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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (3.0)
Loveofearth,


Your poem seems like a word problem with a missing sentence. I think your poem would be understood more by a math teacher than a romantic.

chuck
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Review of Time  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
Malister thanks God,

Interesting style. I enjoyed it.

chuck
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
Divinite,


Your poem is sad. Sounds like you need a break. Love and relationships are hard, they take much more than most people have to give. Are they worth it? You bet they are. Life is what you make of it. Eternity is to come, so make sure you are ready for he who created you.

Chuck
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Review of To Cheat  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (5.0)
Zeus_chick,


Good poem with just the right amount of rhyme and meter. The subject is attractive as there are cheaters in this life. Good job!

Chuck
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
Aimeanedefire,

Are you a Christian? When you die where do you expect to go ?
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (3.5)
Jojo,



Nice thoughts. I think your piece is speaking as God. Then the piece is speaking as the created its a little confusing in the reading. Then you seem to confuse God the creator withe creation as if they are one. I believe that God created all things and is above all. He is not his creation in my opinion. The piece could be restructured to be a better representation of God the Creator and God himself.

chuck
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Review of A Bunch Of Things  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (3.5)
Tweety Byrd,


Nice list of things. I'm not sure what it all means but if your happy with it that's what counts.
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Review of AAAHHHHH!!!!!  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Brandilyn,


Good poem. in the middle of a fight is not my flight. Find a happier life try it tonight.
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359
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (2.0)
Pychodead,

Pointless list, it didn't include the worst. the list is so far left in its choices. How about Jimmy Carter and barack Obama.
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
Niase,


Your poem is beautiful but some how sad. Without God to grace your life, your sadness stays like a virus. God is always close if you call upon him.
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Review of STORM WARNING  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
countrymom,


Nice work a good poem. The sky and water and pending storm makes for a good subject.


Chuck
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Review of Where Art Thou?  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Niase,


I am bored with the usual television programing these days too. The language in prime time is appalling. Manners and edicut is a thing of the past. Chivarly is not passed down from father to son or taught in any class that I am aware of.

Maybe this is our saving grace. Television is so boring these days just maybe enough people will become bored and turn to writing and reading . Wouldn't it be nice if Chivarly and manners a long with dignaty could be re-discovered and become popular again. We can only hope.

Chuck
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Review of A Place With You  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
Jericho Rivers,


Good poem and suject. I like your style as it seems to be your own. Good work and keep writing.


Chuck
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Review of On Writing  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
Lucid Pen,

good start. Your poem could be expanded. I think your holding back the end. Just my thoughts.


Chuck
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365
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dreamer,

Good poem. Grandkids are a great subject and their joy is new each time they discover something new.

chuck
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (2.5)
Ke San,

Your poem leaves me wondering if you are speaking to a person right next to you or into the night (no one being there). You could do more to give the reader a chance to at least focus on your idea.

Chuck
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Jaiam,

Good poem, more than a gift.

Chuck
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Review of The Word  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dreamer,

Good poem. Remember that the path to heaven is narrow and hard to travel, only a few will find it. Those that think that there are many ways to heaven will be surprized when Christ says I never knew you.
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Jaiam


His Grace is sufficient for you.


Chuck
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Review of Thru The Dark  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
Shaggypayne,


Good thoughts, but remember there are others still in the darkness. We must tell them that Jesus is the light and the truth and the way to the Father.


Chuck
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Review of Give me wings  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (3.5)
Kc Love,


Good Poem. Beautiful thoughts, if we could just shed these bonds that hold us here, just to be at the throne of our creator.

Your poem could read a little better if broken into stanzas. It also looks to me that you could continue the poem with not too much trouble.

Chuck
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Indian writer,

Good poem. Good rhyme and meter. Your spelling is a little off but nothing you can't fix.


Chuck
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Review of Dogs  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (3.5)
Mark shark,

I'm not familiar with "Diamante", but I did have a dog and he was certainly all of those things. Best friend I ever had.

Chuck
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Review of Secrets  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
-R-,

good poem just not finised. I really feel that you could go on a few more line. this poem feels like it has a ways to go. try to put a pleasent ending on it if you can.

Chuck
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Review of Love No More.  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (3.0)
Sutherland,


Most of your poem flows nice, you have some Ryme and meter. in the second stanza we went from love to I feel your pain, but now I must go.

It almost feels incomplete. It seems to me that you could get another stanza in and make a better transition.

Chuck
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