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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of Wolfe Family Farm  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In a world where humans are second-rate citizens at best, with lucky ones being merely slaves or pets, many are seen as nothing more than livestock, and seen as a source of food. Follow one werewolf family that raises human livestock, and learn about the complicated relationship that they have with the herd, especially the relationship between Robert Wolfe, the Owner and Master of the herd, and Herd Leader, John Wrangler, who plots to free the herd from their situation. However, things won't be easy, because these two have a certain amount of respect for the other. What will happen?

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This looks like the start of a story. There's a young woman taking care of the family horses, so that they can be ready for the day. Makes one wonder a bit about the rest of the story.

Characters
The characters show promise.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Sometimes it takes a wolf to find a cat.

You have a, literal, cat-burglar who steals to support her younger siblings. One night, she gets hired to do a job, one that would see to it that her family no longer starved. Problem is, this job might be more trouble than it's worth.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

I hope to see more of this cat's future.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A woman finds herself in a land that makes so sense, and can only travel by eating bananas. More than a little crazy, if you want to have a laugh or two, or was it three? What am I doing here?

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Masquerade  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well, this is a chuckle. An entry for my April-May contest in "The Anthro Activity Anteroom, wherein a Masquerade that has been hiding Fantasy Creatures from Normal Humans has been broken, as well as their reactions afterwards. That being said, the twist at the end, is clearly worth a chuckle - Best Option Indeed! *Rolling* *Laugh*

Characters
Characters are given more of a general description, but I'm curious about the Post-Masquerade world.

Spelling and Grammar
You got a \ at the end of the second paragraph that you could get rid of.

Best of Luck with the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Vampire Bouncer  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting read. You have a vampire, working as a bouncer at a bar. However, when criminals start messing with his neighborhood, the fangs come out, and blood is soon spilled. Rather interesting.

Characters
The characters are interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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You have a story about a woman married to a high-ranking politician during the time of a pandemic. However, it seems that her love life isn't what it could be. Her husband then gets a challenger, not only to his political position, but for his wife's affections.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Homecoming  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute poem about a cat that greets its owner as they return home from work. Makes me laugh and think about the little dog I deal with. After all, as soon as my mother and I get home, and open the door, that girl's like "Mommy's Home!" and just rushes out the door to jump on my mom's legs. Got to laugh.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with Spelling or Grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It's sort of easy to tell what this poem is about, after a read-through. This has been something of a rough couple of years for many. However, one must look on the brighter side of things, because hardships have come before, and we've weathered them. Sometimes though, even in darkness, there's a light, and it can shine brightly.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Somebody with the initials C.D. popped on over and said, "Hey boys! Come take a look at this! Someone's trying to make fun of a song that's been parodied about half a dozen times already!"

A fun start to a parody of a song I enjoy. I wonder how it will end.

Characters
Given the original source, an interesting take on the characters.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Some interesting thoughts on dating and courting - like is courting old-fashioned, or has it changed into what folks call dating? Then there's the question of commitment and if there's such a thing as cheating while dating. Lots of things to think on.

Thoughts
Interesting to read.

Spelling and Grammar
Some minor issues - betraiel should be betrayal for one. There's also some punctuation issues.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of THE CHAMBER  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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An interesting poem about a man, who, due to their crimes, is about to be executed. As it is, it seems that the man has a prior history involving this place, as it seems that his father had also died in this location.

Thoughts
An interesting subject to thing on.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Night Terrors  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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You have a man and his son looking for a creature that has been scaring their livestock. However, what they find is something most don't expect to see. Looks like the start of an interesting book.

Characters
The characters seem to be interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of A Trip To Nowhere  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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You have a short story about a man living in a bunker, some time after World War Three has occurred. It seems that things are rather difficult for him, especially once one learns the truth.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Well, this is an interesting short story. It involves the figures in a painting, who become worried when their owner suddenly dies in front of them. Makes one wonder about other works of art out there.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of A Young Nation  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Found It.

A short poem about our nation's history. Talks about how mistakes had been made, but we try to learn from them, and do better for the future. Even now, there's still a lot to learn from, and hope that the mistakes won't get repeated.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Trinket series!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Here you ask a question about what your next Trinket series should be. Personally, I like books - "Redwall" comes to mind, as does "The Dragon Knight", "Discworld", "Spells, Swords & Stealth", and a few more. Lots of possibilities.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Here you ask some questions for collectors of your trinkets. Kind of useful. Personally, I like it when there's a large pool of trinkets, so that everyone can collect them, without the need for a rush.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Leviathan  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have a scientist who seems to be researching dolphin communication patterns, in an attempt to find proof of some theory of his. Looks rather interesting.

Characters
The scientist seems interesting, but could use a bit of expansion - do they have a spouse or love interest that supports their work?

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Complex Numbers  
for entry "In a Red Hood
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Ah, the truth about Fairy Tails. Something that makes folks wonder, and about how the lessons seem to change depending upon the age the story is set in. After all, folks change, so perhaps the lessons should as well. Sometimes the story gets changed with the times as well.

Thoughts
An interesting take on the stories told in the past.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have the start of a story where, it looks like, at a certain age, children go through a ritual to see if they can receive the ability to use magic. Among these children is the son of a noble family, who can't wait until they can use magic.

Characters
The characters seem interesting. Hope to know more about them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, but you might want some space between paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
So, you're some farmboy, or farmgirl, who wants to be a Hero? Well, whoop-de-do. Been around the block a time or two, with others before. Let's just hope you're not the One Last Hope! After all, there's plenty of Heroes out there - can you live up to the stories, or will you be forgotten?

Characters
Plenty of crazy characters.

Spelling and Grammar
There's some spelling and grammar issues here and there, but those can be fixed.

Thoughts
Plenty of crazy adventures, and plenty more to come. I have enjoyed adding to them.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting Poll asking what point of view they like to use when it comes to writing. In my opinion, that all depends on what kind of story one is writing. Is the story something along the lines of one telling about their day "I did..."? Is is about what "You" are doing? Or is this about what "Bob" is doing? In any case, all can be fun.

Thoughts
A nice poll to do.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestion
Instead of using the "Other" Genre, try the "Opinion" genre.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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You have a world full of animal-like people with various levels of technology. You seem to be focused on an owl soldier who serves a rat king as a guard of some sort. Kind of makes one wonder about the history of this world.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The longest Walk  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have a couple of people walking around, only it seems that someone isn't getting a certain message, and clearly doesn't understand certain signs.

An interesting read.

Characters
The characters seem to be ordinary people.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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