to woods, which causes the demise of most. Makes one wonder what really happened.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I stumbled across this under the Online Authors, although what really caught my attention was the name in the title - especially since my own username ought to give most a very good clue as to why it drew my eye...

What you have is a short story about a paranormal investigator, who has been hired to check out a collage. While there, he comes across a powerful entity that is causing some serious troubles.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "Chapter 2" 
Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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In this chapter, it seems that, due to the incident from the previous chapter, our guy has a new partner, and it seems that his boss isn't really that caring of him. Told to try and get a new client, things turn out to be a big trap.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Well, this looks like the start of an interesting story. You have a man who enters a home that happens to house a number of vampires, who like the taste of human blood. Claiming to work for some sort of pharmaceutical company, the man tries to convince the leader of the vampires to try an alternative form of subsistence, but the vampires aren't interested. Of course, the man is no fool, and knew just what he was dealing with.

Characters
The characters seem to be very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Well, this is the start of what looks to be an interesting story. You have a young man, who seems to have been on his own for quite some time, except for the voices in his head. However, it seems that the situation is more than it appears to be. Might look at more.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting poll about a person's favorite type of writing. Personally, I like all types, but my favorite is the Interactive, as you can get so many stories, all from a common origin. After all, start the Main Character off at a crossroads, and here's a few possibilities:

Heads to the North: The MC become the King of a great and powerful nation, with plenty of queens to enjoy the company of.

Heads to the South: The MC becomes a vicious and brutal Bandit Warlord with a huge price on his head, among other things.

Heads to the East: The MC gets captured by a dragon, and is forced to be its slave, or else they become lunch.

Heads to the West: They become a farmer, taxed by the King, robbed by the Bandit Warlord, and terrorized by the dragon.

Undecided: Has an encounter with a guy that has a crossbow - The End.

Plenty of fun.

Originality
Haven't encountered a poll like this.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Seems that our murder suspect is telling our detective more about her life. Seems she spent time in a small self-sustained village up in Canada while staying with her uncle, who seems to be rather mysterious.

Characters
Learning more about them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review by BIG BAD WOLF
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is an interesting In & Out, especially if one likes to add to Interactives. Here is a place where one can learn and share tips for writing additions to those stories that take so many twists and turns, and always create a new story, despite sharing the same originating point as another. Worth looking at.

Thoughts
Very original.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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