In a moment in time
the fairy tale poem
by Elizjohn.
True Faces fiction
the tooth fairy in fury,
her eyes flashing
wide in shock,
misshapen
shaking fingers.
"I said I was pretty
bared her teeth to me."
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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In the shadow of a claw
the dark tale of woe,
by a poet of note
I read this day,
reviewed by embe
love makes great poetry.
But until forever
I want you to know
never give up poetry,
even with a low review
from one who won't care.
Simply Positive Review.
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There in my mind
beneath my horizon
erasing the rainbow,
the sun setting slowly
in the moment in time
visions and illusions,
by our poet of note
Christina Daltro.
Seek, be proud
in my acceptance
without being alone,
i’ll sleep and awake
in a moment in time
dreaming changes,
never stop writing
embe to review.
Rising Star Review.
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Thankful I am to read Ken's lovely poem
the Chorus reminding embe of my Mom,
passed away earlier this year 2012
peaceful in her bed to rest,
rising to her dear Lord
in a heavenly realm,
her voice with me
everyday.
"Live on my child
writing your poetry
you read to me everyday,
the tears I had for your words
a healing balm over all these years.
Dad is waiting for me to live life anew."
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment in time with a smile
one of why I hope and dream
the fairy tale ending lovely.
Now I hear the scream
only to take the fall
questioning love.
Putting on a mask
for the blow by blow
knowing it was hurting,
Wendy Zeelie our poet of note
reviewed by embe in the scenery.
Simply Positive Review for a fine poem.
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In a moment in time
is there mercy in justice
no matter what the jury decides?
Lawyers escaped to their very next case
for embe to review a stunning poem by Kerry,
with the media and technology in the room next door.
So I turned to the gallery, looking for a friendly face in time.
Simply Positive Review lovely from our Sherri here in my mind.
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With a new view to reviewing,
I offer these comments in a poem
for Nicki doing Snoopy Dance!
"No Longer"
The title is about emotion
and tender goodbyes,
in solitary footprints
in the sands.
Very well described
no need to edit or rewrite it
waiting for tomorrow’s sunrise.
Rising Star Review,
by embe.
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In a moment in time to question
when not a ray of hope is visible,
read our poet of note, Dr Gupta
the learned one in University,
the brightest pupil writing
when in sustaining faith.
I hear his eternal word
your grace with peace
singing glory hymns.
No death or disease
dwelling in the tombs,
blasted by the bombs
evil the curse of mankind
dying in a new moment in time.
Simply Positive Review by embe.
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My sympathy for you
in this kind review,
my poem attached
for abused children.
The cacophonous sound
Of children screaming incoherently
As they stumble and tumble into themselves
Like circus clowns
Flying through the air
Reminds me of where I am.
Born in a poem
On the lips of a song
The desperate urge to hold
A child of my own.
This recurring dream
Festers on in my brain
With excruciating pain
As I see the plight of child abuse
In a world gone mad.
What can I do?
Turn and walk the other way
Like so many others do
Or stay and adopt a child today.
What will you say?
Try and find the parent's.
I have my doubts
They are lost and sad in a world gone mad:
Now we turn to God to pray
That he will change the world today,
Where children can laugh and play
And not be hurt in any way;
Come? I invite you;
Be part of the solution.
By the power of the pen
Let’s unite and write,
Exposing this cancer
That grows all over the world,
Destroying the legacy of our children
For future generations to come.
Dare we ignore this call?
At our peril I would say.
Donate your dollars today,
The best gift for Christmas
In Sympathy for Abused Children.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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In a moment in time
long ago the approaching storm,
an old man stares out of his hospital window.
Iggyg85 the poet of note on a page of lonely thoughts,
he contemplates Plato's words knowing death the end of war.
Time to pray as he reaches forward to take the man to Heaven's door.
In a moment on the stage of life
singing a sad refrain by Countrymom.
I burned that bridge 'cause I couldn't stay
forgive and forget comes to my mind,
by embe in my sad review today.
Tomorrow the new day now
for our dear Countrymom,
so happy in her faithfulness
believing in the dear Savior,
to save her the writer of note.
Simply Positive Review.
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The road not taken today
leads to hell and damnation,
seen by Tim Chiu our poet of note
requiring faith shared in daily prayers,
offering innocence for the unbelievers
God's glorious and righteous plan,
faith the answer on your knees
Christ died for me in tears.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment in space
Venus Transit our latitude
shuttered by the clouds,
pulled by the tides at night
sunset was passing
shadows hiding that way
seeing our ridinghood,
the lovely poet of note today
reviewed by embe
for the next Venus Transit
Simply Positive Review.
In this moment in time
for a happy birthday,
lovely Giftedmuse
our fine poet of note
illusion the thought,
morning dew seen
the dew on the grass
sugar has hardened,
taste isn't nearly sweet
for embe in this review
in a new moment in time.
To write about the meaning of life
you need to read AmyIsabella
the perfect writer of note
about faith in God
for the lonely
in tears
miserable
what is missing
we are all incomplete
time to bow the knee in prayer
causing the new meaning of life
Simply Positive Review,
by embe in appreciation
your kind review for me.
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Time to welcome Adam in a poem
reviewed by embe........enjoy
in the light of moon,
with the stars
shining
on this page
to be remembered -
By the Light of a Rose...lovely
our new poet of note on this new day,
I leave all the sorrows behind
cracked by the tears of life,
it touches your soul
so softly
I sleep quietly here.
Simply Positive Review
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Of this auspicious realm
in a moment of time,
deftly witnessed
in every poem
by Tim Chiu.
A master writer
in grace of caring,
worthy sight beholden
in the sun and the moon.
This insatiable charm
the wondrous gift
a godly mosaic,
innocence
in a moment now.
Mother nature here
the miraculous survival
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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In this moment in time
a love poem so lovely
by Jay so beautiful.
Like a colored bird
beneath the stars
we are young again,
dancing in the night
a new Harvest Moon.
embe in the clouds
writing this review
inspired in thought,
sure to be the winner
Simply Positive Review.
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Hello Seth our song writer of note
causing havoc so lovely in a song,
welcomed to the Poem Benders
by embe to review today -
Picking up pieces of my heart
knowing deep down I did my part -
So I'll hold my head up high
and I'll wait as days go by -
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment in time
her absence not well.
Pat writing about nature
I will return to work soon,
so happy my home,
being reviewed
by embe today.
Congratulations
Quill award winner
a feather in your cap,
our writer of note lovely
my remembrance of you.
Showering Acts of Joy Review.
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