Overall Impressions: This was very fun to read! Even though I kind of know you, and I have read a lot of your stuff, there are little tid-bits of information that I didn't even know about. You're a very interesting person! I love all of the Law & Order series, those are my favorites, my most favorite is HOUSE. Thank you for this very informational bio about yourself! If you would like to know more about me, here is my mini-bio on myself:
Overall Impressions: This was a very interesting piece! I really enjoyed reading this. I never knew that there were different types of cemeteries. I thought that they were all the same! Who knew! I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. Well done! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This is a really nice journal! I don't think that you are boring. I think that you talk about some interesting topics. I would definately like to see you put a banner at the top of your blog, maybe just to spice it up a little. It's only a suggestion, you don't need to follow it. I will be stopping by more often to see what you're up to! Write On!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a very beautiful and sweet poem! You did a wonderful job with the rhythm and flow. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. Well done! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: Another great erotica poem! You did a great job, once again. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. You did an excellent job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: Another beautiful and wonderful poem! Well done! I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. You still left much to a persons mind. Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: How beautiful! This was written so perfectly, I wouldn't change a word! You did an excellent job! I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: I really love this one as well! You leave much to the imagination as in your previous poem. You did an awesome job! Keep writing! Write On!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was very good! You managed to write an erotic poem, without being too racey. You left much to the imagination, which I also love. You did an excellent job once again on your poetry! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a very informative mini-bio as well! Maybe you could combine the two? It's just a suggestion. I really enjoyed reading this as well! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: For a mini-bio this says a lot about you. You are a very interesting person from what I have read in here. Very nice to meet you! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was very sad and emotional. I have been in that depression position before. It's certainly not fun at all. I hope that you find a way out. No matter what, there's always a way out. (((Hugs)))
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was so beautiful and pure. This is the first Native American poem that I have ever read. I find it very fascinating! I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. Well done! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a sad and very tragic poem! This type of situation happens more often than we know. I wish there was a way to stop it. You did a great job with the detail, and flow of the poem. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. Well done! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a very sad and emotional poem. I am sorry that you had to feel that way. This had perfect rhythm and flow. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. You did an excellent job! Write On!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was really cute! It had wonderful rhyme and meter. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. I do have one suggestion though........you don't have to listen to me, it's just a suggestion. How about alternating each sentence with orange and black? And maybe try bolding the first letter of each sentence? Here's an example:
Haunting ghouls roam tonight, Outdoor treasures sure to delight,
I also noticed that you have two w's in 'howling' I don't know if that was intentional or if that was accidental. Just thought that I would point that out. Other than that you did an excellent job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a very sweet and adorable poem! I love the color that you put this in as well, and the hearts set off the color of the poem too! It had great flow and perfect grammar. Well done! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: Very cute! This made me smile! This poem has so much truth to as well! Day after day I spend most of my living hours on this web site. I must admit, I love the attention. I can't help it! Thank you for this light but funny poem!
Gemini
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Overall impressions: This was a very exciting sci-fi to read! It was well written and packed with a lot of action. You were very descriptive and visual. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. Well done! Keep writing! Good luck in the contest!
Gemini
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Overall impressions: I really enjoyed reading this! You are off to a great start! I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. You gave a great description and detail. Well done! Keep writing! Good luck in the contest!
Gemini
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Overall impressions: This was really cute and funny! I really enjoyed reading this! Well done on an entertaining story. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors! Good job! Keep writing! Good luck in the contest!
Gemini
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Overall impressions: This is awesome! I loved reading this! I also love the fact that you put a banner at the top of each chapter, and that you put the text in blue. This had great detail, and was well written. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Gemini
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I am sorry for taking so long to get to your piece, due to the overwhelming response to my contest with nearly 80 entries to review, I wanted to make sure that everyone gets a fair review. Now, onto your poem!
Overall Impressions: Wow! This is like an opposite valentine poem! I have never seen anything like this before. You did a great job with this poem. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. Well done! Keep writing! Good luck in the contest!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This is such a romantic and sweet poem. You did a great job on this poem! I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Gemini
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You're a very interesting person! I love all of the Law & Order series, those are my favorites, my most favorite is HOUSE. Thank you for this very informational bio about yourself! If you would like to know more about me, here is my mini-bio on myself:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. Well done! Keep writing!
This type of situation happens more often than we know. I wish there was a way to stop it. You did a great job with the detail, and flow of the poem. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. Well done! Keep writing!
I am sorry that you had to feel that way. This had perfect rhythm and flow. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. You did an excellent job! Write On!
This was really cute and funny! I really enjoyed reading this! Well done on an entertaining story. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors! Good job! Keep writing! Good luck in the contest!
You did a great job on this poem! I didn't find any misspelled words or grammar errors. Well done! Good luck in the contest!