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Both of the Haikus are very well written. The images they bring forth are lovely. The message itself, I found inspiring. The form for both of these Haikus is followed perfectly and I didn't see any errors. Write on!
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Now this is powerful writing at its best. "Shouting God's power," wow! That line says so much and I believe is the honest truth. This poem sent chills up my spine. I am always amazed by the Haiku and how one can say so much in such a short poem. You have a gift my friend. Write on!
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Growing up I never had anyone I could call a true friend and I always felt very alone. Now that I am adult I can see how special true friends are. I only have a few in my real life that I know I can count on but here at WDC, I am truly blessed. Your poem is a wondeful tribute to True Friendship. I can see why you won the award.
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Oh how true this is!! LOL I got a real kick out of this poem. You infused an enormous amount of hilarity into this. It's funny, well written and I didn't come across an errors. Way to go!
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You have captured some of the most wonderful aspects of Summer in this lovely acrostic. I was able to envision many different scenes as I read this poem with the aide of your descriptive wording. I didn't see any technical issues with this poem and there are no spelling errors. Nice work my friend.
I agree with you 100% that our past cannot be changes and we must do whatever we can to mold our future. While I was reading this poem I cold feel the honesty and sincerity in your words. It was very comforting.
I didn't see any technical issues with this poem and I didn't find any spelling mistakes. I hope you find everything you are looking for.
Your express yourself very eloquently in this lovely poem. It speaks to the reader and allows them an peek into your life.
I didn't see any spelling errors in this poem and the flow is fine. I do feel however, it needs punctuation. By adding it, it will give each line more emphasis. This of course is just my opinion and only you can decide what is best for your work.
I really enjoyed this poem that speaks of memories of the past. I noticed that you listed that this poem was written in lyric form. While I read it I tried to find a tune that it would go well with. I think it's lovely.
This piece reads well, have great flow and I didn't find any spelling errors. Nice work!
This is truly a magnificent poem Pat. You executed the style of the Nonet with grace and perfection. I am sure your sister was extremely proud when you wrote this poem. It portrays her as a strong and determined woman.
The meter of this piece is flawless and there are positively no errors.
I am completely awestruck by the absolute splendor of this poem. You have captured the personality of Katrina perfectly. The way in which you described her fury was breath-taking, majestic but at the same time devastating. This poem for me is pure and utter perfection!
I could sense a great deal of frustration came with the writing of this poem. It certainly gives the reader an idea about the overall tone of this piece. The repitition you used in the beginning of this poem if the perfect opening for the title. The meter is smooth and the form is fine. I didn't find any errors but I would recommend adding some punctuation.
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This poem for me spoke about life's tragedies and personal achievements. It sends a strong message to its readers that no matter what the situation and how bad it may look, there is always hope.
I didn't see any problems with the form of this poem and there are no errors. Write on!
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I found this poem to be very deep and profound. I got goosebumps as I read it. It really made me take a moment to stop and think. Truly amazing...I can't find one thing that I didn't like about this poem. It has great form, solid meter and no errors. Excellent writing my fellow author.
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I simply cannot belive that this amazing collection of cNotes has never been rated. I am appalled! The images you have here are superb and they are decorated beautifully. The image with the blue lady saying "Hello There" is absolutely gorgeous! I am so glad I came across this collection. I am going to add it to my favorites.
I like the premise of this poem and the inspirational feel, however, there are a few things that need work.
My first suggestion would be to remove the & symbols and replace them with the word. It looks entirely out of place in this context. Secondly, you should consider adding punctuation. It would add more emphasis to the poem. I also saw that you have the wrong punctuation here:I"m I hope you find my suggestions helpful.
I love the message that you bring with this poem. We all know that as long the Lord above is with us there isn't anything we can't do. It may be hard, even excrutiating, but if we have faith in the end all is worth it.
Your poem is lovely. It has great form and meter and I didn't find any errors. Write on!
This is an incredible story and as far fetched as it may be for some people I truly believe this could happen. I am curious if you are going to add more to it and include Evangelica. I think it would make this even better. I'd like to see where you could take it.
Looking at the overall composition of this piece, I must say it's great. You certainly know how to tell a story. All of the grammar, punctuaion are flawless. I did however find one spelling error: Will you be willing to discard you illusions The 'you' should be 'your'.
I look forward to hearing from you in regards to the expansion of this story.
I am truly amazed at the insight of this phenominal poem. You have a gift for writing my friend. Your poem is prolific and reached deep into my soul and made me review my life. Wow!
This poem has excellent form and the meter is seamless. There are also no errors. Keep up the good work.
No human being should ever have to suffer at the hands of another. I feel your pain my friend. I have been dealing with the repercussions of my daughters abuse at the hands of her father. I don't think the pain will ever go away but it does get better with time. The best thing for you to do in order to help yourself is to write. It helped me like you wouldn't believe. I commend you for taking this step. Good luck my dear and remember you are NEVER alone.
Princess looks like a very loving and loyal companion. I simply adore cats and have had them all my life. I really enjoyed getting to know your Princess and also finding out about the cat's history. I can't imagine anyone NOT loving these beautiful creatures. Thanks for sharing your little girl with us.
This is a great story. I would never have thought for one minute that this story would end as it did. When I think about it though she wasn't very bright for a criminal.
Your story has perfect composition and no errors. Great Writing my friend.
There is a great deal of truth written in these words. I can personally relate to what you have written here. I was in this exact place just a year ago and a bit ago. It's amazing how someone else's words can fit other people so well. You have a really great poem here. The meter is great and I didn't find any errors.
It seems to me that the goings on in this poem are that of a forbidden relationship. I like the way you brought this together having the reader wonder why the subjects hands need to be taken off. It all becomes clear at the end. The poem had good form and the overall flow is very good. Nice writing my friend.
As I read this story I couldn't help but wonder if it was true. I personally can't imagine hurting someone and not doing anything to help them. The end of this story also got me thinking about your statement. Are we going to make it? Very thought provoking.
Looking at the overall composition of the story, it's fine. I would suggest breaking it up into small paragraphs so it doesn't look so blockly. Other than that there were no errors.
Shannon, this photograph of you is absolutely stunning! You do not even look close to being forty. Your eyes have a sparkle to them like I have never seen before and the hair style definately suits you. Whoever took these phots certainly knew what they were doing.
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