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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Well, this is an interesting short story. It involves the figures in a painting, who become worried when their owner suddenly dies in front of them. Makes one wonder about other works of art out there.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is a nice word search, with words that most any writer would be familiar with. After all, the craft is not an easy one to do, and takes a lot of hard work. Each word fits one or more situations a writer finds themselves in. Always fun. Let's see who can solve it.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of A Young Nation  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Found It.

A short poem about our nation's history. Talks about how mistakes had been made, but we try to learn from them, and do better for the future. Even now, there's still a lot to learn from, and hope that the mistakes won't get repeated.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Trinket series!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Here you ask a question about what your next Trinket series should be. Personally, I like books - "Redwall" comes to mind, as does "The Dragon Knight", "Discworld", "Spells, Swords & Stealth", and a few more. Lots of possibilities.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Here you ask some questions for collectors of your trinkets. Kind of useful. Personally, I like it when there's a large pool of trinkets, so that everyone can collect them, without the need for a rush.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This looks like the start of an interesting story. You have a young man doing some internet dating with a woman, who seems to be a fox. Then, when they meet in person, it seems that she was telling the truth about being a fox. After that, there's all the crazy shenanigans that occur. This isn't your typical date.

Characters
Charles and Vixen both seem to be interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
Didn't know one could taste Vinyl - Vanilla, yes - Vinyl.... I don't think so.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of The Leviathan  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have a scientist who seems to be researching dolphin communication patterns, in an attempt to find proof of some theory of his. Looks rather interesting.

Characters
The scientist seems interesting, but could use a bit of expansion - do they have a spouse or love interest that supports their work?

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Complex Numbers  
for entry "In a Red Hood" 
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Ah, the truth about Fairy Tails. Something that makes folks wonder, and about how the lessons seem to change depending upon the age the story is set in. After all, folks change, so perhaps the lessons should as well. Sometimes the story gets changed with the times as well.

Thoughts
An interesting take on the stories told in the past.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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You have a mother and her two daughters going through what seems to be a recent death in the family, and are going on a trip to do some bonding. However, the weather soon turns for the worst, and now they are looking for shelter.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Last Plague  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have the start of an interesting Horror Story. You have folks going about their lives, just as the start of a new sickness occurs. Said sickness makes folks highly aggressive, and violent.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is a fun interactive. Set in the world of Zootopia, things start to change when humans start showing up. One has to wonder what will happen to this world.

Characters
The characters seem interesting, and are in-line with their movie versions.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see many issues, but keep an eye out, as sometimes adders miss things before posting the addition.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have the start of a story where, it looks like, at a certain age, children go through a ritual to see if they can receive the ability to use magic. Among these children is the son of a noble family, who can't wait until they can use magic.

Characters
The characters seem interesting. Hope to know more about them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, but you might want some space between paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
So, you're some farmboy, or farmgirl, who wants to be a Hero? Well, whoop-de-do. Been around the block a time or two, with others before. Let's just hope you're not the One Last Hope! After all, there's plenty of Heroes out there - can you live up to the stories, or will you be forgotten?

Characters
Plenty of crazy characters.

Spelling and Grammar
There's some spelling and grammar issues here and there, but those can be fixed.

Thoughts
Plenty of crazy adventures, and plenty more to come. I have enjoyed adding to them.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting Poll asking what point of view they like to use when it comes to writing. In my opinion, that all depends on what kind of story one is writing. Is the story something along the lines of one telling about their day "I did..."? Is is about what "You" are doing? Or is this about what "Bob" is doing? In any case, all can be fun.

Thoughts
A nice poll to do.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestion
Instead of using the "Other" Genre, try the "Opinion" genre.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Well, this is an interesting story. You have a story about a Marshall, who isn't exactly human, trying to do her job in a place that isn't exactly friendly. Part of me kind of wonders like - just what sort of setting is this, and just what is the Marshall.

Characters
The Marshall looks interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Might want to tack this under the Action/Adventure genre. Also, the Intro Rating seems okay to be rated "E".

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Yeah, to be honest, I don't think that I can give this a full in-depth point-by-point review, as I'm not normally sitting down an playing card games. I prefer something like War or Uno. Still, it might have some potential for the right crowd.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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You have a world full of animal-like people with various levels of technology. You seem to be focused on an owl soldier who serves a rat king as a guard of some sort. Kind of makes one wonder about the history of this world.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The longest Walk  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have a couple of people walking around, only it seems that someone isn't getting a certain message, and clearly doesn't understand certain signs.

An interesting read.

Characters
The characters seem to be ordinary people.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with the contest.

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Review of Second Coming  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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You have an idea about what it would be like to have the Second Coming of Jesus Christ occur and what they'd look like. An interesting take on the idea.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You have a bit of a block here. Sometimes a few four-to-five-sentence paragraphs can make things easier to read.

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Review of I can't Breathe  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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You have a poem, which talks abut the whole race issue, seemingly from the point of view of an African American, or another person with dark-colored skin tones. Talks about not being able to breath. Interesting.

Thoughts
Interesting to read.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want some space between Mr. and Floyd.

Suggestions
You might want to hit "Enter" between each line of the poem. As it is, this all looks like one big block of words, which can strain the eyes a bit while reading.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. You've got a couple of siblings trying to figure out a way to make money so that their home doesn't get foreclosed on. When they respond to a strange newspaper add, things get strange when they get sucked into some sort of game, and have to compete against other teams of siblings.

Characters
The characters seemed interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I didn't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Last Goodbye  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You have someone who fins out some difficult news about their mother, in that she has cancer. However, they prefer to act as if they don't know about it, in order to try to enjoy what time was left.

Characters
They seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Testing  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a review for your first item, and I hope that you enjoy! *BigSmile*

This is an item that you made to see how things can be posted here. I hope that this little blurb will inspire you to write more things, such as poetry and short stories, and other crazy things. *Laugh*

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues.

Best of luck with your future items.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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A Yu-Gi-Oh! fanfiction wherein Kiaba hires an American escort, and gets more than he bargains for. That's true for sure, as they get into all sorts of trouble, especially when they run into old acquaintances.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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This is an interesting piece of fanfiction, set in the Yo-Gi-Oh universe dealing with a situation that occurs when Seto Kaiba goes to America for a business trip, and encounters a woman who is very open about her relationships.

Characters
While I'm not sure if the Kaibas themselves are in-character (as it's been a while since I've seen the show), they do seem plausible. The Original Characters also seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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