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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "We Hold These Truths" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Scientific truths and Beliefs - A Scientific Truth can be measured, and can be proven to be true or false. A Belief requires an emotional response, of some sort or another. For instance, I can claim that Purple Thunder Mountain Dew, which has Berry and Plum flavoring, is the best version of Mountain Dew, and someone else will claim that Dragon Fruit Mountain Dew, with dragon fruit (also known as Strawberry Pear, and properly named Pitaya) flavoring, is the best version - I like both by the way. However, one thing we can agree on is that with enough experiments, we can recreate the recipe needed to make ether version of Mountain Dew, perfect for those areas lacking access to said flavors in question.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of LIFE  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, life - it is the craziest thing out there. The moment that you think you got it figured out, there's a curveball of some sort, sending you another way. The, you get hit by another curveball, and another, and another, and another. It is messy, scary, beautiful, terrifying, and wonderful. It's like that line in Forest Gump - "Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you got until you open it." There might be coconut - I don't like coconut. There might be caramel - I love caramel. There might be a combination of caramel and coconut - I don't know how to feel about that. In any case, you still have to try each piece to find out if you like it or not, and sometimes, one must eat the coconut, before enjoying the caramel.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "This Cold Day..." Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I have to chuckle, as I live in Western New York. Still, my younger brother lives in South Carolina, working as a physical therapist, the sort that makes home visits, and one of the things he brought up was, during his first winter, after a light snowfall, to him, was that his boss had called him to tell him to return home, saying that no one was allowed to do any work, and that he was going to miss out on Emergency Weather pay if he kept working, after he had seen a few patients. It's like a meme that was around at the time - South Carolinians are Spartans during a Hurricane, but Monty Python knights in a Blizzard.

Thoughts
Makes one chuckle.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Get the Lead Out" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Ah - turning lead into gold - a process we've tried to do for centuries, only now, we've figured out how to do it. Thing is - we'd be better off not doing so, from a monetary point of view. To turn lead into gold is very expensive, and thus, at the moment, is not worth the cost, which is worth more than the value of the gold. Still, it's nice to know that it can be done. Maybe some day, it will prove to be useful.

In a way, it's like finding out that other stars have planets. We've theorized that they've existed for decades, as it didn't make sense that only our sun had big rocks orbiting them. We have made stories about them as a result. Now there's proof that they exist. I wonder which theory will we prove next?

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, a terrible cook has entered a cooking contest, and is trying to win. However, no matter what they do, things just seem to go terribly wrong. At least the salad didn't burn. Wait - you burned something else that wasn't supposed to burn? Wait - it wasn't an accident, but sabotage instead? Well, that sounds like a whole lot of unexpected trouble, that is not needed. Let's hope that things get solved in time for the win.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammmar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, a Medieval Fantasy Mystery. After a night-time storm, the town's mayor has vanished. The local Captain of the Guard gets the assistance of a nearby Wizard and their friend to help. It seems that the Solution to the Mystery lies in the night-time habits of the Mayor himself. Will the trio be able to find the Mayor in time, or will the town need to select a New Mayor? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Honestly, if a 10th slot was available, I'd place "Looks interesting, but not my usual Kink Preference." Thus, I had to pick Other, even though it is more towards "Animals Not Listed Here." Personally, my Kinks are more towards A Slice of Everyday Life, maybe set in a Medieval Fantasy or Advanced Sci-Fi type of setting. Also, I like using Non-Fatal types of vore in the things I write - I tend to avoid writing about gross or gory things, as I don't really like those, although if a story is well-written, I can handle reading them.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
Got a few things that need touched up on to make things perfect, mainly a capital letter issue or two.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "Equality" Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Equality - in an ideal world, perhaps this would be true of all. However, we don't live in such a world - life is unfair and unequal. What's even worse is when one decides to take advantage of their own minority status, and falsely accuse others of being bigots. This can be very devastating to the victim, as folks now see them as a monster of some sort, which is annoying at best, depressing at worse, and can be hard to recover from.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with Spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Ah, the old "Satchel Switcheroo" trope. Fella grabs what he thinks is his suitcase after a long flight, and heads home. Problem is, when he opens it, he finds out that, among other things, it isn't his. Also, it seems that the rightful owner is involved in some rather illegal deeds. What will happen to this guy next? Will he call the cops? Try to solve things himself? Or, will a whole lot of other things happen between now and then? Might want to read to find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "Just Maybe..." Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
The impossible - long term relationships. My mother and father were married for twelve years, before separating and divorcing. My father would later find himself in love with another woman, and after a year or so, married her - 20+ years together there. My siblings and I have never really liked her, and she doesn't like it when our father wants to do something with us. My mother would also find love with a man, who, well, it's complicated, but after 20 years (along with waiting until a reasonable time after his estranged wife had died), they finally got married - us kids didn't like them getting married (trust issues involving secrets around him drinking and driving without a proper license - long story, but turns out that he has a seriously messed up back). Honestly, I don't think that I've seen a good relationship between a man and a woman, save for maybe a few couples....

