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Review of The letter  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Whisper,

I would be wondering why as well. It is never fun to have these feelings ranting around in your head. Thank you for posting your "Letter". I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.

JJDel
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Review of The Game  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice poem and I hope you do win at what you set out to do. Thank you for sharing your poem. Keep up the good work!

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Memoria,

Very interesting short story. It was nice. Keep up the good work and thank you for posting. :)

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear DL,

I liked your little story. It must have been so exciting going away for the first time at camp. I think all good mothers tend to be a little over protective. I am not a mother but my mom was a little over protective and my sister is a little over protective of her boys. I am a little over protective of my nephews too. Jack is 9 and Jimmy is 7. They are so young and innocent. So maybe that is why your mom was over protective, I have no idea though. I am sorry about the tetherball thing. That must have been tough. I am happy you had fun though. Keep up the good work and thank you for posting this story.

JJDel
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Review of Don't look  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Rick,

You poem was short and sweet. Thank you for posting your poem. Keep up the good work.

JJDel
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Review of Floating  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Mena,

Nice poem. Keep up the good work.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Charlie,

I liked your poem. I thought it flowed nicely. I hope you don't give up on writing. You have a real talent for poetry. Keep up the good work.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Fyn,

What a sad story. I am really sorry for your loss.

JJDel
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Review of The Stranger  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good story. Nicely written. Thank you for posting this.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice. Are you taking about Vegas? That’s my first thought. I was there once and it was very exciting!

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for posting this piece. It was very good and very informative. Thank you for posting it.

JJDel
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Review of Wolf's Breath  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Awesome poem! I really enjoyed it. Keep up the great work! Thank you for posting this poem.

JJDel
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Review of Forgive Me...  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked your poem. I think you did a great job.

JJDel
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Review of My Sister Gayle  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can understand Gayle in a way. I spent a lot of time trying to please my family. I realized that was not possible. At 18 I became a paramedic and my parents were furious with me. They ranted and raved about it but it was the best 24 years of my life. You did awesome with the story. Keep it up.

JJDel
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Review of Stolen Heart  
Review by JJDel
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I thought it was very good. I like the script format. I thought it was very creative. Keep it up! You have talent.
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Review of Journal/Blog  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked most of your stories. Not everyone likes everything. I thought your work flowed really well. I really liked the one about your grandchildren. You said you have nine of them. Congrats! I am the oldest of nine grandchildren. I am proud to be the oldest. I also have two nephews and I love them dearly. Keep up the great work.

JJDel
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Review of Winyd The Wolf  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked the story. I love wolves but the bear is my spirit guide. It is a moma bear and she always has her two cubs with her.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Ben,

I liked your poem. I thought it was really detailed.

JJDEL
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Review of Bullying  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Rae,

I worry about this with my nephews. They are 7 and 9. They are pretty much into telling us about things. I just want them to be happy and succeed with their school.

JJDel
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Review of First drum set  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Cute little story. I read it to my nephew who really liked it too. My nephew is jack and he is nine. Jack says he wishes it was a little longer.
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Review of Puddles  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Kat,

I really liked your poem. It was intensive. I have recently begun soul searching. I actually came out of the closet so to speak. I told my family that I feel like I am a man trapped in a woman's body. Surprisingly my family is very supportive of this. I am relieved. I have been researching my options. I am 45 now and I have been hiding this secret since I was seven years old. Thank you for posting your poem and keep up the great work.

JJDel
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Review of Evie  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (5.0)
Jeff,

Your story had me in tears. Keep posting and keep up the good work.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice poem Carly. Keep up the good work. Thanks for posting.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great poem. I really got into it. Keep up the good work.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very intense poem but I liked it. Very well done. I like the second line, "You can't run from death." Thank you for posting and keep up the good work.

JJDel
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