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Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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401
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well, this is a very useful book to find- Instructions on how to do some things, such as posting favorite Youtube Videos, and favorite pictures, inside the pages of books that Members with a Premium Account can make. Very useful to locate, and read, as there is good advice.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling and grammar.

Suggestions
I think information about other features could be added, such as setting the GP award for individual book pages (if such a thing is possible.)

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!
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402
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well, this is a highly useful item to find- instructions on how to post pictures on book pages, and how to change their sizes, from small to large. Very useful, for people who like to show things, such as allegiances to certain groups. Nice to find and use.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!
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403
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well, this is a useful feature- embedding a Youtube video onto a book page. A very useful thing for if one want to show videos of something, such as a younger brother's football career, to a bunch of people. Very useful to locate, and good advice to follow.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!
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404
Review of In Praise  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Fifth and Final review for your participation in "WDC Power Reviewers Holiday Auction" . Enjoy.

Well, this is most certainly a very touching poem. A woman thinks about the most important person in her life, her daughter, and the way that she was, especially around certain times of the year, such as Christmas.

Characters
Very relating.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!
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405
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is interesting to read, the memories of a divorced woman, as she thinks back to her first major purchase by herself, a couch. You talk about your experiences, and how you felt a sense of accomplishment when you finally paid that last little payment. You talk about what is going on now, such as your dog using is as hers- I have to laugh at that *Laugh*. Best of luck with the new couch.

Spelling and Grammar
I see one spelling error, in the last paragraph. The hyphenation mark could be taken out of between.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!
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406
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting item to read, if one is into vore. It tries to explain the attraction to the act, be if from the point of view of Prey, Pred, and even Observer, and all the types of vore, which are quite numerous. Very interesting to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with Spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to break this down into two parts for easier reading.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!
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407
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting Essay, which tries to explain what vore (a type of cannibalism to those who don't know what vore is) and what the attraction to it is about. I see that you touch on giants and anthros (furries), which are sometimes involved with vore. Very useful, and I can't wait to check out Part 2.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with Spelling or Grammar.

Suggestions
I'd break this up a bit and make a Part 1.5, so that the read would be easier.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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408
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Well, this is interesting. From what I've read, you did a number of polls about Giantess-themed stories, trying to figure out what people like, Gentle Giantess, Evil Giantess, Aware, Unaware, Vore, Crush, and a list of other things that one has to think about when making an interactive. Very useful.

Spelling and Grammar
If people are still reading, and commenting, on this item, you have plenty of things to work on, such as capitalizing "I" for instance. Also, you might want to get rid of all the "Edit" words, as they distract the reader.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!
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409
Review of I am not Haunted  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is your Fifth and Final review for participating in "WDC Power Reviewers Holiday Auction" . Enjoy.

This is a cute, and funny, little poem about any serious poet. After all, when someone gets an idea in their head, they are compelled, and feel commanded, to pick up a writing utensil, and get to work at putting one's thoughts down.

Thoughts
Very understandable, as I myself have been possessed to write out a story or two, many times, in the past. I wish for it again.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or Grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!
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410
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is your Forth of Five reviews you won for participating in "WDC Power Reviewers Holiday Auction" . Enjoy.

This poem seems to be about someone who has to stay in their room, and they wish to leave it, and experience the day, be it Winter's chill, or when birds are flying away during the days of Autumn. A nice little read,

Thoughts
Makes one want to go outside.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!
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411
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Third of Five reviews for participating in "WDC Power Reviewers Holiday Auction" . Enjoy.

It seems to me, that the town you live in, loves the Magnolia tree/flower so much, it planted it all along one of the streets, and renamed that street after it. Sounds a little much to me, but one puts up with it to buy a house. Of course, once the house was bought, I'd get out the chainsaw. *Bigsmile*

Thoughts
This makes one wonder about flowers and Spring.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
This seems like a story to me, so I think you should change this to Short Story or Non-Fiction, depending on if it's real or fictional.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!
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412
Review of Cameo on Winter  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is the second of Five reviews you won for participating in "WDC Power Reviewers Holiday Auction" . Enjoy.

This is a poem that seems to describe Winter quite well- The leaves on the trees have fallen/blown away, the grass has been buried, and thus, can't be mowed any more, the nights, and days, are freezing, and campfires have ended. Where's the Sun at when you need it?!

Thoughts
Describes Winter quite well. Makes you wish the Sun was back.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!
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413
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is the first of Five reviews you've won for participating in "WDC Power Reviewers Holiday Auction" . Enjoy.

This is a poem, which any free-form poet would understand; Is or Isn't my work poetry? I have to say this, this is most certainly poetry, and don't let anyone say otherwise, no matter their literary degrees and recognitions, or if they themselves are "recognized poets".

Thoughts
I have to say that this is a debate that many poets wonder for themselves. Well, I'll settle it for you- you're a poet. Interesting in how you included the discussion that you and your husband had.