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a Review you Requested! Enjoy.

This item is about the history of a Japanese Music group called BABYMETAL, actual history, mythical history, and so on. Now, to be honest, my knowledge of Japanese music is very limited, like I know a little bit about the Puffy AmiYumi pop band, as they did the Teen Titans theme song, and their own cartoon show, during the early 2000's, and I also watched anime around then, but honestly, I never really got into non-American music.

That being said, while I feel that someone that's a fan of Japanese music will like this better, and might be better informed that I, I will say that this looks well-written, and feels decently informative.

Thoughts
I think it looks interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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for entry "January 17 2026" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
What is it about cats that makes us love them? My great-aunt recently adopted a stray kitten - she lives out in the country, near where I do, and from what we can guess, someone doesn't follow the rule of "A Pet isn't for Christmas, it's for Life!" and much like many farm cats in the area, poor fella got dropped out of a car window. Somehow, despite the fact that the little guy has trust issues, after playing with a mouse on a string toy thing, it allowed me to pick it up, hold it, and it even climbed up on my shoulder, and, after a little while, it jumped down onto the couch, once I lowered myself to a safe level for it. Cute little thing.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Ah, bobcats, distant kin to the common house cat - by a few million years. I can't say that I've seen one in the wild where I live, despite living in an area within their native range. Then again, there are plenty of hunters and the like, so maybe they just stay hidden from humans, which might keep them safer than other predators. Needless to say, never had one sneak into my home, to the best of my knowledge.

Thoughts
Makes one think, and chuckle.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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for entry "Love of Our Youth" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
An interesting little piece of work, showing what looks like two children holding hands. A rather cute piece. Now, there are those that have issues with AI art and such, but, to me, AI is simply a tool, which anyone can use foe a task. Now, while I won't say that they are the same as Traditional or the normal Digital work, I'm no good with Traditional or Digital stuff myself (an important fact that I had to mention to a group I run) and I have to respect those that can make something decent.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Ah, trinkets. Those little collectable images that pop up in various places for various reasons. I have collected over 1,670 of them, so far, out of, I don't know how many have been made. I can at least say that I rank Number 10 in terms of collectors, so far. They often hold cute pieces of information, which inspired the creation of the trinket. Each piece is a little work of art, especially the story behind them.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Ah, a fight scene. For this, we need popcorn.



Why are fight scenes important? Well, for some stories, they are needed. There's nothing quite like watching a Hero and a Villain duking it out, matching each other, blow for blow, the Villain's desperation to escape being matched by the Hero's determination to not let them get away. Problem is making the scene look good, or even plausible. Do our fighters use a fighting style based off of a real world one? Might want to do some research, perhaps ask for advice. Are weapons being used? Are they using weapons that are foreign to their fighting style? (Personally, I've been watching a number of Reaction videos, where the original video shows a Japanese swordsman try out various European Medieval style weapons - longsword and halberd for instance - and seeing how he could use them, and folks who are very familiar with the weapon are like, "There's a method similar to what he's using in...." or "That would work" or "That could work if..." and so on.) It can be rather interesting, especially if one tries to pantomime the scene to see what might work.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A pirate, or some other criminal, is looking for buried gold in a swampy area. However, it seems that someone, presumably a rat, has told the authorities that they are in the area, and now the law is after them. Thus, as a result, the crew is forced to scatter, as well as hide. So, what will happen next?

