Bright lanterns cast a plume of light
with marbles scattered by infants,
lying brightening the new day
an expression of the beauty
by rpandhi our poet of note.
Remove this darkness
replaced by the light
in a review by embe.
The ultimate
in acceptance,
acclaimed here
discovered lovely -
Simply Positive Review.
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The Dutch girl on holiday at sea
seeing the tiny sea mouse
with a new life sleeping,
in a seashell drifting
off then jawning
for a meal.
Seaweed lousy
spat it back in the sea,
searching for a juicy berry
hidden in the wooden cases;
this lovely poem by Dutch Hill Girl.
Simply Positive Review
by embe.
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In a moment in time
celebrating a star,
Sherri Gibson
with a smile
on this day,
like a queen
on writing.com,
the angels sang
in joy, hope and awe
there by her side.
God deciding
her new life
to rest awhile,
with her family
under the stars
writing poetry for him,
in the daytime his time.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment in time
waited too long
to tell you why,
in my mind
the scene
I failed you
with neglect,
our special day
with all my heart
bleeding here,
lonely tears
of yesterdays
hearing a voice
embe in a review
for our poet of note.
Simply Positive Review
for Cerpas.
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The painting's tiles in the caves of memories
splashed upon walls for humanity seeing
an infant deer estranged prophesised
returning a lesson so hard to learn
by Rpandhi our poet of note
reviewed lovely by embe
seeing abundantly
the stars shining
on this page -
Simply Positive Review.
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M. J. Bourne born to be a poet
so is innocence lost to me,
just as this radiant pearl
for embe to review,
our poet of note
I can remember
foam in the waves,
with a radiant pearl
lost hidden to the ocean,
fading whispers of a song
reverberating from this melody.
Simply Positive Review.
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Miscellaneous Echoes
No other home for a Poem,
Voices reverberating through Space
Colliding and merging mixed Messages,
Numbered rows the quick thoughts for Embe
To review our dear darling poet of note on a Page,
The photograph reflecting a beautiful girl posing a Smile.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment in time
a review for Majestic3
linked together in detail,
beautiful words on a page
a poet in the hollowed place
shining into the shallow glens,
where firefly's dance in flight
under the stars in the night,
voices are lifted up high
the delightful scene.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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The inconvenient truth
blooming in it's youth,
present in the review
for our poet of note,
by embe to dream
the scenery here
light with shadow,
being General lee
piece about issues,
profound in literature
there in mind at peace,
seeing the sun seeping
Simply Positive Review.
in a moment to be remembered
by Just Loti for her brother,
Glen always smiling
now pale and ill
by her side,
in a lovely poem
by Loti a poet of note
for his memorial service,
the star shone and it was bright
shining there into heaven.
Glen always smiling
laughing loudly
by her side,
with a lovely poem
for Loti his dear sister,
in a moment to be remembered.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Just in this time only in England
Matt slowly shuffling along,
hunched in the wind
with a brollie.
A nomad
not mad,
searching for
that old city London.
Laughing and dancing
a trance across the street,
our poet of note reviewed by embe.
Rising Star Review.
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Kwe-ha-dee
with wise words,
just in time to pray
in the Lighthouse of Life,
living by faith - not "with" faith.
God will answer all our prayers
as the man he died on a cross,
my father and I are one image.
higher than all the Angels
life that lasts forever.
embe in this review
for a poet of note,
Kwe-ha-dee.
Simply Positive Review.
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Welcome to Russkie new to writing.com
with a difficult view on God in our nation,
the many other religious faiths
based on their traditions,
leave us alone
or we may argue with you,
beliefs are be kept to ones self.
embe the Christian proud of my Savior
in this review accepting the views of others.
Simply Positive Review.
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Hello VP,
Your love of trees, like me
conifer trees are my family,
in a poem to share with you,
as a review for your fine story.
Is this magical realism
hiding trees in my mind,
walking and talking to me
in a language I do not know;
lying here in my padded cell
too afraid to wonder why,
a tree would listen to me
and tell a story in a poem.
Bishop Pine, you are requested
to invite the Japanese Cedar
and the Chinese Weeping Willow,
to dine with the American Sycamore
at the home of California Laurel,
out west where Western Catalpa
is dancing with Silky Camelia,
the second sister of Hackberry.
A lawyer signing a new contract
scheming a deal with Black Oak
and his wife, Snowdrop Tree,
the petrified cousin of Black Locust
hiding from Toona and Chusan Palm,
near Sycamore and a Mountain Gum
in the way of the invitation parade
along Grey Birch and Hop Tree.
The red crossing where Silver Lime
will form a line of Coniferous Trees,
that will confuse the crowd to panic
and bump into White Ash. Her friend
poor shy Magnolia gentle crying away,
while comforting little trailing Rubina
now in the way of the crowded crowd,
trying to see who will lead the parade.
Am I blind to a light shining brightly
where I see eyes staring down at me,
a sapling rising from the bare ground
waiting to see the new grand parade;
when spring time trees arrive in time
for a baby shower and presents free.
Simply Positive Review.
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Hello Abstractor,
I love your poem, but I think this layout may enhance it as poetry.
My review is with kindness the way you wrote it.
embe, in appreciation.
I too was once acclimated to viewing
old episodes through a kaleidoscope
of high saturated colour in my eyes
a willing signatory to those vibrant
and in luminous, cloudless days
scored distant ambient melody
the Midsummer night‘s lights
were galvanic expeditions
too intangible to share
absolutely sometimes
deep within it a device
wonder of consciousness
is there distort the perception
of those who harken back home
A noble lie to forefend depression
for using deception in the repugnant
with the new guise of a patriotic cutlass
How darkening this mechanism would be
if essentialist enough to dismiss those honest
things we seek solace in the redundancy package
delivered new nostalgia thoughts yet to be experienced.
Simply Positive Review.
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Undine in the poem lonely
a house that was a home
echoing in the darkness,
there with the souls
dark in the winter
our poet of note,
calling her home
mother baking bread
father smoking his pipe,
three together now a dream.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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In a moment in time
finding self, and believing
in everything that makes you,
help me sweet heavenly Father
the lovely poem by our Charice,
emotional now deep within
embe in my review.
I believe the poem will flow
better without all sentences
being capitilized.
Then the second to last line, maybe -
For I am lonely here.
One typo -
No choices to great - try, too great
This review in kindness,
by embe.
Simply Positive Review,
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