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Review by blast219
Rated: E | (4.5)
just keep it up... i would like to read your stuff
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Review of The Door  
Review by blast219
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love this poem very optimistic and feel good emotion.This kind of poem inspires me that indeed lurking in the corner there is still happiness to be felt. Thank You.
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Review of Gray Skies.  
Review by blast219
Rated: E | (3.0)
very pessimistic I should say but there must be something that had touched the author to write about it.
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Review of The Window  
Review by blast219
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the poem and I have to be contented with the flow although there is something lacking which I can't pinpoint at this point but all in all I can understand well the emotions displayed in this poem.
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Review of Mary Lou's Dress  
Review by blast219
Rated: E | (4.5)
a nice poem very well written and i like the words. kudos to the author
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Review of Nameless Sonnet  
Review by blast219
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like sonnets as a whole they are very expressive bet shakespeare was one of the author's inspirations here. sometimes we dreamt of people we have never seen or met but still they captured our interest inspire us and most of the time we are obsessed by just knowing who that person is. very well written i should say. keep it up
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Review of I Love U!!!  
Review by blast219
Rated: E | (3.0)
An OK piece but it sounds better or well read if there are no shortcuts to the spelling words.
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Review of Sweet Suffering  
Review by blast219
Rated: E | (3.5)
a good piece a sad one but still it can stir someone's emotion so deep.
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Review of Plastic Minds  
Review by blast219
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the poem very much maybe because until now I can consider myself a child at heart. i still play with my favorite toys from time to time because you were right in saying that is a sanctuary from the grown ups who look down and click their tongues who ignore the care- free mind of a child.
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Review of Mom poem  
Review by blast219
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the poem i believe it will never be too late for a person to tell someone how precious they are even after death because I know she had heard and felt it from you. i am so sorry but life will always be like that a cycle of life and death and nothing in between. This is a good poem
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Review by blast219
Rated: E | (3.5)
The plot is good. It is a good theme for a twelve year old eager to experiment teenage and adult life. I like the characters named after chocolate bars they make me laugh. Some words need to be altered and the grammar is somewhat lopsided but all in all it is an interesting chapter. for a suggestion try to focus on one character first than describing the whole appleby clan. I like the family dining hour and the food they consume every night try to dwell on it more since your title expounds more on the bakery as business. Elaborate on the blood oath why caramel and mary anne did it and how it will affect caramel if she does not go with the plan. Emphasize more on caramel's character and her relationship with her twin. I find it really interesting.
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Review by blast219
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like the piece it deals with heartbreak and how to deal with it in a positive way. I like the usage of words and the rhyme it has but most of all I can understand the emotion displayed by the poet that of trying to venge its anger at the tree but after the rage passed by he can see the strength possessed by the tree and that is what he needs at the time to mend a broken heart.
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Review of Rain  
Review by blast219
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I love this poem tells about the fate of two people in love with the uncontrollable circumstances I think because of death that they cant be together anymore
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Review of For You, My Mom  
Review by blast219
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a good piece tells about the love and appreciation you have for your mother kindly change are always here the last line to will always be here. that is the only thing I can comment on.
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Review of hatred  
Review by blast219
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Life is not supposed to be like that full of angst and hatred. We should still see the beauty of life despite the pains we are constantly experiencing every now and then.
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Review of BLACK ROSE  
Review by blast219
Rated: E | (3.0)
Please be careful with your spelling and your choice of words. I could not compare life with a black rose though how cynical I could be maybe a wilted one will do ok. but still it is one unique piece I should say.
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Review by blast219
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
very stimulating at first but as I read on it changed maybe because I had already expected the end but still the piece can be worthwhile if some things can be changed such as the use of some words
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Review of lead  
Review by blast219
Rated: E | (4.0)
I find this piece very touching about the wife's role in a double standard society such as ours. We have our roles to play and most of the time it is sacrifice for us because we are molded to be like that but still men can't find satisfaction in that, they all take the credit and let us fail. But gone were the days like this, we must learn to fight if we know we are on the right track.
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Review of L.T.S.  
Review by blast219
Rated: E | (3.0)
I think his love and respect for his wife who is now departed is truly emotional. But I can sense incompleteness in this story it should be elaborated further but still all i can say it can touch a person' s heart especially if you really miss this person.
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Review of Ashley D-P  
Review by blast219
Rated: E | (3.5)
Having a very special friend is one in a million chance especially today. How I understand her grief of having lose someone so close to her heart. I just hope she can move on and try to make new friendships again.
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Review of Our little secret  
Review by blast219
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very good story. It had appealed and intrigued me
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Review of 2 months  
Review by blast219
Rated: E | (3.5)
A beginning of a blossoming friendship. nice poem nice words and nice rhyming
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Review by blast219
Rated: E | (3.0)
I was already forming vivid images in my mind on what the climax of the story will be and then suddenly just the thought of the great love parents can have for their children that protecting them is the only thing that matters. The story intrigued me at first but towards the middle it stopped coz I was expecting a little more but still there is effort displayed here so all in all it is a nice work
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Review of End of a Rainbow  
Review by blast219
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I like the flow of the poem it describes idealism at the height but then there is something lacking in this poem the flow of expression perhaps.
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Review of the truth  
Review by blast219
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem very much it describes me everyday in my life that I appear normal and happy but deep inside lies the pain and anxiety on how to go about in life.
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