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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of Battlefield  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
As someone whose family has had members serve in the military, this is the sort of things folks tend to worry about. Will father/ mother/ brother/ sister/ uncle/ aunt/ son/ daughter/ whomever come home? Will they be safe and sound? How will they be, when they do return home? Lots of questions occupy the mind during such times.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You could add the Genres Military and Drama to this, instead of using three "Wars".

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Review of Mother Mary  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
There are times in our lives where we have problems asking for help, especially for things that cannot be done by Earthly means. For those, we want some sort of higher help, but not necessarily from the Big Dude Himself. Thus, we might turn to Mary, the mother of his Son, to see if she is willing to help us out in our time of need. A very cute poem.

Thoughts
A cute little poem to read, which makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of A real nightmare  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well, this is a very short story, and I feel that my review will be longer than it. *Laugh* That being said, you have someone talking about getting a series of panic attacks, which bother them to no end. Sometimes one must face certain things, in order to get past them.

Thoughts
An interesting piece, but I have some questions: What was the cause of the original panic attack? Was this written for a contest? (If so, a link would be good.)

Spelling and Grammar
There are some issues that come to mind. You have some extra-long sentences that could be broken into at least two, like the first. You don't need to have a space before punctuation. Also, last section could be something like, "subside (Comma), then (instead of than) disappear."

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Review of Mount Mansfield  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Memory is always something special. We like to remember the things we love. We like to laugh at the mistakes we made, hoping that we learned from them as a result. We like to think about the good times, and how they made us happy, so that we could perhaps enjoy the present. That is why we like to treasure a good memory. This is certainly worth the read.

Thoughts
A nice piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Change of Season  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A cute poem to read. Seasons bring change with them. One season all but brings death, forcing all to stay safe. Then next brings about life, allowing things to now live. This is true no matter where you go. Everyone waits for the growing season, and prepares for the time when nothing can grow. Always something to think on.

Thoughts
An interesting poem to read. Worth doing so today.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Promise and Hope  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In times filled with confusion, hate, and lies, one of the things we need is hope. Life is never easy, but, by holding onto dreams, we might be able to be there for tomorrow. Things could change, one way or another. However, hope helps one endure what must be endured, and helps one make it to tomorrow. Worth the read today.

Thoughts
An interesting poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute poem to read - wish I found it a month back - all about Saint Patrick's day. Every so often, something catches one's eye, and ends up making you chuckle, as you think about those days where crazy things are known to happen. Very much worth the read, as it makes you appreciate things.

Thoughts
A good poem to read today. It certainly makes one laugh.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Eternal Serenade  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Love is something special. Love can feel like a whole universe of things. It can make plenty of things just feel better. We don't know how, or why, but it just happens to work out that way. There's so much that could happen, where love is concerned. There is always something to be said about it. Very much worth the read today.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Funeral Pyre  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A woman gets a job working for someone that most advise not working for, a vampyr. There's a number of rumors about them, but are they true, or lies? There's plenty that could be said, as the woman tries to do her job. However, her mind becomes filled with thoughts about the vampyr, causing her to wonder.

Characters
The characters seem interesting. I wonder if there is a part 2.

Spelling and Grammar

When the vampyr is talking about their family, she refers to them as "we" instead of "they". Might want to change it, unless she's not sure where she is. *Laugh*

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Review of God Above  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Many are the times we wonder about God. What is his plan for us? Why are things the way they are? Why do we feel the way we feel? Is there a way to change things? Can we change ourselves? We all have so many questions, there are time we must ask, will we be able to find the answers? Makes one wonder.

Thoughts
A very interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar. However, I would put in some space between paragraphs.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
An old man gets on a train, and thinks about his life as the train moves along the tracks. He thinks about his wife and children as things move past him, reflecting upon things that had happened. However, things soon come to an end, and as it turns out, this is his last train ride of all.

Characters
I liked how the characters were described, both the current present ones, and those not there.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
"You're lucky we're in a church!" - Indeed!

Well, this certainly has an unexpected ending. You have a Pastor, whose church has been having a number of issues lately. Thus, he comes to the conclusion that Satan has somehow managed to enter the house of worship in order to cause folks to turn to sin, somehow. Thus, he tries to root Him out. Problem is, he tries a little too hard.

Characters
Oh, I have to laugh at the exchange between the Pastor and the cellphone woman.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of These 5 years  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute poem to read. It is the journey from a first meeting, to that of love. Initially meeting because of a mutual acquaintance, you have now become Boyfriend and Girlfriend (or whatever the situation is). Sometimes love can take us out of some very dark spaces, and off of dark paths. There is always something.

