I like it! Autumn is one of my favorite times of year (as attested by my own poems "Purpose," "End of the Trail," and "Special Time" ). I'll be returning to your portfolio, since it's clear you're a prolific writer. Good job.
Yes, as Plato wrote, "Only the dead have seen the end of war." Your grasp of military campaigns and events is truly impressive. You might enjoy my own little poem titled "Semper Fi." George Dixon, former USAF airman.
I suspect you're in the right place! In fact, I think you should consider fleshing out some of the plot lines yourself! With regard to your last (cattle drive) one, the movie "Red River" is about as good as cattle drive flicks get.
I love it! What a delightful surprise ending. Thanks for sharing. I'm evidently fresh out of gift points (just having gotten started on WDC), but would award some to this precious little poem if I had them to give. Keep up the good work! George Dixon.
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