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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
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Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
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Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
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Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
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I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
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for entry "May 19 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Life is one of those crazy things. Folks you think will stay together forever end up breaking up within months. Families that seem to love each other do not care for the rest. A bond forged in childhood shatters when they become adults. Crazy things happen - we don't know why, or how, but they just happen, sometimes for no reason at all, or for ones we don't understand.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Margins  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Margins - two poems about teenage romance. One seems to be from the young man's point of view, and the other seems to be the young lady's. They seem to have met during school, and seemed to have made a practice of trying to hide their romance from the teachers and such, especially since the young lady is supposed to be a Proper sort. One has to wonder what will happen.

Thoughts
An interesting set of poems to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Cunning Stunts" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
So, let's see here - rich dude took a bunch of celebrities on an eleven minute flight into space, and the passengers are complaining. This tells me several things that went wrong - no good food, no good in-flight movie, and terrible booze - and that was the First Class seats. Makes me wonder how bad the Economy ones are.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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for entry "May 15 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The weather and unfinished dreams, and daily life. The weather is always something. Got a storm coming at the moment - seems to start up around this time of the year. Road crews are getting things ready for Memorial Day weekend - making the flags look nice and such. Then, there's the things we wish that we got done. I got plenty of them. The trick is to do what one can do.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "On Energy Drains" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Energy drain - there are many kinds. Physically energy is lost by doing a lot of activity. Mental energy - well, being bored will do that. Likewise, Spiritual and Emotional energy falls when one hears a lot of bad things. So, we must find ways to regain it. Fun activities help - word search, crosswords, sudoku, board games, video games, writing - and plenty more.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "Mothers" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Do mothers (and fathers) have eyes in the back of their heads? I don't know, but parents always seem to know when children are up to something. This might be because, back when they were at about their kid's age, they had tried similar antics on their parents. Granted, technology might change, but there's always someone trying to sneak out of the house after midnight, dating some guy daddy doesn't like (because they remind the father of themselves at that age), and a few other things.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Cat's Day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A day in the life of an Alley Cat. Not trusting humans too much. Needing to find food, thus dealing with at least one human. Check the local message boards, to see who is in the area and such. Then, at the very end, put on a concert, and see who all enjoys the music. Then, finally, go to bed.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "Each Day" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Each day is a gift - that's why it's called the Present. One day, you are planning your son's birthday, and the next, you could find yourself planning their funeral. My uncle had to deal with that, a few years back, and it was rough. I guess that's why he enjoys seeing me whenever we dine at a mutual favorite restaurant at the same time, where he snags at least one of my chicken wings.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, but the asterisks leave me puzzled - what are they for?

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Rated: E | (4.5)
The relationship between father and son - a sacred treasure, where a parent can teach their child how to become an adult, and all that matters. However, this is often times strained, for one reason or another. I know that there are times that I wish that I could do more with my father - go fishing, have a picnic, watch a movie - something with him together.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
The idea of growing a garden. There are many possible reasons why folks like the idea. For some, it helps them to create a certain amount of natural beauty, in the form of flowers, herbs, vegetables, giving them things that they can enjoy, in one way or another. For others, it's having a sense of security, in that their food is untainted, with no unwanted chemicals and the like added to it. Always something.

Thoughts
Makes one think about things.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, a magical window. Let's gaze into the life of a young girl, with five older siblings. Often overlooked in the crowd of noise, she tries to find something to do. In the basement of the house was a magic window, one that teleported her to a world full of magic and wonder. What shall happen to her? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Good job winning the Writer's Cramp.

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Review of inheritance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A rather hard poem to read, not that the words are difficult, but how it hits one in the feels. It talks about the abuse that women have had to endure over the years, first to themselves, and then their daughters. Makes one wonder about all that has been done to them over the years.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Might want to increase the rating on this to at least 13+, given the subject matter.

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Review of Hugh Dunnit  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hugh Dunnit this time! A detective on another world is bored, five years bored, with no cases to solve. He wants some sort of mystery to solve - any sort of mystery to solve, even - what's this about a birthday? Wait, when was this guy born? Well, looks like there is indeed a case to solve after all folks.

