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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of At Last...  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A woman is trying to figure out a way to save horses from dying. Problem is, enemy forces are in the city, and as a result, she keeps being seriously injured. Good news is, her new body is able to resist damage, but it won't belong before this body fails too. Will she be able to succeed, or will here work be all for nothing?

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, but you might want some space between paragraphs.

Suggestions
I'm curious to see more about this story, like why horses were so important.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of SCHOOL  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
School - a place where one gets educated by someone. There's lots of ways to interpret that. Could be that it's at school itself. Could be at home, where one learns needed skills. Could be at work, where one learns how to do a job better. Could simply be life, where one learns how to live.

Thoughts
Interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
Could use some periods at the ends of sentences.

Suggestion
Have a line space between the exceptionally extra large school and the words after it.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A young female rat is looking for some food, when she locates a bottle of pop. Squeezing her way in, she starts to drink. However, a problem soon comes up, when it turns out, she can't get out. Will help come to assist her, or will she remain stuck in this predicament? Only time will tell.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Imagine Paradise  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
If paradise is imagined - well, we all have our own ideas on what that is. A nice fishing hole with some shade. A garden full of healthy fruits and vegetables. A lovely view to enjoy. A place filled with the creatures we've made up..... well, depends on the fantasy. There's all kinds of things - just need to think it up.

Thoughts
A good poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A little poem-story. A man is visiting a museum, and finds himself gazing at the fossilized remains of none other than the Tyrannosaurus Rex - King of the Dinosaurs, which has a cute sign saying that it is still here..... well, depends on how closely related birds are to it.... maybe. Certainly worth a quick chuckle.

Thoughts
A cute piece to read tonight.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling ot grammar.

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Review of Meet Again  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a bit of a tragic story. A woman lost her son, and is having a hard time getting over it. Despite the help of a doctor, the pain becomes far too much for her to deal with. As a result, she makes her own plans, in order to try to see her son again.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar issues.

Suggestions
Some space between the lines might be helpful, especially if each line is its own separate paragraph.

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HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Sometimes one is stuck in a prison, in one's own mind. We feel stuck, like there's nothing that one can do. However, one must have hope, of one sort or another, to help us through the dark times. That way, we can spring ourselves free, and begin to enjoy life once more, and be happy again.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
This looks like the start of an interesting story. A young man sees a family move into a house with a less-than-nice history, and sees them do some odd things. As a result, he decides to investigate, especially about the one that's his age, trying to learn what's going on.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There are a number of areas where the punctuation needs some work, as there are areas where commas are placed in the wrong spot for instance.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of The Lonely Tree  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Trees - standing there, producing oxygen for us to breath. We seem to take them for granted. How often do we stop, and enjoy the view that they give us. Plenty are beautiful, giving us shade, and others give us delicious fruits to eat. Makes me wonder how often we truly enjoy the presence of a nice tree in our area.

Thoughts
A nice piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Family Vacation  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Childhood memories - something to be treasured, if possible. We like to hold onto those that meant a great deal to us, like the time you went fishing, and your little brother caught a carp as big as he was - that was fun. The world was so much bigger then, and we were much smaller. Now we've grown, and still, we like to look back, and remember.

Thoughts
A cute piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Sky  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The sky - sometimes blue, sometimes gray, sometimes just plain black. There's the Sun, Moon, the stars, and the various objects up there. So high up, we can never touch it. Sometimes fair, sometimes stormy, one can never tell what will happen with it. Unpredictable, and ever-changing, are the best ways to describe it.

Thoughts
A cute piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of All That's Left  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a sad poem. Two parents, full of grief at the loss of their baby daughter, find it difficult to rekindle the passion that they once had. As a result, they end up breaking up. Both are stuck on what had happened, and what could have been. Makes one cry to think about it.

Thoughts
An interesting poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
It would be a good idea to make things internally consistent. It seems to switch from third-person tense to first-person after the first stanza.

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Review of Puppet Master  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
There is always that someone that likes to control others. We might try to fight them off, and sometimes we succeed, but they like to burrow themselves into our skulls, really deep, and stay there. They don't even have the decency to pay rent like a law-biding tenant. I have encountered such folks, and they are annoying to evict. But, one must do what they can, in order to have a normal life.

