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Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, having reflections upon one's youth. This is something that many do, as we look back to when we were children, who did stupid things because, we were, among other things, curious about what would happen if we tried to give the cat a bath, which might have lead to getting bit or scratched, or maybe, you had a cat that liked getting wet. Then, there's all the other stupid things. Sometimes, we still do them.

Thoughts
An interesting little piece.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, the old being punished for trying to find joy tactic. There are many things to find joy in - one of Nature's fine scenes, like sunrise and sunset, or in enjoying a good, well-made, meal, or in reading a book you like, or even being in the company of those you are friends with, and countless more things. Is it wrong to enjoy such things?

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of The Road Home  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A man tries to get home during a bad storm, as he needs to bring medicine for his children. However, every path he takes is flooded, or otherwise closed off. However, he has to find a way to make it home, for the sake of his child. He soon takes a dangerous risk when the latest road is closed off. Will the risk be worth it? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Pop  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
"The waiting is the hardest part," or so the song says. Waiting for something to start tends to fill folks with one feeling or another. Nervousness, hope, excitement, worry - the whole gauntlet of emotions. One waits, and waits, and waits, and then......




Go!

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of The Careful Owl  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Why is it that there's a saying about Old and Wise as well as Young and Foolish? There are those that are old and foolish, as well as young and wise. Are owls truly wise, or are they fools at times? One might say something, but it might not be as true as we believe it to be, as it might be false or just plain wrong. Something to think on.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Out of the fog  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A fog-filled mind can be a very scary thing, as one cannot see things clearly. There is a grayness, or even a darkness, which stands in one's way. However, a light in this fog can help clear things up, allowing one to see the real color of things in the world. This light can come in many forms - a friendly chat, a pet nuzzling you, reading a good book. These can all help one out.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Judging folks for things that aren't crimes is something folks shouldn't do, especially when the other is innocent of the alleged violation. One never knows what might happen when they do that. One could push a person to the edge, causing them to fall. Then, they might have nothing to lose, especially if their heart is now filled with vengeance for those who had judged harshly.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of a sinner's vow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Sometimes one has done certain things in the heat of moments, or just because, only to realize that they did something wrong. Is such a person worthy of forgiveness? Well, it might depend on what one did, and whom they did it to. Somethings are not - and cannot be - forgivable. Other things might be, or should be, forgivable, but the other doesn't want to forgive, especially if they are prideful. It all depends.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of The New Boss  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
(Whoe! I'm way late to give out this review, especially since it was for a contest I was hosting - new round for that by the way, if you're curious. Sadly, you were the only one that had entered it. But, who knows.)

A cheetah in a world full of anthros has just gotten a new job. She decides to share the news with her roommates, who are all happy for her. Then, she finds out that her new boss-to-be is a monster. Is he a decent person, or is there going to be something more? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Seven  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Ah, the old, "Strangers Stuck in an Elevator" trope. Well, it's some kind of trope. A young man and a young woman find themselves stuck in an elevator, and are now trying to find a way to escape. Problem is, cell phones don't work, and the alarm isn't calling. So, how will they make it? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Trying to deal with busy thoughts, while trying to appear to not be distracted. Sometimes it is easy, and one can mask it. Other times, it is not, and it is a struggle to hide them, especially when we try to show nothing. There are many things that cause this, some good, others, not good. The question is what to do when they happen?

Thoughts
An interesting little piece.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of THE DEVILS MATCH  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting poem, reminding me a bit of "The Devil Went Down to Georgia" with a bit of "Drink with the Living Dead" where a man owes a debt, and the Devil has come to collect. The man tries to find a way out, but there's a cruel choice to be made if he does. Makes one wonder.

Characters and Thoughts
Interesting characters and an interesting piece.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Personally, I wouldn't do the ALL CAPS thing - that ruins the pleasure for folks, and makes it look like you're shouting.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Sea Girl  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting item for an interesting challenge - create a story full of one-syllable words.