Characters
Characters look very funny indeed.

spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Home for May Day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A nice story to read. A young man finds out that his collage will be closed a day earlier than expected. As a result, he is able to head to his hometown, surprising his mother and sister as a result. Likewise, he is able to enjoy the town's May Day celebrations instead of merely hearing about them. A cute little story to read.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Truth or Consequences" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Ah, a discussion on philosophy, beliefs, and opinions. This can be an interesting topic to talk about, especially since some cannot be Provable - that is, one cannot find proof that the opinion is either True or False. The crazy part is - these beliefs can divide people to the point that they will rage wars over it. I mean, the idea of Star Trek and Star Wars fans waging physical battle sounds ridiculous (unless you've been to certain places where such brawls have indeed happened) and yet, there are indeed folks that have waged decades, if not centuries, long wars, over what was written in one book or another. That is a statement that can be proved true or false, very easily, sadly.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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for entry "April 29 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, getting a Postcard from Writing.com - always a nice gift to get. Sometimes we go through a hard time, where we get mentally stressed and such, and we wonder about various things too much, even feeling depressed. Then, we get a card, and it helps to cheer us up, helping us to get over our hurdles. Always nice to get.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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for entry "April 28 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, the old issue of either staying up late, or getting up early, all while trying to work on something. This can be something of an interesting choice. If you got nothing to do the next day, staying up late can feel viable. Likewise, getting up early, well, if there's like 20 minutes until you have to get up, it can feel like, what's the point of going back to bed. Always something.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of MikeWrites' Blog  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
From Lord of the Rings to Phone Bills - life is like that. One moment, you're comparing the differences between a book and a movie based off of it, and the next, you're looking at a set, or three, of phone bills and phone plans, and trying to figure out the date of some far away location to see if that makes sense. Always something.

Thoughts
This makes one think about different things.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with sprlling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Life is like a Roller Coaster. There's ups, downs, loop-da-loops, twists and turns, and as with everything else, the ride eventually comes to an end. For some, the time is short, barely worth the mention. For others, it lasts well beyond the initial lifetime. The trick is to enjoy is while it lasts, and be ready to scream out in joy, as the coaster takes its first plunge into the unknown.

Thoughts
Makes one think about things.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Color My World" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Colors and colorblindness - there's the colors we can see, those we can't, and those some other person can see more of. I mean, here we have several shades of blue - from a few forms of light Teal to dark Navy, but some can see shades more distinct than even those. Likewise, some only see shades of Gray, or see them in other colors than what most tend to. Always something.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "Fears and Courage" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
There's different things that one fears - death, taxes, crime, disappointed mother-in-laws - to the point that there is a list that can be several miles long. Some folks fear different things. Someone from Florida might not be scared of a hurricane, but stick them in a mild New York snowfall, and they will be screaming and begging to go back home. The real question is, what do you do in such situations?

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
If it was a snake, it would have bitten you. My mother likes using this saying whenever I'm looking for something, only to find it in a place I had already checked out, as it was hiding behind something, and I hadn't moved enough things around. Snakes themselves are also good at hiding too, especially if they have the right coloration or shape. One moment, you think that you're looking at a rope or stick, only to go Nope - that's a snake!

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Certified Genius  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, the certification of one who is a genius, and what one does to prove said genius nature, by writing a poem to show off their skills. One can clearly see it in the way that they write, with all the rhymes and such. You'll find no finer examples of such prose than right here.

Thoughts
A cute piece to read today.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestion
Next time you do something like this, write each group of lines in a different style of poem as a demonstration of the poem type.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A young man enters a dark and forbidden forest, seeking a cure for a curse that his father has been placed under. However, none are welcomed in this place, and thus, no one enters it. However, the man comes into the place, seeking the first tree, for it's sap, which is said to cure all that ails a person. Will he be able to find it? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Good luck with the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Places that one can no longer go to. There are a number of places that one can no longer go to. For some, this was because of mankind - some sort of accident, a moment or three of stupidity, or perhaps willful intention to cause a bunch of damage to a structure or location, one that holds meaning to others. Other things were destroyed by nature - earthquake, flood, tornado, fire, storm, and many more. Sometimes they can be rebuilt, but even then, they aren't the same.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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