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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
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Review of Zaya (Vixen)  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting image for a character you have - Zaya Vixen. You even have a brief bio for her - likes, dislikes, and even a bit about her history. This is useful to know. Might even encourage folks to add to stories involving her, in one form or another. Kinda cute.

Thoughts
It's a cute image.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Two suggestions come to mind.

1. If this is a character you have for a story written here, post a link to it.

2. It might be a good idea to talk a bit more about her history, so that folks know her better.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Poetry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A cute selection of poetry to read. Poems tend to be based on one emotion or another. Many are short, and others are long. A poem comes from the heart. Some fit to a form of some sort. Others have no formal form, but fit an emotional one. All are worth the read, and are very enjoyable. I hope that more find them.

Thoughts
A nice selection of poems to read. I enjoyed them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Legacy - lessons and stories passed on down from our ancestors. This might even include items and locations, not to mention buildings, that are part of the family inheritance. Sometimes it leads to something incredible. Other times, the legacy is something dark, and best left forgotten. Always something.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Your Kingdom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ah, a rather interesting question; If you could create a kingdom, what kind would it be. Well, first off - I'd like to know if there's any rules or limitations? Must it be realistic? Is Magic, Fantasy, Sci-fi, and that sort of stuff allowed? Are characters from movies and video games allowed? Must it be PG friendly, or is NSFW stuff allowed? These sorts of things can create different kingdoms with different rules.

Thoughts
An interesting topic of discussion.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Find all of those fluffy floofs! All the Fs, Ls, Os, and Es, and a few Ss. Are you up to the chalange of finding ten or so versions of the same word? Or, perhaps, you just got attacked by your own bundle of floof. Annoying those four-legged critters can be. Playing innocent they like to do. Trouble they be.

Thoughts
A cute piece to look at and have fun with.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "Laughter and Me" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Sometimes one must laugh. It doesn't need to be big, it doesn't even need to be the funniest thing ever, but laughing means something important - "I'm still alive." I remember reading a Star Wars book, where a couple of Clone Troopers tried to raid an enemy base by going through the sewer system, and they make a breach, and get splattered by waste. Cue both of these highly trained soldiers burst out in laughter, with the main character trooper thinking to themselves that laughing was the oldest "All Clear" signal.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "On True Friendship" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Friendship - one of the most valuable and sacred treasures, alongside of love, hope, and faith. For a friend, one would do impossible things. There are stories about people doing things for their friends, like going on a four thousand mile road trip, just to deliver their friend's remains to their family. Others take down criminal organizations because of what the criminal's did to a friend. Perhaps real life doesn't do things like that, but some come close, and other make fiction seem plausible.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "Memories and Dreams" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
First things first - Happy Anniversary!

Memories and dreams - one lets us look back into the past, the other lets us look into a possible future. We use both as inspiration for the things we make - stories written, drawings penned, sculptures carved, and many more We might back something based off of a memory, or of an idea we had while sleeping. Both can help define who we are as a person.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "Can I 'Let It Be'?" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
What do I think about July? Well, there's July 4th, which I have to work - fireworks, crowds, everyone screaming - don't know how much fun I'll have there. One question might be; Where to find a good pool? as those are hard to find where I'm at. There's going to be a number of local fairs - might find one worth going to. It will also be hot - I hope that I can get a garden started.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
"Words are what men live by." - John Wayne as Captain Jake Cutter in The Comancheros.

Words hold a lot of meaning. At one point, they were sacred, one's word meaning a great deal - worth more than gold. Your word was a promise, come Hell or high water, if you gave it, you kept it, or else you weren't trustworthy, and if you weren't trustworthy, you'd have a hell of a time getting folks to help you in a time of need. These days - I don't know.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Deep Breaths  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A man finds himself several million years in the past - 75 million t be more precise. Among other things, the main thing he notices is the air pressure, which is much higher than what he's used to. He also sees how much bigger many of the other creatures are, compared to Modern counterparts. What will happen to him?

Characters
The man seems to be interesting. I would like to know more about him, like why is he in the past?

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "On Maps and Such..." Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Maps - once big sheets of folded paper, but now, we can just go "Hey Google! What's the distance between J-Town and Z-City?" We get both distance, and a route to take, one warning of delays and issues along the way. Throw in GPS, and we'll see what happens. Always something to think on.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "On Monsters" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Monsters - there are many kinds - werewolves, vampires, demons. However, the worst monsters are those that hide in plain sight, within ourselves. While humans tend to do good, we can also do evil things - this has happened on both small and large scales, for one reason or another. The trick is identifying and denying the monster within.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "Godot? You said?" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Godot? What the heck is that? Okay - titular character in the play "Waiting for Godot", where some form of craziness rules things. Based on what I've just read, I don't think that I will watch it in theaters, or anywhere. I like for some things to make sense - villain to fight, disaster to outrun, love interest to woo - not something that runs on pure nonsense.

Thoughts
Well, an interesting item to learn about.

Spelling and Grammar
Unless there's a time machine to take one to 1925, I think you meant 2025.