Spelling and Grammar
No problems with Spelling or Grammar to be seen.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!
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414
Review of The Snow Fence  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is nice to find; a little guestbook where people can come, say "hi" to a favorite writer, and maybe request a review, or two. Well, I dropped by, said "Hi", put in my request, and I hope that plenty of other come and do the same as well. Always nice.

Originality
There are several guest-books out there, but it's always nice to drop by for a visit.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar errors.

I hope that plenty of people come and visit you.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!
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415
Review of Ode To Words  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Words are something that one can never truly say enough of. There is no way to fully express ones love, joy, happiness, pleasure, sadness, disappointment, or even anger, with just a few little words. It takes a lot to show these emotions, and even then, it's not enough.

Thoughts
Certainly something to think about.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar issues.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!
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416
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Now this is a helpful group that rewards reviewers who give out good and helpful reviews to various people who deserve them. Of course, this group does have certain requirements, such as being a Moderator or higher to join, but it is quite helpful.

Originality
There are many groups that reward reviewers, but a person typically has to be a member of the group. It is refreshing to see a group that isn't exclusive in its rewarding.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

I wish you the best of luck with your mission. May you help out many deserving reviewers.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!
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417
Review of GUN-CONTROL  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a topic that can be hard to talk about- Gun Control. Some people say that there should be restrictions on certain types of guns, some say that no control is needed, and others say that all guns should be destroyed. Of course, all actions have reactions, and people try to point of the good in their idea, but tend to forget, or minimize, the bad. Very interesting.

Topic
Written in a manner that puts an emphases on Pro-Gun, and why firearms should remain legal, and possible consequences about what happens when law-biding citizens surrender their guns. Very informative.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
I think that the next time you write about another issue, do it in more of a neutral tone, with a slight emphasis on the side you're on, so that people will willingly come to your side of the fence, instead of running away.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!
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418
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Now this is and interesting, and slightly funny, poem to read. Very relateable for those who write free-form poetry. Sometimes those who are looking for "Traditional" poems, don't understand Free-Form. Then there are those who see a poem about something that has been done before, like Sacrifice. Just crazy.

Imagery
Puts to mind of a modern poet who is always getting "What the-"s from more Traditional poets.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!
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419
Review of Love is Like Math  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is something of a cute and funny little poem, about how a young woman thinks that love and math are very similar, while chastising an ex-boyfriend, who dumped her for another, who was then dumped himself, when the other left him for someone else. Very funny.

Plot
A young woman chastises her ex, in a manner that describes events like a math problem.

Spelling and Grammar
In the third line of the third stanza, "hm" should be "him", and in the last line of the last stanza, the "an"s should be "and"s.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!
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420
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Rated: E
Well, this is a useful How-To item to read. This tells how to create a link for ones items. Personally, I tend to use the b-item format when showing people my items, and an image format when showing my pictures or signatures. Very useful to check out.

Originality
I once saw a forum that tells people how to do several links, and gives people a place to practice using them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar issues.

Tips
Can't think of anything.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!
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421
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Well, this is a useful little how-to item on creating static pieces. Very informative to those who are just starting out. Complete with a step-by-step set of instructions. I hope plenty of people read it, so that they can figure out what to do and learn how to create an item.

Originality
I haven't seen one of these yet.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Tips
I think you might want to put in directions on how to do different fonts, colors, and such.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!
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422
Review of New Year's Bash  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is a fun little activity. It seems that the best way to celebrate a birthday is to hold an auction in which the proceeds go to help out a fantastic group, and give a little something to those who donate packages. I'm glad I got in on the action and helped celebrate.

Originality
There are many auctions, but I haven't seen many that help celebrate a birthday.

Spelling And Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Happy Birthday. May you donate a nice sum to those who helped out.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!
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423
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is a very useful list. The Ticket Holders of the Most Ebilest Raffle are listed here. This way, when people buy, or steal, a ticket, they can be placed here for people to see, and steal their tickets. Very ebil to see. Perhaps I'll steal one, or just buy one. :D

Originality
There are many lists, but it is good to stay orginized.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar. *Bigsmile*

May this group stay ebil. *Bigsmile*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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424
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this looks like an Ebil group to check out. The people here do ebil things, such as running a raffle that helps out some helpful groups. *Bigsmile* I don't know who first replaced the "V" with the "B" but that guy must be the Ebilest guy out there, with the exception of these guys. :D

Originality
There are many groups out there, but none are as ebil as this group. *Bigsmile*

Spelling and Grammar
I see no spelling or grammar problems. *Bigsmile*

May this group spread their curse of ebil throughout the land. *Bigsmile*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Review of Captains' orders  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting little poem. You have, what sounds like some sort of Naval Officer, (or Pirate Captian *Smile* ), trying to rouse his men, so that they will be able to outmanuver their enemy, and do battle with them. Foward the Bluffs! Hoist that Sail! Give no Quarter!

Plot
An Officer/Pirate Captian tries to inspire his men to do great things in the coming fight.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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