A young boy seems to be looking for a mermaid, and his sister picks on him over it, saying that it is a foolish thing. The boy talks about the good things, but the girl mentions that there some bad things. Then, the father drops a bombshell.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Break The Chains  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Chains of control - there can be a number of those. Sometimes it's words, threats of retaliation. Sometimes it's actions, where something is held with an "This looks fragile - be a shame if it broke" type of gesture. There are plenty more. The problem is, what happens if someone goes too far, and causes the chain to break? Well, the would-be controller now has problems.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well, this looks like the start of an interesting story - the opening hook as it were.

A young woman is sitting on a roof as a storm comes through. This makes her appear rather odd, especially as she is also described as being rather cold towards others. However, someone new has entered her life. I wonder what will happen.

Characters
Characters look interesting so far.

Spelling and Grammar
A bit of work needs to be done, as there is a number of misspellings and sections where there is a space followed by a comma, and the like.

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Review of Chapter 10  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a Review you Requested. Enjoy.

Two men meet up at a collage town, where they catch up on old times, and try to get registered for collage courses, especially prelaw, which is one of the classes that they want to have together. Along the way, the one seems to be distracted by something on their phone. This is revealed to be a woman that the two know from somewhere.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Given that this is Chapter 10 of a bigger story, might help folks better to have read the prior nine - the next time you request a review. *Wink*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
When one searches among the stars, they have set a large goal. There are those who see it as the big "be all- end all" thing, where the goal/destination is the main thing, and they will spend their whole life trying to get to it. However, these people tend to forget to look at where they came from - who they were, and forget to live their life along the way. It's the journey that is important after all.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of The Lighthouse  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A light in the darkness, is what many need, when faced with trouble of many sorts, especially mentally or emotionally. For some, it's in reading the Holy Book, or just plain talking to the Big Guy Himself. For others, it's talking to friends. Some take up a new activity, that isn't associated with the rough times. There are many ways. The trick is to find them.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar.
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Curtain Call  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Describing a sunset. It's like a painting, with blues, oranges, reds, and some yellows, as the sun drops below the horizon, not to be seen until it comes up in the morning. It is something that one should take a moment, or two, to watch and enjoy, as it would be worth it. They are something special to behold.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
You got a number of spots where you either have a space before a comma, or no space after one, which can be a minor annoyance.

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Review of Everyone Hurts  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Pain - there are many kinds. Sometimes it's physically, which it temporary, usually. Then there's the mental, and emotional - both invisible, and long lasting. There's some others, but those are the three most talked about. Sometimes pain is endurable, lasting but a short while. Then, there's the kind that lasts and lasts.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of The Puzzle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
What is it about life that makes it worth living? There are many possibilities. The beauty of nature is one - the birds all singing, the bees buzzing, the flowers blossoming, and all the critters roaming the area. Friends are another thing - one can talk to them, do fun things with them, and more. There's so many things that make life worth living. Some are enjoyed together.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story. A maintenance man, after forty years, decides to try his hand at writing. However, it seems that getting published is trickier than writing. Will he live long enough to see his dream come true? Or will things prove to be too much for his aging heart? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of McDermott's Gift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A sheriff finds himself investigating a strange killing, which might have been done by an animal, but it seems that there was something more to it. Using a gift that allows him to communicate with the dead, he soon finds out what it was. Now, he must do everything he can to stop the monster, and protect his town.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Ah Legos - brings out the kid in one. In this story, we have some dastardly villains working to rob a museum and steal all those precious, priceless, historical, and valuable, artifacts, all while the place is about to be open in Lego City. Will their nasty deed succeed, or with those brave police officers foil their wicked actions? One must read to find out.

Characters
The characters sound interesting. I wonder what will happen.

Spelling and Grammar
I'll be honest - you got some unnecessary capitalizations, at least one duplicated sentence, and "Prophets" should be "Profits".

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Mutiny  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, I have to laugh at this - as it can be hard to make heads or tails of this tale. A voyage unlike any other, which is just full of trouble. A chuckle to be had, in every line, as none makes sense, at least at first. One best know their words, or they will soon go overboard, mad from confusion, as mutiny in the brain happens.

Thoughts
A funny piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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