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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A person, whose friend had vanished some years prior, is out in the fog, searching. Sometimes folks just vanished, never to be found. Sometimes, there isn't even a search. In this case, the person still searches for their friend, trying to locate them, or at the very least, find a clue. Then, they find something, and now things will begin to change, perhaps.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Anthrosexual  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In a world where humans and scientifically modified, and uplifted, beings known as Anthroids exist, a forbidden type of romance has come up. Anthroids were created to do various tasks after a war. It is all but forbidden for humans and Anthroids to romance each other. However, there are those that have fallen for each other. Can they find happiness, or is this romance doomed to falter? Let's find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see many issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Purrsuit of Knowledge" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Ah, the secret behind male Ginger cats and Female Calico cats - the secret involves a gene of some sort, which affects coloration. Well, I don't know much about all that. What I do know is that some fuzzball has just started rubbing my legs for no reason. (Get out of my house this instant! I know full-well you ain't mine! Now terrorize your owner instead! Go on! Shoo!) Disregard that last bit - jerks keep dropping off their unwanted pets at the local farms - I kinda feel sorry for the friendlier ones. Oh great - the thing is reading through the window! I think that they are aliens trying to take over. *Laugh*

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "We Come In Peace" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
The Space Race - a time of serious scientific advancement and discovery. It was also an extra large pissing competition. Apparently, it was measured in miles and kilometers. It was also measured in bodies, especially for Russia, in one manner or another. Makes one wonder what would have happened if they had indeed made it to the Moon first. Maybe we'd be shooting for Mars. Or, maybe, nothing much different would have happened.

Thoughts
Can't say that I've heard much about the Russian side of the Space Race. Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Contest Entries  Open in new Window.
for entry "The Vacation" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Thank you for entering "The Anthro Activity Anteroom" Open in new Window.. Enjoy the review!

Let's see - Judy and Nick from Zootopia encounter some members of the - it seems - reformed Bad Guys gang, and one of their friends, while on vacation. However, it seems that vacation will need to wait, as a bank has just been robbed, and now it's a case of all hands on deck as they head odd in pursuit of the thieves. Will they make it in time? Read to find out.

Characters
The characters seem to be mostly in-character.

Spelling and Grammar
The only Spelling/Grammar issue I noticed is that "Tow" should be "Two".

Suggestion
You mention the groups cheering at the beginning. To me, this makes little sense. Now, if there was a volleyball game or something similar going on, then cheering might make sense.

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Review of Quack Fu  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a hoot and a holler. A group of friends go to Disney World, planning to have some fun. However, three would-be thieves show up, and try to rob them. However, it seems that there was some pixie dust in the air, for Donald Duck has shown up for the rescue, and they know Taekwondo. Time for some fun.

Characters
Characters seem interesting, especially Donald Duck.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you for entering my contest - "The Anthro Activity Anteroom" Open in new Window.. We'll see how you do.

Ah, The Bad Guys, lead by Wolf, this team consisting of Miss Webs Tarantula the hacker, Mr. Snake the safecracker, Mr. Shark, the disguise expert, and Mr. Piranha, close-quarters specialist, has set out to steal a special egg. Only to encounter a problem -

Mojo Jojo! Not only has this mad monkey decided to steal the egg too, he plans to use it to empower a device to take over the world, and has abducted Wolf's crew to boot. Luckily, the master thief has managed to run into Zootopia's finest - Judy Hopps and Nick Wilde. However, even these three will need help. Thankfully, Nick knows a few people. Will they be enough to save not only Wolf's crew, but also the world? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters seem to be interesting, and seem to stay in-character to their canonical versions, for the most part.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It's a bird! It's a Plane!

It's a Dragon!

A Dragon?

Yes! A Dragon! Now run before - wait, the dragon isn't out for treasures and princesses? Instead it's trying to help folks out in a Modern city? Follow the tail, or tale, of Derg the Superhero dragon, as they fight crime and protect the innocent - or is that what they want you to believe?

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Space - the second-to-last Frontier, tied with the oceans' depths, and behind the Afterlife. We have been making up stories ever since someone claimed that there was life on the Moon, and Mars. While it has been - currently - confirmed that there is no life on other heavenly bodies in our immediate area, life could still exist, either hidden or on distant worlds.

Thoughts
An interesting item.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Rebel Without a Curse" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
So, the United States is #1 when it comes to swearing, followed by the United Kingdom, with Australia in third place, much to the land from down under's disappointment. Well, part of the issue might be; What constitutes a swear word to these counties? Not everyone uses the same ones. That's where things get interesting.

Thoughts
An interesting piece.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "May 31, 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Talk about needing AC. Me - I got rain on-and-off. It was cool enough that I was able to weed-eat my quarter mile long driveway without too much of an issue. The real trick was trying to not hit the wild strawberry plants, as I want to try to get some fruit off of them, as my own died a few years back - much to my personal annoyance. Still, we'll see what happens.

Thoughts
A very relatable entry.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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