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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Well, this is an interesting story. You have a story about a Marshall, who isn't exactly human, trying to do her job in a place that isn't exactly friendly. Part of me kind of wonders like - just what sort of setting is this, and just what is the Marshall.

Characters
The Marshall looks interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Might want to tack this under the Action/Adventure genre. Also, the Intro Rating seems okay to be rated "E".

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Review of Life  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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When it comes to life, sometimes one has to do more than a bit of thinking. There's a lot of odds involved. In many cases, better off trying to play the lottery. You might win it, somehow.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Yeah, to be honest, I don't think that I can give this a full in-depth point-by-point review, as I'm not normally sitting down an playing card games. I prefer something like War or Uno. Still, it might have some potential for the right crowd.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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You have a world full of animal-like people with various levels of technology. You seem to be focused on an owl soldier who serves a rat king as a guard of some sort. Kind of makes one wonder about the history of this world.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The longest Walk  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have a couple of people walking around, only it seems that someone isn't getting a certain message, and clearly doesn't understand certain signs.

An interesting read.

Characters
The characters seem to be ordinary people.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with the contest.

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Review of Second Coming  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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You have an idea about what it would be like to have the Second Coming of Jesus Christ occur and what they'd look like. An interesting take on the idea.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You have a bit of a block here. Sometimes a few four-to-five-sentence paragraphs can make things easier to read.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of I can't Breathe  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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You have a poem, which talks abut the whole race issue, seemingly from the point of view of an African American, or another person with dark-colored skin tones. Talks about not being able to breath. Interesting.

Thoughts
Interesting to read.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want some space between Mr. and Floyd.

Suggestions
You might want to hit "Enter" between each line of the poem. As it is, this all looks like one big block of words, which can strain the eyes a bit while reading.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. You've got a couple of siblings trying to figure out a way to make money so that their home doesn't get foreclosed on. When they respond to a strange newspaper add, things get strange when they get sucked into some sort of game, and have to compete against other teams of siblings.

Characters
The characters seemed interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I didn't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Last Goodbye  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have someone who fins out some difficult news about their mother, in that she has cancer. However, they prefer to act as if they don't know about it, in order to try to enjoy what time was left.

Characters
They seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Testing  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a review for your first item, and I hope that you enjoy! *BigSmile*

This is an item that you made to see how things can be posted here. I hope that this little blurb will inspire you to write more things, such as poetry and short stories, and other crazy things. *Laugh*

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues.

Best of luck with your future items.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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A Yu-Gi-Oh! fanfiction wherein Kiaba hires an American escort, and gets more than he bargains for. That's true for sure, as they get into all sorts of trouble, especially when they run into old acquaintances.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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This is an interesting piece of fanfiction, set in the Yo-Gi-Oh universe dealing with a situation that occurs when Seto Kaiba goes to America for a business trip, and encounters a woman who is very open about her relationships.

Characters
While I'm not sure if the Kaibas themselves are in-character (as it's been a while since I've seen the show), they do seem plausible. The Original Characters also seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Lucky Ones  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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You have a group of campers who go out into the woods, but only one of them makes it out. It seems that something very strange happened in to woods, which causes the demise of most. Makes one wonder what really happened.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I stumbled across this under the Online Authors, although what really caught my attention was the name in the title - especially since my own username ought to give most a very good clue as to why it drew my eye...

What you have is a short story about a paranormal investigator, who has been hired to check out a collage. While there, he comes across a powerful entity that is causing some serious troubles.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "Chapter 2" 
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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In this chapter, it seems that, due to the incident from the previous chapter, our guy has a new partner, and it seems that his boss isn't really that caring of him. Told to try and get a new client, things turn out to be a big trap.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Well, this looks like the start of an interesting story. You have a man who enters a home that happens to house a number of vampires, who like the taste of human blood. Claiming to work for some sort of pharmaceutical company, the man tries to convince the leader of the vampires to try an alternative form of subsistence, but the vampires aren't interested. Of course, the man is no fool, and knew just what he was dealing with.

Characters
The characters seem to be very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Well, this is the start of what looks to be an interesting story. You have a young man, who seems to have been on his own for quite some time, except for the voices in his head. However, it seems that the situation is more than it appears to be. Might look at more.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting poll about a person's favorite type of writing. Personally, I like all types, but my favorite is the Interactive, as you can get so many stories, all from a common origin. After all, start the Main Character off at a crossroads, and here's a few possibilities:

Heads to the North: The MC become the King of a great and powerful nation, with plenty of queens to enjoy the company of.

Heads to the South: The MC becomes a vicious and brutal Bandit Warlord with a huge price on his head, among other things.

Heads to the East: The MC gets captured by a dragon, and is forced to be its slave, or else they become lunch.

Heads to the West: They become a farmer, taxed by the King, robbed by the Bandit Warlord, and terrorized by the dragon.

Undecided: Has an encounter with a guy that has a crossbow - The End.

Plenty of fun.

Originality
Haven't encountered a poll like this.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Seems that our murder suspect is telling our detective more about her life. Seems she spent time in a small self-sustained village up in Canada while staying with her uncle, who seems to be rather mysterious.

Characters
Learning more about them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is an interesting In & Out, especially if one likes to add to Interactives. Here is a place where one can learn and share tips for writing additions to those stories that take so many twists and turns, and always create a new story, despite sharing the same originating point as another. Worth looking at.

Thoughts
Very original.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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You have what looks to be the start of an interesting story. You have a detective trying to interrogate a suspect n a murder investigation, but it seems that the suspect has something of a tale to tell. I might need to take a look at the additional chapters.

Characters
The characters are interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
In the section where the officer finds out that the suspect knows his name, despite not being told it, it might help to italicize the officer's thoughts.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Dogs of War  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
You have what looks to be the start of an interesting story. You have a woman who, for whatever reason, doesn't like non-human animals, who is creating non-human soldiers in order to fight a robotic enemy. However, an incident soon forces her to work with one of her creations, in order to survive.

Characters
The characters look interesting, but I'd like to know more about them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

I hope to see a Part 2 to this story.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting take on the whole "Jack and the Beanstalk" - type story. You have a young woman who climbed a large beanstalk, only to encounter a friendly giant. However, things aren't so easy, especially after she encounters another giant, who isn't so friendly.

Characters
The characters are interesting, but to be honest, the giants could use names, at the very least.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, but, instead of saying "(expletive deleted)", you could settle for a mild swear word, or perhaps bump it up to 18+ for somewhat stronger swear words.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Sovereign  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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An interesting short story. You have what looks to be a Post-Battle situation, where, after the battle has been done, the surviving fighters are reflecting upon what they did, and are even unsure of themselves. The one offers their support to the other, to try to help them. Interesting. Wouldn't mind knowing more.

Characters
Wouldn't mind knowing more, but I understand how these Short Story contests go.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Sacrifice  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First up - wow. You have a young woman dealing with issues. At the same time, a young man tries to help her through them. The young man gives up a lot, just to see to it that she makes it through the day. Very interesting.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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