Thoughts
A very cute poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
There are plenty of reasons to have a team. Many games require them. After all, it's hard to play football without at least a dozen more players. These teams can forge some of the best friendships as a result, especially when everyone works together to achieve their goal. It can be a whole lot of fun as a result.

Thoughts
A nice item to read today.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is a Review you Requested. Enjoy!

You have a woman that's concerned about her daughter's online activities, and thus decided to snoop on her, only to find out that she's talking to a lot of strange men. As a result, mother has decided to teach her daughter a lesson by creating a fake account to, basically, catfish her daughter. Will this plan work, or will it backfire?

Characters
The characters seem interesting, though I do have to wonder.... how old is the daughter? That could make things more serious, or dangerous.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, but in the "Chat" sections, might be a good idea to use some slang/ shorthand types of writing, so as to convey the "theme" of being in a chat room or whatever. Heck, toss in a few of the more commonly misspelled words, as it were, with the "correct" misspellings. *Laugh*

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a quick bio of your work and the like. I am sad to hear about your experience on DeviantArt, although it seems that lately (like the past couple of years, if not longer) DA has been causing issues for folks whose work could be looked at as fetish-adjacent, either causing them to leave, if not outright banning them (which is ironic, given how that site grew because of such work). Likewise, I am sorry to hear about your treatment in other areas. That being said, you shouldn't have much trouble finding folks interested in your work here.

Thoughts
It is interesting to read about where you've come from.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Lucky Limericks  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Oh, this is worth a few chuckles. A young lass has a rude mouth, but hides it behind another language. Another fella proves that snakes were never in Ireland, thus making Saint Pat a fraud. Finally, some fool kissed a certain stone, only, it turns out, he wasn't ready for an Irish disease. Certainly a whole host of laughs.

Thoughts
Worth a very good number of chuckles for sure.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of The Jewel Thief  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is certainly worth a laugh, or three. Craziness adorns this poem, and I'll need to reread it, for it is rather odd, to say the least. After all, it's not often that one finds out their brother has stolen numerous things from many folks - items of which are hard for the victims to explain. Oh, what a laugh.

Thoughts
Perfect thing to read to get a laugh.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Victim of Changes  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a painful poem to read, given the implications behind the words. Part of my wonders what happened on that fateful night, but it certainly doesn't look good. Likewise, seems that there was a child as a result, whose eyes remind the mother too much of the father. Makes one wonder what will happen next.

Thoughts
This is a somewhat painful, and spooky poem to read, once one knows what it's about.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Oh, talk about double entradas. Part of me is hoping that Dick is referring to the Knight's horse, least I'd advise raising the rating just a bit higher. If nothing else, this poem is certainly worth the chuckles it will bring to those who read it. Now, to go find a bush or two to hide my chuckles in.

Thoughts
This is certainly good for a laugh. HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I don't know much about Haikus, but I have owned a PlayStation 2, and when I was gaming, I did enjoy it. These days, I watch playthroughs of those games, trying to figure out if I could of beaten them. Some of them, I doubt that I could. Still, this does make me think of my childhood. Ah, good memories.

Thoughts
Makes me think of my childhood. I miss some of those days.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of The Well  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is a short, and spooky story. One night, a man goes crazy, and kills his family with an axe. He then throws the remains down into a well. He shows no remorse for his deeds, even after he's sentenced to the chair. But now there's a question, for it seems that he cursed his victims. Now one must stay away, especially on certain nights, when the sound of chopping is heard.

Characters
The characters seem to be very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A group of young mutants decide to fight crime in an unorthodox manner - by stealing the pants off of villains. However, they soon learn that making ideas is easy - trying to carry them out is the difficult part. Will they be able to acquire the pants from their first target, or will they fail miserably? Only time, and luck, will tell.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Mutant Sucker  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles try to raise the next generation of mutants. However, some strange creature is going around and sucking the mutagen out of the various mutants, turning them into ordinary animals. Will they be able to stop the creature in time to save folks? Only time will tell.

Characters
The characters are interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Fairy Tale  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, fantasy - fairies, pixies, and elves. Some of the things that folks like to write stories about. Creatures that like to hide and watch. Do they exist, or are they fictional? There's plenty that makes one wonder, as they traverse the realms of fantasy, alongside the paths of one's childhood.

Thoughts
A delightful set of poems to read, which make one think about their past.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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