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Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of HEAVEN  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting little poem. It can be interesting when people imagine what Heaven will be like. Will it be a place full of angles and fluffy white clouds? Or will it be the sort of place that a wealthy person would live, but everyone can live there. Of course, I'm not in a hurry to find out. *Bigsmile*

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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377
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an item that makes one do some thinking. Life has its hardships, many of which require some help to overcome. At other times, one has to stop for a few moments, enjoy the sights, the sounds, and the smells, especially in this fast-paced world.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of LIVING FOR MYSELF  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting little poem. A man goes through life, however, there are people that he tries to please, but they say things about him, that makes things difficult. It makes one wonder about things, and why everything seems to be so much trouble.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Full Circle  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is something to think about. A young woman, feeling herself all grown up, moves out, and leaves her family. Some time later, she comes back, and finds out that she missed out on a lot, like seeing her brothers grow up and become husbands, and her little sister become a woman herself. Makes one think.

Characters
The young woman is very relating.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!
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380
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a story that most anyone can relate to; decorating the Christmas tree with the ornaments that have been passed down for years, and telling stories that one remembers because of them, like how Uncle Fred bent the halo on the angel because the tree was too tall. Ah, plenty of good times.

Characters
Very relating.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!
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381
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. While waiting for Santa to show up, a young girl, and the rest of her family, notice something odd; none of the electrical items in the house, including the cell phones, are working. The young girl then sees something else, dragons coming from the sky.

Characters
Life is full of strange things.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of On Giving Reviews  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well this is a useful item to locate. It tells what to look for when one is reviewing an item, and what to look for in different items, such as Characters and Plot in a short story, Imagery and Mood for poetry, and Topic and Clarity for articles and essays. Very useful.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Ice Warrior  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story. After discovering that he's been robbed, a yeti decides to go out of his cave, and go hunt down the thief. However, a nearby village of humans seems to threaten his search when the human goes into it. Lots of difficulties for anyone.

Characters
Some are certainly relating.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar, but it seems that one of the sentences was cut in half with an accidental "Enter".

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Burden  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. After her mother dies, a young woman inherits a mysterious pendant. However, when she looks for information about it, she uncovers plenty of secrets, which the rest of the world was never meant to find out about.

Characters
The characters seem to be very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar, but you do need to end the Italics which have dominated the last half of the story.

Suggestions
A sequel is in order. I want to see what happens.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!
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385
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a nice poem to locate. Due to certain personal reasons, this writer was unable to afford their membership. However, thanks to the efforts of a certain group, they were able to hold on until they could. This is a situation I can relate to, as I was in the poorhouse for a long time, but thanks to friends and the Angles that are out there, I kept afloat, as have may others. A very touching tribute to those people out there who help others.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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386
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute little poem to read. A boy makes a snowball, and thinking it would be the perfect pet, he takes it to bet with him. However, it leaves. Such is what happens with all snowballs, as they only stay for a short time, then they run away.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Why Me?  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting little non-fiction piece. A young woman, working as a hospital chaplain thinks about her first week, and all of the ups and downs that occurred. She then sees a licence plate that seems to speak to her. It gives her a reason to keep on going.

Character
Relates to anyone who is new on a job.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Gift  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. After putting up with his father's abuse, a young man runs from home. He manages to get work on a farm, but ends up in trouble when he accidentally kills the foreman, and ends up in prison. However, it seems that fate works in mysterious ways.

Characters
The main character is certainly interesting. I hope he makes it home.

Spelling and grammar
Given that the dialogue is done with local accents, I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well, this is an interesting contest for those who own a journal/blog- write in it for a number of days, using the "Prompt of the Day" and one could win some nice prizes, such as tickets, merit badges, awardicons and few other things. Maybe I'll enter. *Bigsmile*

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Well this is an interesting little Forum- review some newbies (people who have been members of the site for six months or less) and one can receive some very nice items, such as raffle tickets, and even a shower from another group. Sounds like a fun idea.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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391
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting little poll. Is there a connection between Kindness and a belief in God? Does Kindness exist because of a belief in God, or does Kindness exist without God. That is an important question. However, here's what I know; there are many Athiests (people who don't believe in God) who are kind and generous, And there are people who believe in God, but are mean and cruel towards others. I think that there are other factors to consider.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well this is a nice forum to locate. Dedicated to interactives, this is a place where interactive writers can come and discuss problems, like Many Views, but no Additions, issues about certain topics (whether or not they like or dislike something that's floating around), and even ask others to check out their work. Sounds like my kind of place.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Excuse  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Oh I just pity this poor guy. A man comes home, and sees his wife in the window, holding onto a present. At that moment, he realizes that he's forgotten their anniversary. So, he comes up with an excuse, by tearing his shirt, and making it look like he'd been robbed. Turns out, he really did forget their Anniversary, but not on that day.

Characters
I think that most guys will relate to the husband- forgetting certain dates are a pain.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is interesting to read. A guy listens to his wife tell him about her dream, and in this dream was a string of pearls, which would make every woman around turn and look at her. The guy then goes out, to try and find the gift that she wants.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammer.

Question
By "I should heal soon", did she dump you, breaking your heart, or give you a bone-crushing bear hug, breaking your arms, and a few ribs?

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well, I have to laugh a bit. A guy is in a bit of a pickle- his Seventh Anniversary is coming up, and he needs to find the perfect gift for his wife. Finally, after crossing wool, brass, and a dinner date, off the list, he thinks he's come up with the perfect gift. Funny.

Characters
I think that any man could relate to the guy- a bar does sound good. However, it's difficult to get.

Spelling and Grammar
Spelling and grammar is fine, though I don't think that the Trademark symbols are needed for Coke and Slim Jim.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Christmas Morn  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting poem, which certainly describes Christmas: Controlled Chaos- People are busy trying to get the perfect gifts, and then find out it's the wrong gift. Wrapping Destroyed- and then used in a game of Paperball Fight. Lots of craziness.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I read this story several years ago, but I didn't get a chance to review it. Needless to say, I pleased to find it again.

A young woman and a friend of hers are parked along the side of the road, doing what most people their age do after a party, when they hear some strange howls coming from the woods, where it is said, a werewolf lives. Talk about spooky.

Characters
The characters are very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
If you ever rewrite this, I wouldn't do the flashback thing, as it made things slightly confusing.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a bank for the WDC Power Reviewer's Holiday Auction. A very useful thing to have, as it puts Gift Points earned from an activity in a safe place, and it keeps one from accidentally spending it, which can be a problem for many people out there.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Doggie Bowl  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting interactive. A group of canine anthros decide to check out a cave. However, it seems to be filled with some very large creatures, who want to use them for a wide range of things, from toys, to snacks, to other things. Will they make it out alive?

Characters
The characters in most of the story lines are well described.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see many spelling or grammar errors, but the owner of an interactive should always check the pages that others add.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting question: What is a person's favorite type of vore? Well, this is something that mainly Sci-Fi, Fantasy and Horror writers have to deal with, as vore is basically cannibalism. Now, since I do write Horror, Fantasy, and Sci-Fi, vore does show up in my stories every so often. However, I tend to use two types of vore, Safe Vore, in which a form of protection is used to protect the "prey" from stomach acids, and Defensive Vore, in which a person eats another to protect the life of a friend ie- a werewolf eating a wannabe rapist to protect their human friend.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want to change "ir" to "your" and end the thing with a period.

Suggestions
You might want to add an "Other Vore" category, and change the rating of this item to 13+ or 18+.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!
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