Thoughts
An interesting piece.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any real spelling and grammar issues, but "my self" be the strangers should be "myself".

Suggestion
This would read better if it was done up in the fashion of a poem of some sort. As is, ir looks like a block of words.

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Review of Voice of an Angel  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A woman misses her child, and other family members, who died in some sort of crash. Then, one night, or day, she gets a strange phone call, and hears her daughter's voice. The girl manages to convince her mother that it is her. She also explains that her mother must keep living, and not die before the time is right.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A woman visits a cemetery. She has had to deal with one of the things that no parent wants to be put through - the loss off a child. Not just any child though, an infant. She is there, wondering the why she went through what she did, being full of hope and joy, just to suffer as she did. Still, there is a sign of hope, for the future.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Life Goes On  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A man wanders through a hospital, trying to get to the outside. He is lost in the thought of the passing of a loved one. He remembers them, what they stood for, and what they meant. However, in as much as he misses the person, he soon learns that happiness can be found, just waiting for him to listen.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
The one "Fathers" in the area around the medal should be "Father's".

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting poem to read. It talks about a deer born in the Spring, as it goes about its days. (Oh, so cute, and all that). However, sometimes fate is not nice, and the world is not kind to this fawn. (Awww. Poor Dear.)


Well, here's an important question: Anyone want venison for breakfast? Goes really good with eggs!

Thoughts
An interesting poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of The winds of Fate  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Using tarot cards, a cute story-poem has been written. As read, this looks like something akin to Revelations, where those who are good get rewarded, and those who did evil get punished. This all seems to be based off of a card that they all drew at one point or another. Makes one wonder a great deal.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A cute story involving a grandfather and his granddaughter, as the two of them engage in a weekly game of chess. The grandfather helps the child out when they lose, helping them to understand what happened, slowly nurturing a love for the game. In time, the child grows up, becoming a mother herself, still loving the game that she has with her grandfather. A very cute story to read.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Prodigal 2424  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting sci-fi piece to read. Two astronauts return to their old home, and note just how things have changed. This home is none other than Earth, which humans left when it could no longer sustain humanity. Makes one wonder what happened to make leaving to be necessary.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Up For Days  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
If nothing else, this is worth a chuckle. Staying up late is one thing, staying up for days is something else. Then there's the question of if the person is dispensing wisdom, or is just merely tired, and unable to fall asleep. This just makes me laugh as I read it. Now to figure out how late to stay up...... Okay, not crazy late.

Thoughts
A funny piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A cute collection of short poems. One talks about God. One talks about the moon. One talks about a pile of rubble, and one talks about smoke. What do these have in common? Connections to Spirituality, and the Environment, which is very important to a wide number of people, who care about a lot of similar things. Worth the read.

Thoughts
An interesting set of poems to reaf.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Add Spiritual and Environment to the Genres.

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Review of Right VS Wrong  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is worth a chuckle. What is right, what is wrong? A dilemma that has confounded folks for years. Some say that the right thing to do is to harm none. Yet, what if the right thing to do is to harm someone? Sometimes one must do the wrong thing in order for the right things to happen. Then there's the times we do the right thing, only for the wrong things to happen. Always an issue or three.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I can neither confirm or deny if the spelling and/ or grammar is right or wrong.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Are you Comma Crazy? A very good question. Does one love to use the comma, or do they avoid using it? For me, it depends on if I want to make a character seem uneducated, or well-educated. Although Terry Pratchett had his own thing, especially for the Night Watch's Oath, where the Guards being sworn in had to state each of the punctuations, including plenty of commas.

Thoughts
A useful piece to read, and weigh in on.

Spelling and Grammar
Depending on the Style - either more commas are needed, or less are needed.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting piece to read. What is freedom? To some, it's the ability to do what we want. To others, it's an illusion. There's all kinds of ways to describe it. Perhaps Freedom is more of a goal - a freedom to not worry about things that bother us. That is a possibility to think on. There is always a type of freedom out there.

Thoughts
This is an interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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