For Dominick by Fyndorian
so sad a poem on child abuse,
there is some justice in this world
a child to be treasured and protected,
the lesson from heaven by God almighty
to generations of girls and boys in pain.
Dominick's smile with a star far above
shining a light treat a child with love,
each one with this priceless gem
flowers from a heavenly garden.
In a moment of freedom
explaining the miracle,
the paint in the can
free falling now,
fast flowing
onto the couch,
with a new thought
try flip back in the can,
the message from Mark
our writer of note today
seeing a miracle,
for embe here
the simple truth,
by the hand of God
for a believer of faith,
Simply Positive Review.
In a moment in time
our Loreley St.James
with the striking poem,
of words for her mother
your soul like the demon
destructive or empowering,
can become bitter as a lemon
until you hear my ple of mercy,
embraced in love set me free
in this poem by embe today,
for our fine new poet of note
Simply Positive Review.
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Call of the Lone Wolf
by our writer of note
red _wolfe 09,
just in time
she responds
to make their life
stalking off together.
They glance into each
a chance maybe now
by fate into the night,
the howl of home
to hiding away
lonely in thought,
a question of race
call of the Lone Wolf.
Rising Star Review,
by embe.
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In a moment in time
Ripples in Reality
by silverfeather,
a poet of note
for Partings
in the silence,
this fine poem
reviewed by embe
a whisper I promise.
Looking after them
hello little brother
with the family,
must run away
nobody will know
a moment forgotten.
Rising Star Review.
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In a moment of his time
the mighty ways of our Lord,
by Brom our poet of note today
portraying our God's great power.
Angels surround him as king alone
in time with his grace and mercy,
on a final day the dead will rise
and by his power shall awake,
ruling as kings and priests.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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In a moment in time
Joto-Kai being reviewed
left feeling better by embe,
no need for fixing on a page
my world awash in darkness,
even if you are torn from me
I will never be lost to you
in a light of loving eyes -
Simply Positive Review.
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Tim Chiu bowling with a bias
in an argument with Obama,
these domestic policies
our economic woes
without the truth.
It could be greater
scratching his head
with which he has led us,
despite the hope in a prayer
with our fine poet of note, Tim.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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A decade for a stik
ten years in the office
to beat your subordinate,
for rising from this position
the desire to be your lover
still hangs in the balance,
for embe to review lovely
our poet of note today,
I am swept away
with gift points.
Simply Positive Review.
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Unidentified just in time
a schizophrenic mind,
i would have thought
when i cut myself
i bled for you,
in a review
by embe.
Seeing here
a poet of note,
writing sad words
saying you're dead,
my heart stops beating
in a Simply Positive Review.
In a moment of rememberance
Pat the brave warrior woman,
now pleading for rest
on the sharp edge
of despair,
in this new poem
work in progress soon,
embe to review in my mind
her familiar voice a poet of note.
In a moment in time
the circle of life
by Yuri Trova.
Analysis of death
in this Fireside Poetry
by our poet of note.
Rich symbolism
for embe here
with a review.
The first snowfall
tragedy of the past
a daughter in a grave.
We look at death
as the scene
beautiful,
so natural
crystal white snow.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment in time
19 my birthday freedom,
free from my Dad so scared
my mistakes to be me at last,
achieving long lost goals in life
writing poetry for embe to review.
Lovely for dear Spotted Image
soon to be a bright new star
her Dad with kisses sweet
dancing for joy today.
Simply Positive Review.
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Dear Kiyasama,
The truth in this review
is to honor Trayvon Martin
in my poem about injustice.
“Democracy Denied”
Memories of a man
Beaten on the ground
The white man so mighty
Muttering with tempers high
You bloody nigger a slave to die.
The cotton picker where to hide
A baby of color mixed from semen
The Governor dressed in white and tie
Boasting his mansion built bleeding there
The foreman’s delight to shag a maid tonight,
So frightened with eyes seeing her Africa
God ordained the home to die in peace
My continent far away from the whites
Your bastard America a demons nest
To hunt and burn your Indians dying -
Buried the buffalo a dream of home
Their ancestors beating a message
Clouded Democracy a stolen heritage
Hanging from the tree swinging choking
A white man's version of our transgressions -
O racial segregation where are our rights
Mixing with whites as colored citizens
Then denied by the color of our skin
Sweeping streets beaten and blue
Daring to drink from a fountain.
Where to now and hide from view
Black and brown a bastard color
White our masters the bastards
Blood of red not only for whites
God ordained in the beginning.
If you have a heartless heart
To hate the color of another
You cannot buy your soul
Burning away with a devil
firing at a terrified soul.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Working through pain
nice beginning to a poem
by Shannon our newbie,
writing lovely eyes smiling
for this review by embe,
knowing it will be a winner
with this suggestion.
Twenty eight lines seperated
into four times seven,
for the reader to relax awhile
seeing a bigger picture,
this fine poem in the process
Simply Positive Review,
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Eskwho just in time to be
Sheila Kay Adams
in a raunchy
raucous
story,
in sodom
on the porch
with her Zachary
looking at dear Ruby.
Why...that dog'd bite you
in a review by embe
for a writer of note,
lovely the scene
on this page.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment no one’s place to say
play a passing liner into its grave,
just listen to the sad music
in a review for jdwindman,
by embe in this scene
of life and death
in poetry,
with real emotion
by fine poet Mr. Nobody
hiding disguised abandoned,
with these siren calls for safety
will endless oceans swallow us?
Simply Positive Review.
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In my own words
the music in my mind
with rhythm and rhyme
glorious and glamorous.
So now I'm borrowing time
reviewing lovely your lyrics
with the tune I simply like,
composed by Outasync
our fine poet of note
marvellous for me,
embe to dream
our rising star
gilds the sky,
painted gold
bright the stars
Rising Star Review.
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