Characters
Characters look interesting, and I hope to learn more about them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "Saturday Invitation" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, what happens when a friend or family member invites you to an activity, and you feel a certain amount of fear and nervousness? What is this fear that has crept up your spine? A fear of crowds? A fear of speaking? A fear of being in public? The fact that the last time you saw your friends, a different leader was in office, two leaders ago? These are all possible issues for speaking in Public. So, what do you do? Well, there's an old Folk Remedy that can help, Liquid Courage, but too much of that can lead to disaster, so limit it to like 2 glasses of Good Stuff, as that might be enough to cleanse the throat, and lubricate the tongue, as it were. Now, stop screaming - your throat ain't on fire!

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, childhood memories, and watching movies in theater. There's something about enjoying them in theaters - popcorn, soda, candy, the gi-huge-ic screen, the speakers, that annoying person on their phone way in the back that everyone throws stuff at (Grandma! Don't throw your walker!), that extra big and very tall guy blocking the view of the screen (just as annoying as loudmouth) and - Actually, I think I'll watch it at home, as outside food is encouraged, no one complains about you blocking their view, and you can talk on the phone without the worry of a walker being thrown at you.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "On Fears and Dreams" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
We all have fears and dreams. They seem to go hand in hand. We dream of success, but fear failure. I have encountered a few fears, some of which I'm not sure how I developed, but some are respectable, and can keep you alive. After all, staying away from aggressive dogs is a very good idea, especially when you have a scar from an encounter with one. Sometimes we don't show the fear, but it's there. Sometimes though, we have a dream, a dream to face the fear. The question is this - how?

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Many years ago, a force of unspeakable evil took over the world, enslaving many. However, a brave warrior with a magical sword stepped forth to oppose it. It took a long time, longer than most even know, but the warrior managed to defeat this evil force.

But now, a New Evil force has arrived. The old warrior has long gone to his rest, and thus cannot help. Who will be the one to save the land? Who will be the one to take up the sword? Well, the good news is, the warrior had a granddaughter. Will she be up to the task? Only one way to find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There's a few areas where some of the spelling could use a second look.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "John Wayne Said it!" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
John Wayne - one of my favorite movie actors, and has been since I was a child. A Man among men. His characters always facing impossible odds and, for the most part, coming out on top. His characters inspire those around them, so that they can stand with his character, going up against those that threaten the town that the Duke's character is fighting for. Always something worth watching, and always enjoyable. One of those childhood heroes.

Thoughts
An enjoyable piece.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A voter's plea to their local politician. Asking them to help repair the local infrastructure, fix the budget, , and otherwise look after the average folk. It always feels like politicians simply line their pockets, and those of their family and friends, with money that should go to the taxpayers - and recent scandals seem to make things feel like that's all that they do. I mean, it's like we might as well just elect Honest Criminals - Gang Leaders and Mob Bosses and such - they might actually do a better job to be honest.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "January 1 2026" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Pets do crazy things, and that's why we love them. They destroy wallpaper, chew up footwear, make messes on the floor - many kinds of messes, destroy various things, force us to get new things, that they ruin, and yet, at the end of the day, for some reason, we still love them. Makes one wonder if they are secretly ruling the world in some form or fashion. Then again, maybe they are. Always strange.

Thoughts
Makes one wonder.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Deficit Spending" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting thing to think on. To be honest, having recently spent a month having to watch Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer at work, there's a number of things I've hated about that movie, like the fact that Donner should have stood up for his son, even against Santa Claus - his boss, among other things, but I digress. I mean, we all have our strengths and weaknesses. The trick is using what we got to our best advantage, to help us succeed in life.

Thoughts
Makes one think about things.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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