Hello
imartin1025
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dropping by your port:{/center
Format: Poetry free Verse ?
Grammar:
Pfft
their lies the question as to wear
there red pens get stuck.
Overall:
Your title alone caught me and thus I was ensnared. Those folk with their red tinged hands, just make my eyes twinkle. Old lessons are hard lost, but if one of those police is strong enough. They can drop by my port and grasp their hearts.
Novice as I am I spotted your small spots and smiled. A devish? I think so!
Sometimes its hard to guess, so I've found by reading the bio block you sometimes have a little luck. Grammer mistakes can be unlearned and they can also be picked up. Throughly enjoyed this little piece!
Suggestions: None, though who does not like having fun with the grammer police? I'm a devish with them for sure.
Keep writing and smiling. Welcome to WDC.
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