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Review of The Combat Medic  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Rocco,

First off, thank you for serving our country.

Your poem was very intense. Thank you for posting it and sharing it. It was very brave of you.

If you ever need anyone to talk to, I will be happy to listen.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Thank you for sharing this poem. I am sorry for the loss you are feeling.

JJDel
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Review of You drowned me  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked your poem. A little on the darker side but it was good. Thank you for sharing it.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
That poem was very nice. Thank you for posting the poem. It made me smile. I don't have children of my own but I do have nephews who are 7 and 9. Watching them grow is amazing.

JJDel
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Review of The boy  
Review by JJDel
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Sonia,

That is the most beautiful poem I have read in a long time. Thank you for sharing and posting this piece. Good luck with your love.

Sincerely,

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Brandii,

Yes men do lie a lot. I am proud of you for not being so jaded. Keep up the good work. :)

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Lady,

We have made strides in Equality as women but we could make more strides. I thought your poem was very good. Thank you for posting it.

JJDel
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Review of Light  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Tyler,

What a great poem. I have two beautiful nephews who are seven and nine. They are so innocent. I love to listen to them. The seven year old, Jimmy, is a little football guru. He is in love with all types of sports. Now the nine year old, Jack, takes after me. He is very smart and loves writing. I always buy him writing supplies and the both of us love Staples. I thought I would share that. Keep up the great work. Thank you for posting your poem.

Sincerely,

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked your poem. I have only seen owls in the zoo. I would be honored to see one in the wild. We have a hawk that lives in our area. I see him twice a week flying. I have seen him perch on a tree branch and he is absolutely beautiful. I love nature, animals, and wild life. Thank you for posting your poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. Keep up the good work.

Sincerely,

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice quote. My brain isn't working yet this morning so I am not sure what it means.

:)

JJDel
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Review of Successful Life  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (5.0)
I believe everything you said except about Allah. I am Pagan and I worship Bastet, the Egyptian Cat Goddess, but we are all entitled to believe differantly. Other wise I agree with everything else. Nice work. :)

JJDel
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Review of THE MIGHTY OAK  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for serving this country. I am sorry you had to fight in the wars. Those memories must be hard to bare at times.

I loved your poem and visualized the mighty oak tree. Thank you for posting this poem. Keep up the great work.

Sincerely,

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Jiani is here in my yard, LOL. I have lots of sparrows that visit my yard and sit in the tree outside my writing desk.

Your poem, story was cute.

:)

JJDel
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Review of Uniformed  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Teresa,

First off, thank you for serving our great country. You are truly a hero.

Your poem was awesome. I found a couple of minor spelling errors but they were no big deal. Your poem was very detailed. Thank you for your post. Keep up the good work.

JJDel
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Review of By the Seashore  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Anouska,

I am so sorry for the loss of your parents. I could never imagine losing mine. Your poem was very sad. Keep up the great work though.

JJDel
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Review of Anxiety  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Jonathan,

I liked your poem. It was very thought out and very creative. Keep up the great work.

JJDel
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Review of indifferent  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Spinner,

Your story was good. Keep up the good work. Keep writing and smile!

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Danlee,

Your story was very good. Keep up the great work.

JJDel
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Review of Hallow Heart  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Amelia,

Your poem is very good. Keep up the good work.

JJDel
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Review of "Shine On Me"  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your poem was very pretty.
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Review of WDC Surprise  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Pat,

I liked your poem.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice poem. I really liked it.

JJDel
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Review of I'll Do Better  
Review by JJDel
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Nice story. It flowed really well. Keep up the good work.

JJDel
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Review of constellation  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your poem was short and sweet. I enjoyed reading it. When I was a kid I loved everything about space. I even got the chance to go to space academy. It was the most awesome thing.

Keep up the good work.

JJDel
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Review of Pressure  
Review by JJDel
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Very good. Nice poem. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.

JJDel
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