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I am sorry for taking so long to get to your piece, due to the overwhelming response to my contest with nearly 80 entries to review, I wanted to make sure that everyone gets a fair review. Now, onto your poem!
Overall Impressions: This was a short but very good poem. I really enjoyed reading this, and you did a really good job with the description and metaphors.
Rhythm/Flow: This had excellent flow with no rough areas.
Visualization: You gave an excellent visual in this.
Clarity: This was very clear and easy to read.
Spelling/Grammar: I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors.
Ideas To Make The Poem Better : None.
Things That Should Be Cut : None.
Closing Remarks: Thank you for the excellent read! Good luck in the contest!
Gemini
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Invalid Item This item number is not valid. #1136778 by Not Available.
I am sorry for taking so long to get to your piece, due to the overwhelming response to my contest with nearly 80 entries to review, I wanted to make sure that everyone gets a fair review. Now, onto your poem!
Overall Impressions: This is an excellent poem. I really enjoyed reading this. I have a weakness for the supernatural also. You did a wonderful job on this.
Rhythm/Flow: This flowed very smoothly and was easy to read, I went through it really fast. Well done!
Visualization: You gave an excellent visual in this poem. It made my skin crawl a little bit
Clarity: Again this was clear and easy to read.
Spelling/Grammar: I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors.
Ideas To Make The Poem Better : None.
Things That Should Be Cut : None.
Closing Remarks: I enjoyed reading this haunted poem! Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Gemini
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Invalid Item This item number is not valid. #1136778 by Not Available.
I am sorry for taking so long to get to your piece, due to the overwhelming response to my contest with nearly 80 entries to review, I wanted to make sure that everyone gets a fair review. Now, onto your poem!
Overall Impressions: This is a very unique poem and I enjoyed reading it.
Originality: This is so original of its kind that I have never seen anything like this. I really loved the structure and the way it was written.
Clarity: This was clear and easy to understand, well done!
Spelling/Grammar: I think I may have found one typo in the entire poem: 'naseau' I think you mean 'nausea' instead. If not, please disregard.
Title: I love the title.
Ideas To Make The Poem Better : None.
Things That Should Be Cut : None.
Closing Remarks: This was a very fun poem to read! Well done! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: What an ordeal! That must have been scarey for you to go through this!
Visualization: You gave a great visual of all of the scenery and creatures in this poem. I especially love the part about the dragonflies since they're my favorite along with butterflies!
Clarity: This was clear and easy to read without any rough spots.
Spelling/Grammar: I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. Well done!
Title: The title is self-explanatory and fits well with the poem.
Things That I Liked/Loved: I loved all of the imagery that you wrote in this.
Ideas To Make The Poem Better : None.
Things That Should Be Cut : None.
Closing Remarks: Well done on a great free verse poem. Good luck in the contest!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This is a great contest allowing newbies the exposure that they need! The forum is decorated really nice, I really love the sig at the top, it's so cute! The rules are easily explained, and I didn't find any typos or grammar errors. Nice job!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a very inspirational and philosophical piece. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. It was well-written and very easy to read. You did a great job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was an excellent story, I really enjoyed reading this. It was well-written with no noticable errors. You should be proud of your work! Well done! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This is a great poem. It exhibits every emotion of depression. Everyone has gone through bouts of depression at some point. It's not a very good feeling. Well done! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: You really had me going for awhile! I was thinking something else! You did a very good job at tricking my mind into thinking it was something else! Well done! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: No ratings? This was a beautiful and romantic poem! You could almost put it on a wedding invitation! You did a great job with the rhythm and flow of this piece! You have a wonderful talent for poetry. Well done!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a very interesting poem. I have never seen anything like this. Was this a prompt for a contest? You did really well with this! It had great rhythm and flow. You also did well with the choice of words! Well done!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a very sad and emotional poem. It makes me angry when people hurt children. You did a wonderful job with the rhythm and flow. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. Well done!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was really cute! I have one of the Junk Box Kitten Sigs too! I couldn't resist and had to buy one! You did a great job on this poem. It was very sweet. It had great rhythm and flow. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. Well done!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This is so beautiful and very sensual. You did a great job with the description and words. I like this poem because it doesn't have the cliches of a typical love poem. Well done! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: *sigh* Thank God Jerry doesn't do that crap. We discuss everything before we go and purchase items. It sounds to me that you need to start keeping a blog. That's where I keep all of my anger. You might want to try it sometime. Take care! *hugs*
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a very interesting poem. I love the style that you used as well! It had great rhythm and flow. I didn't find anything wrong with the grammar or spelling. Excellent job!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was really good. It kind of describes what happens to me when as soon as I log onto this website! This poem had great flow and descrition! Excellent job! Write On!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was really cute and funny! I sometimes wonder if I should do that to Jerry. Once he becomes involved in sports it seems like he has lost his hearing and become oblivious to everyone and everything. You did a great job on this! Well done!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a very interesting poem. I love your use of words and flow in this poem. You used great description and gave very vivid images. You did a wonderful job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: I love this! This is a very unique and cool poem! You did a great job with this. It had great flow and rhythm. I also love how you centered this. It looks really neat! You weren't kidding when you said that this was an emotional poem. Instead of the term 'emotional roller coaster' you wrote about an 'emotional carousel'. You did an awesome job on this poem! Well done! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: Sorry that it took me so long to respond to your request. I have been bombarded by a ton of contests and other activities that I have almost lost myself in the pile, lol! Plus being depressed from being laid off didn't exactly give me the inspiration to do any reviewing at all. Thank you for the gp's that you sent me too!
Now on to your story: This was a very good murder mystery. I enjoyed reading it and it had a lot of suspense and thrill to it. Now if I could only figure out who killed Marvin. Hmmm.....lol! That mystery is going to eat at me for the rest of my life. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. Well done! Keep writing!
Gemini
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I really enjoyed reading this, and you did a really good job with the description and metaphors. 
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The rules are easily explained, and I didn't find any typos or grammar errors. Nice job! 
You really had me going for awhile! I was thinking something else! 
You did a very good job at tricking my mind into thinking it was something else! Well done! Keep writing!
This was a beautiful and romantic poem! You could almost put it on a wedding invitation! You did a great job with the rhythm and flow of this piece! You have a wonderful talent for poetry. Well done! 
You did a great job on this! Well done!
Thank you for the gp's that you sent me too!